Silence says it all ff prt31 pg65 NOTE67 - Page 41

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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 hey continue soooon, who is this guy, is it prem, who asked bani to come to his sisters wedding, pllllllllllllease contunues sooon 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
WOW Sweetu, that was another as usual amazing part!!! Please please continue soon!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Sweetuuu !! This last 2 partz were just fab. I wuz waiiting for u to cont and OMg, no u cant end this FF...buh if u decide to dun wrry i wont come after you with a belan or bricks... i'll cum after you with my Physics Textbook....oh and trust me it hurtz wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy more than a belan ( POWER OF PHYSICZ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ) LOL....

sryy... ihz just that i am high on cheerios ri8e now... 😆 YES it is possible !! 😉

Love ya, Do cont a.s.a.p Lookin forward to reading more !!
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Posted: 18 years ago
just lovely hun..plz do continue soon! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago


Hang on while I catch my breath.. after reading that I don't know if Bani was
having difficulty breathing but I definitely am! It was very well written. So tell
me is our dear Bani going to even the score or just let her devilously
handsome husband rule over her. 😆 I love the passion, the darkness in
Jai, I love it all.. can't wait for you to write more. Take care. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Wooooow.... 👏 👏 👏
nice parts keep going dear.... 😳 😉 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
WOW !!

👏 👏 👏
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😳 *blush* *blush* 😳

~pLeAsE c0nT s0oN~
Edited by Hrithik_lova - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Sweeetuuu!! Haila!! 😳 😳 😳
awesome hun! 👏
plzzz continue ASAP!
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Posted: 18 years ago
you know what? i was so sleepy but now im wide awake after reading the part! I LOVED IT! really GOOD! the guy? dev? if it is, i just hope he can receive a full blasting from BOTh jai and bani esp. bani!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 30

Immersed by the darkness…just alone…just them…caught in passion…locked in time, both sway to the music…

He continues to trail his fingers up and down her back…feeling her heartbeats fasten and grip tighten…
Her eyes are closed and she is leaning against his chest for support.
He kisses gently the side of her neck…allowing the faint smell of lavender perfume to engulf his senses…. sending him into erotic desire.
His hands move further…she stifles her words…

Love…is pure torture…

His head snaps up, feeling someone near.
Eyes lock with "him" and "his" infuriated face…he (jai) digs his fingers cruelly into her back...in a protective gesture…
She moans in pain.

His touch and hold are no longer soft and gentle...more brutal and hurting.
She no longer can breathe. Can still sense his passion and wants…yet knows not why the sudden change in attitude, until his words hit her ears…killing her softly…
"Banee…(Pauses…tone gruff…) why are you doing this ( now threatening…eyes flashing…holding her still close)…do you like playing games with me ( bites the words out…)…he's here Bani…you knew didn't you…( tone now accusing and tough…)"

She shudders….understanding…eyes now look up and over his shoulder….watching "him" approach…
She retreats her gaze…back to his…looking deep into "the" demanding eyes…she burns.

His fingers are still moving…up and down in a seductive and brutal manner.

"Banee…I don't appreciate being a pawn in your game….(narrows eyes…still trailing fingers up and down) stop it….I have had enough….enough Baneeee…you ARE playing with fire….(pauses…nipping her neck)…it'll burn you…."

Her eyes swell in desire and anger.
How dare he…

He looks at….can no longer handle it…makes a motion to go…
Before moving….he kisses her….

They softly move against hers…pressing deeper, burning throat, with an unknown desire…and hatred….killing her softly…
Pulls away…breathing harsh….looking down upon her harassed frame…he pries her hands away from his….whispers…
"Don't test me Banee…"

Then walks off the dance floor and out into the night to cool all temper…leaving her stranded and vulnerable to the many on lookers…one in particular, yet she notices not "his" clear and want filled glare…is lost in a trance….
His words continue to hit her…

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Part 30…hope you liked!
Ignore grammatical and spelling mistakes…am tired!
If confused do tell!
Waiting for comments!
Part 31 is written up and will be posted soon!
Luv ya
Sweetu
BTW by "him" I DO NOT MEAN JAI...i mean someone else!
P.S. SORRY if in any ay this part was intense!
Edited by sweetu144 - 18 years ago

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