Originally posted by: moudeb2005
Adi this is my second fav flashback...38B is still fav
OK...loved the cheek of the guy for indirectly proposing to her in front of massi and adi. Poor massi is so deluded about her bhola bhala munna. Really loving the way you are potraying massi who is like a despo parent tired of an errant child. It's amazing how a smart, intelligent woman looses total control of her senses and ability to dominate when they meet the special someone and if that someone is FF JW ai haiiii. I really like how you have showed that JW almost assumes bani's rights in making changes in his life may that be something as small as a throw rug and pillow....You have also potrayed really well how even though he takes over he never negates her real wishes....i guess that's how she will get her seperation later on....On the whole adi another superb piece.👏👏
Sorry for not wriiting my usual line by line review. I am taking off for san fran tomm am and things have been a bit of a circus...eagerly awaiting next installment...
yeah let him show her his room usisng the bahana to collect a throw cover and pillow and then they can cuddle up for a movie.....