Bani Beneath the Surface

queen-bee thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#1

Bani Beneath the Surface

I hide in the shadow of a smile
Behind walls of laughter
And a mask of indifference

Yet behind the facade
Lay tears and fears
Of broken hearts and broken dreams
And a soul yearning to break free

Listen

To every word that says
This is who I am
Ignore the smiles
And look beyond the disguise

Listen

Hear the echoes of my mind
That lay within the depths
Of my lonely heart

Listen

My voice longs to be heard
My heart yearns to be understood

Listen
Mr. walia please listen....😭

Created

Last reply

Replies

12

Views

1.2k

Users

13

Frequent Posters

khoo thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 19 years ago
#2
awwwww!! so cute! very deep poem i say!! nice job mink!! cheers for you girl!! 👏 👏
Iriss thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 19 years ago
#3
wowwwwwwwwwww 👏 👏 👏

nice poem 👏

thanx for sharing 😊
KHJL thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#4
awwwww...........n definitely wow!!!!..............thtz so sweet........great poem 😉
mayona thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#5
Poem is good thanks for sharing 👏 👏 👏
It really made me feel sory for Bani 😭
divya_123 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#6
wow nice poem dear
thanks for sharrin
😃
RiyaDutt thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#7
superb n luvely poem.... 👍🏼 👏
anushka_5 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#8
That was beautiful Mink 👏 👏 👏 , i hope Jai is listeining
mistletoe thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 19 years ago
#9
👏 Hey Minky, thats a good one yaar!

Hmmm, I think Jai has too many things on his mind to really think of Bani!

On the other hand, Bani is always in his mind, so he really doesn't have to take out time to think about her! 😳

Love,

MT

Grumpyyy thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#10
Very beautiful! 👏 Did you write that?

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".