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Posted: 18 years ago
Aditee great piece of work.
Seedha sadha munna, yep masi really needs to get her eyes checked😆
All this shadi ki baath, no wonder Bani is freaking out.😕
I love her comment about the house tour " Ancient History" wicked.😆
Its amazing this is probably what their 3rd meeting first date and he reads her eyes so well.
Oh god the last part, he draws her closer, i can definately imagine what she must be feeling. This guy is too good. I"ll let you call me sweetheart" hai hai.... I am getting dizzy..
Bani tu toh gayi... aur mein bhi..

Awesome work. keep it up.👏
I have read it 5 times in the past half hour.
Edited by ovaltine - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Aditee,

Very much enjoyed next part of FF!

Soapaddict
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Posted: 18 years ago

Aditee

It always grasps me,I'm quite addicted.

She doesn't let go of the book....

How rewarding it is, to get up in the middle of the night, take a peek at the computer and find a piece of Aditee's!

ps for your reply-score have copied this to ff (as in the fight, it appeared some people keep a check on these things) Though I can imagine you couldn't bother less abt such trivialities

Edited by maria-n - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hi Aditee Ji!!!
Your FF are really good.Your Fictions are more intersting than Kasam se.
cheers,
mythili
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Posted: 18 years ago
THANKS A LOT, Neenam, Oval, Maria, Soap, fsam, Mythili (Oh!how I love that name 😭 )
You make it worth my while every nite to sit down and type. It just makes my day. My fingers miraculously quit hurtin when I read ur feedback

Its true! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago

as usual loved it.adi

Originally posted by: aditee

PART 38 C
FLASHBACK VIII

Maasi walks in breaking that eye contact, JW starts scrolling thru his cell phone messages. B looks away for a minute, trying to calm her thundering heart.
M: Munna chalo beta khaana khaate hain
JW(calm) Jee maasi!
JW: Bani lets go eat (no sign on his face of what happened a few minutes ago between them)
B: Hmmm Both get u and walk over to the dining area, JW sits at the head of the table on one side, Maasi asks her to sit in the first chair to the left and she herself sits in the one on JW's right. Aditya walks in and sits by Maasi. There are more than five covered serving bowls. B wonders who eats such a heavy lunch.
Tony walks by, does a bow/nod again at JW, who seems really happy for some reason.
M: Bete tumhe kya khaana sabse zyaada pasand hai
B: Jee Dal chawal (shy)
M: Woh to mujhe bhi bahut pasand hai beta, lekin Munna ko chicken
B rolls her eyes, when M ad A are talking abt what will be doscovered next in the bowls......
JW catches that
JW: Maasi Bani vegetarian hai! Woh kehti hai agar koi non-veg khaata hoga to woh us se shaadi nahi karegi. Kyon Bani, that still holds true right? (challenge) touche JW ! u don't leave any chance to corner bani do u😉
B(sweeeeet smile) Haan Mr Walia, I WONT! (a lil dollop extra of vehemence for him) yeh hui na baat bani...its now ur turn to tease
M: Bani, mera Munna chicken khaata hai par bahut seedha hai, is se nek ladka aaj kal maine to nahi dekha (proud, beaming)
B has a "what ever" look, "Seedha?" and HIM? "LADKA?" i am with u on this one bani
Maasi needs her eyes tested

JW: leans forward poiting to the sabzi on her plate "Dontw orry she wears contacts"
B blushes and starts eating
She loves the paneer and rotis and ofcourse the dal tadka too she takes an extra helping of rice.
She is happy it doesnt contain any cashews
M: Tony, aapne aaj kaju nahi daale chawal mein bhool gaye kya?
T(sheepish) Sorry Maasiji
JW: Good Tony Thanks, Bani ko kaju pasand nahi hai Maasi
M (smiles at A conspiratorily) Are wah mere munna ko abhi se itna khayaal hai Bani ka? So masi knows ki JW is acting as a suitor to bani
B almost spits her food in shock!
OMG! Maasi thinks "we are dating"!
OMG! sirf masi hi nahi....aditya bhi, Darshan and ur room mate,JW bus tumhi ko nahi pata.😆
She suddenly loses intrest in the food, bends down in an attempt to hide her face.
A: Bani khaana kaisa laga?
B: Excellent Mr Aditya.
A: Sharmao nahi, please eat well.
B: Jee (she can feel his eyes on her, bends down again, thru the corner of her eyes she can see him eat ravenously. He ate poha at my house almost all of it why is HE so hungry?, she wonders)
M: Munna tumne aaj nashta nahi kiya, Tony ne kaha, kyon beta?
JW: Bhook nahi thi Maasi,tab se kuch nahi khaaya na is liye I am really hungry now
M: Munna breakfast bahut zaroori hota hai beta! (scolds him lovingly)
JW: Jee maasi, aage se dhyaan rakhoonga (looks at B when he responds) so he is daring bani to blurt out that he is lying and had breakfast with U.Smart JAI😉
B has a blood sugar count of 400 just listening to that exchange!! Gosh! What a family! The guy is lying thru his teeth and his aunt cant figure out?
She's got to be blind!
A: U shud tie the knot soon my friend!
B chokes on her food, drinks some water Kya huwa bani this is just the begining
JW: Aditya come off it! I skipped breakfast for one day so I need to be married?
A: Well, u need to be married anyway!
M: Haan Munna main Mrs Ahuja ke yahan ja rahi hoon aaj unke bete ka roka hai. Woh tumse 4 saal chhota hai. Main keh kehke thak gayi hoon tum sunte hi nahi
Bani tum hi isko samjhao na beta
B has a "What the hell is happening here?" look on her face. JW unperturbed just continues to eat, serving himself more of what ever his fave non-veg Tony has made
She can see the twitch on the corner of his mouth, she wants to score her fork over it! i wish i could see that twitch on jai face ..how se**y😳
B: Maasi? Ab main kya keh sakti hoon? (shocked, blushing, paling all at the same time)
M: Dekho isne hamari baat to suni nahi, shaayad tumhari sun le?
B is like "Is it MY problem?" but her upringing doesnt allow her to be impolite
She is really furious at JW for not stopping his Aunt. woh kuyn kahega....masi uski dil ki baat he toh keh rahi hai.
B: Maasi shaayad yeh bachelor rehna chahte hongey? (taunts and coaxes him to respond)
JW: Vinay Ahuja ki shaadi hai?
M: HaanMunna tum bhool gaye?
JW: I guess. They are all gettin married, except me! (mock-sad face) love it JW how bring u brought back the topic back on track...when bani tried to take it the other way
M: Tum to isko jaanti ho ab, tum hi batao, yeh kisi ko chahta hai kya?
B Aap inse poochiye na. Main to sirf inke saath kaam karti hoon (she almost wants to say her fave line "Main to jaanti bhi nahi bus do din pehle mili, aur aapke "MUNNA" ne mujhe do baar kiss kar diya!!!!!" but checks herself, what if Maasi asks "if u dont know him what are u doing here today?")
B slowly turns towards JW "Aapko Maasi ji ka dil rakhne ke liye shaadi kar leni chahiye (taunts)
JW: Kis se karoon? (back at her) loved this one adi
B has a "I give up! Go to HELL!" look
Starts eating again
A: Bani how do u like your job?
B: I LOVE it Mr Aditya
A: I hear you will be on a team that will help us with the public issue. Is that correct?
B: Jee!
JW and him start talking abt work, Maasi just heaps and heaps and heaps more food on her plate. She tries to gobble it all up but gives up towards the end
Maasi requests T to get dessert, he wheels a CART in! It has cold desserts in the bottom tray and hot ones on top.
B wonders if today was some festival she missed. she knew she wasnt being very good about keeping track of them since she came to Mumbai.
Or may be there was a wedding in the family? She wonders
She wants to ask but does not. bahi JW ka ghar hai....food would be no less than a feast
She excuses herself, to go wash up. JW follows her. She refuses to talk with him again!
JW: Khaana kaisa laga?
B: It was great! Thank you (short)
JW: Ab kya hua? (walking close by, almost rubbing her shoulder with his arm) 😳😳😳
B: Kuch nahi. I am late mujhe ghar jaana hai!
They wash up and walk back to the couch.
JW: Baneeee I was just teasing you!
B is quiet.
M aasi is following them close by, so they dont get a chance to fight again.
JW: Bani what is ur fave dessert?
B: Iam sooooo full. Main nahi khaoongi
M: Munna isko ghar nahi dikhaya? (hint hint kinda tone) masi is acting cupid FF may be wow ..i love her
JW: Jee Maasi abhi
JW: Bani? (she almost gonna sit down, when he calls her, she follows him)
M and A sit down and watch them climb the curvy winding stairs

JW: Where do you want to start first?
B: How about Ancient History? (a tinge of sarcasm, equating it to a Museum sightseeing trip) nice one bani
JW: Ouch! (smiles)
B: I am so full, mujhe neend aa rahi hai
JW: Kitna so-ogi Baneee? Car mein bhi so gayi thi yeh toh mein bhi bani se poochna chati hoon
B: I am tired! (irritated) If ud idnt sleep all nite phir aap ko bhi neend aayegi
(bites her lip as soon as that slips out)
JW: Kyon nahi soi? (curious, flirty)
B: Mujhe..... Main aur Anjali movie dekh rahe the............
JW: Kaun si
B: Yaad nahi!
JW: Sach mein neend nahi aayi hogi tabhi naam bhi bhool gayi, kyon
B: Get lost!
He is heading twrds his study. She is taken aback by the masculinity of it all, the huge desk, with the latest high-tech conferencing equipment, flat screen monitor, multiple lap tops, a rolled up projector screen hanging from a wall, sorround sound, leather sofas with shiny steel studs on the trim, an entire wall lined with books tapes, CDs, DVDs and a few family pix on the wall among original art ...loved the description adi
It was stately and aristocratic but NOT comfy and cozy she realizes
B gravitates towards pix. she LOVES looking at pix, in fact first thing she does when she visit people's homes is look on their walls for family pix ;-)
There is one..... what seems like him with his sister? may be or ex-wife?
B wants to ask brings her hand out but stops
JW: Meri girlfriend ya ex-wife nahi hai, its my sister Aditya's wife, ex-wife I shud say, Jigyasa
B: I never said she was YOUR wife.
JW: Baneee u dont have to! Ur eyes do half your talking......bani he has done Phd. in that.... JW can u see what's in my eyes😛....
B: NO!
She turns away, a few more, may be with their parents, one with a very young Maasi and him,
B: Maasi aur "munna" (taunting)
JW: U really hate it that she loves me dont you? (amused)
B: NO!
(shrugs) "Aapki Maasi hai, aapko kuch bhi kahe, Munna kahe sweetu kahe!" (nonchalantly) bani i thnk now u are leading JW in the direction...so that he flirts with u more....
JW: No Baneee only Munna. I will let u call me sweetheart! (winks, flirtatiously) see he never misses the oppertunity
B: U are NOT sweet!
JW: Are u sure? (husky)
Turns away abruptly and walks to the DVDs.............
B:Aap yahan movies dekhte hain
JW: Kabhi kabhi Banee, I really dont get too much time
B: Throw pillows blankets kuch bhi nahi hai.............. I like to lay on the rug when I am watching a movie....... (thoughtful) ..well she i salready palnning to make it comfy for him and her?????
JW: We could get some..... (husky) oh my god😳😳
He is behind her leaning on the edge of the book case by the wall, hands in his pockets, feet crossed at the ankles, wtaching her touch, feel and admire stuff, read titles of books with eyes crinkled.........
B realizes a warm flush cover her entire body at that statement
She tries to ignore it............. but he is persistent "Want to watch a movie?"
B: Mmmm.... mmmmm
JW: U cud always come by later?
B: I dont know..............
He creeps up on her just when she is trying to pry a leather bound encyclopedia on math ;-) out with her index finger............
JW whats eems to her like effortlessly, pulls it out and hands it to her, she doesnt look at him, stares at the cover...........
He pulls at the book, she doesnt let go, shuts her eyes, she knows whats coming!He has his back against the oak shelves she is afoot or two away


JW: I said I wont ravish you in my house but I didnt say I wont kiss you (softly.......continues pulling on the book, drawing her closer in the process) 😳...so the kiss is in his study...adi i was debating adi where will make them do it....studyor bedroom.....well bedroom mein bhi hongi.....later on jab she says yes i guess.
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Edited by roops007 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Aditee that was so well done in his house. She was in the lion's den but did not lose her confidence. Their unspoken communication and the undercurrents between them in the presence of Aditya and Maasi were just awesome. If Maasi only knew how 'seedha' her Munna really was.

Loved the description of his study - the masculine side of it and how she tries to soften it with her feminine touch.

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: aditee

THANKS A LOT, Neenam, Oval, Maria, Soap, fsam, Mythili (Oh!how I love that name 😭 )
You make it worth my while every nite to sit down and type. It just makes my day. My fingers miraculously quit hurtin when I read ur feedback

Its true! 😆
Love
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You're welcome A.

If we can relieve your pain, it's a small favour. So painful to know you suffer for us!

Sorry, no jokes, Aditee, I'm even addicted to writing these small comments - but it's good to know you appreciate!

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: aditee

PART 38 C
FLASHBACK VIII

Maasi walks in breaking that eye contact, JW starts scrolling thru his cell phone messages. B looks away for a minute, trying to calm her thundering heart.
M: Munna chalo beta khaana khaate hain
JW(calm) Jee maasi!
JW: Bani lets go eat (no sign on his face of what happened a few minutes ago between them)

Now that's def Signature JW! 😉

B: Hmmm Both get u and walk over to the dining area, JW sits at the head of the table on one side, Maasi asks her to sit in the first chair to the left and she herself sits in the one on JW's right. Aditya walks in and sits by Maasi. There are more than five covered serving bowls. B wonders who eats such a heavy lunch.

Royalty Bani.....how many times do we have to go through this? 😛 JW=Royalty! 😳

Tony walks by, does a bow/nod again at JW, who seems really happy for some reason.
M: Bete tumhe kya khaana sabse zyaada pasand hai
B: Jee Dal chawal (shy)
M: Woh to mujhe bhi bahut pasand hai beta, lekin Munna ko chicken
B rolls her eyes, when M ad A are talking abt what will be doscovered next in the bowls......
JW catches that
JW: Maasi Bani vegetarian hai! Woh kehti hai agar koi non-veg khaata hoga to woh us se shaadi nahi karegi. Kyon Bani, that still holds true right? (challenge)

Why miss the opportunity! 😉 He uses EVERYTHING he gets from her against her! LOVE it! 😃

B(sweeeeet smile) Haan Mr Walia, I WONT! (a lil dollop extra of vehemence for him)

God sure has a funny concept of irony! 😉

M: Bani, mera Munna chicken khaata hai par bahut seedha hai, is se nek ladka aaj kal maine to nahi dekha (proud, beaming)
B has a "what ever" look, "Seedha?" and HIM? "LADKA?"
Maasi needs her eyes tested

How adorable.....Maasi trying to attest her Munna's character....Bani hasn't been able to digest the Munna bit yet how will she get through the rest! 😛

JW: leans forward poiting to the sabzi on her plate "Dontw orry she wears contacts"

Of course what else can you expect from the mind-reader! 😉

B blushes and starts eating
She loves the paneer and rotis and ofcourse the dal tadka too she takes an extra helping of rice.
She is happy it doesnt contain any cashews
M: Tony, aapne aaj kaju nahi daale chawal mein bhool gaye kya?
T(sheepish) Sorry Maasiji
JW: Good Tony Thanks, Bani ko kaju pasand nahi hai Maasi
M (smiles at A conspiratorily) Are wah mere munna ko abhi se itna khayaal hai Bani ka?
B almost spits her food in shock!
OMG! Maasi thinks "we are dating"!
OMG!

Phasi bhi toh buri phasi haan Bani? 😉 Waise JW ke jhaal mein phasne ke liye bhi luck honi chahiye! 😳 Well Bani what else is poor Maasi gonna think? She's only putting 2 and 2 together! 😉

She suddenly loses intrest in the food, bends down in an attempt to hide her face.
A: Bani khaana kaisa laga?
B: Excellent Mr Aditya.
A: Sharmao nahi, please eat well.
B: Jee (she can feel his eyes on her, bends down again, thru the corner of her eyes she can see him eat ravenously. He ate poha at my house almost all of it why is HE so hungry?, she wonders)
M: Munna tumne aaj nashta nahi kiya, Tony ne kaha, kyon beta?
JW: Bhook nahi thi Maasi,tab se kuch nahi khaaya na is liye I am really hungry now
M: Munna breakfast bahut zaroori hota hai beta! (scolds him lovingly)
JW: Jee maasi, aage se dhyaan rakhoonga (looks at B when he responds)
B has a blood sugar count of 400 just listening to that exchange!! Gosh! What a family! The guy is lying thru his teeth and his aunt cant figure out?

Bani that feature in him will come in handy for sure don't worry 😉

She's got to be blind!
A: U shud tie the knot soon my friend!
B chokes on her food, drinks some water

Hmm.....Bani JW ke baare koi kuch bhi kahe toh tumhe itna affect kyun karta hai? 😉

JW: Aditya come off it! I skipped breakfast for one day so I need to be married?
A: Well, u need to be married anyway!
M: Haan Munna main Mrs Ahuja ke yahan ja rahi hoon aaj unke bete ka roka hai. Woh tumse 4 saal chhota hai. Main keh kehke thak gayi hoon tum sunte hi nahi
Bani tum hi isko samjhao na beta
B has a "What the hell is happening here?" look on her face.

Love how everything comes back to her! 😉 It doesn't have ot be just JW who affects her! 😛

JW unperturbed just continues to eat, serving himself more of what ever his fave non-veg Tony has made
She can see the twitch on the corner of his mouth, she wants to score her fork over it!

Don't you dare Bani! 😛 Us ek twitch ke liye hum taras jaate hai aur tum usse khatam karna chahti ho? 😛

B: Maasi? Ab main kya keh sakti hoon? (shocked, blushing, paling all at the same time)
M: Dekho isne hamari baat to suni nahi, shaayad tumhari sun le?
B is like "Is it MY problem?" but her upringing doesnt allow her to be impolite

Of course it's your problem Bani....why do you refuse to see what's right in front of your face? 😛

She is really furious at JW for not stopping his Aunt.
B: Maasi shaayad yeh bachelor rehna chahte hongey? (taunts and coaxes him to respond)
JW: Vinay Ahuja ki shaadi hai?
M: HaanMunna tum bhool gaye?
JW: I guess. They are all gettin married, except me! (mock-sad face)

You tell me the date and time JW and I shall be there! 😳

M: Tum to isko jaanti ho ab, tum hi batao, yeh kisi ko chahta hai kya?
B Aap inse poochiye na. Main to sirf inke saath kaam karti hoon (she almost wants to say her fave line "Main to jaanti bhi nahi bus do din pehle mili, aur aapke "MUNNA" ne mujhe do baar kiss kar diya!!!!!" but checks herself, what if Maasi asks "if u dont know him what are u doing here today?")

Exactly Bani....you don't want to push him Bani coz he'll just say it too! 😛

B slowly turns towards JW "Aapko Maasi ji ka dil rakhne ke liye shaadi kar leni chahiye (taunts)
JW: Kis se karoon? (back at her)

Love it! But JW why hold back? 😉 Might as well just blurt it out! 😉

B has a "I give up! Go to HELL!" look
Starts eating again
A: Bani how do u like your job?
B: I LOVE it Mr Aditya
A: I hear you will be on a team that will help us with the public issue. Is that correct?
B: Jee!
JW and him start talking abt work, Maasi just heaps and heaps and heaps more food on her plate. She tries to gobble it all up but gives up towards the end
Maasi requests T to get dessert, he wheels a CART in! It has cold desserts in the bottom tray and hot ones on top.
B wonders if today was some festival she missed. she knew she wasnt being very good about keeping track of them since she came to Mumbai.
Or may be there was a wedding in the family? She wonders
She wants to ask but does not.

Good call Bani coz if you did you'd prolly get some cheeky remark in return! 😉

She excuses herself, to go wash up. JW follows her. She refuses to talk with him again!
JW: Khaana kaisa laga?
B: It was great! Thank you (short)
JW: Ab kya hua? (walking close by, almost rubbing her shoulder with his arm)

I love how he's so in tune with her emotions....something that he has retained throughout! 😃

B: Kuch nahi. I am late mujhe ghar jaana hai!
They wash up and walk back to the couch.
JW: Baneeee I was just teasing you!
B is quiet.
M aasi is following them close by, so they dont get a chance to fight again.
Being the in house cupid as usual eh? 😉

JW: Bani what is ur fave dessert?
B: Iam sooooo full. Main nahi khaoongi
M: Munna isko ghar nahi dikhaya? (hint hint kinda tone)
JW: Jee Maasi abhi
JW: Bani? (she almost gonna sit down, when he calls her, she follows him)
M and A sit down and watch them climb the curvy winding stairs

JW: Where do you want to start first?
B: How about Ancient History? (a tinge of sarcasm, equating it to a Museum sightseeing trip)
JW: Ouch! (smiles)

Nice one Bani! 😛

B: I am so full, mujhe neend aa rahi hai
JW: Kitna so-ogi Baneee? Car mein bhi so gayi thi

JW ne meri muh ki baat cheen li....waise I did say this yest...toh credit pehle mujhe milni chahiye! 😉

B: I am tired! (irritated) If ud idnt sleep all nite phir aap ko bhi neend aayegi
(bites her lip as soon as that slips out)
JW: Kyon nahi soi? (curious, flirty)
B: Mujhe..... Main aur Anjali movie dekh rahe the............
JW: Kaun si
B: Yaad nahi!
JW: Sach mein neend nahi aayi hogi tabhi naam bhi bhool gayi, kyon

Loved this comment! 😃

B: Get lost!
He is heading twrds his study. She is taken aback by the masculinity of it all, the huge desk, with the latest high-tech conferencing equipment, flat screen monitor, multiple lap tops, a rolled up projector screen hanging from a wall, sorround sound, leather sofas with shiny steel studs on the trim, an entire wall lined with books tapes, CDs, DVDs and a few family pix on the wall among original art
It was stately and aristocratic but NOT comfy and cozy she realizes

Well much like JW....all male and royal! 😳

B gravitates towards pix. she LOVES looking at pix, in fact first thing she does when she visit people's homes is look on their walls for family pix ;-)
There is one..... what seems like him with his sister? may be or ex-wife?
B wants to ask brings her hand out but stops
JW: Meri girlfriend ya ex-wife nahi hai, its my sister Aditya's wife, ex-wife I shud say, Jigyasa
B: I never said she was YOUR wife.
JW: Baneee u dont have to! Ur eyes do half your talking......

So that was the trick? 😉 Waise I like the thought of you being a mind reader too JW! 😃

B: NO!
She turns away, a few more, may be with their parents, one with a very young Maasi and him,
B: Maasi aur "munna" (taunting)
JW: U really hate it that she loves me dont you? (amused)
B: NO!
(shrugs) "Aapki Maasi hai, aapko kuch bhi kahe, Munna kahe sweetu kahe!" (nonchalantly)
JW: No Baneee only Munna. I will let u call me sweetheart! (winks, flirtatiously)

MY FAV PART! 😃 I love how he flirts with her! So much class even in that! 😉

B: U are NOT sweet!
JW: Are u sure? (husky)

I'm sure there's scores of girls who would disagree with you Bani! 😉😳

Turns away abruptly and walks to the DVDs.............
B:Aap yahan movies dekhte hain
JW: Kabhi kabhi Banee, I really dont get too much time
B: Throw pillows blankets kuch bhi nahi hai.............. I like to lay on the rug when I am watching a movie....... (thoughtful)
JW: We could get some..... (husky)

You know it really is Bani who gets herself in those situations! 😛

He is behind her leaning on the edge of the book case by the wall, hands in his pockets, feet crossed at the ankles, wtaching her touch, feel and admire stuff, read titles of books with eyes crinkled.........

Adi's fix I see! 😉

B realizes a warm flush cover her entire body at that statement
She tries to ignore it............. but he is persistent "Want to watch a movie?"
B: Mmmm.... mmmmm
JW: U cud always come by later?

Hint hint Bani! 😉 This actually takes me back to when he stayed over at her apt after fighting those goons.....JW reduced to a house help! 😉 Loved it then and love the idea of Bani and JW cozing to watch a DVD in his all male study! 😉

B: I dont know..............
He creeps up on her just when she is trying to pry a leather bound encyclopedia on math ;-) out with her index finger............
JW whats eems to her like effortlessly, pulls it out and hands it to her, she doesnt look at him, stares at the cover...........

The gentleman that he is! 😳

He pulls at the book, she doesnt let go, shuts her eyes, she knows whats coming!He has his back against the oak shelves she is afoot or two away


JW: I said I wont ravish you in my house but I didnt say I wont kiss you (softly.......continues pulling on the book, drawing her closer in the process)

Def not JW! I'll vouch for that if you need! 😉 I had a feeling Adi that he would bring that back and he did! 😃 LOVED it!
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Posted: 18 years ago
38B: That was xtreme long (not long enuff) & xtreme delightful jousting part 38B. Its as if J&B are preordained for each other …… B seems to be shying away from a reality check …….maybe this is too new & too big for her to perceive while J seems to have comfortably settled into a zone of effortless familiarity. B poor babe is outclassed by J , but she will not cede without pulling out all stops. Introduction to the Walia household is done with such fluidity!!
What a triple scoop treat of a part. Thanx Aditee wanting & waiting for more helpings///CAT

p.s. Aditee, want to & will do the detailed review later along with 38C,am bit tied up right now

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