PART 15 B to 27 FF

Sanjana

@akhilash

Voyager

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Posted: 19 years ago

#181

terrific, ekdam mast 👏, waiting to read the next part

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Nina

@shahni4

Dazzler

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Posted: 19 years ago

#182

Awesome!!! Can't wait for the next part!!!!!

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Indian_Goddess

@Indian_Goddess

Dazzler

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Posted: 19 years ago

#183

i love ur fanfic! u r a great writer! please continue very soon!

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Anjali

@amisra

Dazzler

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Posted: 19 years ago

#184

Loved it! Absolutely AWESOME!!

Please continue soon!

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Nabila

@Tomiko

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Posted: 19 years ago

#185

wow....i love you aditee🤗....part 23 was awesome!!....but too short yaar!!....waiting eagerly for the next one!😉

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catcat

@catcat

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Posted: 19 years ago

#186

Sec 21, Loved the airport scene, very cosy & intimate. B's provess in handling the DJ was an unexpected though pleasant surprise. The flush of pride JW feels at his wifey success is priceless.
Sec22, T as a worthy advisary to JW adds to zing & zest. B articulates very well her thoughts & feelings for T.
Sec23,what a face-off……..could actually feel the atm crackle with tension.

All parts great read.As usual waiting for the next /CAT

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Aditi S

@aditee

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Posted: 19 years ago

#187

Hi! All
Thanks for the REVIEWS!! 👏 👏
Itna bhi achha nahi hai yaar

LOVE READING THEM THO 😉
will post part 24 later today, got caught up in some pooja at home

Thanks again keep readin
A

P.S. Pray Raam visits over the weekend and gets a feel for how mad we all are with his tranformation into a WIMP!! 😡 😡 😡

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lonely14

@lonely14

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Posted: 19 years ago

#188

Your fanfic is amazing but sometimes itz too much when Jai-Bani fight for no reason. But then again it is very intersting to read this point of view cuz hey this could happen in the show. But i think the Tarun issue needs to resolved soon.

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sabsj

@sabsj

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Posted: 19 years ago

#189

Awsome part aditee, love the passion and the way they play it out, just wish bani would be more into it rather than just say NO to JW all the time, even if she does not really mean it. loved the airport scene, really cute, but was sad that they both misunderstood the missing each other part 😭

pls, please please resolve that stupid Tarun's issue, the guy reminds me of Pia, who is so full of himself and acts like he owns bani. hate to see both of them fighting over him, rather would like to see them realising their feelings for each other and acting upon it rather than wasting their time over this idiotic tarun.

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