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My very first humble analysis.
She thinks she is devious JW is deviouser" :-) He premepted the fact that she wud NOT inform him on coming home, so he had asked Darshan to call him after dropping her off and also Tony to let him know after he let her in.
Set Mr Walia on that!
He is such a hawk!! Watches her closely.. 😳
Silly me she thinks..........walks back to the dresser
Looks at her reflection and notices the faint bruise on her left cheek and traces it with her brush "Why does he do this to me?" Why do i let him affect me so much?"
tht's part of the reason JW and Bani r so good together because Bani is such a pushover.
starts brushing again and winces when brush encounters the tangled hair
JW has been leaning on the door jamb since she turned away from it, dressed in sky blue cotton shirt with shoulder straps, sleeves rolled up 1/3rd, and the SECOND BUTTON UNDONE! (which will TOP her JW's Tools to Torment Bani list that she will make later)and blue black Dockers, silver watch in place..........
THANKYOU Aditee for making my day!! i hate the fact tht in the show, JW's buttoned his shirt all the way!!
JW: Ouch!
B drops her brush doesnt turn around feels a thrill in her heart! hides it...........
Starts looking for her earrings........
JW: Goodmorning Baneee
B: Goodmorning mr walia (purposely sing song, tho shaky voice)
JW: Kaisa tha concert? Did u have fun with Diya?
walking over casually to the dresser, leaning by the side of the mirror on the wall, facing her, seeing her get ready, arms folded.................
uffffff!!!! LEANING!! love it!!!
B drops her earring clasp!
JW: Oh Boy! U are jumpy today .......
😃 he knows her so well...
Bani peers on the dresser, looks at the floor and instinctively looks at her neck and blouse..........
LOVED this part. i think all women have this way of wearing provocative clothes first and then feeling all exposed later on.
befopre she cud go any further.............
JW:Main kuch help karoon?
B: Nahi
JW: I am really good at finding things, especially ON people(chuckles)
chuckles...would love to hear him chuckle on the show...except no-chuckling moments have bombarded KS right now
B No thanks, main koi doosra pehan loongi..............
She hurriedly finds a tiny CLIP ON pair and wears it
B: thanks for the passes Mr W, Diya ne kaha those were like Rs2000 tkts
JW (nonchalantly, shrugs) I dont know Bani, accounting ne pay kiya hoga, or may be they were free I dont know..............
B looks at him and wonders if this man really cares about money as much as he says he does, he removes all full stops when it comes to pampering some one..........
i find this so hot when men pretend like they didnt spend an obnoxiously large amount of money when they HAVE.
JW Kya soch rahi ho? (playing with her stuff on the dresser smelling stuff and twitching his nose)
B snatching it away and placing it back, closing lids, "Kuch Nahi"
JW So what did your cute rock star say?
B: woh aapko achhe se jaanta hai, he said aapne uski help ki jab uska aurangabad mein ghar mein legal problems ho gayi thi
JW: That was a loong time ago Banee (again careless)
B (finally) Main aapse bahut naraaz hoon! (There she said it!)
Bends down sulking
JW Oh kyon? (mock-innocently)
B YOU KNOW IT!
JW (brooding) Baneee just becoz I agree to ur schemes that doesnt mean I approve of them.
Banee understand the reference flushes and looks away
JW Aur tum jo mere saath kar rahi ho? IS THAT FAIR?
B: Main yahan aapke ghar mein, is kamre mein hoon, aapki baat maankar
JW: You SAID it, tum yahan ho is KAMRE mein..........
bani's thinking : why can't the earth just swallow me right now... 😳
B looks away.......
B I dont want to go to Thailand
JW: thats number two (chuckles)
B: I promise main yahin rahoongi, Aditya Uncle can guard me
JW swears under his breath
JW: I want u where I can see you
pretty obvious by now 😳
B: Abhi main din mein bhi kahin ja sakti hoon, raat ko agar nahi aayi to? Kal raat jab main aayi tab aap SO CHUKE THE (accusingly, lump in her throat)
JW Thats number three.... tumhe pata hai main soya nahi tha, Tony ne mujhe bola tum aa chuki ho
B: Agar main apne apartment chali jaati to?
JW Tum nahi gayi (softly, firmly)
Bani walks away to the patio, almost opening the door to it, leans on it and closes her eyes. opens to find him in front.......
JW: U answered ur own q Bani, um chahti nahi jaana, tum chahti ho ki main torment hooon, tum chahti ho main tumhe dhoondoo. You know I can find u, u want me to come after u. U want me to check on you..........
Poor Bani, noone can save her now... 😊
B Nahi aap galat......JW DONT LIE (Runs his hand thru his hair, she watches spell bound)
JW:Baneee I am NOT a patient man
mannnn... the sexual tension is killing me... 😳
Silence extends interminably..........
B Diya aapke se bahut imprssed hai (changing the subject, trying to hide her jealousy)
JW thats number four, tabhi tum mujhse milne ke liye itni besabar thi (Amused totally)
JW Aur kya kaha Diya ne?
B aapne mujhse pooche bina dinner plan banaya
W Oh! I forgot to mention......
B: She thinks u are very sexy (regrets it the moment she blurts)
Closes the gap
JW: Tumne kya kaha?
B: I dont think so
Laughs hard
awwwww... Bani so cute...... 😛 i can imagine her pouting..
JW: We have to do something about that!
B: Stop nahi to main visa ke liye nahi aaoongi
JW :Oh No! (moc fearful) that wud be so sad
JW starts his signature nuzzle, ears, neck, cheeks, forhead.......
therewe go again..
B: STOP!
JW Make me!
She raises her hand to push his jaw away
JW comes right back on
JW: how come all blouses have an indecent neckline? He traces it until she slaps his hand off when it approaches the dangerous area..........
the use of the word indecent here is killing me.. 😳 hayeeee i would give my right arm to hear someone say tht sentence to me....but sadly, i dont wear indecent necklines...
B: (Got her chance!) Aap apne shirt mein doosra button kyon nahi band karte?
JW (smug) so u noticed?
u want to choose ur words carefully around JW... 😳 the man doesnt miss anything...
B Closes her eyes tightly ( oops! she thinks) her heart already in its final beats............
JW But tum mere shirt ka neckline increase kar sakti ho, I dont mind AT ALL........
UUUFFFFFFFFFFFF!!!!! 😳 😳 😳
Her hands on his chest pushing him away.............. or atleast trying to..........
He ignores her protests finds her ear, nuzzles it leaves it throbbing to find the next easter egg on her neck below her collar bone........
JW slides his arm around her bare waist........
B shivers
JW:Kya hua
B: Aapka watch......... its cold!
JW I am sorry, let me warm u up........
tht has to b the hottest thing ever said by any character on this fanfic.. 😳
B: Visa..... she murmurs indistinctly, Mr W we better leave..........
JW Abhi.............. he murmurs, abhi......... while he teased her lips until hers parted and his came over them, possessing hers deeply, his hands travelling all over her body finding stopping at his favorite rest areas like a thirsty man getting a well deserved hydrating break............
Her hands wrap themselves around his neck and clings to him for dear life,...............
JW between kisses "its all ur fault agar mera Thai deal nahi hua to, who the hell asked u to wear a pink saree on visa day? (swears huskily)............
OMG!!! 😳
Seconds wrap around minutes and minutes................. Oh well who is looking at the clock
Final thoughts.
1) HUSKY is now officially my favorite word.
2) Bani dont ever wear a pink saree again..unless u want to get ambushed by JW
3) can we PLEASE have JW keep his second button open at all times from now on? 😳
4) the cold rolex is giving me chills.... 😳 😳
She thinks she is devious JW is deviouser" :-) He premepted the fact that she wud NOT inform him on coming home, so he had asked Darshan to call him after dropping her off and also Tony to let him know after he let her in.
Set Mr Walia on that!
He is such a hawk!! Watches her closely.. 😳
Silly me she thinks..........walks back to the dresser
Looks at her reflection and notices the faint bruise on her left cheek and traces it with her brush "Why does he do this to me?" Why do i let him affect me so much?"
tht's part of the reason JW and Bani r so good together because Bani is such a pushover.
starts brushing again and winces when brush encounters the tangled hair
JW has been leaning on the door jamb since she turned away from it, dressed in sky blue cotton shirt with shoulder straps, sleeves rolled up 1/3rd, and the SECOND BUTTON UNDONE! (which will TOP her JW's Tools to Torment Bani list that she will make later)and blue black Dockers, silver watch in place..........
THANKYOU Aditee for making my day!! i hate the fact tht in the show, JW's buttoned his shirt all the way!!
JW: Ouch!
B drops her brush doesnt turn around feels a thrill in her heart! hides it...........
Starts looking for her earrings........
JW: Goodmorning Baneee
B: Goodmorning mr walia (purposely sing song, tho shaky voice)
JW: Kaisa tha concert? Did u have fun with Diya?
walking over casually to the dresser, leaning by the side of the mirror on the wall, facing her, seeing her get ready, arms folded.................
uffffff!!!! LEANING!! love it!!!
B drops her earring clasp!
JW: Oh Boy! U are jumpy today .......
😃 he knows her so well...
Bani peers on the dresser, looks at the floor and instinctively looks at her neck and blouse..........
LOVED this part. i think all women have this way of wearing provocative clothes first and then feeling all exposed later on.
befopre she cud go any further.............
JW:Main kuch help karoon?
B: Nahi
JW: I am really good at finding things, especially ON people(chuckles)
chuckles...would love to hear him chuckle on the show...except no-chuckling moments have bombarded KS right now
B No thanks, main koi doosra pehan loongi..............
She hurriedly finds a tiny CLIP ON pair and wears it
B: thanks for the passes Mr W, Diya ne kaha those were like Rs2000 tkts
JW (nonchalantly, shrugs) I dont know Bani, accounting ne pay kiya hoga, or may be they were free I dont know..............
B looks at him and wonders if this man really cares about money as much as he says he does, he removes all full stops when it comes to pampering some one..........
i find this so hot when men pretend like they didnt spend an obnoxiously large amount of money when they HAVE.
JW Kya soch rahi ho? (playing with her stuff on the dresser smelling stuff and twitching his nose)
B snatching it away and placing it back, closing lids, "Kuch Nahi"
JW So what did your cute rock star say?
B: woh aapko achhe se jaanta hai, he said aapne uski help ki jab uska aurangabad mein ghar mein legal problems ho gayi thi
JW: That was a loong time ago Banee (again careless)
B (finally) Main aapse bahut naraaz hoon! (There she said it!)
Bends down sulking
JW Oh kyon? (mock-innocently)
B YOU KNOW IT!
JW (brooding) Baneee just becoz I agree to ur schemes that doesnt mean I approve of them.
Banee understand the reference flushes and looks away
JW Aur tum jo mere saath kar rahi ho? IS THAT FAIR?
B: Main yahan aapke ghar mein, is kamre mein hoon, aapki baat maankar
JW: You SAID it, tum yahan ho is KAMRE mein..........
bani's thinking : why can't the earth just swallow me right now... 😳
B looks away.......
B I dont want to go to Thailand
JW: thats number two (chuckles)
B: I promise main yahin rahoongi, Aditya Uncle can guard me
JW swears under his breath
JW: I want u where I can see you
pretty obvious by now 😳
B: Abhi main din mein bhi kahin ja sakti hoon, raat ko agar nahi aayi to? Kal raat jab main aayi tab aap SO CHUKE THE (accusingly, lump in her throat)
JW Thats number three.... tumhe pata hai main soya nahi tha, Tony ne mujhe bola tum aa chuki ho
B: Agar main apne apartment chali jaati to?
JW Tum nahi gayi (softly, firmly)
Bani walks away to the patio, almost opening the door to it, leans on it and closes her eyes. opens to find him in front.......
JW: U answered ur own q Bani, um chahti nahi jaana, tum chahti ho ki main torment hooon, tum chahti ho main tumhe dhoondoo. You know I can find u, u want me to come after u. U want me to check on you..........
Poor Bani, noone can save her now... 😊
B Nahi aap galat......JW DONT LIE (Runs his hand thru his hair, she watches spell bound)
JW:Baneee I am NOT a patient man
mannnn... the sexual tension is killing me... 😳
Silence extends interminably..........
B Diya aapke se bahut imprssed hai (changing the subject, trying to hide her jealousy)
JW thats number four, tabhi tum mujhse milne ke liye itni besabar thi (Amused totally)
JW Aur kya kaha Diya ne?
B aapne mujhse pooche bina dinner plan banaya
W Oh! I forgot to mention......
B: She thinks u are very sexy (regrets it the moment she blurts)
Closes the gap
JW: Tumne kya kaha?
B: I dont think so
Laughs hard
awwwww... Bani so cute...... 😛 i can imagine her pouting..
JW: We have to do something about that!
B: Stop nahi to main visa ke liye nahi aaoongi
JW :Oh No! (moc fearful) that wud be so sad
JW starts his signature nuzzle, ears, neck, cheeks, forhead.......
therewe go again..
B: STOP!
JW Make me!
She raises her hand to push his jaw away
JW comes right back on
JW: how come all blouses have an indecent neckline? He traces it until she slaps his hand off when it approaches the dangerous area..........
the use of the word indecent here is killing me.. 😳 hayeeee i would give my right arm to hear someone say tht sentence to me....but sadly, i dont wear indecent necklines...
B: (Got her chance!) Aap apne shirt mein doosra button kyon nahi band karte?
JW (smug) so u noticed?
u want to choose ur words carefully around JW... 😳 the man doesnt miss anything...
B Closes her eyes tightly ( oops! she thinks) her heart already in its final beats............
JW But tum mere shirt ka neckline increase kar sakti ho, I dont mind AT ALL........
UUUFFFFFFFFFFFF!!!!! 😳 😳 😳
Her hands on his chest pushing him away.............. or atleast trying to..........
He ignores her protests finds her ear, nuzzles it leaves it throbbing to find the next easter egg on her neck below her collar bone........
JW slides his arm around her bare waist........
B shivers
JW:Kya hua
B: Aapka watch......... its cold!
JW I am sorry, let me warm u up........
tht has to b the hottest thing ever said by any character on this fanfic.. 😳
B: Visa..... she murmurs indistinctly, Mr W we better leave..........
JW Abhi.............. he murmurs, abhi......... while he teased her lips until hers parted and his came over them, possessing hers deeply, his hands travelling all over her body finding stopping at his favorite rest areas like a thirsty man getting a well deserved hydrating break............
Her hands wrap themselves around his neck and clings to him for dear life,...............
JW between kisses "its all ur fault agar mera Thai deal nahi hua to, who the hell asked u to wear a pink saree on visa day? (swears huskily)............
OMG!!! 😳
Seconds wrap around minutes and minutes................. Oh well who is looking at the clock
Final thoughts.
1) HUSKY is now officially my favorite word.
2) Bani dont ever wear a pink saree again..unless u want to get ambushed by JW
3) can we PLEASE have JW keep his second button open at all times from now on? 😳
4) the cold rolex is giving me chills.... 😳 😳
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