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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: aditee

PART 11B

It has the watch the sleeve the hair and then some..................

She thinks she is devious JW is deviouser" :-) ๐Ÿ˜› He premepted the fact that she wud NOT inform him on coming home, so he had asked Darshan to call him after dropping her off and also Tony to let him know after he let her in.
Set Mr Walia on that!

Bani sits in bed and sulks and sulks.

She misses him! Who wouldn't!

Why does SHE need a visa? ๐Ÿ˜ก She is not going for work. Where is Mr Walia, how dare he avoid her..... Who the hell is he to set up dinner dates with Diya, she is NOT GOING! ๐Ÿ˜ก How come he is not checking on her? Does he even know she is up?

So cute.. she's sulking! What has he reduced her too...


But she still got ready anyway, showered, pink chiffon saree, Love the pink! minimum make up and jewelry, combs her hair with a shower brush to get the tangles out, and thinks that this is usually the time JW walks in to her room, she goes over to her door, unlatches it, peeks out, and is disappointed when she realizes that he must be at WORK! When SHE is ready to fight he is nowhere to be seen!
๐Ÿ˜ญ
Silly me she thinks..........walks back to the dresser
Looks at her reflection and notices the faint bruise on her left cheek and traces it with her brush "Why does he do this to me?" Why do i let him affect me so much?"

starts brushing again and winces when brush encounters the tangled hair
JW has been leaning on the door jamb since she turned away from it, dressed in sky blue cotton shirt with shoulder straps, sleeves rolled up 1/3rd, and the SECOND BUTTON UNDONE! (which will TOP her JW's Tools to Torment Bani list that she will make later)and blue black Dockers, silver watch in place.......... He sounds so hottttttttttttttttttttt! AD where is our clone?
JW: Ouch!
B drops her brush doesnt turn around feels a thrill in her heart! hides it...........
Starts looking for her earrings........
JW: Goodmorning Baneee
B: Goodmorning mr walia (purposely sing song, tho shaky voice)
JW: Kaisa tha concert? Did u have fun with Diya?
walking over casually to the dresser, leaning by the side of the mirror on the wall, facing her, seeing her get ready, arms folded.................
B drops her earring clasp! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
JW: Oh Boy! U are jumpy today .......
Bani peers on the dresser, looks at the floor and instinctively looks at her neck and blouse.......... befopre she cud go any further.............
JW:Main kuch help karoon?
B: Nahi
JW: I am really good at finding things, especially ON people(chuckles)
B No thanks, main koi doosra pehan loongi..............
She hurriedly finds a tiny CLIP ON pair and wears it
B: thanks for the passes Mr W, Diya ne kaha those were like Rs2000 tkts
JW (nonchalantly, shrugs) I dont know Bani, accounting ne pay kiya hoga, or may be they were free I dont know.............. โค๏ธ
B looks at him and wonders if this man really cares about money as much as he says he does, he removes all full stops when it comes to pampering some one..........
JW Kya soch rahi ho? (playing with her stuff on the dresser smelling stuff and twitching his nose)
B snatching it away and placing it back, closing lids, "Kuch Nahi"
JW So what did your cute rock star say?
B: woh aapko achhe se jaanta hai, he said aapne uski help ki jab uska aurangabad mein ghar mein legal problems ho gayi thi
JW: That was a loong time ago Banee (again careless)
B (finally) Main aapse bahut naraaz hoon! (There she said it!)
Bends down sulking
JW Oh kyon? (mock-innocently)
B YOU KNOW IT!
JW (brooding) Baneee just becoz I agree to ur schemes that doesnt mean I approve of them.
Banee understand the reference flushes and looks away
JW Aur tum jo mere saath kar rahi ho? IS THAT FAIR?
B: Main yahan aapke ghar mein, is kamre mein hoon, aapki baat maankar
JW: You SAID it, tum yahan ho is KAMRE mein..........
B looks away.......
B I dont want to go to Thailand
JW: thats number two (chuckles)
B: I promise main yahin rahoongi, Aditya Uncle can guard me
JW swears under his breath
JW: I want u where I can see you
B: Abhi main din mein bhi kahin ja sakti hoon, raat ko agar nahi aayi to? Kal raat jab main aayi tab aap SO CHUKE THE (accusingly, lump in her throat)
JW Thats number three.... tumhe pata hai main soya nahi tha, Tony ne mujhe bola tum aa chuki ho
B: Agar main apne apartment chali jaati to?
JW Tum nahi gayi (softly, firmly)
Bani walks away to the patio, almost opening the door to it, leans on it and closes her eyes. opens to find him in front.......
JW: U answered ur own q Bani, um chahti nahi jaana, tum chahti ho ki main torment hooon, tum chahti ho main tumhe dhoondoo. You know I can find u, u want me to come after u. U want me to check on you..........
B Nahi aap galat......JW DONT LIE (Runs his hand thru his hair, she watches spell bound)
JW:Baneee I am NOT a patient man To say the least you cheeky bas***d!
Silence extends interminably..........
B Diya aapke se bahut imprssed hai (changing the subject, trying to hide her jealousy)
JW thats number four, tabhi tum mujhse milne ke liye itni besabar thi (Amused totally)
JW Aur kya kaha Diya ne?
B aapne mujhse pooche bina dinner plan banaya
W Oh! I forgot to mention......
B: She thinks u are very sexy (regrets it the moment she blurts)
Closes the gap
JW: Tumne kya kaha? Fishing for compliments are we Mr. Walia!?
B: I dont think so
Laughs hard
JW: We have to do something about that!
B: Stop nahi to main visa ke liye nahi aaoongi
JW :Oh No! (moc fearful) that wud be so sad
JW starts his signature nuzzle, ears, neck, cheeks, forhead.......
B: STOP!
JW Make me!
She raises her hand to push his jaw away
JW comes right back on
JW: how come all blouses have an indecent neckline? He traces it until she slaps his hand off when it approaches the dangerous area..........
B: (Got her chance!) Aap apne shirt mein doosra button kyon nahi band karte?
JW (smug) so u noticed?
B Closes her eyes tightly ( oops! she thinks) her heart already in its final beats............
JW But tum mere shirt ka neckline increase kar sakti ho, I dont mind AT ALL........
Her hands on his chest pushing him away.............. or atleast trying to..........
He ignores her protests finds her ear, nuzzles it leaves it throbbing to find the next easter egg on her neck below her collar bone........
JW slides his arm around her bare waist........
B shivers
JW:Kya hua
B: Aapka watch......... its cold! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
JW I am sorry, let me warm u up........ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

I need a shower...!! A cold one!

B: Visa..... she murmurs indistinctly, Mr W we better leave..........

JW Abhi.............. he murmurs, abhi......... while he teased her lips until hers parted and his came over them, possessing hers deeply, his hands travelling all over her body finding stopping at his favorite rest areas like a thirsty man getting a well deserved hydrating break............
Her hands wrap themselves around his neck and clings to him for dear life,...............
JW between kisses "its all ur fault agar mera Thai deal nahi hua to, who the hell asked u to wear a pink saree on visa day? (swears huskily)............
Seconds wrap around minutes and minutes................. Oh well who is looking at the clock Ok, at this point.. I'd turn the alarm clock off, and cancel the appt at the Embassy! Chod visa ko. Kahin jaane ki zaroorat hi nahin hai. Sirf... bed kik... ๐Ÿ˜ณ




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Posted: 19 years ago
Aditee,

Pink sarees in visa days should be banned. That was priceless. I am in awe.
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Posted: 19 years ago

Aditee:

You take your writing and the JB relationship one notce higher with every part you write.

Pinky

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Posted: 19 years ago
Thanks soap and Moudeb
You two are priceless........... Loved ur analysis Soap, thanks two reviews for one part, now I will have to dedicate the next part JUST FOR YOU
Thanks for SEEING JW as I DO with my mind's eyes
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Posted: 19 years ago
Soap and mm,
There is something abt a woman in a pink chiffon, I feel usme any body can look good, plus Bani is soooooo elegant and young,not to mention supremely desirable ๐Ÿ˜ณ she mustve looked fab, atleast she did in my mind ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 19 years ago

hold on Aditee let me calm down a bit, after reading this part I had lost myself, let me return back to my senses..hmmmmmm that's better okie here is my review to you hot hot part 11B

Originally posted by: aditee

PART 11B

It has the watch the sleeve the hair and then some..................

She thinks she is devious JW is deviouser" :-) ๐Ÿ˜› He premepted the fact that she wud NOT inform him on coming home, so he had asked Darshan to call him after dropping her off and also Tony to let him know after he let her in.
Set Mr Walia on that!

he is definately the deviouser, kya baat hai now that's a smart man, knows everything yet acts like he knows nothing, kya style hai yaar

Bani sits in bed and sulks and sulks. Why does SHE need a visa? ๐Ÿ˜ก She is not going for work. Where is Mr Walia, how dare he avoid her..... Who the hell is he to set up dinner dates with Diya, she is NOT GOING! ๐Ÿ˜ก How come he is not checking on her? Does he even know she is up?
But she still got ready anyway, showered, pink chiffon saree, minimum make up and jewelry, combs her hair with a shower brush to get the tangles out, and thinks that this is usually the time JW walks in to her room, she goes over to her door, unlatches it, peeks out, and is disappointed when she realizes that he must be at WORK! When SHE is ready to fight he is nowhere to be seen! ๐Ÿ˜ญ

it was her wearing the pink saree that told me we were up for some real fun, kya baat hai aditee I love this kind of foreshadowing๐Ÿ˜‰
Silly me she thinks..........walks back to the dresser
Looks at her reflection and notices the faint bruise on her left cheek and traces it with her brush "Why does he do this to me?" Why do i let him affect me so much?"

my god a bruise, JW the animal how sexy, though I am not a fan of animals but if he is like ur JW then even I don't mind having a pet๐Ÿ˜†

starts brushing again and winces when brush encounters the tangled hair
JW has been leaning on the door jamb since she turned away from it, dressed in sky blue cotton shirt with shoulder straps, sleeves rolled up 1/3rd, and the SECOND BUTTON UNDONE! (which will TOP her JW's Tools to Torment Bani list that she will make later)and blue black Dockers, silver watch in place..........

gosh what an image, baby blue my absolute fav. color on guys I am telling you I feel like swearing out of happiness when I read that brought back certain memories๐Ÿ˜‰ and the second button undone that was all you needed to say I imagined the bare chest myself ๐Ÿ˜†
JW: Ouch!
B drops her brush doesnt turn around feels a thrill in her heart! hides it...........
Starts looking for her earrings........
JW: Goodmorning Baneee
B: Goodmorning mr walia (purposely sing song, tho shaky voice)
JW: Kaisa tha concert? Did u have fun with Diya?
walking over casually to the dresser, leaning by the side of the mirror on the wall, facing her, seeing her get ready, arms folded.................
B drops her earring clasp! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
JW: Oh Boy! U are jumpy today .......
Bani peers on the dresser, looks at the floor and instinctively looks at her neck and blouse.......... befopre she cud go any further.............
JW:Main kuch help karoon?
B: Nahi
JW: I am really good at finding things, especially ON people(chuckles)

love this dialouge kahan kahan se pakad ke laati hai tu aisi lines
B No thanks, main koi doosra pehan loongi..............
She hurriedly finds a tiny CLIP ON pair and wears it
B: thanks for the passes Mr W, Diya ne kaha those were like Rs2000 tkts
JW (nonchalantly, shrugs) I dont know Bani, accounting ne pay kiya hoga, or may be they were free I dont know.............. โค๏ธ
B looks at him and wonders if this man really cares about money as much as he says he does, he removes all full stops when it comes to pampering some one..........

awww thats so sweet, he doesn't give 2 hoots for the money when it comes to her, if I only I could get someone to pamper me like that, I'll be always on cloud nine I tell you
JW Kya soch rahi ho? (playing with her stuff on the dresser smelling stuff and twitching his nose)
B snatching it away and placing it back, closing lids, "Kuch Nahi"
JW So what did your cute rock star say?
B: woh aapko achhe se jaanta hai, he said aapne uski help ki jab uska aurangabad mein ghar mein legal problems ho gayi thi
JW: That was a loong time ago Banee (again careless)

long time ago, hmm did that mean the singer is really old, aditee yeh kaunsa singer hai, I am so confused I need someone to fill me in on this singer everyone is nutts for I feel so lost
B (finally) Main aapse bahut naraaz hoon! (There she said it!)
Bends down sulking
JW Oh kyon? (mock-innocently)
B YOU KNOW IT!
JW (brooding) Baneee just becoz I agree to ur schemes that doesnt mean I approve of them.
Banee understand the reference flushes and looks away
JW Aur tum jo mere saath kar rahi ho? IS THAT FAIR?
B: Main yahan aapke ghar mein, is kamre mein hoon, aapki baat maankar
JW: You SAID it, tum yahan ho is KAMRE mein..........

oh god, just come and take her while she's sleeping yaar maza aa jaye would love to see how she reacts waking up in their bed๐Ÿ˜‰ a perfect kidnapping,
B looks away.......
B I dont want to go to Thailand
JW: thats number two (chuckles)
B: I promise main yahin rahoongi, Aditya Uncle can guard me
JW swears under his breath
JW: I want u where I can see you
B: Abhi main din mein bhi kahin ja sakti hoon, raat ko agar nahi aayi to? Kal raat jab main aayi tab aap SO CHUKE THE (accusingly, lump in her throat)
JW Thats number three.... tumhe pata hai main soya nahi tha, Tony ne mujhe bola tum aa chuki ho
B: Agar main apne apartment chali jaati to?
JW Tum nahi gayi (softly, firmly)

she can never leave such a hot thing and go away espeacially with soo many makhiyaan flying around him all day๐Ÿ˜†
Bani walks away to the patio, almost opening the door to it, leans on it and closes her eyes. opens to find him in front.......
JW: U answered ur own q Bani, um chahti nahi jaana, tum chahti ho ki main torment hooon, tum chahti ho main tumhe dhoondoo. You know I can find u, u want me to come after u. U want me to check on you..........
B Nahi aap galat......JW DONT LIE (Runs his hand thru his hair, she watches spell bound)
JW:Baneee I am NOT a patient man

I like it!!!!!!! I love it how he knows her better then she knows herself so sweet,
Silence extends interminably..........
B Diya aapke se bahut imprssed hai (changing the subject, trying to hide her jealousy)
JW thats number four, tabhi tum mujhse milne ke liye itni besabar thi (Amused totally)
JW Aur kya kaha Diya ne?
B aapne mujhse pooche bina dinner plan banaya
W Oh! I forgot to mention......
B: She thinks u are very sexy (regrets it the moment she blurts)

Bani even we all agree with your Diya, he is a damn sexy man๐Ÿ˜ณ
Closes the gap
JW: Tumne kya kaha?
B: I dont think so
Laughs hard
JW: We have to do something about that!

oh yeah baby, I want to see how he shows her how sexy he is, and I don't mean a kiss aditee, a full show would be nice๐Ÿ˜‰
B: Stop nahi to main visa ke liye nahi aaoongi
JW :Oh No! (moc fearful) that wud be so sad
JW starts his signature nuzzle, ears, neck, cheeks, forhead.......
B: STOP!
JW Make me! I love it, when he says this
She raises her hand to push his jaw away
JW comes right back on
JW: how come all blouses have an indecent neckline? He traces it until she slaps his hand off when it approaches the dangerous area..........
B: (Got her chance!) Aap apne shirt mein doosra button kyon nahi band karte?
JW (smug) so u noticed?
B Closes her eyes tightly ( oops! she thinks) her heart already in its final beats............
JW But tum mere shirt ka neckline increase kar sakti ho, I dont mind AT ALL........

you don't mind huh? well tu thehar ja mein abhi aati hoon, saari shirt hi utaar doongi, neckline jaye bhaard mein๐Ÿ˜†
Her hands on his chest pushing him away.............. or atleast trying to..........
He ignores her protests finds her ear, nuzzles it leaves it throbbing to find the next easter egg on her neck below her collar bone........
JW slides his arm around her bare waist........
B shivers
JW:Kya hua
B: Aapka watch......... its cold! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
JW I am sorry, let me warm u up........ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

yummy, ok I getting excited now, what have you done to me Aditee๐Ÿ˜• mein kitni achi bachi thi, tune toh mujhe bigaad hi diya


B: Visa..... she murmurs indistinctly, Mr W we better leave..........

JW Abhi.............. he murmurs, abhi......... while he teased her lips until hers parted and his came over them, possessing hers deeply, his hands travelling all over her body finding stopping at his favorite rest areas like a thirsty man getting a well deserved hydrating break............
Her hands wrap themselves around his neck and clings to him for dear life,...............

๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ I am blushinggggggggg!!!!! stop Aditee! (just kidding, DO NOT and I mean DO NOT take that seriously๐Ÿ˜ƒ)
JW between kisses "its all ur fault agar mera Thai deal nahi hua to, who the hell asked u to wear a pink saree on visa day? (swears huskily)............
Seconds wrap around minutes and minutes................. Oh well who is looking at the clock

I need some air yaar, I am sweating and blushing like anything I love what he says to her in between those kisses, so god damn sexy Aditee kahan kahan se aise ideas or lines pakad ke laati hai, I just wish you coulda extended it a bit and added some more spice (saying this clearly for my own greed๐Ÿ˜ƒ) but too good after the horror flick Ekta presented this was mind boggling, an honest confessions I now await ur FF updates more than KS take a bow aditee you did a fab job๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘



Edited by simran1285 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: aditee

Soap and mm,
There is something abt a woman in a pink chiffon, I feel usme any body can look good, plus Bani is soooooo elegant and young,not to mention supremely desirable ๐Ÿ˜ณ she mustve looked fab, atleast she did in my mind ๐Ÿ˜‰

And that too with the dangerous neckline that you made her wear with chiffon........how much better can it get?๐Ÿ˜‰

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Posted: 19 years ago
Waise toh Aditee I am very very ๐Ÿ˜ก at u...but PI's goodness convinced me to write nonetheless...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by: aditee

PART 11B


It has the watch the sleeve the hair and then some..................


She thinks she is devious JW is deviouser" :-) ๐Ÿ˜›

Bani dear if u could out-do him when would he ever get those chances to so legally violate u...besides u urself said he has urs and his sense all in one...

Set Mr Walia on that!

Set # 1...yippie...๐Ÿ˜›

Who the hell is he to set up dinner dates with Diya, she is NOT GOING! ๐Ÿ˜ก

Oh honey u are going to go...and then some more...ok a lot more.

and thinks that this is usually the time JW walks in to her room, she goes over to her door, unlatches it, peeks out, and is disappointed when she realizes that he must be at WORK!

Poor thing...now u know how it feels when Aditee denies us our JW fix...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...

"Why does he do this to me?" Why do i let him affect me so much?"

Ok which girl in her right mind would have an issue w/letting JW legally violate her so...

dressed in sky blue cotton shirt with shoulder straps, sleeves rolled up 1/3rd, and the SECOND BUTTON UNDONE!

We definitely have ESP...I have been meaning to request this since yesterday afternoon...sky blue cotton shirt is so PERFECT...I have been dreaming of JW in it...can he also convienently have pj's of this pair...for umm...well their trip...

silver watch in place

Personal dedication...this w/the blue shirt---I don't need to read the rest of this...that I promise u...

JW: Oh Boy! U are jumpy today

Ahh the things that crossed my mind when I read this line...

JW:Main kuch help karoon?

Thorough gentleman...always ready to help a lady in distress...always.

B looks at him and wonders if this man really cares about money as much as he says he does, he removes all full stops when it comes to pampering some one..........

Oh dear...Rs. 2000 ke tickets from JW and ur thinking this??? Don't u remember how many properties darling Sanjana reminded u he owns...

B (finally) Main aapse bahut naraaz hoon! (There she said it!) Bends down sulking

U go girl...this is abt as fiesty as u will be able to get around him...even this is pretty high-tempered...atleast the words came out of ur mouth...brownie point for that.

B: I promise main yahin rahoongi, Aditya Uncle can guard me

U don't remember JW shirtless??? (it wasn't that long ago) Aditya uncle guard u??? Hmm...JW shirtless...accha Aditee u catching my drift???

JW swears under his breath

Dedication to myself

(Runs his hand thru his hair, she watches spell bound)

Score for PI

JW thats number four

Now this counting is worrying me.

B: She thinks u are very sexy

And she's thinking 'and ur mine and mine only'.

B: Stop nahi to main visa ke liye nahi aaoongi
JW :Oh No! (moc fearful) that wud be so sad
JW starts his signature nuzzle, ears, neck, cheeks, forhead.......
B: STOP!
JW Make me! She raises her hand to push his jaw away JW comes right back on
JW: how come all blouses have an indecent neckline? He traces it until she slaps his hand off when it approaches the dangerous area..........

Thank God I kept reading...๐Ÿ˜ณ...sorry that's abt all I can say here.

B: (Got her chance!) Aap apne shirt mein doosra button kyon nahi band karte?
JW (smug) so u noticed? B Closes her eyes tightly ( oops! she thinks) her heart already in its final beats............

Poor thing...now this is truly multi-tasking. To be able to keep a convo going w/him and at the same time being able to properly scan him up and down all the while while u keep ur hands off of him is one helluva task.

JW slides his arm around her bare waist........
B shivers
JW:Kya hua
B: Aapka watch......... its cold! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
JW I am sorry, let me warm u up........ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Aditee by far the best dedication to my watch so far...and yes Soap at this point I need a long cold shower...but then u know that opens up a whole new pandoras box...

B: Visa..... she murmurs indistinctly, Mr W we better leave.......... JW Abhi.............. he murmurs, abhi......... while he teased her lips until hers parted and his came over them, possessing hers deeply, his hands travelling all over her body finding stopping at his favorite rest areas like a thirsty man getting a well deserved hydrating break............ Her hands wrap themselves around his neck and clings to him for dear life,............... JW between kisses "its all ur fault agar mera Thai deal nahi hua to, who the hell asked u to wear a pink saree on visa day? (swears huskily)............ Seconds wrap around minutes and minutes................. Oh well who is looking at the clock



And off I go for that shower. ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜› And Aditee bfr I go...why was I mad at u again??? Please remind me.

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: aditee


Aditee! Waise toh main tumse bahut naaraaz hoon....tumne toh mere pichle posts ka javaab bilkul nahi diya! ๐Ÿ˜› Sab ko javaab mein posts bheji aur mujhe nahi ๐Ÿ˜ญ Pata hai fans aagaye hai tumhare lekin hum bhi toh purane fans hai!
Maine toh socha ki punishment mein main review nahi likhoongi lekin ab tumne itna accha FF part jo likha aur main jo thehri vocalist (bilkul chhup nahi rah sakti) toh socha ki review likh hi daaloon! ๐Ÿ˜›

She is not going for work. Where is Mr Walia, how dare he avoid her..... Who the hell is he to set up dinner dates with Diya, she is NOT GOING! ๐Ÿ˜ก How come he is not checking on her? Does he even know she is up?

thinks that this is usually the time JW walks in to her room, she goes over to her door, unlatches it, peeks out, and is disappointed when she realizes that he must be at WORK! When SHE is ready to fight he is nowhere to be seen!
๐Ÿ˜ญ

Bani you just need to get a grip on yourself sweetie....he can't wait by you hand and foot! ๐Ÿ˜› He has the entire Walia empire to handle! ๐Ÿ˜› But it's still adorable that you expect him to be there when you wake up and when you change! How adorable! ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Why do i let him affect me so much?"

Coz he knows every trick in the book hun and there's nothing you can do about it! ๐Ÿ˜‰


JW has been leaning on the door jamb since she turned away from it, dressed in sky blue cotton shirt with shoulder straps, sleeves rolled up 1/3rd, and the SECOND BUTTON UNDONE! (which will TOP her JW's Tools to Torment Bani list that she will make later)and blue black Dockers, silver watch in place..........

Ok watch for AD, second button undone for me, sleeves rolled up for both of us, sky blue shirt...AD would you mind if I took this one? or you want in? ๐Ÿ˜ณ Thanks Aditee!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

JW: Ouch!
B drops her brush doesnt turn around feels a thrill in her heart! hides it..........

How can anyone not be jittery when he speaks with that husky voice! ๐Ÿ˜ณ Noone but noone in their right mind can stay without going weak in the knees! ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ


JW: Kaisa tha concert? Did u have fun with Diya?
walking over casually to the dresser, leaning by the side of the mirror on the wall, facing her, seeing her get ready, arms folded.................

So nice of him to ask....ok the folded arms can be for you Aditee! ๐Ÿ˜›

Bani peers on the dresser, looks at the floor and instinctively looks at her neck and blouse.......... befopre she cud go any further.............

Someone is being more cautious! ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜›

B: thanks for the passes Mr W, Diya ne kaha those were like Rs2000 tkts
JW (nonchalantly, shrugs) I dont know Bani, accounting ne pay kiya hoga, or may be they were free I dont know.............. โค๏ธ
B looks at him and wonders if this man really cares about money as much as he says he does, he removes all full stops when it comes to pampering some one..........

And how lucky are you Bani to be that SOMEONE! ๐Ÿ˜› Koi mujhpe itna kharch kare toh main usse kabhi khafa hone ka mauka hi nahi doongi....catch my drift Bani? ๐Ÿ˜‰ So sweet of JW to ask....he could've ignored the concert bit and moved on to the point but nope he wanted the small talk....needed to buy more time! Good plan JW! ๐Ÿ˜‰

JW Kya soch rahi ho? (playing with her stuff on the dresser smelling stuff and twitching his nose)

Her stuff not as impressive as yours JW? ๐Ÿ˜›

B (finally) Main aapse bahut naraaz hoon! (There she said it!)

Of course small talk wasn't in Bani's agenda! ๐Ÿ˜›

JW: You SAID it, tum yahan ho is KAMRE mein..........

I can see that you're leading quite well on to the next part Aditee....lage raho! ๐Ÿ˜‰

JW: I want u where I can see you

I'm glad they're finally communicating!!! At least JW has the sense to say it like it is! ๐Ÿ˜ณ

B: Abhi main din mein bhi kahin ja sakti hoon, raat ko agar nahi aayi to? Kal raat jab main aayi tab aap SO CHUKE THE (accusingly, lump in her throat)
JW Thats number three.... tumhe pata hai main soya nahi tha, Tony ne mujhe bola tum aa chuki ho
B: Agar main apne apartment chali jaati to?
JW Tum nahi gayi (softly, firmly)

Aww....how cute is that! They're finally opening up to each other but not at the same time! THere's so much that's left unsaid that makes up for the entire conversation....very beautifully written Aditee! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

JW: U answered ur own q Bani, um chahti nahi jaana, tum chahti ho ki main torment hooon, tum chahti ho main tumhe dhoondoo. You know I can find u, u want me to come after u. U want me to check on you..........

There Bani you're move of playing hard to get has been busted! ๐Ÿ˜› You didn't think that our all-knowing Jai didn't pick up on that did you! ๐Ÿ˜‰

B Nahi aap galat......JW DONT LIE (Runs his hand thru his hair, she watches spell bound)

Ok that's for me!!!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ I would watch spell bound too! I'm sighing already! Who wouldn't be amazed when this hunk stands right in front of you and runs his masculine hand through his bushel of hair! ๐Ÿ˜ณ

JW:Baneee I am NOT a patient man

Another quality to be added to the list? ๐Ÿ˜‰

B Diya aapke se bahut imprssed hai (changing the subject, trying to hide her jealousy)
JW thats number four, tabhi tum mujhse milne ke liye itni besabar thi (Amused totally)

Nothing but nothing goes by JW! Busted again Bani! Today's NOT your day for sure! ๐Ÿ˜› How aware is this guy of a woman's mind! How does he catch every little innuendo? ๐Ÿ˜ณ Aditee this guy has to be cloned coz he's a rare specimen and I'm sure men all over the world want to learn this skill from him! ๐Ÿ˜‰


B: She thinks u are very sexy (regrets it the moment she blurts)

JW is definitely affecting your mind and heart Bani....you said the unthinkable! ๐Ÿ˜› He preys on you and chews you up when you don't give him material and you go and do this! You are soooo asking for it! ๐Ÿ˜†

From this point onwards I stopped thinking! ๐Ÿ˜ณ I couldn't use my head anymore and after I read it I don't think I felt much of the rest of my body either! ๐Ÿ˜ณJust reading about him makes me this way....I can't imagine what I'd do if I was Bani! ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜›

JW: We have to do something about that!
B: Stop nahi to main visa ke liye nahi aaoongi
JW :Oh No! (moc fearful) that wud be so sad
JW starts his signature nuzzle, ears, neck, cheeks, forhead.......
B: STOP!
JW Make me!
She raises her hand to push his jaw away
JW comes right back on
JW: how come all blouses have an indecent neckline? He traces it until she slaps his hand off when it approaches the dangerous area..........
B: (Got her chance!) Aap apne shirt mein doosra button kyon nahi band karte?

Back off Bani this was for me!!! and only me!!! ๐Ÿ˜›

JW (smug) so u noticed?
B Closes her eyes tightly ( oops! she thinks) her heart already in its final beats............
JW But tum mere shirt ka neckline increase kar sakti ho, I dont mind AT ALL........

Main tayyar hoon JW....mujhse poocho na! ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Her hands on his chest pushing him away.............. or atleast trying to..........
He ignores her protests finds her ear, nuzzles it leaves it throbbing to find the next easter egg on her neck below her collar bone........
JW slides his arm around her bare waist........
B shivers
JW:Kya hua
B: Aapka watch......... its cold! ๐Ÿ˜ณ

AD....dekha kya kar diya tumhare watch ne! Don't blame Aditee if JW comes after you for causing discomfort to his Bani! ๐Ÿ˜†

JW I am sorry, let me warm u up........ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

B: Visa..... she murmurs indistinctly, Mr W we better leave..........

JW Abhi.............. he murmurs, abhi......... while he teased her lips until hers parted and his came over them, possessing hers deeply, his hands travelling all over her body finding stopping at his favorite rest areas like a thirsty man getting a well deserved hydrating break............ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Her hands wrap themselves around his neck and clings to him for dear life,...............
JW between kisses "its all ur fault agar mera Thai deal nahi hua to, who the hell asked u to wear a pink saree on visa day? (swears huskily)............

Bechara kar bhi kya sakta tha....woh bhi apne dil se majboor hai! ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Seconds wrap around minutes and minutes................. Oh well who is looking at the clock

Aditee you thought yest's was scandalous! ๐Ÿ˜› Did you even read todays????? Ok I can't even tell you which is the best part coz all of it was Brilliant! ๐Ÿ‘ But I really do like that JW being as in contol of himself in the beginning just couldn't help but give up at the end! Makes him so much more real that way.....he came to make Bani uncomfortable but ended being uncomfortable himself! ๐Ÿ˜ณ But the best part def has to be how he picks up on every little thing that Bani says and makes it to his advantage. There's absolultely nothing that Bani can say or do that he will forego! He's the predator that you described so aptly waiting for his prey to make a move so he can pounce! Amazing part Aditee! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ And don't you dare tell me you'll stop writing like this!!!! ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›

Edited by Piscean - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: armaandeewani

So me being the last one to write abt this latest episode will not bore ya'll too much...

-Last scene...absolutely hilarious!!! What moronic screenplay. Thank God JW is not dead (it's RK---he can't die---he's not allowed to get plastic surgery---there is legislation banning the plastic surgery of HOT ppl).

-Anu is my hero for the day...kya Jigs...tumhara khud ka khoon hi tumhe itna taang kaar raha hain...lovin' it.


I know of that legislation AD....I'll back u up if need be! ๐Ÿ˜›
AD....tumne khud ka rule tod diya! yeh Anu kaun hai!๐Ÿ˜›

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