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Posted: 19 years ago
#81
omg omg omg. i luv ranveer yaar. 😳
he's the best one in ur fanfic. 😊
please continue soooooooonnnnnn.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#82
where is Jai Walia in this FF?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#83
i'm gonna update my fanfic in few minutes.
just wanted to post this b4 updating.
thanx for all ur comments. i'm glad u all liked my fanfic. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#84

Aap Jaisa Koi...

Episode 15

Ranveer arrived home n was real happy. Sahil was sitting in the living room doing his work when he sees Ranveer walking in. Ranveer usually comes n sits by Sahil, if he sees him n talks to him 4 a long time. But this time, it was like as though he didn't knew Sahil was around. Sahil raised his eyebrow n followed Ranveer into his room. Ranveer threw his jacket on his bed n sat on the rocker, rolling his sleeves up.

Sahil walks in n says, "kya baat hai bhai, aaj kal aap ya toh bahut khush rehte hai ya phir khafa."

Ranveer luks at Sahil with serious but smiling eyes, then Sahil continues, "achcha yeh bataye, key eh mood ka mausam jo badal raha hai, kahi iski wajah Roshni hawa toh nahi?"

Ranveer in his heavy voice says, "kya bakwaas kiye jaa rahe ho, Sahil. Tumhe koi kaam hai ya nahi."

Sahil in a very childish way says, "achcha bhai, aaj kal humse baat karna achcha nahi lagta." Then he moves a little closer n says, "phir kisse baat karna achcha lagta hai aapko bhai?"

Ranveer pushes Sahil away n with a very relaxed way walks towards his closet, slowly loosening his tie, turns to Sahil n says, "Achcha toh tumhe baat karni hai? Toh theek hai chalo phir baat karte hai. Yeh batao ke tum kal party mein voh ladki se sharma kyu rahe the?"

Sahil jumps n says, "kaun ladki?"

Ranveer raises his eyebrow as though studying him n says, "kya naam tha uss ladki ka? Uuuuhhhhh. Haan! Pia!!"

Sahil disagrees n says, "Pia nahi bhai, Rano." N then suddenly bites his tongue.

Ranveer comes closer n teases him saying, "achcha toh tum Rano se sharma rahe the."

Sahil comes back to his original 'Dude' attitude n says, "sharma nahi raha tha, main toh usse avoid kar raha tha."

Then like an adamant kid turns n says,"bhai aap topic badal rahe hai."

Ranveer puts his hands on Sahilz shoulders n pushes him towards the door saying, "aaj ke liye itna hi. Ab tum raat bhar yeh soncho ke tum Rano se sharma rahe the ya avoid kar rahe the. Mujhe kal batana, OK? Varna main dad ko bata doonga."

Sahil turns immediately n Ranveer closes the door on his face. N goes back to bed smiling again, remembering Baniz laughter.

Next morning at Walia Group of Industries, there was the walkthrough of yesterdayz meeting, n today Aditya was surprised to c different expressions on both Bani n Ranveerz face. It seemed like to him as though Bani was blushing all the time n Ranveer seemed fresh n happy. Aditya shrugged the thoughts he was having related to Bani n Ranveer n concentrated on his file. The meeting starts with Roshni talking abt what she thought of some of the products, clients n was discussing her point of view on those. They all were looking at the screen where Roshni was changing the slides she had prepared.

Ranveer was bz listening to her n then he was abt to jot down some notes when the pen slipped out of his hands n was rolling down. Bani bent forward n put her hand on the pen to stop it n Ranveer also did the same. Bani shivered at his touch n went cold. His hand was warm on hers n Ranveer didn't move his hand away instead he rubbed his hand on hers as though relaxing her coz he felt concerned when suddenly she shivered. Ranveer then holds her hand in both of his hands n starts rubbing it n bends forward n whispers, " u r cold, r u alright?" Bani thinks to herself that, "haath touch hua toh thandi pad gayee, ab kya pakad kar saans rok doge?" n then she nods n whispers back saying, "main theek hoon, Mr.Walia." She then slowly pulls her hand out of his touch n hands him the pen. Ranveer gives her a keen but concerned look b4 he turns away to the screen. Bani takes a deep n relaxed breath after Ranveer turns away n keeps staring at him the whole rest of the meeting.

Walia Mansion:

Sahil goes to wake up Anu n finds her sleeping like a baby so not to disturb her for a while, he comes n sits by her. He hears some noise so he gets up n puts his hands under the covers n finds a piece of paper. He was abt to discard it but then turns it to c what it is. It was a printed copy of a picture on the paper n it was of a guyz picture. Sahil tries to remember who that guys was n then suddenly it flashes in front of his eyes that this was the same guy he saw with Rano in college. Sahil luks at Anu n leaves 4 college.

In the college, Sahil is running around looking 4 Rano. He finally sees her near the fountain talking to Pia. Suddenly it seemed like he forgot everything n he stood there staring at Rano with a very loving expression. Right then Pia notices sahil n hits Rano with her elbow n gestures her towards Sahil with her eyes. Rano looks up n finds Sahil staring at her n then suddenly Sahil comes out of his dreams realizing both Rano n Pia are luking at him with weird luks on their faces.

Sahil walks towards them n says, "Rano, mujhe tumse kuch zaroori baat karni hai."

Rano luks at Pia who has this notty smile on her face n then Pia says, "achcha Rano, humlog class mein milte hai."

Rano keeps calling Pia Pia, but she gets out of their sight.

Sahil comes n sits bside Rano n takes out a picture from his pocket n asks, "kya tum iss ladke ko jaanti ho?"

Rano is astonished to c Pushkarz pic in Sahilz hands n says, "haan, yeh toh Pushkar hai, hamara padosi."

Then Sahil immediately asks, "kya Anu iss Pushkar ko jaanti hai?"

Rano is confused, but answers, "haan, mere saath toh mili hai ek ya do baar. Kya hua Sahil, tum achanak Pushkar ke bare mein kyu pooch rahe ho?"

Sahil turns to Rano n says, "tum jaanti ho yeh picture mujhe kaha se mili, Anu ke paas se. mujhe sirf yeh samajh nahi aa raha ke Anu agar yeh ladke se sirf ek ya do baar mili thi toh uske paas yeh picture ka matlab kya hai? Kahi Anu iss Pushkar ko chahne toh nahi lagi hai?"

Rano gets dumbstruck. She is stunned to learn that Anu might be falling for Pushkar. The only thing Rano cud think of was Piaz attraction towards Pushkar n now she was worried abt Pia more than anyone else.


Edited by starz4me - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: punjabi#1

who gets pushkar? Pia or Anu?

i think u've to wait n read that. sorry.😛

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Posted: 19 years ago
#86
ohhhhhhhhhhhh LUVED the cute scene wit ranveer and bani.. o wow.. anu's fallin fo pushy too .. can't wait fo d nxt part 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#87
Wonderful yaar. I really like the way this story is progressing. Keep writing !

Swathi
Edited by swathi - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#88
Oh my good God! I am addicted to this!!! 🤓

Good going Sonal, Keep it up....I liked the way Ranveer's charachter is shaping up...He is indeed like Sujal - thinks and acts with heart!

luv,
Raksha 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#89
gud to know that u guys liked the twist.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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starz, you're an excellent writer 👏 i read the whole story in one go and i want to know what happens...plz cont soon
Edited by Indian101 - 19 years ago

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