Short FanFic For Jai&Bani last part pg 7

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getting really bored so just writting a small fanfic

hope u all will like it

lets assume maussi had gone back and bani had already left the walia mansion coz that duffer(jai) didnt stop her assuming she doesnt love her and same with bani assuming her mr walia doesnt love her

their divorce is not yet done they are waiting for the case date

aha as usual i am minusing the parkroad thing and ofcourse pia😆

there is a party at walia mansion for getting some big deal which sahil got

so rano invites bani for the party as she is married to sahil and still stays at walia mansion while bani in some hostel

bani refuses to come but rano forces her and so does aditya by telling her that she doesnt only have a relationship with jai but now she is his bahu's elder sis and by this relation she has to come ,bani couldnt refuse to it and said yes

at the party being held at walia mansion bani enters in the house standing near the door with the memories of her marriage but doesnt get the courage to step ahead

rano sees her di and hugs her and tells her to come inside but bani refuses to it and says u told to come in the party so did i now ill leave i cant come inside

aditya comes and trys to mae bani come inside meantime jai searhes for aditya then he sees him in the entrance talking with some one(he didnt saw bani)he goes straight to adtya without noticing bani he starts talking with him and suddenly both jai and bani look at each other

bani without saying a word tells rano that she is leaving before she could proced to go jai says"bani ruko gi nahi"bani doesnt understand what to do before she could say anything rano grabs her inside

everyone looks happy while jai and bani justlook at each other with lost emotions

then suddenly bani feels dizzy and vomiting she couldnt control herself and went straight in a room(which was her and jai's before separating)

she goes inside the bathroom and starts vomiting she comes out and sees jai inside the room looking for some file they both look at each other and bani says"woh meri tabiat .. woh mujhe ulti horahi thi isiliye ..a...im sorry" an she goesn out of the room and then again she feels dizzy and holds the door of the room before she could feel better she just faints

jai looks really shocked to see bani faint he holds her and makes her llied on the bed and tries to make her wake but she doesnt

he doesnt understand what to do and thinks to himself"nicche to party chal rahi hai agar kisiko pata chalake bani behosh hogayi hai to sab ...nahi mujhe hi kuch soch na parega"he then lifts bani up in his arms and procedes to the other exit door he finally comes out with bani and makes her sit on the car and drives to the hospital,while diving jai calls up rano and tells her everything rani gets really shocked and asks jai as how is bani now jai says he is taking her to the hospital but rplease kisiko yeh maat kehna ke bani mere sath hai plzz aur yeh bhi nahi ke bani ki tabiat thik nahi hai ,rano agress to it and ends the call

jai brings bani to the hospital where doc checks bani and comes outside (bani still inside)the doc tells jai daar ne ki koi baat nahi aisi halat mein yeh sab hota hai,jai gets abit confused and aska the doc"is halat mein..matlab"and the doc says lagta hai apko bhi nahi pata mrs walia is pregnent ek mahina uppar hogaya hai lagta hai mrs walia ko bhi nahi pata maine unhe nahi bataya hai app khud hi unhe yeh good news batadijiyega thik hai

and we see bani coming out of the checking room before she could ask what had happen jai takes her out of the room saying thanks to the doc

jai makes bani sit in the car bani

bani gets really confused as to whats happening and on the other hand jai wanted to talk with bani but didnt know what to say and how he tried to talk with her in one of the red signals but before he could say anything the signal turned green

he got really irritated and parked his car infront of one of the 7 star hotel😉

k this is it for now

i guess this was not a short fanfic but a huge bigfan fic😆

wil continue later

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Posted: 19 years ago
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oo it wasn't THAT long (or short 😆 ) but it was cute.. picking her up in his arms..aaah! i wanna know what happens nextt 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ohhhhh it wasss justttt superrrr.....!!pleasee continueee.....!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PLEASE DO CONTINUE!!! PLEASE IT IS A BEAUTIFUL FAN FIC!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks for liking it dear
i guess it wasnt that romantic but i was getting really bored so just wrote wht came in my mind
ill continue it soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Divya gr8 start. 👏 👏 👏 Plz continue soon...
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that was cute.... please continue..... very nice start.... 👏
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really interesting...please continue 😊
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Great start hun!!👏👏

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part 2

jai parks his car infront of the hotel and tells bani"challo mere sath"and just comes out of the car and so does bani
before jai could even step forward bani asked"hum yaha hotel mein kyu" to which jai replied"mujhpe bharosa hai"
bani pauses for a sec and says" khud se zyada" by listening this jai holds bani's hand and takes her inside the hotel
goes straight to the receptionist where jai says"book me a sweet" and receptionist asks by which name and jai without thinking says "mr & Mrs Walia"
bani gets really surprised by this and very confused too as whats all this mr walia is doing
jai gets the keys and takes bani to the room as he has still hold her hand,they enter the room finding everything very romantic in it as its a sweet, a room for couples
once jai closes the door bani asks him "yeh sab kya hai mr walia"
jai comes near bani and gives her the report her medical report stating her pregnency positive, jai gives the report and turns back bani opens the file and doesnt understand anything
as the pregnency thing is in the second page bani still looking confused and says "yeh sab kya mujhe kuch samaj mein nahi arahahai "
by listening this jai turns back now facing bani and holds her and says"bani tum pregnent ho"
bani just gets shock and surprised and couldnt believe what did just mr walia said.. Jai continues saying"bani ek mahina uppar hogaya hai aur tum istarhase party mein ghum rahi thi aur woh bhi high heels mein"
this time he was saying this with lot of concern and at the same time angry"bani mein jantanhu us raat jo kuch bhi huwa woh ek galti this lekin..." before he could finish bani said
"woh ek galti nahi thi mr walia" bani was totally broken by listening to jai telling that night a galti inspite of knowing that she is pregnent
"mein janti hu appke liye woh raat bhi ek galti thi aur yeh bachha bhi ek galti hi hai,lekin ,mere liya woh raat aur abh yeh bachha dono hi meri zindagi banchuke hai..
apke liye woh raat sirf ek pal hoga par mere liye woh sab kuch tha us pal me ek aurat bani ek patni bani, us pall ne mujhe ehsaas diya ek aurat ke liye uske pati ka pyaar ka maine rakhta hai ek patni ke liye
apne pati ka chhuna kya maine rakhta hai...us pal mein chahti to apne app ko rok sakti thi lekin maine aisa nahi kiya kyunki us paal mein apne pati ke sath thi
main janti hu ap us raat ko yaad bhi nahi karna chahte aur shayad yeh baccha bhi nahi chahte lekin mein aisa nahi hinedungi yeh baccha meri zindagi banchuka hai
mein apni zindagi ko nahi khonedungi" by hearing bani saying that jai doesnt want the child jai gets the big shock of his life he couldnt believe bani saying that he doesn want the child his child tears flow from his eyes also
he goes really close to bani and holds her by her sholders and say" mein yeh bachha nahi chahta, bani tum aisa kaise keh sakti ho yeh baccha jitna tumhara hai utna hi mera hai ,
bani mein khud janta hu ke woh raat woh paal mere liye kya maine rakhti hai tumhare us ghar se jaane ke baad ussi paal ne mujhe zinda rakha hai agar tumhare liye woh raat aur yeh baccha zindagi hai to mere liye tum aur yeh baccha meri jaan ho
aur mein apni hi jaan ko kaise khatam karsakta hu bani,agar tum us pal us raat apne pati ke sath thi to mein us paal us raat us aurat ke sath that jise mein sab se zyaada pyaar karta hu....

will continue third part later which wil be the last part😃

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