Kya Pyar Karoge Mujhse. Part 8, Page 4

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Kya Pyar Karoge Muhjse

Character Information

Garewal Family

Chetan Garewal- Chetan Garewal is a successful business tycoon who is very ambitious. He also loves his wife a lot after they loss their son Sujal in a accident and Rishi is very close to is mom than his father because of his other son from his affair with another women during when he was a baby and Sujal only five.
Veena Garewal- Veena is typical family-oriented woman who is completely different from others when it comes to bahu and daughter, but for her it's same. For her Bani is a prefect bahu when Sujal was alive, but after his death she became more like a daughter of the house. Her both sons loves her and respects her a lot. Her only dream is to see Sujal reborn in his child.
Sujal Garewal- A very ambitious and very egoistic, hotshot dude. He is not very expressive about his feelings but is easily able to attract girls, though consciously prefers to stay away from them. He is always ready to take risks in business but his life change after he got married to his love Bani Dixit.
Bani Garewal- She is a simple girl who has no big dreams and ambitions in life, her only aim in life is to keep her family happy before her marriage with Sujal and after her marriage to. Her life change after Sujal's death happened right in front of her eyes and kept her ateet a secret from others, even the fact that she is a lawyer, but stopped after she loosed her own case. Found out two days before Sujal's death she is pregnant her whole family is happy for her. Her sister's one mistake changed her life forever.
Rishi Garewal- Rishi is stylish to the core, a complete spoilt brat and a big flirt, who is extremely scared of his brother, but not his bhabhi. Rishi can be pain sometimes when it comes to revenge after finding out his dad's affair with some one else and who also has a son too.
Varun Garewal- He can be nice at first but after also can be a trouble marker. He wants the whole Garewal's house so after Sujal's death fifty percent is Bani's share so he kicked her out of the house when she is caring Sujal's child, but he didn't care because Rishi wasn't home that time and that was his only chance to prove himself in front of his mom who died because of his father.

Dixit Family

Nishikant Dixit- He works in a small company that is own by Khana's group. He has three loving daughter first one is Bani who is married happily with Sujal and doesn't know about his death and she is kicked out of the Garewal's place. Middle daughter Pia who is spoilt brat, but loves her family a lot. Rano the youngest of all and token charge of the house after Bani got married and moved to Simila.
Pia Dixit- A stylish, can be pain in many ways first of all getting married to a rich guy, second of all spoiled from top to bottom by her father and Bani when she was not married. Her and Rano don't share a great rishta, but a ok one.
Rano Dixit- A simple girl with no dreams, only to follow her Bani di's foot step in life, misses her mom and Bani di a lot because she never seen her mom, but can tell she is more like Bani di because people says she has more of her mother's look than there dad's look. Takes care of the house after Bani lefted to her sasural with Sujal Jiju.

Walia Family

Babuji- The head of a family of eight, Babuji is a disciplinarian. Has two sons Om and Kamal, after both of his son death his grandchild's have became his world. His last wish is to get both of his grandchild's married before his death hits him.
Maa- Maa loves towards all her children. But she has a soft corner for Om. Her relationship with her favourite and his wife, however, deteriorates after Kamal's marriage.
Om Walia- Cared a lot for his family and for his two kids, the older one is Jai and youngest one is Jigyasa, they are his life and he knows Jai will makes his dream comes true after his death.
Parvati Walia- A prefect bahu, beti and mother to her kids, but died after giving birth to Jigyasa.
Kamal Walia- Is the best person you can tell your feelings too, He loves Jai and Jigyasa like his own kids after his bhaiyya and bhabhi's death.
Mansi- Lives in Chandigarh all a lone, but pretty close to Jai and wishes him to get married soon to a prefect girl who can take care of his Mansion like her sister did.
Jai Walia- Jai is a big business tycoon who is very intelligent, believes in first sight love, but always gotten pain from it, so after he never wanted to get married. After many years his heart fallen in love again with Pia, but she ditch him and destiny changed his life forever.
Jigyasa Walia- Was married to Adtiya, her brother's best friend and her kids father, but for her he was nothing like his mother. Her only dream is to get the Walia Mansion for her kids that will go to her Jai bhaiyya's child.
Adtiya- Jigyasa ex- husband, Jai's good friend and helps Jigyasa take care of his kids two sons and one daughter.
Dadi- Third oldest in the house, mostly a filmy person full of life.
Ranveer Walia- Adtiya and Jigyasa's older son. Mummy's boy who follows her all around in places, puja type person who chooses not to get married his whole life.
Anu Walia- Adtiya and Jigyasa's daughter who is full of life and can get in to much trouble in life. Her best friend is Rishi Garewal and she met him in Pune for vacation.

Sahil Walia- Everyone's favourite person in the Mansion who they don't take seriously in life, but after what he did to prove them by falling in love with someone that his mother hates from bottom of her guts.
Pushkar Sinha- Falls in love with Pia and they run away leaving Bani to face the problem for her father who is sick.
Akshat- Is Bani and Sujal's good friend who helps Bani when she is kicked out, but Bani doesn't let him help after all his brother has killed her Sujal and she couldn't prove that in court room, but it didn't effect them because she knows Akshat pretty well. Share Bani's pain and understands her the most when people talk about her and Jai Walia when they don't have nothing in common, but Pia's one move ruined his best friends life and only dream is to get Sujal's dream project started that deals with Walia's property
Swayam- Is Akshat's older brother who is madly in love with Bani and can't share her with anyone, so he killed Sujal ( Bani's husband and her child's father to get Bani). He knew by doing this it will hurt Bani, but he didn't care about it only wanted her, but she got saved by marrying Jai Walia because of her sister Pia. Next he only wants to kill Sujal's child that is growing in Bani's womb.

Part 1-

In the Garewal house it's suppose to be happy days because there is going to be a small child coming into this word, but it turned out to be Sujal's death day. Rishi can't see his Bhabhi like that who use to be full of life when Big B was alive and now stays in her room, don't even come down to eat with people or go to office.
Bani in her room sitting in front of Sujal's picture not even cried once after Sujal's murder happened in front of her eyes when it suppose to be the happy moment in her life when she is becoming a mother. (that's every girls dream after they get married) Akshat told Bani to eat something for her child sake, but nothing would break her shocks about her husband's death. Akshat gave up and went down stair and told Veena auntie that Bani won't eat or cry her heart out.
Veena- How long will Bani be like this, it's not good for her child.
Rishi took the plate from Akshat's hand and took it to Bani's room and sat down beside her.
Rishi- Bhabhi remember the time I won't eat and would force me to eat because I wouldn't or you won't eat. Today your Rishi asking you to eat something for him and the baby because how can I eat without my bhabhi eating. Rishi takes a spoon full of rice towards Bani to feed her, but she won't take it and move her face away. Rishi breaks out in front of Bani saying please Bhabhi I don't want to lose you and Big B's baby for Big B please eat some thing again Rishi brings the spoon toward his bhabhi's mouth and this time she ate it because of Sujal's kasam Rishi gave.
Veena and Akshat watch Rishi feeding Bani until she finished the whole plate than after Rishi put her in bed and grabbed Sujal's frame out of Bani's hand and put it on the table beside her bed.
Akshat came in and said Rishi you have changed a lot from being spoiled brat to a good person.
Rishi- I'm only doing this for my bhabhi and no one else because no one cares for her or mummy after Sujal bhaiyya's death.
Akshat- If Sujal was here today than he would say I'm proud of my Rishi.
Veena hugged Rishi and Akshat because know these two are her only hope of living and Sujal's child.
Varun watching this from the back and said to himself - This is your last day in the Garewal house because after Rishi leaves than who will stop you from going out of this house than what will happen to your family. After what they did to my mom this is less for them and more is on there way, first you Bani bhabhi will leave with Sujal bhaiyya's child than slowly I'll take over this house and this will bring happiness to my mother's grave.
Rishi told Akshat to take care of bhabhi and mum for him because he has to go for this meeting in Pune or else he would rather stay here with mum and bhabhi after all bhabhi is still not out of shock yet and this could harm the baby.
Akshat- Don't worry Rishi I'll take care of everything and if anything goes wrong than I will call right away ok and know leave for it will morning when you get to Pune because you choose to drive instead of flight.
Rishi- I know, bye, bye mum and touches Bani's feet before leaving for good luck.
The rest went to mandir for Sujal's shanti and for the baby safety. Varun came in Bani's room and poured water on Bani from the jug.
Bani woke up screaming Sujal.
Varun- Bhabhi why are you calling a person who is death and know.
Bani watched Varun than said get out of my room
Varun- Na bhabhi actually you are from this house and if you don't than
Bani- Than what Varun
Varun- I will have to throw you out, so please leave on your own and you have ten sec
Bani- I'm not going anywhere
Varun- you are wasting your time, it's know 5
Bani- won't move a bit
Varun- 3...2... 1 and know i'll throw you out.
Bani kept o holding Sujal's picture and Varun pulled Bani down the stair and out the door.
Bani was about to fall on her stomach when Akshat holds her from the front.

I hope you guys like this one two because this one reminds me of what happen to my cousin long time ago anyways please give your feedback and if you want you guys can pm me and tell me how Bani and Jai meet.

By Kashish Patel




Edited by Jai-Bani_Kasamh - 18 years ago

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awwwwwwww poor bani 😭 😭 😭
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Part 2-

Recap- Rishi gave Bani Sujal's kasam so she can eat for her child, after he leaves and the family members go mandir Varun went in Bani's room. Told her to leave on her own or he will have to kick her out when he was doing that Bani was about to fall on her stomach , but Akshat saves her.


Akshat- Varun what the hell are you doing?
Varun- Mind your own business
Akshat was about to punch Varun when Bani stops him and says Akshat let's go from here, they both leave and Bani stops by the bridge where Sujal got killed with tears in her eyes
(Jaane kaisi hui hai, Mujhse aisi nadaai. Meine bikhrali aapni zindagi ki kahaani. Paas reh ke bhi mujhse, Dur woh hogaya kisko kaise batlaoon kisko.. Mera kiya khogaya hai, Dastaan dard bhari. Maine chahat ko meri apni haaton saza di. Dil yeh bezaar hua hai.. Cha gayi hai udasi
Thoda sa pyar hua tha.. Thoda hai baaqi song played in the background)
Akshat told Bani to fight for Sujal's insaaf against his own brother. Bani thought for a moment than said yes I will bring insaaf to my Sujal even if I have to lose everything I loved.
Bani- Akshat promise me that you will never tell Rishi that Varun kicked me out of my own house.
Akshat- I promise Bani, but what about Sujal's dream project he was working in Mumbai.
Bani- Nothing will happen to his project because Varun doesn't know that Sujal already gave me the power of attorney, so Varun only has hold of the house, but not the company in Mumbai that's under my name soon it will be know by Sujal's name.
Akshat told Bani to stay in his house, but Bani refuse to stay there, but move to Mumbai after her case with Swayam.
Bani said she will stay in the companies out house until the case is over.
Akshat drop Bani of there and called Veena Auntie and told her what happened with Bani.
Veena was shock to hear this and promise she won't tell Rishi or they will lose Bani with her child.
Three weeks have passed by and each day Bani was losing Sujal's case and today was the last hiring in court. *Court room* Bani started the hiring-
Bani- Your owner today is the last hiring against Swayam for the charge of Sujal Garewal, who was on his way to pick up his wife from the shopping mall, but Mr. Swayam hired people to kill Sujal Garewal because of his personal problem with him. This doesn't mean you hire people to go and kill a innocent person just like that. Your Owner for taking away someone's life they have to pay with their own life that's all my owner.
Judge- Mr. Rana, would you like to say something before I give my decision about this case.
Mr. Rana- Yes my Owner, according to Ms. Garewal my client Mr. Swayam have murdered Mr, Sujal Garewal because of some personal reason. Right than I would have to say that Ms. Garewal is forgetting that I already have proven that My. Client was in Mumbai at that time for a meeting with Ranveer Walia and here are the proof that my client was there. That's all my owner.
Judge- I'll give my decision after lunch break and stands up all the rest stands up and bow down then leave for lunch.
Akshat told Bani not to lose hope on I know that Judge will give on your side because you are right and truth always win.
Bani told Akshat that I want to be alone for a while, so please leave me.
Bani was thinking of her time with Sujal when she saw someone eating Pani Puri
*Pani Puri stall with Sujal*
Bani was holding Sujal's arm walking in the park when Bani saw the Pani Puri stand.
Sujal- No Bani the doctor told you not to eat this right know because you are pregnant.
Bani- Sujal It's only my first month and these time of year you feel like eating things like those.
Sujal- No
Bani- Please, this will be the last time
Sujal- Promise this will be the last time
Bani nod her head- Yes
Sujal takes Bani to the Pani Puri stand and orders two plate for him and Bani.
(Jiye chache yeh lamhein bas yahin pe ruk jayein samne tum raho aur hum tumein dekta jayein... Dilmai hone lagi hai meethi meethi si hulchul umar bhar raho jaise meri aankhon ka kajal... Saathe din raat rahein oh oh oh... Pyar ki baat rahe aur rahe kuch na baaqi... Maine izhaar kiya hai sun mere saathi...
Thoda sa pyar hua hai.. Thoda hai baaqi... Thoda sa pyar hua hai.. Thoda hai baaqi...)
Bani beta what are you thinking Veena said
Bani- Nothing Muma
*Court room Judge decision*
Judge- After listening to both side of the case, the jury have to say that Mr. Swayam is innocent because defence lawyer didn't have strong proof against Mr. Swayam, so the court has let Swayam go free.
After they all bon down, Bani breaks in front of her mama and says I couldn't bring insaaf to my Sujal and faints in Veena's arm, they take her to the hospital.

I hope you guys like this part, so post your feedback soon.

By Kashish Patel

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That was great, plz continue soon 👏
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great parts
poor bani 😭 😭 😭
continue soon
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wow! gr8 part plz continue soon 👏 👏
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Part Three-

Recap- Bani fought Sujal's case against Swayam but she loss because Swayam made this case hard for her. Sujal made Bani promise this would be her last time eating Pani Puri cause she is pregnant.

*At the hospital*
The doctor was checking Bani for a long time after he came out he said they all can meet her. The whole family run inside to see Bani.
Veena- Beta are you ok?
Bani- Yes muma and stop worrying about me know
Dadji- Beta how can we stop worrying about you in this condition.
Bani- Dadji I'll be fine know and please go home with muma Akshat will stay with me.
Akshat- Yes Uncle and Auntie I'll stay with Bani
They all leave while Akshat drop them by the door, Bani got up and said thank you doctor.
Doctor- Thank you for what, after all you are my best friends wife
Bani- I know my fake faint will hurt them but there was no choices or they wouldn't let me go, so know I should leave before Akshat comes back.
Doctor- Bani all the best and take care of your baby.
Bani nods her head and leave from the backdoor of the hospital to her way to Mumbai.
*Nishikant at the Walia house*
Papa this mansion is so big
Nishikant- Pia beta please keep quiet
Pia- Sorry Papa
Tony- Sir you have a big meeting today 12 in the night with the Garewal's
Oh yes Tony I think my meeting is with Sujal Garewal
Adtiya- Yes Jai and if this meeting goes well than we are set
Jai- Of course Yaar that's why I picked this time, Oh Adtiya you remember our friend Nishikant he came with his two daughter
Adtiya- umm Jai I think he had three daughter than how two
Jai- umm
Pia yells out because our older di is married in her house
Nishikant- Pia how many time I have told you that don't talk in between two people when they are talking
Adtiya- It's okay but why are you standing there give us a hug.
Jai- Nishikant we will talk after I got to go at a meeting so bye everyone.
Adtiya took Nishikant and his two daughter to the out house.
*Jai driving to Garewal's house that is in Mumbai*
Jai thought to himself- Who is that girl running from those boys in this late night anyway why do you care, but I think she needs help
Bani tries hard to walk faster but because of the rain it's hard to see, but when a car stop right in front of her and saw a hand towards her to take it
Jai- please don't worry I'm not like those boys you can trust me
Bani took his hand and sat in the car said thank you
Jai- It's my job but where can I drop you
Bani- My house is few blocks away from here if you don't mind
Jai- Not at all
*Nishikant called Garewal's place to talk with Bani but Varun picked up*
Hi can I talk with Bani Garewal
Varun- Who are you?
Nishikant- I'm Bani's father can I talk with her
Varun- Sorry you... Actually Bani bhabhi is not home
Nishikant- Can I talk with Sujal
Varun- Uncle sorry to let you know that Sujal bhaiyya is no more
Shocked Nishikant put the phone down and went to his room thought about what he heard that Bani is missing in this stage of her pregnancy but why didn't see tell me?

By Kashish Patel
Edited by Jai-Bani_Kasamh - 18 years ago
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interesting....
please do continue! 😃
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Part Four-

Recap- Bani made the doctor lie to her family members, Nishikant came with his two daughter to Mumbai at his friends house, Jai goes for his meeting at Garewal's house in Mumbai with Sujal but on the way he meets a girl in trouble and helped her. Nishikant locked himself in a room after hearing about Bani.

*Nishikant in his room*

Why Bani beta you didn't tell me anything abut your husband's death and you are also pregnant. Why Bani why. (Than he see a image of her talking to him trough the mirror)
Papa ... Papa ... Papa ...
Nishikant looks at the picture and says Bani beta
Bani- Yes Papa remember when ever you call me I'll come running to you, so I'm here Papa.
Nishikant- Meri beti please come back to me I know you lefted Sujal's house.
Bani- Papa once a girl get married they stay at their husbands house until you live Papa.
Than he hears a knock and Bani's image goes away and Nishikant calls Bani's name three time but no answer cane back.
(This song played when Bani was leaving her father: APPKI AANKHON KI PANI HOON MEIN, TERI AANKHON MEIN RETHIHOON MANGER TERE SAATH NAHIIN HOON, BABA KI RANI HOON, APPKI RANI HOON TERI AANKHON KI RANI HOON MEIN)( Please tell me if this song is okay between a father and daugter's love)
* Jai stops right at Garewal's house but doesn't know that*
Please stop her my house is right there.
Jai- Oh
He stops the car and Bani gets out without telling her name but Bani knows Jai's name.
Bani- Thanks Mr. Jai Walia
Bani is on her way when Jai asks her if she knows here this place is?
Bani umm I think you are there already
Jai- That mean you are umm
Bani- Umm I could tell you in the rain or I can tell you inside so please come in but watch out for the three branches sticking out.
Jai got out of the car and followed Bani to her place while Bani was ring the bell for someone to open it.
* Nishikant talking with Pia*
Papa don't worry about di because she is so happy with Sujal Juju.
Nishikant put his hand on Pia's head and says Beti kash tum sayien hoti (I wish you are right)
Pia- What do you mean Papa?
Nishikant thinking to himself- If I tell Pia than she will tell everyone about Bani leaving her house
Pia- Papa
Papa- Umm nothing beta just missing her
Pia- Me to
Me three
Pia- Rano when did you come?
Rano- just right know
*Jai and Bani talking*
Bani yells choti kaki please take Mr. Walia to our guest room and I'll send some clothes or I'll bring them by myself
Choti Kaki- Yes Choti Bahu
Bani told Jai to follow Choti kaki while I bring you something to change in because you are wet because of me so I don't want you to catch a cold.
Jai- Thanks
Bani goes to her room change into a white sari than looks for something for Jai Walia but everything reminded her of Sujal only something she bought for Rishi but never had the chance to give it to him so on her way to the guest room to give Jai the clothes when she saw a mark on Jai's back.

By Kashish Patel

Actually guys I'm trying to update all my fanfics before I go India for 6 weeks so I hope you guys will love it.
Leave your feeds back and if I get today for this part five feedback than I'll post the next part.

Promo- Kya mark hai Jai ki body per that makes Bani think about somethings. (this will be broken in parts)
Edited by Jai-Bani_Kasamh - 18 years ago
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great part dear
i cant wait to read more
and what is this about a mark
some childhood memory??
oh pls cont soon

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