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Posted: 18 years ago

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PART 38 C
ok first I know this is late...mere exams hain😭...they are driving me crazy...and I lost my wallet yesterday....loads of cash...credit card... favourite earings...😭😭😭...

FLASHBACK VIII I love the flashbacks...😳

Maasi walks in breaking that eye contact, JW starts scrolling thru his cell phone messages. B looks away for a minute, trying to calm her thundering heart.
M: Munna chalo beta khaana khaate hain 😆munna....I can just pictutre this...😆
JW(calm) Jee maasi!
JW: Bani lets go eat (no sign on his face of what happened a few minutes ago between them)
B: Hmmm Both get u and walk over to the dining area, JW sits at the head of the table on one side, Maasi asks her to sit in the first chair to the left and she herself sits in the one on JW's right. Aditya walks in and sits by Maasi. There are more than five covered serving bowls. B wonders who eats such a heavy lunch.
Tony walks by, does a bow/nod again at JW, who seems really happy for some reason.
M: Bete tumhe kya khaana sabse zyaada pasand hai
B: Jee Dal chawal (shy)
M: Woh to mujhe bhi bahut pasand hai beta, lekin Munna ko chicken
B rolls her eyes, when M ad A are talking abt what will be doscovered next in the bowls......
JW catches that
JW: Maasi Bani vegetarian hai! Woh kehti hai agar koi non-veg khaata hoga to woh us se shaadi nahi karegi. Kyon Bani, that still holds true right? (challenge) 😳no sweet heart...that theory changed when u came into her life😉

B(sweeeeet smile) Haan Mr Walia, I WONT! (a lil dollop extra of vehemence for him) jhooti....😉
M: Bani, mera Munna chicken khaata hai par bahut seedha hai, is se nek ladka aaj kal maine to nahi dekha (proud, beaming)
B has a "what ever" look, "Seedha?" and HIM? "LADKA?" oh boy...massi he's a ladka...😳
Maasi needs her eyes tested

JW: leans forward poiting to the sabzi on her plate "Dontw orry she wears contacts" I love this...he compeletely reads her...Adi yaar...mujhe aisa JW kab aur kahan milega...😕
B blushes and starts eating
She loves the paneer and rotis and ofcourse the dal tadka too she takes an extra helping of rice.
She is happy it doesnt contain any cashews
M: Tony, aapne aaj kaju nahi daale chawal mein bhool gaye kya?
T(sheepish) Sorry Maasiji poor Tony... har waqt dant khata rehta hai...😭
JW: Good Tony Thanks, Bani ko kaju pasand nahi hai Maasi aahh...see he remembers everything...😳
M (smiles at A conspiratorily) Are wah mere munna ko abhi se itna khayaal hai Bani ka? yes massi... ab iska khayaal nahi rakhega...to kiska rakhega...
B almost spits her food in shock!
OMG! Maasi thinks "we are dating"!
OMG! so u're not...😉
She suddenly loses intrest in the food, bends down in an attempt to hide her face.
A: Bani khaana kaisa laga?
B: Excellent Mr Aditya.
A: Sharmao nahi, please eat well.
B: Jee (she can feel his eyes on her, bends down again, thru the corner of her eyes she can see him eat ravenously. He ate poha at my house almost all of it why is HE so hungry?, she wonders)
M: Munna tumne aaj nashta nahi kiya, Tony ne kaha, kyon beta?
JW: Bhook nahi thi Maasi,tab se kuch nahi khaaya na is liye I am really hungry now khaa khaa mere sher...😳
M: Munna breakfast bahut zaroori hota hai beta! (scolds him lovingly)
JW: Jee maasi, aage se dhyaan rakhoonga (looks at B when he responds)
B has a blood sugar count of 400 just listening to that exchange!! Gosh! What a family! The guy is lying thru his teeth and his aunt cant figure out?
She's got to be blind!
A: U shud tie the knot soon my friend!
B chokes on her food, drinks some water 😆😆😆
JW: Aditya come off it! I skipped breakfast for one day so I need to be married?
A: Well, u need to be married anyway!
M: Haan Munna main Mrs Ahuja ke yahan ja rahi hoon aaj unke bete ka roka hai. Woh tumse 4 saal chhota hai. Main keh kehke thak gayi hoon tum sunte hi nahi
Bani tum hi isko samjhao na beta
B has a "What the hell is happening here?" look on her face. JW unperturbed just continues to eat, serving himself more of what ever his fave non-veg Tony has made
She can see the twitch on the corner of his mouth, she wants to score her fork over it!
B: Maasi? Ab main kya keh sakti hoon? (shocked, blushing, paling all at the same time) 😆... ya right...how can I ask him to marry ,me...😆
M: Dekho isne hamari baat to suni nahi, shaayad tumhari sun le?
B is like "Is it MY problem?" but her upringing doesnt allow her to be impolite yes it is..😳
She is really furious at JW for not stopping his Aunt.
B: Maasi shaayad yeh bachelor rehna chahte hongey? (taunts and coaxes him to respond) god...u listen to u'reself girl...
JW: Vinay Ahuja ki shaadi hai?
M: HaanMunna tum bhool gaye?
JW: I guess. They are all gettin married, except me! (mock-sad face)
M: Tum to isko jaanti ho ab, tum hi batao, yeh kisi ko chahta hai kya?
B Aap inse poochiye na. Main to sirf inke saath kaam karti hoon (she almost wants to say her fave line "Main to jaanti bhi nahi bus do din pehle mili, aur aapke "MUNNA" ne mujhe do baar kiss kar diya!!!!!" but checks herself, what if Maasi asks "if u dont know him what are u doing here today?")
B slowly turns towards JW "Aapko Maasi ji ka dil rakhne ke liye shaadi kar leni chahiye (taunts)
JW: Kis se karoon? (back at her) 😆he's such a darling na....😳
B has a "I give up! Go to HELL!" look
Starts eating again
A: Bani how do u like your job?
B: I LOVE it Mr Aditya
A: I hear you will be on a team that will help us with the public issue. Is that correct?
B: Jee!
JW and him start talking abt work, Maasi just heaps and heaps and heaps more food on her plate. She tries to gobble it all up but gives up towards the end
Maasi requests T to get dessert, he wheels a CART in! It has cold desserts in the bottom tray and hot ones on top.
B wonders if today was some festival she missed. she knew she wasnt being very good about keeping track of them since she came to Mumbai.
Or may be there was a wedding in the family? She wonders
She wants to ask but does not.
She excuses herself, to go wash up. JW follows her. She refuses to talk with him again!
JW: Khaana kaisa laga?
B: It was great! Thank you (short)
JW: Ab kya hua? (walking close by, almost rubbing her shoulder with his arm)
B: Kuch nahi. I am late mujhe ghar jaana hai!
They wash up and walk back to the couch.
JW: Baneeee I was just teasing you!
B is quiet.
M aasi is following them close by, so they dont get a chance to fight again.
JW: Bani what is ur fave dessert?
B: Iam sooooo full. Main nahi khaoongi
M: Munna isko ghar nahi dikhaya? (hint hint kinda tone)
JW: Jee Maasi abhi
JW: Bani? (she almost gonna sit down, when he calls her, she follows him)
M and A sit down and watch them climb the curvy winding stairs
I love such stairs... jab mera apna ghar hoga...it'll have such stairs...😳
JW: Where do you want to start first?
B: How about Ancient History? (a tinge of sarcasm, equating it to a Museum sightseeing trip)
JW: Ouch! (smiles) 😆
B: I am so full, mujhe neend aa rahi hai
JW: Kitna so-ogi Baneee? Car mein bhi so gayi thi
B: I am tired! (irritated) If ud idnt sleep all nite phir aap ko bhi neend aayegi
(bites her lip as soon as that slips out)
JW: Kyon nahi soi? (curious, flirty)
B: Mujhe..... Main aur Anjali movie dekh rahe the............
JW: Kaun si
B: Yaad nahi!
JW: Sach mein neend nahi aayi hogi tabhi naam bhi bhool gayi, kyon
B: Get lost!
He is heading twrds his study. She is taken aback by the masculinity of it all, the huge desk, with the latest high-tech conferencing equipment, flat screen monitor, multiple lap tops, a rolled up projector screen hanging from a wall, sorround sound, leather sofas with shiny steel studs on the trim, an entire wall lined with books tapes, CDs, DVDs and a few family pix on the wall among original art
It was stately and aristocratic but NOT comfy and cozy she realizes
B gravitates towards pix. she LOVES looking at pix, in fact first thing she does when she visit people's homes is look on their walls for family pix ;-)
There is one..... what seems like him with his sister? may be or ex-wife?
B wants to ask brings her hand out but stops
JW: Meri girlfriend ya ex-wife nahi hai, its my sister Aditya's wife, ex-wife I shud say, Jigyasa see...she doesn't need to open her mouth...he just reads it all...😳
B: I never said she was YOUR wife.
JW: Baneee u dont have to! Ur eyes do half your talking...... 😳😳😳
B: NO!
She turns away, a few more, may be with their parents, one with a very young Maasi and him,
B: Maasi aur "munna" (taunting)
JW: U really hate it that she loves me dont you? (amused)
B: NO!
(shrugs) "Aapki Maasi hai, aapko kuch bhi kahe, Munna kahe sweetu kahe!" (nonchalantly)
JW: No Baneee only Munna. I will let u call me sweetheart! (winks, flirtatiously) thanks Adi... I love the word sweetheart..😳
B: U are NOT sweet!
JW: Are u sure? (husky) 😆😳
Turns away abruptly and walks to the DVDs.............
B:Aap yahan movies dekhte hain
JW: Kabhi kabhi Banee, I really dont get too much time
B: Throw pillows blankets kuch bhi nahi hai.............. I like to lay on the rug when I am watching a movie....... (thoughtful)
JW: We could get some..... (husky)see future plans ban rahe hain....😳
He is behind her leaning on the edge of the book case by the wall, hands in his pockets, feet crossed at the ankles, wtaching her touch, feel and admire stuff, read titles of books with eyes crinkled.........
B realizes a warm flush cover her entire body at that statement
She tries to ignore it............. but he is persistent "Want to watch a movie?"
B: Mmmm.... mmmmm
JW: U cud always come by later?
B: I dont know..............
He creeps up on her just when she is trying to pry a leather bound encyclopedia on math ;-) out with her index finger............
JW whats eems to her like effortlessly, pulls it out and hands it to her, she doesnt look at him, stares at the cover...........
He pulls at the book, she doesnt let go, shuts her eyes, she knows whats coming!He has his back against the oak shelves she is afoot or two away


JW: I said I wont ravish you in my house but I didnt say I wont kiss you (softly.......continues pulling on the book, drawing her closer in the process) 😳

Awsome part...I just love these flashbacks...👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
We have almost 3 parts I think for that one day, and the day is not over yet.. its only lunch time... cant wait for the rest of the day Adi.
I love the way you've written about him reading her through her eyes, the way she is inspecting his room. This is the first time, she is coming into his den and he is loving it too... she just does not want to get involved with him.. but he KNOWS what he wants. I love the confidence in him. Its like he knows he CAN make her like him.
The banter at the lunch table coupled with the apology.. that was really romantic... I am sure JW had a genuine smile at that point and Bani did not know how to react to that... 😛
Thanks for this early morning treat Adi..
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Posted: 18 years ago
Wow Adi loved this part as well the teasing the chemistry just awsome, I scene where Massi goes on and on to Bani about JW's marriage was the best only because he never stops to correct her, such a tease he is, and Adi Jiggy ki baby picture imagine kar kar ke I was falling off my chair, her 1000volt ka smile with all the teeth glittering 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
Adi,

38C. Just awesome. I like the way JW knows what BW is thinking and he answers her question with out her asking the question. He knows what he wants and he isn't leaving any stone un turn to get to the destination. BW is totally confused about her feelings towards him. She has never felt like this before so she is not sure how to react to him. Hence she falls for all his traps. This so sweet. Did I say that I always look for you FF first thing in the morning. I come to work and glance thru my work email then look for your FF. Your FF makes my day. Specially these days when the show is such a drag.
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: vazz

We have almost 3 parts I think for that one day, and the day is not over yet.. its only lunch time... cant wait for the rest of the day Adi.
I love the way you've written about him reading her through her eyes, the way she is inspecting his room. This is the first time, she is coming into his den and he is loving it too... she just does not want to get involved with him.. but he KNOWS what he wants. I love the confidence in him. Its like he knows he CAN make her like him.
The banter at the lunch table coupled with the apology.. that was really romantic... I am sure JW had a genuine smile at that point and Bani did not know how to react to that... 😛
Thanks for this early morning treat Adi..

How true vazz...I hope this day doesnt end....it is just the lunch time - true - and the fire has already begun....I love the way he can read her mind as well as her facial expressions....you know what .....this is 1000000% better than the actual KS.....I dont even bother to follow the actual episodes anymore....

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: aditee

THANKS A LOT, Neenam, Oval, Maria, Soap, fsam, Mythili (Oh!how I love that name 😭 )
You make it worth my while every nite to sit down and type. It just makes my day. My fingers miraculously quit hurtin when I read ur feedback

Its true! 😆
Love
A

Aditee - I for one feel indebted to you for providing us such an addictive novel....yes novel....you dont cease to surprise us with those utterly romantic confrontations...very innocent yet highly charged !!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
You girls are awesome! Thank you sooooooooo much.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Adi a bit late but better late than never

I will probably sound really repetitive by expressing the same sentiment and reaction but what the hell I love part 38C, actually I really loved it.

Massi's reaction to Bani is brilliant. It's almost like use maloom hai ke Bani is her hone wali daughter in law. Loved the way she says to jai. "Are wah mere munna ko abhi se itna khayaal hai Bani ka?" It's so sweet.

Jai reading her thoughts is wonderful but I would love it if once in a while she reads his mind.

Also love that she is not one of these girls who pretends to play with her food and do nakhras it.

She is really not sure of what her exact feelings are at all and her confusion comes across so well when she wonders what she is doing at his house as well. The bit when JW looks at bani and bolta hai Kisse karoon? When she says that he should listen to massi and get married is brilliant. Loved the hint factor there.

Bani is really not on her guard even when she tries so hard to be. She tells him ki use neend nahi ayi when she really should not have been telling him that. More ammo for JW!!.

The rug bit was so s*** as was what he said about ravishing her. He really can't help himself with her can. Almost like waits for the next opportunity!!!!!!!

Cannot wait for the next part. Also I think we need to patent this and find a publisher for you and I am totally serious.

Love

Shilpa
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Posted: 18 years ago
Aditee...I just LOVED the last part u put up...Nthng new of course...I love all of them...But u manage to better urself each time...This flashback thing is seriously a masterpiece...Its like now evthing is falling into place...All I am now wondering is how they managed to separate at all esp with JW being so utterly charming and deadly 😳 😳

The J-B banter reminds me so much of the Rhett-scarlett banter....Jai manages to push her in a corner virtualy each time... 😳 Love the way Bani manages to give herself away every now and then like in the DVD watching part..she's just so cute 😳

Fantabulous read...U manage to put me on a high with every part..THANK YOU so much for that!!! 😃

love

Rupy
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Posted: 18 years ago

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The J-B banter reminds me so much of the Rhett-scarlett banter....Jai manages to push her in a corner virtualy each time... 😳

Exactly my thoughts Rupy - I am so glad to know there is someone who can relate with the times of Gone With The Wind. 'Frankly my dear, I don't give a damn' - that dialogue of Clark Gable will never go out of system.😊

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