Pyar Ko Hojane Do....Updated PG 17 09/27

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Posted: 19 years ago

#41

oh wow rania that was awesome! pleeeez continue soon!! ill be eagerly waitin for ur next part!!

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Raania

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Posted: 19 years ago

#42

hey guys

the next part con'd

The Haweli is one of those old buildings but very big and beautiful….its situated on a mountain with huge gates and near a lake……very romantic and beautiful….and very cold…

This was the place that Jai came to when he needed to think or just relax…it was his private place…and now his going to share it with the most precious person in his life..!!! his Bani!

It was late at night when they finally arrived and the rain was pouring hard…..
Bani and Jai were drenched in rain by the time they got into the building…

The house keeper (the family calls her chaci)..who was a very nice old lady and a family servant greeted them….

Jai; kaise ho chachi (in his usual stern manner but with a slight smile)

Chachi: Jai beta…and than she looked at Bani…."aah kitni sundar bahu hai hamari…ao bitya..thumara is ghar meh swagat hai"

Bani (very lost in her world and cold) kneels down and touches her feet…."namaste" she says

chachi instead hugs her and kisses her forehead.....

Jai looking at them thinks..kash me chachi hota...the night flashes in front of him....Jai is mesmerized by how beautiful Bani is looking right now…all wet and sexy…

Chachi takes a shivering Bani and Jai into the Haweli….she shows them to their bedroom ..
Its beautiful and big just like other parts of the house….with a big bed in the middle and a huge fireplace…

Jai leaves her and says his going to his study to call masi and let them know that they have arrived safely…..a stuneed Bani is just standing there….

Bani has a shower and comes and sits by the fire placeplace which is facing the window….(she is wrapped up in a huge blanket looking very cozy)

Outside its raining and the wind is very rough…Bani shocti hai…kya mausam ko bhi pata hai mere dil ka haal…..she looks outside the window and thinks…..ek aisa hi din tha ..barish ka…. jaab meh Mumbai sher meh apni do amanat ke saath ai thi…aur ek aaj din hai jaab meh Mr Walia ke saath hu…yeh kaisa rhista hai hamara akhir…Bani closes her eyes….everything flashes back to her mind…the time she came…the day Pia ran off…the day she got married…the insults she went thru….the hatred in Mr Walia's eyes…the change of emotions…the night of passion…her declaration of love….the day Rano got married…THE day she found out the truth…..

As soon as she thought of that her eyes flicked open…"maa"….

Hey maa aap jaha ho meri madat karo…meh kya karu….agar Mr Walia innocent hai toh mujhe kaha kiu nahi…agar unoh neh jaanbhuj ke kuch nahi kiya..toh mujhe bataya kiu nahi….kiu nahi mujpar woh yakeen karte hai...

Unhe koi farq nahi padta…meh janti hu..us subha ko bhi who raath ki galati kherahe the…toh phir aaj yaha kiu laye….meh kiu nahi unse nafrat kar parti hu…meh kiu nahi unhe chor ke jaa pati hu…akhir kaise hai yeh pyar…..

The song in the background is..:

Kitne baatein yaad ati hai
Tasviro se banjati hai
Mai kaise inhe bhulu
Dil ko kya samjhao

bani thinks of the night...the very special night..the day she gave everything to this man..her life..her love..herself!!!

In the meatime…Jai comes into the room and sees Bani wrapped into a blanket sitting near the fireplace facing the window…..he looks at her…and he couldn't make the effort to walk any further…..the fire close by giving her hair and side of the face a different glow….
Bani didn't notice when he came in……he was just staring at her…he saw how she closed her eyes and than all of a sudden she opened them as if she had a bad dream….

How innocent she was…....how beautiful….and such a beautiful heart she had…a heart that always was concerned for others happiness….."kya is dil meh mere liye koi jaga milegi Bani"..he thinks to himself…."kya tum kabhi mujhe maaf kar paogi Bani"…his still thinking…
"kaise kahu meh tumhe….ki kitna pyar hai"…kaise kaho….???"

The song in the back ground.....

Kitne baatein khene ki hai
Hoto par jo
Shemi si hai
Ek roz inhe sunlo
Kiu aise gumsum ho

Kiu puri ho na payi daastan
Kaise ai hai aisi duriyan

Than out of the blue Bani looks …a look that is lost and solemn...and her eyes connect with Jai's

The song goes on….

Donno ke dilo meh chupa hai jo ek anjana sa ghum
Kiya ho payeag who kum…koi kya kahe

Donno ne kabhi zindigi ki ek moor peh thi payi
Hai kaisi who tanhai..koi kya kahe

Both are looking at each other..talking with their eyes…

Kitni viraan hai yeh sama…
Aakhon meh jaise ghulta hai dhua….
Kaise ai hai aisi duriyan……..

Kitne baatein yaad ati hai
Tasviro se banjati hai
Mai kaise inhe bhulu
Dil ko kya samjhao …..

Bani still looks at Jai and her tears seem to well up in her eyes….

The song continues!!

Tumse aaj yu milke dilko yaad ai lamhe kaal ki
Yeh aasu kiu hai chalke….aab kya kahu….

Jai looks at her…his eyes to become moist…he thinks .."can bani love him the way she gave herself to him"

Tumne humko dheko joh aise toh
Ek umeed hai jagi
Phirse tumse pyar pane ki
Aab kya kahu

Aagaye hum kaha se kaha
Dil ne murkar yeh dheka karwa…
Kaisi aihai aisi duriya…….

(Lalalla…this very beautiful heartfelt song is from the movie Lakshay…I thought it suited this scene of mine very well)

Jai keeps looking at Bani...while looking out of nowhere he puts his hands forward...inviting Bani into his arms....Bani stands up...her brains say "no!! nahi bani"..magar dilse thi majboor...she runs...she runs so fast...that she almost crashes into Jai's embrace...

Jai: Ohh Bani???

hope u guys like it... 😳