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Posted: 19 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: freaky**chakra

arre yaar yeh rohit beech mein kyu aa raha hi.
kabab mein haddi. 😡
love story kitni achchi chal rahi thi. 😳
its gud pls cont though. 👏

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sabr karo sab theek hoga.😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Aap Jaisa Koi...

Episode 12

Ranveer follows them half way towards the door but b4 anyone cud c him following them, he changes his direction n goes into the study n stands by the window as though making sure Bani n all got their ride home. But to his astonishment he sees Rohit n some other guy talking to the girls. Ranveer gets furious looking at them talking with each other. He stares at Bani n Rohit n then in a very angry way closes the curtains n walks away.

Bani, Pia n Rano r surprised to c Rohit n Pushkar here n asks them what r they doing here. So Pushkar jumps in n says
, "Arre yaar, main tumhare ghar gaya tha mithai den eke liye ke mujhe job mil gayee hai. Per waha pata chala ke tum log yaha aayi hui ho toh main yahi aa raha tha aur Bhai ko kahi jaana that oh unhone mujhe ride dedi."

Bani gets excited n congratulates Pushkar n so does Rano. But Pia goes n stands next to him n Pushkar gets a lil uncomfortable n turns to Rohit n finds him talking to Bani n Rano. Pia holds his hand n congratulates him n smiles.

Here bani asks Rohit
, "aap logon ne takleef kyu ki Rohitji, hum log toh nikal hi rahe the."
Then Rohit says, "Pushkar ne bataya ke uncle thoda pareshaan lag rahe the toh humne soncha ke wapasi mein tum logon ko pick kar le."
Bani gets a lil worried thinking that papa was worried so she hurries everyone n they all sit n come home.

Nishikant was actually sitting outside on his chair waiting for them. Looking at his daughters, he feels relieved n thanx Rohit n Pushkar. Rohit is talking to Nishikant, when Nishikant notices that Pia was still around n then he asks Rohit
, "arre beta, tum log toh Pia ko ghar chodna hi bhool gaye."
Rohit realizes n asks Pushkar to do so.

Pushkar raises his eyebrow n looks at Rohit, who after giving an order turns back to Nishikant. Then Pushkar looks at Bani n Rano who were trying hard to hold their laughter. He makes a face n agrees but on the other hand Pia was real glad that it was Pushkar who'll be dropping her home. Pia sits bside Pushkar in the car n they leave.

On their way to home, Pia for the first time gets in a very serious mood n turns to look at Pushkar who was bz driving. She looks at him n says
, "aap jaante hai, main apne ghar mein sabse chahiti hoon kyunki sabse eklouti hoon. Mamma papa mujhse bahut pyar karte hai. Sab kuch diya hai unhone mujhe, per phir bhi aisa lagta tha ke kuch kami thi, jaise ke kuch chahiye tha mujhe jo ab tak nahi mila. Main smaajhti thi ke rano ki dosti meri zindagi mein sabse achchi cheez hai per ab aisa lagta hai ke, nahi, shayad meri zindagi mein kuch aur bhi hai jiska shayd mujhe intezaar tha. Aur shayad ab voh zyada door nahi."

Pushkar looks at her as though he's surprised to c her this serious. Even though he knew that it was him whom she was talking abt, he still smiles back at her. Pia gets so surprised to get a smile from Pushkar that she cudn't help blushing. She felt like this was her best ride home n she'll never forget this night.

Bani n Rano both try to sleep but cudnt coz both of them were in their own thoughts. Rano was remembering her fight with Sahil n was trying to find out y had she changed so mch that she wont get mad at him anymore.
Bani on the other hand was smiling remembering Mr.Waliaz smile. She feels that even though he is so ridiculously arrogant n stuck up, still there is something about him that attracks her. Or is it just todayz behavior that is making her think that way of Ranveer. She says in her mind that, he was so gud to her today, always defending her in front of his mother. Never ever in the drems wud she have imagined that he wud be so polite n gud to be a true gentleman today. She cud't control but smile n blush till she was atlast fallen asleep.


Walia Group of Industries

Next morning Bani is in the office doing her work when she looks at the elevator when the elevator door opens n she sees Ranveer come out from there. He is walking towards his office n to Bani he looked like as though he didn't sleep at night, but still there was something different about him. She remembered last night n smiled to herself when the door opened n she looked down to get back to work n also to avoid the eye contact with Ranveer.

Ranveer came a little late to his office, n walks in the door with his half rugged look (suited – booted but unshaven). He passes Bani but does not look at her. He was kinda mad, furious n had mixed emotions that he himself was not aware of. He didn't wanted to c either Bani or Rohit today. He throws his brief case on the table n goes to his chair n turns to find Bani on the other side bz in her work.

B4 he cud say anything to her, Bani gets up n starts walking towards him still bz in her file. Ranveer looks at her as though cudn't help staring. Bani luks up n Ranveer is still staring, she ignores his stare n says
, "Mr.Walia, yeh rahi voh pure files ki summaries. Maine achche se study karke, summarize kiye hai."

Ranveer without saying a word, gestures her to keep it on his table. She does so n turns to go back to her work. He takes the files n starts going thru them n finds a mistake. He gets up n walks towards her n throws the file in front of on the table. Bani luks up to meet his eyes then he comes closer, few inches away from her face n says, "Aapko pata hai iss file mein kitne mistakes hai. Dhyaan kaha hai aapka miss dixit? Aap samajhti hai ke Walia Group of Industries mein kaam karma itna aasaan hai. Arre yaha kaam dhudhne ke liye log taras jaate hai aur jab aapko yeh opportunity mili hai toh aap usse ghoomne phirne mein waste kar rahi hai. Agar aapko yaha kaam karma pasand nahi hai toh u can leave warna mujhe mere kaam mein koi mistakes nahi chahiye."
Bani with tears in her eyes luks down n gathers the files to go thru them again. She was feeling like leaving this job right now but she remembered Nishikantz words when he said that he was very proud of her.
Ranveer while going turns again n says
, "Aur haan, mujhe yeh lunch se pehle chahiye. Mind it ke iss baar koi mistake na ho."
Bani says, "ji, Mr.Walia." n goes back to her work.

Ranveer stands there luking at her 4 a while n then goes back to his desk.

Edited by starz4me - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#63
nice concept 👏
thx
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Posted: 19 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: koelkikook

U know starz, i like the way u r also catching up with the Pia-Pushkar n Sahil-Rano story too.
n OMG my ranveerz jealous 😳 , n i like him soooo much. its so cute 2 know that the evil ranveer on KS is actually a positive character in ur fanfic 😉 .
very interesting pairing indeed. 👏
plz do cont soon.

ranveer jalega nahi toh story aage kaise badhegi. story chodo baat aage kaise badhegi😊.
aur rahi baat pia-pushkar n sahil-rano ki, toh u just wait n watch, infact wait n read😉.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: alwayzBmine

me too, me too, me tooo, me too, me tooo.😳

😆

kya yaar tum log.😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
#66
hey, i'm a new member. i started reading ur fanfic the beginning of this week n to be honest i luv it 😊 .
i like the way u r taking it. i wait for the daily update n i like it even more. (Even when there r no lovey dovey scenes) 😉 .
please keep on going 👏 . i'm already waiting 4 next part 2 know what happens between Ranveer-Bani or Pia-Pushkar or Sahil-Rano.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: **KANK**

hey, i'm a new member. i started reading ur fanfic the beginning of this week n to be honest i luv it 😊 .
i like the way u r taking it. i wait for the daily update n i like it even more. (Even when there r no lovey dovey scenes) 😉 .
please keep on going 👏 . i'm already waiting 4 next part 2 know what happens between Ranveer-Bani or Pia-Pushkar or Sahil-Rano.

thanks KANK n goldymann.😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
#68


Aap Jaisa Koi...
Episode 13


Ranveer was furious n cudnt help thinking anything else but the thought of seeing Bani with Rohit made him more mad n irritated. He was unable to concentrate on his work. All he was doing was looking at Bani. He watched her work, the way she takes her pen in the mouth to pause to think of something b4 writing it down. He cud hear the sound of her bangles, everytime she moves her hand to tuck her hair bhind her ears to get them away from the face. Ranveer even though he felt like he was so mad at her, cudnt convince his heart to stay mad at her. He tried hard to understand the feeling he had for Bani, but cudnt make out the reason for the changes he was finding in himself, everytime he saw Bani.

Ranveer was in his thoughts, tapping his forehead with a pen in his hand, in a very relaxed position n mood, when the door opens n Roshni barges in.
She doznt even luk at Bani n says
, "Ranveer, tum abhi tak yahi ho. Bhool gaye ke humein aaj meeting mein jaana tha. Tum aaj mujhe Walia Group of Industries ke sabhi important clients se milane wale the, kyunki aaj mera pehla din hai yaha per."
Ranveer raises his eyebrow as though he just remembered n jumps out of the chair saying, "Oh my god Roshni. Good that u informed me. Main toh bhool hi gaya tha, unless koi apne kaam per dhyaan dekar mujhe inform karne ki takleef karta toh shayad main waha time per hota."

He luks at Bani with angry eyes as though he'll kill her. N Bani luks at hm with fearful eyes. N Roshni also knew that Ranveer was talking abt Bani n she was loving the way he was treating her. Since Roshni, after yesterdays party was a lil worried thinking that Ranveer liked Bani n that's y he was always defending her n was talking to her all the time. But now with this change of attitude all of Roshni's fears were gone. She was lil relieved with the way Ranveer talked to Bani.

Ranveer walks towards Bani n says
, "Miss Dixit, aap meri assistant hai. Dusre kaamon ke saath aapki aur bhi zimmedaariya hai, jo main chahunga ke aap puri tarah se nibhaye. Aapki pehli galti hai ke aapne mujhe meeting ke bare mein bataya nahi. Pehli mistake hai isliye main maaf kar doonga. But plz mind it ke yeh dobara na ho."
Bani nods n Ranveer n Roshni starts walking towards the door when Ranveer stops n says, "Miss Dixit, aapko bhi hamare saath meeting mein chalna hoga take aap aage ka kaam samajh jaaye ke aapko as an assistant kya dhyaan mein rakhna chahiye aur kya nahi."

Bani nods n walks with him towards the elevator. Bani was surprised to c the change of attitude in Ranveer n cudnt point out anything she did that made him so mad at her. She was shaking standing bside him waiting for the elevator. N she felt like Ranveer knew he was intimidating her n that's y he doznt leave any chance to insult her. She felt like he was deliberately moving to the side so that he stands close to her. But she cudnt dare speak a word. She held her breath n stood there like a statue.

Ranveer deliberately moved to a side to stand bside Bani. He didn't know y he was getting attracted to her. The elevator door opened n all three walked in. Ranveer stood bhind Roshni n Bani. He was so close to Bani that he was able to smell her hair, which smelled like morning mist. Her skin smelled like lavender flower n Ranveer out of anxiety held Baniz duppatta in his hand.
Right then Roshni turns to Ranveer n says
, "arre main toh voh details ki file apne room mein hi bhool aayi. Y don't u guys go ahead. I'll join in a minute." N then she presses her floor button n the elevator stops at 7th floor n Roshni leaves.

Ranveer comes in front n pushes the button to start the elevator again. He turns to luk at Bani who luked a lil worried n nervous. To make her relax he says
, "Miss Dixit, aap kya yeh baat se pareshaan hai ke aap mere saath elevator mein akeli hai ya phir iss baat se ke yeh aapki pehli meeting hai."
Bani luks at him with surprised eyes but did not wanted him to know that she was scared of him, so she says, "Nahi Mr.Walia. main dono se pareshaan nahi."
Ranveer slowly moves towards her saying, "Oh really!!!"
Bani takes a step back n now she didn't care if he knew or not that she was afraid of him. With a stutter in her voice she says, "ji Mr. Walia, main pareshaan nahi hoon."

Ranveer smiles n clutches her hand in his with a rough move n she feels like her heart is in her throat. She holds a breath n just stares at him. Ranveer brings her hand so close to his mouth that its just few inches away. Then slowly he runs her fingers on her bangles, which made noise everytime he moved his fingers on them. Bani was so numb that she cudnt feel or think anything. Ranveer luks up to c her face all pink n so to relax her he says, "mujhe aapki chudiya achchi lagi. Kya aap Anu ke liye bhi layengi ?"

Bani felt a rush of blood in her legs. She felt a lil relieved thinking he was trying to ask abt the bangles n nothing else. She was gathering her senses when Ranveer let go of her hand n moved away. The elevator stopped n the door opened. Ranveer walked out immediately. He made Bani think he was asking something else but he knew that he didn't wanted to talk abt Anu or anyone else. He only knew that he was getting attracted to her. N what he did a few minutes ago was not suppose to happen. Hez her boss, he shudnt be behaving like this with her. The only thing he knew was when it came to Bani, he cud neither control himself or his emotions.


Edited by starz4me - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#69
I like this new Ranveer!!! I can't wait for the next part, yaar!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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WOW.. i just read the whole thing and omgggggg im in luv wit ranveer 😆 plz cont soon... can't wait fo d nxt part 👏

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