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Posted: 19 years ago
why is the time going by so SLOWWWWWWW.... it seemslike ages since i've been sitting in front of my laptop waiting to c the july 18 episode, but sabar ka phal meetha hota hai so i'll wait...grudgingly..it's only 2:57 p.m. right now... 😭 2 more hours *sigh*
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Posted: 19 years ago

Hey Aditee:

Just read Part 10B. Thanks for the wonderful scenario. Liked the way you made it a win-win situation for both.

And, also, that he get her the tickets but did not make himself suffer through the concert.

Keep them coming......... 😉

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Posted: 19 years ago
Hoon yahan. Went to get a coffee. Afternon is dragging! Pad kar phirse likhti hoon!

10 mts dedo!

Soap
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Posted: 19 years ago
i love the fact that bani is addicted to hair clips...now i can ONLY imagine her with hairclips...DOZENS of them....everywhere...
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: aditee



PART 10-B

Jai walked by the bay windows with his afternoon cuppa making a face at the molten bitterness"No sugar! What was I thinking!" he swears..........,

Hun ur always giving ur portion of the sugar to Bani...share some w/us TOO!!! Btw usually I'm not big on guys who swear but JW when u swear...it sends more then tingle up my spine.

his tantrums were always brief he compliemnted himself, coz his attention was soon taken over by other challenging ideas his overworked mind constantly came up with!He enjoyed jolting people out of their complacency dropping verbal bombshells. And he did it last nite much to his own embarrassment! And since she had moved in again, thsi was the first time she had given him an opportunity to express that volatile temprament. He thrived on confrontations, full forceful and frank was his operational style.


Arrogant b****** oh how I love u so!!!!! Btw can u send this small bit to Kkekta...so we can remind her how JW is SUPPOSED to be.

B:I will e-mail those, jab aap phone rakh doge to
JW: That wud be too easy

Ok strictly hypothetical...and I am playing devil's advocate here...imagine that somehow at this very moment the phone had gotten disconnected---how would JW react??? Not to say that Bani hung up on him but just by coincidence...somebody stopping Mr. Jai Walia's conversation mid-way...just how does that work?

JW Ouch!

The expression on JW's face here is PRICELESS!!! It's those rare moments where JW is almost caught off guard.

JW:Oh bTW, Mrs Walia........... thanks for not wearing one of ur 99 clips today!
Click!

Thanks Aditee...this is the very 'set' we wait for.

How did he see her when she left for work , she thot he had left earlier?

He sleeps AFTER her...gets up BFR her...how much sleep exactly (if any) does he get? Btw to imagine JW standing by the balcony/stairs (ahh their house is too lavish to define) and watching his wife down in that palacial living room leave for work 😳 😳 😳 .


Ok and the rest of it the less I say the better because I am still in this same lab and now my TA as well as some other ppl are sitting here. I need to face these ppl for a few more weeks until the semester ends.

B:(pushes the errant hand away) Bataye kya kaam hai, abhi Diya se koi phone nahi aaya, I can do what ever u want (nastily)
JW (innocently) u can?

😈 😈 😈

D: Bani Dev is trying pata nahi, tkts ka scene mushkil lag raha hai
B's hrt breaks..... tries not to show
D Bani are u there?
B hiding tears haan bolo
D: I dont knwo Bani the show is just two hrs away and it doenst look good.........
B OK I hope he keeps trying (bends down to flick a tear away)
D devastated (I wanted to GO Bani tum itna lightly le rahi ho?
B:I am sorry, I will call u back

Again here I can imagine the expression on his face as he watches her w/great amusment while at the same time holding back the urge to take her in his arms not wanting to see her so down...when he knows he can andwill make it alright in a few mintues.

JW Oh she didnt?

Damn it no wonder she hates u...

JW U get the tkts, u look at the " your cute guy" (does an affected quote unquote in the air) aur main?
B(sincerely) aap bhi chaliye
JW: No ! I dont care for the guy or the group

Poor thing is SO innocent...ok it's actually his fault she gets so dumb when he's around. But anyway...imagine JW actually having to be there and watch his wife squeal in excitement over this other 'loser' lol as he would call him in his mind...actually it would serve him right.

JW(amused and aroused by hera nger walks toward her)

husky, hands in pocket, knuckles protruding tightly thru the fabric........ exercising exemplary control

😳

JW I am afraid yes(mischievously)
She decides to kill him that nite BUT it will have to wait until after her concert 😡 😡 😡

How exactly will u kill him??? Details please.

JW calls out "bani apna lipstick zaroor touch up kar lena!Its all over me...." enjoy the show Mrs Walia
DOOR SLAMS!!

A second 'set'...love it...love it.


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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: aditee

Aaaah thand pai gayi, kaleje nu, THANKS PI
THANKS PI
I am off to read that

AD, Forget I asked!!

J/K START WRITING RIGHT NOW!




Abhi jaake mera delete kaar deti hoon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
Sorry this time the review was lame...because this time somehow I'm already in a 😳 😳 😳 mood (no man no hot guys in Cali)...and then I read this so my mind isn't really working properly.
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: aditee

Pi
I wud persoanlly come over kill u AD and Soap if u didnt respond to any of my FF.

U bring JW alive more than I do yaar.

THANKS AWESOME REVIEW

EXACTLY MY FEELINGS............

Oh u werre thinking abt dinner or him joiningher for the concert?
Oh Puhleeeeez how tame!

JW, and dinner, no way too tame, he wants her where he likes her to be 😳

This savagely intense courtship both are playing, they know where the end is, JW cud put an end right now, he is just enjoying her teasing him like this........
aakhir kisne kiya aisa?
NOT ONE PERSON


Sorry Aditee....I wasn't in my JW element when I thought of that! But absolutely...and they're not the only ones enjoying this teasing game! 😉 I'm going to drive my future-hubby insane 😆 I think I'm going to print your FF and make him read it before any ding-dong happens! He better learn the ropes early on! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: armaandeewani




He sleeps AFTER her...gets up BFR her...how much sleep exactly (if any) does he get? Btw to imagine JW standing by the balcony/stairs (ahh their house is too lavish to define) and watching his wife down in that palacial living room leave for work 😳 😳 😳 .


Arre AD hamari aur Bani ke neend uda ke how can he sleep chain se! 😉 Waise Aditee JW kahi chupke se concert ko jaayega nahi na? just to see how crazy Bani is over this guy or rather to see Bani in her crazy mode! 😉

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Posted: 19 years ago
Aditee jaake meri JW ke defense statement bhi padna MT ke thread mein! Late hai mujhe pata hai lekin phir bhi....support karna tha na!

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