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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: IFaddictinUS

whatever be the red herrings kekta throws at us...i refuse to beleive that jai and pia will have an affair...
1. i have faith in jai walia's character.
2. even the creatives have not really shown him paying any attention whatsoever to pia...
3. however, i do have a concern that some villian will send jai a picture of bani dressed up for ks and with pushkar and jai will feel that she kept ks for pushky.... 😭
still, something tells me neither jai nor bani will break their 'kasam'...marriage vows...whether or not they are married...
well if they do? then i guess they were not what i thought they would be...and i would be disappointed...yet again..

i really hope ekta appreciates our efforts for tryin to stay positive and rewards us somehow..n ur right IFaddictinus the way theyve been showin the pure disgust on jais face everytime pia even tries to talk to him gives me some hope that he might just slap pia this time around!

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: vazz

Thanks gals... me so mentally tired at work that I am unable to absorb these twists and turns...

fsam,
JW will call Tarun only when he does NOT need to.. ab to if he calls, thing will start to work out and how can that EVER happen!!!

Exactly! i mean if jai was sooo willing n insistent on bani gettin all that she wanted from him shudnt he have called tarun once in a while to check up n make sure everythings runnin smooth?!

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Posted: 19 years ago

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i really hope ekta appreciates our efforts for tryin to stay positive and rewards us somehow..n ur right IFaddictinus the way theyve been showin the pure disgust on jais face everytime pia even tries to talk to him gives me some hope that he might just slap pia this time around!

and you knoe red ruby i just watched the vdeo...😕..haan, i'm totally addict what to do? well, when the belly dancer is boogying away sensously...jai is not even watching her ..he is lost in bani's thoughts...methinks..he'll just pass out drunk and pia will help him to the room...seems to me repeat of i love you ...bani instead of pia this time...

however, ks ended in india as per episode...chaand to nikal hee aayega...bani will have to todo vrat w/o jai...prob jigs will reach and know nothing happened bet jai-pia but will tell bani that jai slept with pia and maybe jai too and he will be too drunk to renmember and pia too happy to bother to correct....😡

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Posted: 19 years ago

i really hope ekta appreciates our efforts for tryin to stay positive and rewards us somehow..n ur right IFaddictinus the way theyve been showin the pure disgust on jais face everytime pia even tries to talk to him gives me some hope that he might just slap pia this time around!

and you knoe red ruby i just watched the vdeo...😕..haan, i'm totally addict what to do? well, when the belly dancer is boogying away sensously...jai is not even watching her ..he is lost in bani's thoughts...methinks..he'll just pass out drunk and pia will help him to the room...seems to me repeat of i love you ...bani instead of pia this time...

however, ks ended in india as per episode...chaand to nikal hee aayega...bani will have to todo vrat w/o jai...prob jigs will reach and know nothing happened bet jai-pia but will tell bani that jai slept with pia and maybe jai too and he will be too drunk to renmember and pia too happy to bother to correct....😡

great another misunderstanding....hopefully bani will know better then to believe jigs...but im willing to accept ur theory which actually makes a lot of sense...eventho im really fed up wit all the miscommunication n the repeated misunderstandings atleast this way ill still be able to respect jai

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Posted: 19 years ago
Pi dearest THIS IS FOR YOU!! 😉
The one part u have been waitin for for MONTHS NOW!!! 😆
Warning to all others: DO NOT READ if u love Nishkant Dixit. We dont, so here it is for the rest of us!!

Enjoy!!
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PART 40 (3)
FLASHBACK XIII

Bani had turned in her resignation from AA a week before the day that call came. They had demanded to know what happened so suddenly. Mr Ranade was quite worried. He knew she was the sole finiancial supporter of her family. Bani had often discussed her career goals with him, and has assured him that until both her sisters were done with their college and until Pia was married she will not be looking for any outside opportunities. Mr Ranade was in fact glad that, she being a 24 yr old in today's day and age is actually not frivolous and fickleminded as them, the booming Indian economy to blame majorly for young people switching jobs more than twice in a year. It was aseller's market these days in India, in professions like IT and accounting. Bani being a gold medallist, there were no dearth of headhunters, looking to pace her in bigger and better roles daily!!

He was happy Bani was confident and sane enough not to get carried away and was refusing all the offers without giving it a second thought. She was being paid over 55K a month, a very competitive starting pay as far as public accounting was concerened. B was saving a lot for her sisters' education and weddings. Her Dad had substantial loans that he had taken for her Mom's medical treatment that she had even begun paying some of. His job was just enough to help her sister and her Dad get by.
She was sure that by the time Pia was married it would be time for Rano to be married as well and being the oldest and the most accomplished and well-apid she had taken the whole family's responsibilty on her young shoulders.

Mr Ranade had started liking the courage and will power this young girl was exhibiting. He had grown fondness for her calm quiet ways, his own only child was married and she lived in Singapore ;-)! He had invited Bani home on many occasions, particularly for Maharashtrian festivals........... He wished he had had a son, and she could have become his second daughter by way of marriage to his son........

It was indeed disappointing that she was not willing to share anything about why she wanted to quit. She was basically a very private person. She shared her family's financial situation only with him. Nobody at the office knew anything about her. She had sounded a very unhappy about something...............
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B had contacted an NGO that worked on women's rights to understand what her options were. She was sure Pia was not lying. She was devastated that the person "had to be" Mr Walia. She felt like she was never going to fall in love again. Pia didnt know about her friendship with Mr walia. Why would she try to destroy it? Even if she did know, why would she do that to her?
So, what ever she said happened that nite had indeed happened. She had also gone off in a fit of anger as soon as leaving Walia Hotel to the Nariman Point police station, the station house officer had given her an incredulous look and had "gently" talked her out of pressing any charges. She had given up on that idea then. But she still felt that she hadnt adequately supported Pia and had left her wanting........ hence the NGO contact.
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B's phone rings...........
B: Hello
ND: Bete main bol raha hoon .... Papa (sounding nervous and scared)
B: Jee Papa boliye, aapki tabiyat to theek hai na?
ND: Bete tum office mein ho ya ghar par?
B: Jee office mein, kyon, Papa kya hua, kuch boliye to? (concerened)
ND: Bete woh...... bete...... maine........ mujhe......... (life daughter like father, when nervous or when in trouble, cant talk straight........)
B: papa kya hua? ( a lil impatient)
ND: Woh mera dost hai na is company mein, Sandeep Shah? Woh aur main...... kuch paise, business mein lagaye
B: KYA? Kahan se aaye paise? Papa, Sandeep to aap khud hi kehte the ki achha insaan nahi hai, Papa hua kya?
ND: Bete, usne mujhse galat kaam karwaaye (startssobbing)
B's phone slips from her hand, it falls on the mat like carpetting......... she quickly grabs it again, checks to see if it got disconnected, with nervous trembling, sweaty hands places it on her ear.
B: Papa KAISA galat kaam?
She imm fears for Rano
B: Rano kahan hai? Theek to hai?
ND: Bete Rano ko kya hoga woh theek hai (grunts)
B: Saaf saaf bataiye na please Papa (feels a lump in her throat.
ND: Beta woh Mr Mishra (Atulya's Dad) ne mujhe accounts department mein mera tabadla kar diya tha 3 mahine pehle......... Shah ka hamare ghar aana jaana shuru hua, mujhe woh theek lagne laga, Mishra sahab ka bank ka kaam main karta tha, paise jama karna lekar aana wagairah............ (Sobs again)
B: Papa plz apne aap ko sambhaliye, main kal aaoon?
ND: Aaj raat ko aa sakti ho?
B: KYA?... (starts to cry, suddenly feeling chilled to her bones in fear, very very lonely.........)
ND: Beta hisaab bhi main hi rakhta tha (grunts and clears his throat) Shah ne kaha, ki thoda thoda nikaal ke bahar byaaj par laga denge 3 ya 4 mahine mein 4 guna ho jaayenge to lauta denge...........
B: YEH AAPNE KYA KIYA?
Notices a couple of coworkers giving her curious glances at her shril outburst, she quickly runs to the stairwell, one of her co-workers is returing after a smoke break, the whole area smells like cigarettes, she makes a face, cups her hand on the receiver to drown out the echo from the empty stairwell...........
B: Papa abhi aap kahan hai?
ND: Beta ghar par hoon, magar...... (starts crying again)
B: Aap mujhe pehle poori baat batayiye (clears her throat to stop herself from crying, her heart reaching out to her Dad)
ND: Beta maine Shah ke kehne par 30 lakh se oopar Shukla sahab ke paise use de diye.............. usne kaha, jab paise dugune ya tigune ho jaayenge to woh aur main aadha aadha kar lenge........... maine socha ma ki ilaaj ka saara karz utaar doonga aur tumhari shaadi sabse pehle kar doonga. Mere dil ko yeh baat bahut buri lagi ki tumne sabse badi hokar bhi apni behano ki shaadi ke baad shaaadi karne ka faisla kiya............ kya socha tha beta kya ho gaya (he loses control again and sobs audibly). Aaj subah Mishra Sahab ko sab pata chal gaya jab unhone 4 mahine ka ledger aur bank book mangwaya....... (she can sense the fear in his voice......)
B: Papa......... papa.............. (she sobs too)
ND Mujeh maaf kar do beta....... kyon ki Mishraji police mein jaane ki baat kar rahe hain
B: PAPA, Himmat rakhiye aisa kuch nahi hoga......... Papa, meri baat suniye......... papa....(urging him to stop crying)Papa abhi Shah kahan hai? Us se paise lekar Mishra Uncle ko de deejiye na?
ND Woh saare paise lekar bhaag gaya!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
Di thanks for the part 40 (3). Please continue soon.............
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Posted: 19 years ago
THANKS ADI!!!! 😃 🤗 Par yaar maine toh socha ki woh aur bhi 🤬 niklega! 😛 Koi baat nahi you still have time to make him as evil as possible! 😈 ND ka yahi haal hona chahiye! I must say I really enjoyed reading the Hindi.....very natural...and LOVED the sequence of events (even the smoke in the stairwell....irks me to no end...so I can absolutely relate!) 😃 Adi kya baat hai...so many twists at the same time...planning on giving Kekta's creatives a run for their money? 😉 I have an idea of what's gonna happen par yaar don't keep JW away from us for too long! 😳 Missed him already and this was prolly the first part without him! 😳 😳 Can't wait to read more on ND's badnaami! 😈 Thanks hun! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
OK Dont worry abhi usko aur "ganda" banaati hoon main. Why its quote unquote is becoz it has to do with our hottie and B 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
You ARE very observant Pi! Yes I think this is the only part where he has not appeared
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Posted: 19 years ago

Adi, you have made Pi a very happy person. You have also made me a very happy person in the last part where you made Pia evil. Cannot stand the girl. My request can you make her even more bad and than have bani slap her senseless...even better JW. In the last part I liked the fact that JW was so upset with bani for not trusting him. I can understand why you made bani believe Pia, because she is her sister and has known her all her life, and JW is new and she might be using this reason to get away for him. Liked how you potrayed bani's pain, because i could feel that she did not want to belive Pia. Can you not make bani too much of a mahatma and have her find the truth very soon and have JW demand apropriate restitution 😉

Like Pi said missed JW in this part. Need the FF JW, because sort of given up on the reel one. Don't have AD and Pi's faith. You made bani's fear come out alive the way you wrote it. I can so see JW using this as levergae to get to her....

As always bravo 👏 👏 👏

Sorry yaar need JW and BW going back and forth between each other to do my usual line by line review...you know than have to comment on the looks, touches, kisses, glares, sighs etc

Edited by moudeb2005 - 19 years ago

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