Silence says it all ff prt31 pg65 NOTE67

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slowcheetah

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Posted: 18 years ago

#421

wow you write intensely. love your writing. so when is part31 going to be up? who will bani choose? 👏

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sweetu144

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Posted: 18 years ago

#422

😳 🤗 Thank you all so much for your comments...they are appreciated so much....they truly mean alot!
Believe me when i say, had i not gotten your sweet comments i would have stopped writing.
The LAST part will be posted in a few minutes.
If any of you want can give you one last part after the offical last part...your choice i dont mind.
But the official last part will be put up in 2 minutes.
Thank you once again.
I await your response.
Luv ya
Sweetu 😳
P.S. For only you my sweetie.

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sweetu144

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Posted: 18 years ago

#423

Part 31
Outside the storm is brewing and rains threaten…yet inside heartbeats increase and palpitate.

Nearing her now, glad to note that her partner had left….
He changes his tone, and softens his facial expression…whispering softly…
"baneee…(pauses) why are you standing here all alone….let's…let's go outside…get some fresh air…"

She looks up and meets "his" eyes, giving a forced smile…
Confusion engulfs her mind, yet at this moment she just wanted to get away…away from it all.
"haan…(pauses voice dry and crisp after his strong and deeming kiss) ok...let's go Dev"

He leads her out onto the balcony, noticing her loose strings…he smiles.
"Eh…Bani…your (pauses) um…blouse is undone"
As soon as the last word escapes his lips a strong blush rushes over her face…
She mumbles…and hastily tries to tie the revealing area closed…
Yet is unable to, realizing now only too late that the back was too far to reach…
He notices too…
Before she can protest she feels his cold ice hands move over the bare area …stiffening her posture…
"De…Dev…what are you doing" Realizing that he was tying her strings… actually more feeling…
Her voice is pitched high…
"De…Dev…it's ok I'll do it…"
His eyes cloud over….grip intense
"No Bani, enough games...stop toying….(pauses smiling now)…I know you want me…"
She gasps…hearing his words...
Feels his finger slide…is unable to scream from shock…
Her eyes alert and wide….
He does not stop…
Tears fall…and then a gruff familiar voice talks…

Next few minutes pass in a blur, rough scuttling occurs…she stands still in daze….
Unable to comprehend…

Moments pass to no end…she stands numb with shock...reliving his actions…

She feels a warm hand on her shoulder, looking up…sees him and breaks down.
He holds her tight…her body shakes….his fingers press deep into her back…his touch is somehow soothing…

Minutes pass in silence…he holds her tight…
"Baneee…(pauses…voice soft and sad…) I am sorry, I should not have left you…I…"
She stops his words, allowing her fingers to rest on his lips.
Looks up and into his eyes …they say it all…
He understands…

Takes something out of his pocket…shines brightly…looks deep into her eyes…produces a single rose, trails it along her lips, causing an unusual colour to drain themselves upon them….
Eyes are dark with desire….
Moves his lips closer to hers, breathes onto them….
Trails fingers up and down her spine…pushing further at the blouse, testing its limit…
He eyes her silently…enjoying her torture…
Brushes his lips once more towards her ears…whispers….marry me…
She stays quiet…looks up at him and claims his lips with hers…he silently slips the ring on her finger.

A silent yes….

The kiss is strong and refreshing to both.
His move with a sense of power, while hers follow silently in response….
Trails his tongue teasingly, her throat burns in a fire of its own..
Brushes her fingers through his hair…pushing him deeper…
A faint groan escapes….
She rests her head against his chest…
He smiles…

Takes her in his arms…carrying her off to a room.
The door closes with a soft click.

The party forgotten...only the love is alive.
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Hello all!
Voila end of silence!
Didn't know what twist to come up with…
Please ignore any grammatical errors…am tired.
Waiting for comments!
Luv ya
Sweetu
P.S. This part was dedicated to my sweetie and all of my readers, who have followed throughout the whole ff!
BTW Excuse if this part was in any way inappropriate.

Edited by sweetu144 - 18 years ago

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black current

@black current

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Posted: 18 years ago

#424

sweety i am waiting i will read ur update and then only i will go to sleep so if u can pls pm me kal office bhi jana hai na so pls

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black current

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Posted: 18 years ago

#425

hmmmmmm that was something so silence is ended 👏 👏 👏 finally jai and bani getting engaged nice story and nice emotions 👏

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Meghna

@Ronnie_K

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Posted: 18 years ago

#426

Hey sweetu, im getting very emotional as silence has ended. As you promised pls pls pls update the last part which,as u said, wud be the last part after the "official last part". Pease eagerly awaiting ur last update of this ff.
And by the way..... lovely ff. The best so far. I have also finished reading with "waiting" and three of your other ffs.... two of them being very short ones but again very amazing....and "Breathing".
I am now so into reading your ffs that i just log in here every 15 minutes to check whether u have updated or not.. Even during my exams. gr8 going.
And thanks.

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Divya Harji

@divya_123

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Posted: 18 years ago

#427

sweetu u ended silence why kyun?? 😕

yaar this was my all time fav ff anyway will wait for ur other new FF 😉 hope u write it soon

last part was very very aheem what excellent 👏

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ovaltine

@ovaltine

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Posted: 18 years ago

#428

Hi sweetu, liked your ff. I can see that you are quiet and emotional writer. I thoroughly enjoyed your ff and hope to read more from you again in the future. Kudos for a job well done and for the happy ending. 👏

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maria-n

@maria-n

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Posted: 18 years ago

#429

Hi Sweetu

Lovely end to Silence! Finally she gives in her struggle, finally ready to understand him....
And that creep Dev with his icecold hands...

Good that Jai didn't let Dev play his game and carried his Bani into the future! ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Your special writingstyle, all emotional, made Silence a very interesting and gripping read.

Thanx Sweetu, I loved it all the way! 👏