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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: armaandeewani



Umm since we're good actors maybe we should be part of the KS on screen crew too along w/the creative process and the fashion designing. Not 'too different' yaar...rather 'not different at ALL'...


Arre AD you forget my little Rolex commercial stint with RK! Of course we can be actors! I mean we understand the characters to the T and this way we can justify all those rehearsals with RK too 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago



PART F

Ladies.......... Jab tak nahi likha tab tak Bd se gumshuda thi
Ab mujhe Bd se nikaalke deho Pi
Here u go sweetie Enjoy!
*****************************************************

TWO DAYS ARE OVER
Bani actually spent the entire second day moping, plotting newer and better schemes to get back at hubby and will set things into motion as soon as she can............
Packs what ever she wud need for her stay at Walia Mansion, jewelry, books CDs clothes..... Calls the owner and informs him about being away, she lies its only for a month..........
Wonders how her life would ahve been if she hadnt left Mt Abu. Wonder what it wud have been like if Pia had married him and not her..............

Tosses and turns all nite, not able to sleep all nite. No calls from JW all day Thursday makes her wonder if she shud even go ahaed with her plan or just atke time off and go to Mt Abu. She decides to speak with Mr A and tell him about her "married" status. He is going to be hugely shocked she thinks but he has to know. The sooner the better, he had been a better boss than JW ever was she thinks nastily!. Maybe she can ask him to keep it under wraps she is ready to tell every body.

Soon she planned to quit Mr Aggarwals Valley Resorts and start looking for a job elsewhere. She refused to work for a company owned by Mr W. she has to repay the loan so may be a better paying job or one that wud advance her atleast part of that money so that she can get out of this situation 😡

Its almost midnite............
Her cell phone rings She knows who it is without looking she lets it ring, strangely her heart does that drum roll in ESP,each time............
B: Hmmm
J: So gayi thi kya?
B: Hmmm
J:(innocently) Baat nahi karogi?
B: Kuch important kehna tha aapko?
J: Ho gayi tumhari packing?
B:(sarcasm) Nahi agle hafte tak ho jaayegi
J: Its ok tum aa jao kal subah, ghar se koi jaakar tumhara samaan lekar aa jaayega
B: Nahi main apne samaan ke bina nahi aaoongi
J: (authoritatively)Bani we made a deal. I want you in this house TOMORROW MORNING!! Or I need my money back.
B: Ab mujhe sona hai........
J:(silky promise) Good! Get your full nite's sleep when you can. Its probably your last one!
Pause..............
B(irritated at being unable to win .......ever with him and frsutrated at being sleepless) I dont want you to touch me. If you do I am leaving Mr W

J:(huskily) I am Baneee.......... u just dont realize it............
Click!


Friday morning dawns..................
Bani si not sure when Darshan is going to arrive. She wont wait she thinks, will just take a cab...... Serves Mr W right.
Showers, suddenly realizes she had forgotten about Tarun totally the last couple days, he must be thinking she has taken ill or something. Must call him today FROM MY CELL PHONE she promises herself........
Dresses in a blak salwar and kurta 🤢 realizing fully well that JW does not like her in anything except sarees. After teh fiasco with her blouse at his off, she dare not wear one again she thinks................ Clips her hair again!

Throws all her left overs from the frig. generally fidgets not able to concentrate on TV.
8.50AM Doorbell rings

Its Darshan Singh!
D: Good morning Maam, Sir ne bheja..........
Bani si thankful that JW has not divulged all the gory details of his revenge slavery scheme to his chauffer....

B: Gmorning... aap kaise ho?
D: Main theek hoon maan
B: Mere bags wahan pade hain
D no qs asked pics em up goes off to the elevator
This is it Bani thinks.................. stomach doing a somersault.............. prays for courage and will power to fight till finish..............


B picks up the other bag and her purse, locks up and goes down..... finds D coming back up, takes her other bag .......... Its JW's white Merc.........
He shud have just let me atke a cab she thinks
What if she had ran away (smiles wickedly to herself!) Mr JW wudnt tolerate THAT! Hence thsi personal attention.............
Bani in the back seat............ She wants to go meet Maasi and Dadi she loves them soooo
Outside Walia mansion........
Steps off nervously enters.........

Rings the bell...
Tony opens
T: Good morning Maam, Sir to nahi hain......
B: Tony main yahan.............
D brings the bags Tony just takes the bags and goes upstairs. A good butler shudnt interfere right...............

She follows him
B: Dadi aur maasi kahan hai?
T: aapko nahi maloom dono teerath karne gaye hain? Kal shaam ko gaye
B feels her shackles rise (How DARE HE, HE HAD PLANNED THSI ALL, How dare he, she silently fumes)
T: Maam aap kuch khaayengi?
B: Nahi
The luggage has obviously been put in JW's room
Tony leaves the scene
Bani ready to explode, picks up all the bags and walks across the hallway to the room farthest from JW's
Unpacks maniacally..........
Reads her book, watches TV
Takes a nap.................
Does not leave the room ..........Tony comes and goes asking /bringing food something to drink periodically............

Its 7 PM decides to go take a shower, does that, wraps herself in her robe............. walks out brushing her hair
The object of her thoughts saunters in wearing THE PINK SHIRT ( 😉 Hey! its my fantasy alright?) and black trousers, sleeves folded up neatly 1/3 of the way . Rough day! Bani surmises from the way he looks hair all tousled........... Let him, he NEEDS all the money she bi****S to herself
JW walks into her bathroom!
B thinks "Uh Ohh!! This is not good". She tries to sneak out to the bedroom but JW is quicker he seals of her entry and holds the door
knob by his hand. She has her back against the door and JW in front.
He is just looking not saying a word.

B: You need to knock first!
J Hello......... Mrs Walia.......... Welcome! (did not sound like a welcome at all to her more like a threat)
Trying to distract him from where his eyes were going.
B Mr Wa..........
J: Shhhhhhh!! (he places his index finger almost on her lips DOES NOT TOUCH).
Slowly he traces the path of a droplet of water sliding down her neck
with his finger without touching.
B mesmerized follows the path of hsi finger..........
J: You said no hands last nite remember Banee?"
(He waves both his hands innocently in front of her and places them
on either side of her head on the door and bends down to catch the
droplet with his mouth.
This is a slow ecstatic torment, she does not know how to react steels herself to stay still..........

J slowly lifts his face from her neck area and leans his forehead on
hers and says "Tum change kar lo, varna sardi lag jaayegi. Aur tumhe
to pata hai ki zyaada bukhaar se pneumonia bhi ho sakta hai. We have a busy week next week!
Cant have you get sick" Walks away coolly leaving her seething in fury!


Edited by aditee - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: armaandeewani



I know I know u've probably never met a more pathetic bunch like us...PI and me are definitely not the ideal grad students that ppl should turn to...lol no role model material apparently...


Role model nahi toh kya hua expert droolers toh hai! 😆 Grad school se kya sikhenge yeh sab....ab humse drooling sekhenge toh hamesha kaam ayega! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Piscean


Arre AD you forget my little Rolex commercial stint with RK! Of course we can be actors! I mean we understand the characters to the T and this way we can justify all those rehearsals with RK too 😉



Do u realize how much time we would be spending w/RK then??? Between the sets and Rolex...yum yum. Ok this madness is making me forget the line between fiction and reality now...it's quite scary.
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Posted: 19 years ago
OMG ADitee....tumhe maine kya bd se bhej kya diya tum toh jadoo karne lagi!!!! 👏
Yaar this was the best part to date!!!!!!
Couldn't help but smile all the way and well you can see my reaction! 😃
"I am Bani....you just don't realise it"!!!! That's it you are officially my guru Aditee! Kya likhti ho tum! Yaar DH ko bhi padkar suna do aur phir dekhna kaise June 19th nahi hoga tumhare ghar pe! 😉
Needless to say I loved the ending as usual! Thanks for punches all dedicated to me! 😃 😃
AD and I were just talking about you being this big star well now I def need to get your autograph before we lose you to stardom! 😳
Mujhe alfaaz nahi mmil rahe hain tareef karne ke liye! Tum ne toh dil khush kar diya Aditee!
Pink shirt, sleeves rolled 1/3rd of the way and a mention of his hair....ok I did die and go to heaven! 😳
Aditee yeh sab tumhare liye 🤗
Aur yeh bhi! ❤️
Chal ab mein mere friend ke saath dinner pe jaa rahi hoon (GF hai yaar....itni door mat socho!) 😛 Aakar aur tareef karoongi! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
Wow aditee brilliant and romantic fiction specially JW picking droplet fom the finger and then by the mouth uff 👏 Dil hush kar diya Aditee waiting for more such scenes 😉 in the next part 😳
Edited by mayona - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: armaandeewani



Do u realize how much time we would be spending w/RK then??? Between the sets and Rolex...yum yum. Ok this madness is making me forget the line between fiction and reality now...it's quite scary.


Tell me about it AD....I'm beginning to scare myself and everyone around me too! 😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
OH MY GOD THE SILKY PROMISE!!!!!!! silky silky silky .............oh mannnn bani has it good!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: aditee

PART F Ladies.......... Jab tak nahi likha tab tak Bd se gumshuda thi Ab mujhe Bd se nikaalke deho Pi Here u go sweetie Enjoy! *****************************************************



Ok that last scene is by far the BEST!!! Bani darling...next time clarify how no hands OR lips should be touching her...on second thought don't...u know u like it. Aditee now this DOES give me a sense of guilty pleasure...
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Piscean


Yaar this was the best part to date!!!!!!

Amen to that...Amen!!!

Couldn't help but smile all the way and well you can see my reaction! 😃

Umm u are going to get me in alot of trouble...I am reading this w/other family members in the room...and it just isn't going down well. I have this HUGE grin plastered on my face and it won't go away.

Needless to say I loved the ending as usual! Thanks for punches all dedicated to me! 😃 😃

Sorry this is my department...Aditee's endings leave me on cloud nine and feeling guilty-ly satisfied for hours together...

Pink shirt, sleeves rolled 1/3rd of the way and a mention of his hair....ok I did die and go to heaven! 😳

This TOO is partially my dept...urs and mine...but at this point I am far too busy drooling to say anything...😳

Edited by armaandeewani - 19 years ago

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