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Sujata

@Garf

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Posted: 19 years ago

#81

Finally guys, I have managed to update chapter 7, hope I don't bore you with this particular chapter, as it's a pretty long and I have gone into being a little more descriptive....there's not much interaction between Jai and Bani...but I hope you would still love reading it...Waiting for all your feedbacks...good or bad I am ready to take them all...

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Pooja

@pooja.walia

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Posted: 19 years ago

#82

OKAY....now for the comments...
Well very nice part... 👏 👏 👏
both are thinking of each other... practically alll the time...aaawwww.... 😳
he's snapping at people... aaawwww... poor thing wanted to see her first... haan beta ghar se pick kar leta usko...wouldn't that have been easier... 😉

and he snaps at her... now why just why does he do that... i know i know...
n she...resigns...

loved the part of the single stem... A Single Rose Stem can speak volumes...much more than a bouquet can...loved it

awsome....👏
Poo

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Ridhi

@ridizzz

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Posted: 19 years ago

#83

👏 👏 👏 Love It. 👏 👏 👏
Love the way Jai react and his way of saying sorry. 😊
Please continue soon. Can't wait to read your fab story. Just toooooooooo gooooooooooddddddddddddd.
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NaV

@SIKinLoVE

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Posted: 19 years ago

#84

awwwwwwwwwww he gave her a rose and a card.. haila.. 👏

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Anam

@salmansgirl

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Posted: 19 years ago

#85

soooooo sweet. love chapter 7. can't wait to read more. update soon!

i hope bani forgives him and doesn't leave the job!

cheers,
anam

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Divya Harji

@divya_123

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Posted: 19 years ago

#86

wow dame good parts dear
cant wait for the next part
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sonia

@apnaapna

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Posted: 19 years ago

#87

I loved it...I like yours better than a lot others (no offense meant to anyone else)....
do update when you get a chance

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maria-n

@maria-n

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Posted: 19 years ago

#88

Garf, it was well worth the wait!

Such a beautiful part: Jai and Bani both trying to come to terms with their feelings, surprised and helpless as they are towards these emotions. Making their long awaited first meeting after his visit, such a loaded moment, both wishing so much to see each other and yet so tensed and so insecure about what will happen.

You describe this so intense and natural, so fluent and crafted.
It makes wonderful reading, really! 👏 👏 👏

Thanx!
And now the next part, in spite of your slow nature, as you say yourself ( sadly I share this trait with you... 😆 ), I guess everybody would be so happy when it comes fast!

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Sujata

@Garf

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Posted: 19 years ago

#89

Thanks Maria,

I am glad you found it worth the wait...cuz I was a bit apprehensive about being sooo descriptive...wasn't too sure, I might just end up boring everyone... 😊

I'll definitely try to pen down the next chapter soon...

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Sujata

@Garf

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Posted: 19 years ago

#90

Dearest Pooja, Ridhijai, Salmansgirl, Nyzbabigyal, Divya and apnaapna....

Thank you soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much for taking out time to read my fan fic...To be honest I can never thank you guys enough...

As Poo says forum is definitely a great place to meet some of the nicest people and I completely agree with her...

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