PART 33 to 39 A FLASHBACK X

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msrk

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Posted: 19 years ago

#231

No WORDS aditee for flashback III.
Truly you are awesome 👏

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Maninder

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Posted: 19 years ago

#232

wow hun..ur writing is just AMAZING...just dont have words to describe it! keep it up sweetie!!! 👏

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TINK

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Posted: 19 years ago

#233

omg aditee 👏 👏 👏 that was amazing, once again luv the flashbacks 😉 just woundering these will be the parts before jai and bani got married rite.anyway yaar just dying to read more. keep it up 😃

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heyitsrupy

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Posted: 19 years ago

#234

Aditee..this flashback idea is a master stroke.. 👏 Its like u are suddenly providing a decoder for all the hidden codes which u used for the J-B interaction throughout the story... 😳 😳 ...Love it....hope the next part comes soon...

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FizuLki

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Posted: 19 years ago

#235

lol!! tt was nicee!! really good!! i loved the part where jai attacked bani back!! hehe..

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TINK

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Posted: 19 years ago

#236

omg i just read part 37 👏 👏 it just gets better and better can't wait for the next one 😳 wonder whats gonna happen 😉 keep it up aditee 😃

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pooja1_76

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Posted: 19 years ago

#237

wow ..........once again amezing. your FF keeps my life going.....
so this is what was happening so what was the cause for separation. i know it is not aboration/child it has to be some thing strong. i know you want bring the stupid park road raz. pia is not in this picture. so now i am very curious to know what will happen next.

this is the first time i wrote this much.

pooja

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ovaltine

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Posted: 19 years ago

#238

kia baath hai aditee. Awesome yaar. Their first kiss. poor bani he cornered her. She is shocked. What a 1st experience. 😉 great part. So is it love at first sight for him or just a thrill?