Short FanFic For Jai&Bani last part pg 7 - Page 5

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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks alot dears and bears for liking it ๐Ÿ˜ณ
i am surely gonna post the last part tomorrow ๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 19 years ago
#42
that was soooooooooo cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I loved each part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


cant wait for the last part!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#43
That was really fab....pls post the next part soon!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#44
WOW... sweet and nice fanfic...
i just read ur whole fanfic.... i love it... it's just wow.... plz continue soon...
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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ awsome
please continue soon
thanx ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 19 years ago
#46
Hey Divya di..!!

it was beautiful.. i am still blushing!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ

well please do continue. and a little request.. can u please make it longer!!

Thanx!! ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
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too good.simply superb.eagerly waiting for the last part. ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 19 years ago
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๐Ÿ‘ !!!!
i just read ur ff and i think that its awesome!!!!!!!!!
pls continue it soon!!
๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ fab part!!
๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
thanks alot for liking it ill post the ;ast part just ina min ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50

part 4
here we go
both jai and bani come in their room and jai makes bani sit on the bed and asks him "so mrs walia apke liye kuch lekar awu" to whic bani juts smiles and says"nahi app sirf mere paas bethiye"
and jai sitted beside her and said"hmm sirf bethunga aur kuch nahi" then he said "Hmm bani abh tumhe apna bohot dhyan rakhna hoga koi kaam nahi karogi aur bed se to hilna bhi maat"
and bani was like is he the same jai wali i married then she becomes little naughty and says"to iska matlab mein kuch kaam na karo kuch bhi na karu right" and jai said "Yes" and thrn suddenly jai got what she was saying and he said" mera woh matlab nahi that kuch nahi karne ka matlab yeh nahi ke tum apne pati ke sath....before he could finish bani said
to aur kya matlab tha mein kuch samjhi nahi to which jai says ok thik hai let me tell u tumhe kya karna chahiye aur kya nahi and he comes really close to bani and kisses her forehead and then her cheeks and we was just about to kiss her on lips there is a knock at the door he goes to open the door in anger and before he could say anything aditya,rano.sahil.raashi,ranveer all of them come inside
with raashi having milk and rano having some dryfruits for bani as jai just watches all the amry coming inside he just stands at the door
then rashi gives milk to bani and so does rano the dry fruits then bani tells both of them that when will the day come when she will bring milk and dryfruits for them both rano and rashi feel shy and then suddenly bani feels a apain in her stomach
everyone gets shock jai gets really hyper and tells aditya to take bani to the hospial but aditya says there is nuthign like that u just call up the doc and then doc comes and check bani and says there is nuthign to wrry as baby was just turning around thats it
all get relief
then after 8 months
we see all happy with bani having huge stomach its all at their rountine both bahus making breaksfast for their patis bani like maharani comes down with the help of jai and sits on the chair having her heavy breakfast with lots of vitamin
then as usual jai goes for his work the day passes nicely then its night everyone is sleeping so is jai and bani but bani suddenly wakes up and feels pain she makes jai wake up
she tells her to call someone as she is having alotof pain but jia been duffer says"arre bani kuch nahi hoga pata hai doc said baby ghum raha hai thats why..sojawo" and he lies down again,bani gets really irritated and says"app kisiko bularahe ho yah mein khud jau"
jai wakes up and and says"accha thik hai ruko " he calls rano " rano comes inside and gets very tensed then all to see bani in the pain he rushes to call aditya to which everyone comes inside aditya tells jai to take out the car
but jai is still not satisfied to it and says "arre par yeh to hota rehta hai"aditya gets really angry and says"jai mein jaisa kehraha hu waisa karo yeh labour pains hai duffer jaldi se gadi nikalo"
and then he gets whats all this and rushes to get the car they all reach at the hospital and after an hour or so bani delivers a sweet baby girl
everyone seems to be very happy jai is the first one to go inside to see bani and the baby once he goes inside he sees bani sleeping then he sees the baby he holds her and he feels sumthing really good he feels that i m a papa finally
then bani wakes up and jai gives the baby to her and says see ive got a very beautiful daughter tumse bhi khubsoorat hai akhir mujhpe jo gayi hai
bani gets tears in her eyes the tears of happiness and so does jai they both hug with the baby looking at their papa mummy once the hug is finish the walia army comes inside including maussi all seems to be very happy


"well u guys and think the name for the baby girl"๐Ÿ˜‰

so this is it
the end of my fan fic๐Ÿ˜ณ

hope u liked it๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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