sweetu144 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey guys this is just a short Fan Fic..it starts of just after Jai has appologised to Bani and has found out bout da truth of Anus pregnancy..tell me wat u think😃


Jai entered the room ; his eye immediatly fell on Bani...
He saw the grief, the pain, he saw all her agony immersed upon her face..
She turned around from him not daring, not wanting to face the man she loved...
she felt trapped in time not knowing where to go..

Suddenly the light went out...

a slolw gently tear fell from her cheek..she was so overcome with grief that she could hardly breathe...
why did this happen to me she thought...
She sat down on the bed and looked up and around the dark room she could hardly see anything..not even Jai...
More tears fell...
She craved to be in his strong arms...protected from all...but how could she when he had broken her heart...
Jai saw it he felt her pain...he wanted to comfort her..but how could he when he himself was the soul causer of this heartache..

Suddenly the windows burst open, the wind was blowing wildly outside and thunder came...

Jai looked for Bani...wanting to comfort her now even more...

Banis eyes widened she clutched the blanket under her with new found strength...
she slowly got up and tried to find her way to the window...the breeze was cold...
Jai had to find his way to the window...it was getting cold..he didn't know where Bani was

his hands reached out infront of him and caught hold of something..
his eyes widened..he knew what it was and now finally having got hold of what he had been trying to keep he wasn't planning to let go...
he didn't know what was wrong with him but something inside him had just been born...something not even he himself could soothe alone. suddenly something happened to him he clutched what he had hold of and pulled it closer to him and pushed it against the wall...it was bani..

her eyes widened..even if he had caused her this grief by simple his touch she felt relieved...she didn't know why... with his strong arms protecting her...she felt one...she felt safe.
Jai gently touched noses with her and gently moved his face down to her neck..
He didn't know what had gotten into him he just felt a sudden want a sudden chahat of bani..he wanted her so badly that it was madness..he himself didn't even know what he was doing...
he kissed her neck gently..
Bani closed her eyes..with the feel of his lips...it felt so right...
she felt trapped in a place which she had so long ago wanted to be but now finely was...
She wrapped her arms around him
his lips gently and slowly moved up to her ear..to her forehead...to her eyes
he could hear her heartbeat and her breath was getting faster..the passion insdie him was getting stronger and stronger...
he opened his eyes..and looked deep into the eyes...into the eyes of his heart....
The wind was blowing fiercely..it was obliviouse to them...
he bent his head lower completly lost in the rhtymic beat of the cool rushing wind and his now pure burning heartache for his lost heart...

They both lost themselves in the silent rhythmic beats of the cool wind...locked in each others love...

tell me how u liked it..this was just a short ff which just popped into my head..
luv ya sweetu😃


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Posted: 19 years ago
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gyal if only dis really happened in the epi.
dis one sounds sooooo better than the epi we saw(j askin forgivness)
no romance nothing.
but one sentence made it hot was.
YOUR MY WIFE DAMMIT!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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oops shorry shweetu 4rgot 2 say.
WOOWEE WHAT A STORY.
WHY CAN'T IT BE REALLY
LIKE THAT BETWEEN JAI AND BANI.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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yipppppppppppppeeeeeeeeeee! they're both finally gettin some..... 😉

plz cont soon......👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 😆omg check out the passion between these two...if only it was on telly to 😆 😆 that was good keep it up 😆 😆
Edited by **Tinkerbell** - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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HAILA!!!!!😳...............wat an adorable story😉.............wow!!!!! omg............luv the passion b/w jai n bani...........HAI!!! y can't this really happen.........absolutely rocking n mindblowing fic......u have done it👏👏👏............luved it...........awesome job hun😊.................plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz keep it up👍🏼.........(wow!!!! it was too gud.........i m still blushing like kraze.......😳😳😳)..............do continue😛

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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwww 😳 😳 😳 thnx guys!!!
but it was a short ff n i finished it...but... i may contniue it n if i don't i will write a new one...
wait and watch...suspense you gotta love n hate it.. 😆 😆 😆
i dnno if i'll cont tho... 😕

thnx 4 ur positive cooments u guys r realli sweet 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#8
OMG sweetu...that was definetly sweet!! 😛 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i think i no y its not on tv yet...the tv's would catch on fire!!! 😆 ..wow that was intense....there shuld b like..a warning...watch at ur own risk..u may burn with the intensity!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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kya baat hain,!
All these fan fics are wonderful, I especially like your Percise detailed description, That was wonderful. Hope that you continue soon

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