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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey everyone!! I am back!! Umm, my thinkers are thinking again I shall say! And I've brought some very interesting parts with me!! Hope you guys enjoy this part! Here's part 12:

Part 12

After thier little "romantic scene" Bani goes to change to go to college. Hey isn't that wierd, she has to go to college on a Sunday?? Yup, that's Bani. Actually Jai was wondering the same thing too. But, anyways, evethough there wouldn't be any classes BAni was a person that may look up to school for time pass 😛. Anyways, Bani got out of her room. She checked if she had everything and went to the counter to pick up her keys. Right now, Jai was sitting on the sofa watching a show he really didn't watch before, and thus didn't know the name. 😆😆

Bani: Kya dekh rahein ho?

Jai: Umm, (his mind engrossed into the television) No idea. But it seems interesting.

Bani: Hmm, well, I'm going to college right now and I'll be back in a little while. Till then, no masti and make sure - Wait a sec, where's my purse?

BAni goes into the room to check for her purse. She can't leave without it. It has her wallet and her cellphone in it too. BAni looks underneath her pillow, in her drawer, on the study desk, inside the study desk. But she just can't seem to find it. She then goes to the main room and checks there. Beside the fridge, by the stove, by the TV, even the sofa.

Bani: Kahan gaya?? (Bani starts to panic know) Jai, did you see my purse anywhere?

Jai: (focused) Hmmm?

Bani: Did you see my purse anywhere??

Jai: Uh, the blue one with like little swirls on it?

Bani: Yeah, yeah that one! Tumna kaheen dekha?

Jai: Wahee jo tum har bahr kaheen na kaheen bhool jaatee ho?

Bani: Look Jai I really don't have time for jokes. Did you see it, yes or no??

Jai: Umm, (thinking whether he should joke around or just tell her) Nope.

Bani: Jaaaaiii, please give me my purse back. I'm getting late already.

Jai wanted to have some fun. So, he decided that he'll pretend he doesn't have it. 😆😆

Jai: Banniiii, maine tumse kahan na, I don't have it darling...

Bani: (gettin frustrated) Jai dekho tum - (thinks of a way to get him to give it to her) Sweetypie, my little muffin, honey.. I need that purse right now...now can you please pass it?

Jai: Par Bani, (Jai turns the Tv off and stands up now) if I don't have it how do you expect me to give it to you?

Bani: (really frustrated now but trying to keep calm) Dekho Jai.. (getting closer to him) agar tum mujhe yeh purse naheen dogey, (up to his chest now, Bani runs her finger along the side of his face) to meh tumhe mera surprise kaise dikhaoongi? Hmm?

Jai: (now getting what he wanted) Oh really?? (gets a hold of Bani's waist and turns her around so Bani is sandwiched between Jai and the wall, her back facing the wall) Then in that case, (pulls out the purse) yeh lo. (kisses her cheek softly) (now Jai's naughtiness begins😆) Aur agar mujhe raat tak surprise naheen mila, (kisses her other cheek) toh...

Bani: Nai Nai..mila ga..kyun naheen mile ga? Zaroor milega. But filhaal, can I go now?? (Jai brings his cheek closer wanting a kiss) (Bani gives out a small gasp) Jai mujhe jaana hain. Please mujhe jaane do, I'm getting late.

Jai: Nope. (his strong arms still around Bani's waist) Until you don't' give me a sweet kiss I won't let you go.

Bani: (slowly gives him a quick kiss on the cheek and runs) Mujhe jaana hai!! Byeee!

Jai: Aree Bani meir baat to sunno!!

And once again, our poor Jai is left alone without Bani. But for Jai, this doesn't mean defeat. Bani said surprise, right. So she'll definitely have to give a surprise. Because if she doesn't then we all know what that means..😉

That day at college wasn't very busy for Bani. On her way, she was thinking about what she said to Jai just a while ago. Have I gone mad?? What was I thinking?! Now he's really gonna expect a surprise. But what do I give him?? Damn! Now I have to think about that....It can't be a mere present or something, it has to be something special. Something meaningful for Jai. And for me. Stupid me! What mess have I gotten myself into!?! While thinking about all this, Bani just got lost and didn't know when she arrived at college. She did get off at college, but she couldn't remember why she'd come to college. On the other hand, Jai at home, was bored. Really Really bored. So he decided he'll redesign their apartment. Maybe move some furniture here and there, relocate some things. And the room would look absolutely beautiful again.

Half an Hour later... Bani comes home. JAI: BEWARE OF BANI Yup, you all guessed it. Bani was NOT in a very good mood right now. She came storming into their apartment as if she learnt that she failed college. She came in anger and closed the door behind her anger, only to see a sight that just built up her anger even more. She saw some people shifting the furniture, moving things here and there. And as if they didn't WANT to know, Bani didn't like people touching and moving her stuff without her permission.


Bani: JAII!! What in the world is going on here?!! And why are you guys moving my stuff?!! Jai ke bachche!! Where are you?!!


Jai: (comes out of Bani's room) Kya hua Bani, why are you screaming?? Everything alright?!


Bani: Look at this, just look at them!! Why are they moving our stuff!!!!!!

Jai: (realising her anger) Yeh, oh them - don't worry....yeh toh bus -


Bani: (walking to her room) And why is my stuff being shifted?!! And to where - Why are my things being moved to your room!?!!!!


Jai: Bani (trying to calm her down) Bani, umm, I just thought that since we actually are finally together we might as well like live in together...(Jai's voice got softer and softer and with more confusion)

Bani:WHAT?!! (running her hands through her hair in frustration) No way!! All of you get out right now!! (the helpers just stand still too scared to move) GO!! (everyone just scurries out as fast as they can)

Bani: (after everyone is out) (beginning to calm down a little now)(sighs) Jai, I need to talk to you.

Jai sits on the sofa. Bani puts her bag and her purse down and sits beside Jai. It's pin-drop silence. We warned you Jai, but you didn't listen...😆

Jai: (in his innocent and cute way) Am I in trouble?

Bani: (laughing at his cuteness) Noo...it's just, (sighs again) okay. Jai, hum hindustani hain. Maana keh hum pardes mein reh rahein hain, leking our hearts and our souls are still Indian. Yeh sub, I don't know how to put this, but....I'm just not ready for all this. I don't know, it....it just doesn't feel right. Tum samajh rahein ho naa, mein kya kehna chaahti hoon?

Jai: (gives her a comforting smile) I understand. Mein puri tara se samajh chuka hoon.

Bani: Jai please galat mat soch na -

Jai: Nope, no Bani. How can I think of it in the wrong way? (stands up in the Jai-type posture with his hands in his pants pocket going by the window, standing by the window staring out at the football field)I know what you're trying to say. And I absolutely agree with you. I don't know what I was thinking. (pauses for a while) I guess I was just whitewashed living with these gorre kaaale. (NO OFFENSE TO ANYONE) Actually galatee toh meir hain.
Bani: No Jai, it's not your fault. (Bani stands up and stands behind Jai, putting one hand on his shoulder) Agar tumhare jagey mein koi aur hota to shayad woh bhi yahee karta jo tumne kiya. Please, don't blame yourself. (Jai turns around to face Bani) I love you Jai, and I know, tum aisa koi bhi galat kaam naheen karoge. (Jai hugs Bani) I have faith in you...

Jai: (still embraced tightly) By the way Bani, we have only one week left, did you know that?

Bani: Wow, 4 months passed by so fast and we didn't even realize it.

Jai: Yup, and our flight is on next Tuesday. So, you might wanna start packing the littlest things one always forgets. Oh and, talking about forgetting, don't forget about my surprise!

Bani: (remembering that😛 Oh shoot!)(unhugging Jai) Yes, the surprise. Uhh, actually you know, I was thinking of giving you the surprise after we reach Mumbai. Because you know, that atmosphere and everything would really suit it. How say??

Jai: (getting his puppy face on) not fair Bani! You promised till tonight!

Bani: Haan toh thooora sa aur intazaar karlo....it's only one week baba..please maan jao?

Jai: Ab tum mujhe emotionally blackmail kar rahee ho, that's not fair Bani.

Bani: (getting HER puppy face on now) Pleeasee?

Jai: (knowing that he couldn't say no to her after seeing that puppy face, no one could) Fine...

Bani: (hugs Jai tightly) Yayy!!!

Okay, so one week passes by really really fast. Yeah, time passes by so fast in my fanfic😛, doesn't it?? Okay now guys, I'm gonna bring in the role of Raj and Priya again.

Bani and Jai's flight landed at 11:10 on Friday morning. Raj and Priya were both their to receive Jai and Bani. But.....they don't know each other yet. Raj is somewhere else looking for Bani and Jai, and Priya is somewhere else looking for Jai and Bani.

Priya (played by Preity Zinta)
Raj (played by Saif Ali Khan)

Priya: Ohh man! Ab yeh flight bhi naan. Surprise dene challe ayee leking flight ka number bhi nahen pata. Stupid!

Raj: Where the hell is this Bani?! Bachpan ki aadat naheen gayee. Atleast flight ki timing to denee thi. Ab mein kahna dundhoo, usee aur uske dost "Jai" ko?

While our both wonderful characters look around, they bump into each other. Their first meeting. Oh guys, I can't really make them have a love at first sight thingy because for now, Raj since he's Bani's childhood dost likes Bani and Priya just fell in love with Jai ever since she got to know him. So for now, it'll just be an ordinary bang with someone at the airport.

Raj and Priya: I'm sorry -

Priya: It's okay. Umm, kya app mujhe bata saktein hein kein, umm, woh flight jiski umm, (having difficulty speaking hindi with this guy she barely knows) Sorry, lemme speak in english. Could you please tell me what the flight number for that airplane with the blue tail is? 😆(she doesn't even know the flight name😆)

Raj: Are you talking about KLM?

Priya: (ab strike hui) Haan! Wuhi. Can you tell me the flight number of it please?

Raj: Umm, what's teh timing for it?

Priya: Umm, about 11:10 I think.

Raj: Okay, thanks. (and since he's got his information he begins to walk away but Priya doesn't let go of him so easily. She holds onto his arm not letting him go.)

Priya: Oii! Hello, mister!! Aap ko flight ki timing chahiye thi and I told you. Now since obviously you're waiting for the same flight you just leave without telling me the flight number even after I was asking so nicely???

RaJ: Haath chhoriye.

Priya: Jab tak tum mujhe flgiht number naheen bataenge, I'm not.

Raj: (sighs) KL 1503.

Priya: (because he said it so fast) Kya??

Raj: (says it faster) KL 1503. Now can you please leave my hand?

Priya: (leaves his hand and Raj starts walking) Hey you, listen! (Raj keeps walking ignoring what she said) Shoot! He left. I guess I'll just have to find teh gate myself.

Bani and Jai exit from the customs chatting along the way, with Jai's arm around Bani's shoulder, looking like an ideal couple. They pick up their luggage and move ahead. The come outside where the visitors would be standing and look for familiar faces. Sudeenly, to their right they see a youg girl waving her hands saying thier names and immediately identify Priya. Then, Bani notices to her left that a guy was looking around, for someone and realises it's Raj.

Bani: Hey Raj!!! (says to Jai) Come!! Mein tumhe kisi se milwatee hoon. Come!!

As Jai and Bani walk to Raj, Priya follows them through the crowd not knowing who they're going to. Upon reaching to where they are, she notices who they were waiting for.

Priya: (who joins the three, now four) Tum?!

Raj: (thinking, not her again!) Tum again?!

Bani: You guys know each other??

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There you go guys, I think that was the longest part ever!! Anywyas, I hope I didn't make you guys fall asleep with the cheezy Jai-Bani scenes!! By the way guys, I was getting my thinkers thinking and then I was thinking of some good songs from good movies for like the sangeet part of J-B's wedding. Here's what I got so far, if I've missed any good ones please let me know, thanxx!

If I was to include old songs, then:
  • Pardes
  • Kuch Kuch Hota Hain
  • Raja Hindustani
  • Dil To Pajal Hai
  • Hum Saath Saath Hain
  • Hum Aapke Hain Kaun
  • Mohabbatein
  • Dilwale Dulhaniya Le Jayenge
  • Karan Arjun
  • Don (old one)
And if I was to take songs from new movies, then:
  • Omkara
  • Dhoom II
  • Fanaa
  • Salaam-e-Ishq
  • Namstey London
  • Kabhi Alvida Naa Kehna
  • Jaaneman
  • Don (new)
  • Khoon Barabar Jhoon
  • Ta Ra Rum Pum
  • Awarapan
  • Kya Love Story Hai
  • Bas Ek Pal
  • And various songs by Adnan Sami

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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome ff 👏 plz continue soon😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
That was a GREAT part... 👏
Can't wait for what's going to happen next!! 😃
Waiting for the next part... 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
hehehe yeah😆 but i think umm, u misunderstoood.. that was the end....but, was it not good? lol lemme know😉😉 see ya!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: megha21

awesome ff 👏 plz continue soon😃



Originally posted by: Twinkle20

That was a GREAT part... 👏
Can't wait for what's going to happen next!! 😃
Waiting for the next part... 😉



thanxx guys!!😃😃 but i hope you guys read the bottom part too😕 it wusn't small enough to miss😆 newayzz i hope i get sum suggestions from u guys! see ya!!😃😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
i like the song mere haath mein tere haath from fanaa...WELCOME BACK TO UPDATING...lovin it..
peace out
update soon
me_myself.&.i
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey that was a good part..now aayega mazaa with all jealousy n bickering..cant wait for the next part...also jaldi se Saif aur Preity ko mila do yaar..
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Posted: 18 years ago
hello everyone!! thanx for all the lovely comments! i've noticed i now officially have some people who reallly really like my fanfic and have read all the parts till now 😛 😃 😃 thanx guys for the support! Anyways, to the topic, I just wanted to say that unfortunately I won't be able to update for a long time now. Let's just say, till like June 30. And as most of you'll must've guessed it, I have exams coming up. Darnit!!! I have one all this week and one on Tuesday next week, and then one all next week and then two HUGE ones on next Wednesday...and then I've just got to wait pateiently for my report card. So, sorry to keep you guys waiting, but it'l only be for this onth I promise! then since it'l be the summer break, I'll be able to update more often (if I don't work this summer). So......till then, toodlez!! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
one month is a long time, but i understand cuz of ur exams

but u HAVE to promise that u will update by 6-30-07!!!!!

DEAL?
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Posted: 18 years ago
oh angel, no worries, best wishes for ur exam..

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