Kuch To Hua Hai...part 45 added pg 79 - Page 13

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Posted: 19 years ago
OMG!!!!! THAT WAS SIMPLY GREAT!!!!! U JUST HAVE TO CONTINUE I CANT TAKE THE SUSPENSE!!! i am just wondering how jai will confess his love and how bani will react to his confession i just cnat wait 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
PART 14:

Jai and bani are sitting in the car and are leaving the party...

"Mr Walia...I am ok really...woh..i ..Uncle.."

"I know bani" he said to her quietly.

"Kya?..then why are we...?"

"Because....we have some very important work..."

"Work?...what work?"

Jai just looked at her and gave her a reassuring smile...then he bent towards her and whispered in her ear..."Trust me.." before kissing the side of her neck

Bani just looked at him...Of course she trusted him...but today has been a really weird day...her nerves have been on edge ever since she woke up...now what was he planning...

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They reached Walia mansion and Jai took Bani's hand and led her towards their bedroom...

Bani looked towards the door to the kitchen...

"But Mr Walia...we haven't eaten yet...i'm hungry...just a little..?"

Jai paused on the stairs and turned to look at her before bursting out laughing....

"Bani...even i am hungry...but in a different way 😉 don't worry this won't take long"

Bani's heart began to beat faster with every step they took towards the bedroom...

"What won't take long? what is he going to do? he is hungry in a different way? what does he mean?" Bani asked herself...

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The reached the bedroom door...jai looked at bani and asked her to close her eyes...

She did as he asked but warily...

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Jai led bani into the room...

she opened her eyes slowly....

all around the room lay rose petals and candles...in the middle was a small table that had been set....

"Bani would you join me for a candle light dinner?" he asked her softly while leading her towards her chair...

He poured them champagne...then told her to eat as she was complaining of hunger just a few minutes ago....

However, the sight of the room and the tingling of her nerves made bani forget about her hunger...they just stared at each other...then jai got up and came round to Bani and asked her to dance with him....

He played the CD player...the song "Hum dil de chuke sanam" came on....

He took bani into his arms but a lot closer than at the party and began to dance slowly with her....

at the end of the song, he took bani's hand and bent down on one knee...

"Mr Wali..yeh aap...?"

"Let me bani...i have been wanting to say this to you for a while but didn't know how and didn't undestand my feelings....i have never felt this way before in my life...i realise now that what i thought that i had felt for pia was nothing but some silly middle-age infatuation...and pia running out of my life was the best thing to ever have happened to me...because that meant you entered it...bani...there are lots of things that i need to apologise to you for...but most importantly...there are a lot of things i need to thank you for..."

"Mr Walia..you don't.."

"shhh bani...but today i am not going to do that...today i want to declare that i am in love with you bani...i don't know when and how it happened but when you were in hospital...it made me realise that i didn't ever want you to leave me...i don't know what i would do if you had gone....i felt that a part of me was going...and then when you woke up on top of me to day...i just knew that thats where you belong...you are mine bani....i know i promised you your freedom with divorce...but please don't leave me bani...please say that you will be my wife in the real sense from today onwards..."

suddenly it all made sense to bani....the red saree, the red bindi...leaving the party...the candlelit dinner...Jai was in love with her!..he was proposing marriage in the real sense...her dreams were coming true...

she looked into his eyes....and hers filled with tears of joy...

"Oh bani...i didn't want to hurt you again...i am sorry..i uh..."

She put her fingers in front of his mouth..."No Mr Walia, these are tears of joy...i have waited a very long time to hear these words...i have been in love with you for a long time...that night...it meant something to me...but....yes mr walia...i want to be your wife..."

Jai jumped up pulled bani into his arms...

"Bani you don't know how happy you have made me..."

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Anyway guys hope you enjoyed this fanfic...i will leave it here - unless of course you want me to continue... 😉


Edited by tbabhra - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
oh no pleez dont stop here!! pleez continue! i have read ur fanfic a dozen times over n over again ur sooo good! pleez do continue!
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Posted: 19 years ago
YIPYEEEE!!!!!!!! i am the first one and i LOVED!!!!! it however i am sad tht it end 😭 but it end with a happy ending so i am happy! 😃 you should really continue or just start a whole new ff its up to you just promise it will just as good 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
oops red_ruby82 beat me by one minute
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Posted: 19 years ago
oh sweetie.. do continue it..!! beautifully written..! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
ahh thanx guys - ur the best!

I'll try to continue it if i can..just don't want to drag it out and make it boring!! 😕

About a new one...will try...but need the inspiration! 😳

i am soooo glad that you guys enjoyed it... 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
hahaha! 😛 better luck next time prianka! lol! and i agree with prianka pleez either continue this fanfic or just start another one just as juicy as this one. sorry if we r being too demanding but ur fanfics r soo addictive i never want it to end!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
😆
its really choo chweet 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
omgggg.. u can't leave it here.. u haveeeee to CONTINUE!!!!!! 😃 😃 😃 im like addicted to this fanfic.. so u have to have to continue.. even if its a teeny bit 😃 that was so nice..😳

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