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Thank you all for your sweet comments.. they are really encouraging.. after each part i will leave one question for you guys... just to get some suggestions.. thanks again

Part 3
Part 3

Jai had to make his decision and was about to tell the doctor when….a stranger yelled

"Save the child ofcourse"
Jai was shocked and turned to see who had decided to take the decision for him.


Jai: Tum! How dare you come here.. are you not living in peace after ruining my life. Get out of here ROSHINI"

Roshini: Chill Jai. Jigyasa filled me in on the tragic news of your wife. I had to come and see how Bani was doing. Besides I'm your friend and what are friends for if they can't help each other out during these times

Doctor: Mr. Walia… is this your decision as well?

Jai: OF COURSE NOT! Please doctor try to save them both but if you have to choose then please nothing should happen to my wife!

Jai was heartbroken but he knew that he could not live without Bani..She meant the world to him

Roshini: JAI! How could you choose her! Your marriage is false… It was my fault for drugging her and making you drunk. If it wasn't for me then this baby would have never happened. JAI you can't love her… you can only love me!

Jai: WHAT THE HELL DO YOU THINK YOU ARE SAYING! How do you possibly go of saying that I don't love my wife and love you. You ruined my LIFE Roshini! THE ONLY WOMAN I COULD LOVE IS BANI! Now get out of here before I do something I will regret

Roshini had come to the hospital hoping that Bani would be dead and that there may still be a chance for her and Jai to get back together. She had never heard Jai say that he loved Bani and this just upset her even more!

Roshini to herself: Jai there is no way I'm letting you go that easily. You haven't seen the last of Roshini yet!

Back at the walia mansion, everyone was in awful mood and are praying that nothing happens to their dear Bani!

Massi: Arre Raashi, you were going to meet your father today, why don't you go see him.

Raashi: Nahi Masi how can I go with Bani mami in the hospital.

Masi: Raashi please, your father will feel bad that you did not go and visit him. He is probably waiting for you. Please go visit him.

Raashi: tik hai Masi, I will go.

The scene goes back to Roshini at the hospital. Roshini knew she had to come up with a plan to get Jai back… and that it would have to be quick!

Roshini: Bhaiya..There is a huge problem here. Jai has started to fall in love with Bani. It seems that I will never get Jai back.

Ranvijay: Roshini what happened.. calm down… you were so happy when you left...

Roshini: Jai loves Bani!!! The park road incident didn't keep them apart.. His love for her grew!

Ranvijay: ROSHINI! ARE YOU CRAZY! Don't talk about the park road incident… we had carried it out so perfectly

Roshini: I know… but there has to be another way… the park road incident didn't do it

Ranvijay: Roshini!!! For the final time… don't bring park road incident up again! If Jai ever found out that there was another car that night and I was the one who accidentally hit Mrs. Walia… WE WILL BE DEAD!!

Roshini: I know bhaiya

Ravijay: shhhhh….. roshini someone is here!

Roshini: KYA!!!

Ranvijay had heard a slight creak behind the wall… he proceeded to walk towards the sound…..

Ranvijay: TUM!!!


Here is the 3 part… thank you all for your sweeet comments.. I won't be able to come out with the next part for a while… have to go to the mandir today and then school tomorrow.. but I promise I'll write the next part soon! Thanks again for reading!

Question: who do you think is hiding behind the wall?

👏 !!
awesome part!! luve it!!
heheh luved da rosh got shouted at!!!😃
yaar pls ithna suspense mat rakho naa!! ( i hope u understood my hindi)
pls cont.soon! 😃 this ff is just awesome!
😃

Originally posted by: sweetu144

👏 !!
awesome part!! luve it!!
heheh luved da rosh got shouted at!!!😃
yaar pls ithna suspense mat rakho naa!! ( i hope u understood my hindi)
pls cont.soon! 😃 this ff is just awesome!
😃

haha i understood your hindi just fine... i understand but man its hard to even get gujarati down...first i get that down then i'll start with hindi😉 thanks

tht was really gud n i think tht raashi was behind the wall plz continue soon!!! 👏 👏 👏

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh snappp that was hotttt.. is it raashi??? oh TOOO GOOD.. luved it.. plz cont soon 👏

Well done sweetie!!

it was amazing part!!

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Please do continue!! 👏 👏 👏

oh man who is it??? plz cont soon!

u are awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

Awesome part. U have got me hooked 👏 👏 👏
I think it is raashi who heard everything
Plz continue soon

Luv Taz

i think rasshi heard everything....
roshni 😡 😡 😡 rosh u better stay away from jai and bani...
nice part hun...keeep goin...dying to read more 😊 😳 😳 love
Aragon

arre yaar dnt leave us hangin 😉
Cobra Rani ki to main ********************* 😡
oh oh oh raashi hrd it all??
and plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz save both the baby and Bani
else relly luv ur ff
keep goin..........me waitin for prt 4
plzzzzzzzzzz continueeeeeeeeeeeeeee soon