Ishq Chupta Nahin. FINAL PART PG 4

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Hi the storyline goes like this...

Nishikant's friend's son Arjun wants to marry Pia...Pia agrees for the wedding.Arjun is from Mumbai.He asks Pia to come with him first in Mumbai before the wedding.Bani decides to go with them, just to keep an eye on them...

But in Mumbai there happens some things that make Pia not sure about the wedding.

Bani is compelled to do something, what she really doesn't want......She makes a huge sacrifice.

THE PART ONE COMING SOON!!!!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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This sounds interesting would love to read your fanfic.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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sounds gr8!! love to read it!
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PART ONE:

A sunny day in mt.Abu...Nishikant is reading newspaper, and the three daughters are playing basketball.Bani throws the ball and suddenly they hear a man screaming... Bani sees that the ball goes straight to the man's head.

The man has a fit body and handsome face...Pia felt really attracted towards him...Bani runs towards the man and says "Sorry, sorry I didn't mean to hurt you...." She looked in his eyes.The man looked quite angry but soon he starts laughing. "No prob…".

Nishikant is happy seeing the man. "Arjun tum yahaan!!!" Arjun takes blessings from Nishikant. "Haan ucle main doo din jaldi aa gaya…" Nishikant asks Pia to take Arjun to their guest room…Arjun looks at Pia who is smiling and walking towards him. His breath started going faster and felt that something is happening inside him. Rano takes her book and starts to read, Bani goes to make tea for the new guest.

GUESTROOM:

Arjun and Pia haven't said even a word.Arjun is thinking….What should I say to her…"Hi, Pia are you the eldest daughter of Nishkant uncle?" Pia is thinking something else and after a while she realizes that Arjun said something… "What did you say Arjunji???" Arjun says "Nothing…." He starts unpacking his stuff and Pia goes….

She stands outside his door, thinking about Arjun…Inside the room Arjun is thinking about Pia. Both are surprised what happened after they saw each other, why do they think all the time about each other. 24x7 I think of you, song from 36 China town is playing….They are imagining them being in the song.

GARDEN:

Everyone are silent, and havin tea…Arjun says "Nishikant uncle, I want to ask you something." "Say it beta." Arjun in confused should he tell Nishikant the thing what is in his heart. "I want to marry your daughter, Pia…From childhood I always felt attracted towards her.And today I realized that I am in love with her…" Pia is sitting with no emotion….

Nishikant looks at Bani, "No I won't let you marry my daughter Pia…First my eldest daughter Bani will get married.So after she does, you can come to ask me…ok?" Arjun is unhappy, and Pia too. Bani is looking at Pia and Arjun, seeing them sad she decides one thing.

"Papa, Arjun really loves her…They can get married before I do, I don't feel bad about it..Pia kya tum Arjun se pyaar karti ho…?" Pia is silent, thinking what she should do…. "Yes I love him, and want to marry him.But not before you do…" Rano goes near her father and says to him "Papa please…They really love each other. Nishikant puts his hand on Rano's shoulder, "If you all think it is the right thing getting them married, then okay…Pia will marry my bestfriends son."

Rano goes quickly to the kitchen and brings some sweets…She serves them to the new couple. Pia and Arjun are looking at each other, and lost in each others eyes. Slowly Arjun closes his eyes and thinks, is this really happening.? Nishikant puts Pia's hand on Arjun's hand. Later Arjun tells everyone "I would like to take Pia to Mumbai before our marriage to see the city and meet my family…" Nishikant is scared of the idea…"Sure, but Bani will come with you both too." Bani is whispering to her father "No…I don't want…" Nishikant looks angry and Bani says "Okay, main bhi Mumbai jaaongi."

THE END OF THE FIRST PART!!!!!!

Edited by Kritika. - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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interestin story..... please continue

JAIIIIII is in MUMBAIII,,,, lolz 😆 .. i hope 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Ok I reveal something....they are going to meet jai in mumbai....
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awww...... so far so good..... plzzzzz cont soon 😊
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thanks the next part will come soon
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PART TWO:


MUMBAI:

Pia and Bani are in the shopping mall, because Arjun is in the office and will come to take them from there… Pia sees a beautiful pink kurta, "Bani di, I really want to wear this when I meet Arjun's parents!" Bani sees the price, she is sad that she cannot afford it. Then she looks at a ring, which her bestfriend gave just before she died. "Pia tum yahiin raho, I will come soon…" Pia senses that somehow Bani will arrange the money to buy the kurta.

Bani is in the jewellery shop near the shop they saw the kurta. She gives her ring to the shopkeeper. "Main yeh anguuthi beechna chahti hoon…" The shopkeeper laughs at Bani, "Hello, shaiyed aap kisi aur shahar se hain, in these fancy shops we don't sell second Hand jewellery's!!!"

Then a man near her looks at the ring…"Hello miss,I will buy the ring." Bani slowly looks at the man… The shopkeeper says "But Jai Walia won't you buy ring from my shop???" Jai looks angrily at the shopkeeper…"Shut up!" Bani takes the ring off, and asks "Aap kitne paise deenge?" "Will rs.20.000 go?" Bani takes the ring off and gives it to Jai.Jai gives her the money… Jai says "Tum sheher mein nayi ho aur agar tumhe koi bhi madat chahiye toh is number mein call kijiye." Jai gives a paper which has his number on it…

Bani is in the cloth shop and gives Pia the money, "Yeh hai tumhari kurta ke liye…" Pia is happy but asks Bani "Aap yeh paise kahaan se laye.?" Bani is mum, and gives the money to Pia, Just when Pia is taking the money she sees that the ring in Bani's finger is gone!!! "Bani di, you sold your ring!" "Pia main tumhare liye kuch bhi karne ke liye tayyaar hoon…" Then a man running comes towards Pia, and puts something in her bag….Pia is schocked, and tries to catch the man but he runs away.

Bani and Pia are both scared…Pia looks at the thing and sees that he put diamonds on Pia's bag…Bani is very scared. Then some other men run following the man who had the diamonds. Bani takes Pia's hand and says "Jaldi se hamein chalna chahiye…" Just when Bani turns to go, she bumps into Jai. Jai sees Bani tensed and asks "Aap kyon itne tensed lag rahe ho?" Bani tells him everything about about the man who had the diamonds… Jai says "Aap woh diamonds mujhe dijiye, I will give it to the police…" Bani gives it to him…Then she leaves the shop with Pia, after buying the kurta…

Outside the door Bani and Pia are waiting for Arjun.Then someone takes Pia's hand and pulls he into his car…Bani screams "PIA!!!" And she is running after the car… Then some other car comes in front of her and stops, It is Arjun! "Arjun, koi gunde Pia ko leekar chale gaye!!!" Bani shows the car with her finger, and Arjun and Bani get in to Arjun's car they are following the car where Pia is.

But soon they cannot see the car anywhere, Arjun puts his hands slowly on Bani's shoulders…And hugs her…Bani is feeling very uncomfortable, Arjun slowly takes his lips near Bani's lips and kisses her! "Arjun what are you doing!!!" Arjun forcefully kisses Bani, and puts his hand all over Bani. He tries to take Bani's clothes off…Bani is really trying to get away.She takes desperately Arjun away from her, "Arjun stop it!!!" "I cannot, you are just soo….."He kisses all over Bani's neck. Bani tries to open the door and realizes that it is locked. She slaps Arjun, and quickly opens the lock, and runs away….Arjun is too following her….

Bani knocks the door of some house…She sees Arjun is soon really near her. Then someone opens the door, Bani goes inside and locks the door….She turns around and sees a man standing in front of her, then she sees that it is Jai!!! Bani goes near him and says "Please aap who khidki mat khooliye, who ladka meri izzat lootna chahta hai!!!" Jai hugs her and says "Everything will be okay…" He calls the police and informs about the man outside his door....

END OF PART TWO!!!!!!!!!!!


Edited by Kritika. - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awww how cute jai is also to the rescue... lolz... omg ARJUN! wats rong wit him! please continue i cant wait to read more 👏

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