SS- Tera Pyar Hai Bas Meri Zindag Pt 12 pg 7 Dec10

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This is my Edi for all those who are celebrating Eid.


Tera Pyar Hai Bas Meri Zindagi

Nazar ne nazar se mulaqat kar li,
rahe dono khamosh par baat karli...
Mohabbat ki fiza ko jab khush paya,
in aankhon ne roh roh ke barsaat kar li...

Prabhadevi looked and felt tired. She moved away from the window and called out, "Raunaq!"

A young woman appeared, hurrying towards her, "Ammi'"

"Go and check if Bani is ready. The guests will be arriving soon. And Raunaq'please tell her to behave herself. I won't put up with nautanki any more. Make her understand'I am only trying to do what is right for her."

"Ji ammi'" the young woman smiled, her face lighting up with understanding. Raunaq hurried up the stairs and made a beeline for the room. She opened the door and stepped in. It was empty. The sari and jewellery boxes lying untouched on the bed.

"Where has she disappeared to now?" she exclaimed loudly. Raunaq peeked into the empty bathroom and walked out onto the small balcony and looked over the garden. There was no sign of Bani'the granddaughter of Prabhadevi. Raunaq came and sat down and sighed. This girl is going to get them both into trouble if she doesn't make an appearance soon. The sound of cars driving up caused her to panic'God the guests have arrived and they will be called to make an appearance soon. She paced the room frantically, trying to think where Bani could be found. Just then she heard noise on the balcony and a moment later a girl ran in.

"Bani'where were you? You have to get ready soon'they are here. Ammi will kill us both if we don't get downstairs soon."

The girl pulled the band holding her hair in a pony tail and pulled her t-shirt off. "Chill didi'they can wait. It's not as if I want to meet them anyway'especially the guy who wants to inspect me like a cattle. I told dadi I don't want to get married'don't see why she is being stubborn and not listening to me. Raunaq pushed Bani towards the bathroom, "Ammi is not getting younger and she just wants to see you married into a good family."

Bani turned around, her long hair flying in Raunaq's face. "You should get married first didi'you are a lot older than me."

Raunaq pulled a face. "No one is going to marry me and I owe ammi a lot. So I will just take care of her."

Bani stripped rest of her clothes off and stepped into the shower. A few minutes later she came out with a towel around her. Raunaq motioned her to start putting clothes on. Ten minutes later Bani was standing with a sari wrapped around her. Sitting her down in front of the mirror, Raunaq quickly worked Bani's hair into a braid and wrapped fresh flower around it.

"Are you going to put a little makeup on?" Raunaq asked Bani who sat playing with the gold bangles on her wrist. Bani looked in the mirror, "Nah'I look ok'plus I don't want to look pretty for him. God knows he might just look like a monkey. The last one was so big and fat."

Raunaq slapped Bani's arm lightly, "No he wasn't'poor guy, you scared him silly with your trick." Raunaq face turned serious and she knelt in front of Bani. "Look Bani'please give this guy a chance. I hear they are a well to do family from Mumbai. The guy lost his parents when he was young and was raised by his aunt. Ammi says he is very good looking and has so far refused a lot of beautiful girls."

Bani pulled a face, "Well than he is not going to like a plain old me then'is he? May be he will fall for you didi'you are prettier than a lot of my friends."

Raunaq smiled but there was a tinge of sadness in her eyes. "No Bani'I am a Muslim'and that too an orphan'"

Bani hugged Raunaq, "So what'you are best didi in the world'I don't care who your parents were or that you are not a Hindu. You can love people for being good and kind and loving."

Raunaq kissed Bani on the cheek, "I am going to miss you when you are gone. Now lets go and see the dulha."

Bani pouted as she stood up, "I am going to tell dadi'I am going to take you with me when I get married. I am not going alone."

Raunaq laughed softly, her clear laughter sounded like gentle melody in the air.

Bani stayed half behind as they walked into the grand room where guests were entertained.

Prabhadevi smiled, "Ah'here they are'Bani dear, come and sit beside me," she commanded in firm voice.

Bani stepped away from Raunaq and made her way to the sofa where her grandmother was sitting. She sat down looking at the floor. Prabhadevi took Bani's hand gently in hers, "Bani is my only grandchild Shobaji'she is very precious to me having lost my son so early in life."

Bani peeked through her lashes and gazed at the people sitting around. An elderly lady was sitting next to woman who was dressed as if she was going to the party, the heavily embroidered sari and chunky jewellery seemed too much for a visit. Next to her was a middle aged man, nice looking with a smile plastered on his face and then her eyes rested on the man sitting alone in a chair. Dressed in a black suit with white shirt and bright red tie, his eyes were fixed on her.

Warm colour suffused her cheeks at the way he was staring at her. His almost jet black eyes were clear and bright. The face was chiseled into well defined features. Her breath caught in her throat'it wasn't a young man sitting in front of her but a much older man than the ones that had been brought here before.

Shoba got up and came towards Bani. She gently lifted Bani's chin up, "Such pretty girl Prabhadevi. And a beautiful name too. Do you go to school Bani?" she asked.

Bani nodded, "College'I just started this year. I want to study psychology."

Shoba sat down next to her, "Yes'you must finish your education. It is important to have some knowledge of the world. My Jai did not get a chance to finish his education as he had to start running the family business, but he has taught himself all that he needs to know run the business successfully. Prabhadevi'I am looking for a girl who will look after my nephew and his home. I will be frank and say that I don't want a girl who is not interested in staying with a joint family'as you know my niece Jigyasa also stays with us."

Prabhadevi nodded, "Shobaji'I am sure Bani will have no problem. Of course you will have to help her as she has not had a lot of responsibility being young."

"You don't have to worry about that. There will be myself and Jigyasa to guide her. I am sure she will learn'we were all the same when we were young." Shoba said with genuine understanding in her voice.

"Jai beta'" Shoba looked at her nephew, "Do you have anything to ask?"

"No masi'but if Bani has anything to say."

"Bani, why don't you take Jai into the gardens'you two can talk. Raunaq, please take a tea tray into the garden for them."

Raunaq nodded and left to carry out the order. Prabhadevi patted Bani's arm, "Go on'"

Bani stood up and walked slowly towards the French doors that led into the garden. She did not stop to see if Jai followed her. Raunaq stepped out on to lawn where tables and chair had been laid out and set the tray down. She looked at Bani standing staring into the garden. Raunaq went near her and tugged at Bani's arm and whispered quickly, "Bani...look at him, talk to him'don't say you never got a chance."

Bani heard a soft cough behind her, but did not bother to turn around.

"How old are you exactly?" she heard his sonorous voice ask her.

Bani turned around and with a poker face spat, "Bit too young for you."

He threw back his head and laughed out loud and then said, "But your grandmother think does not think so. She is ready to make you my bride."

Bani coloured, "Dadi just wants to get rid of me." She saw him move towards her and stop in front of her.

"So tell me what will you do with a psychology degree?"

Her lips curved into mischievous smile, "Find out what why you would want to marry a schoolgirl. What goes on in that brain of yours?"

Jai reached out and held her chin and titled her face up so that his eyes were searching hers with amusement, "But if you don't marry me than how will you be able find out what makes me tick?" There was allusion to intimacy in his remark which made Bani turn red. She jerked her face out of his hold. "I don't want to marry'I will tell dadi no."

"Will you still say no if I got down on my knees and asked you to marry me?" he asked with an indelible softness in his voice.

Bani turned around, her cheeks still tinged with redness, "But people do that when they love one and another!" she exclaimed juvenilely.

Jai Walia dropped down on his knees and held out his hand. Bani felt herself drawn hypnotically towards him, her hand reaching out for his. He held it for a second, "Bani'will you marry me? I am falling in love with you. You are an enigma Bani. You have set my heart into pandemonium with your candidness. Will you?"

Bani felt her heart do multiple somersaults, her nerve endings tingled at his bold declaration and proposal. She felt her lips move and utter a hushed "yes'"

Snatching her hand out of his Bani ran off inside leaving Jai Walia kneeling on the grass with a smile on his lips.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Divan that was beautiful.

Happy Edi to all.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey kanta dii
that was very sweet story
loved it
happy eid to every1
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that was really nice thanx diva for the eid present...
but yaar are you continouing or did you stop here....
oh yeah i liked bani and jai's boldness in this...both speaking their minds out to each other..........
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That was really good short FF Divan loved it.
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aww that was so cute!!!! keep on writing i miss your stories =P
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that was a lovely ss!!

thanx for the Eidi kanta di
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Tera Pyar Hai Bas Meri Zindagi PT2

mera dil bhi kitna pagal hai
ye pyar jo tum se karta hai - 2

par saamne jab tum aate ho, kuch bhi kehne se darta hai
o mere saajan, o mere saajan, saajan saajan, mere saajan

mera dil bhi kitna pagal hai

kitna isko samajhata hu, kitna isko behlata hu -2
naadaan hai kuch na samajhata hai, din raat ye aahen bharta hai

mera dil bhi kitna pagal hai

har pal mujhko tadpata hai, mujhe saari raat jagata hai -2
is baat ki tumko khabar nahi, ye sirf tumhi pe marta hai

mera dil bhi kitna pagal hai



"Dadi…I don't want to marry him! I don't like him!" Bani shrieked.

Prabhadevi pursed her lips, "What are you saying? You agreed…when he asked you…you said yes. What games are you playing? I am not going back on my word now. Raunaq came to ask you and you said yes to her."

"Well I wasn't thinking straight…now I have slept over it…I don't find anything to like in him…and he is old dadi." Bani said stubbornly.

"Bani…you cannot do this to him. He likes you a lot and I don't think he is old." Raunaq tried to make her understand.

"Then why don't you marry him!" Bani snapped.

"Bani!" Prabhadevi shouted angrily. "Don't speak to Raunaq like that. If it was possible…I would get Raunaq married…" she trailed off, her eyes filling with sadness. She had tried to get Raunaq married but had failed miserably as they knew Raunaq had been abandoned by her parents…no one knew anything about her parents. Raunaq was like a daughter she never had.

Bani glared at the floor, not daring to look at her grandmother.

"You will get married to Jai. I will fix for the engagement in a week's time and a wedding to follow in a month." Prabhadevi spoke with authority.

"Fine….I am not going alone….I am taking Raunaq with me…she can stay with me." Bani asserted defiantly.

"How can she stay with you? No…Raunaq will not come with you."

"Yes she will…I will ask him. He won't say no!" Bani said forcefully.

Prabhadevi felt as if her head would explode. "You will do no such thing. Do you hear me?"

"No I don't hear you. You can't stop me." Bani retorted back angrily and stomped off.

Raunaq looked miserably at Prabhadevi who looked shattered.

"Ammi…don't…worry. I will make her understand." Raunaq said softly.

Prabhadevi brushed her palm across her eyes. "I am scared Raunaq…will Jai and his family put up with her childishness."

Raunaq smiled to herself. If what she had peeked through the window yesterday, Jai knew very well what he was getting into.

Bani lay sprawled on the bed, staring at the ceiling when Raunaq came in. "Bani…can we talk."

"No…I don't want to talk. I know what you are going to say. I hate dadi…she is tyrant…a Hitler!"

Raunaq giggled loudly, "Good thing dadi can't hear you. You upset her badly today."

"I don't care. She asked for it. Shadi…shadi…why doesn't she get married if it is so great." Bani rambled madly.

"Bani! You are horrible…how could you say such thing!"

Bani sat up and glared at Raunaq. "Tell me…what is so great about getting married? You lose your freedom…you have to do as what that man and his family would ask you to. I wouldn't be able to go out with friends. I wouldn't be able to eat pizza for breakfast."

Raunaq sat down and ran her hand down Bani's back, "Pagli…how do you know that? Jai doesn't look like…" she paused and grinned, "Hitler to me."

Bani elbowed fiercely but Raunaq dodged it. "You are coming with me…then you will see what he is like."

Raunaq pinched her cheeks, "No…stop this pagalpan…I cannot come and be kabab mei haddi. Jai will not like it."

Bani's eyes twinkled with mischief. "We will see."

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Raunaq took out the pale pink lengha from the protecting covering. "Oh Bani…it is beautiful. You will look lovely in it."

Bani stood in her underwear eyeing the lengha. "It's looks too fancy. I bet it will itch," her hand automatically rubbing her arms.

"No it won't love…come here. Let's put it on." Raunaq helped Bani put the lengha and choli on. She fastened the thin strings at the back holding the choli together and then wrapped the chunri fashionably. The velvet jewellery box lay open, she took out the white gold and diamond necklace and put it around bani. "It exquisite Bani…it was your mother's."

Bani fingered the delicate design lying around her neck. "I wish my mom was here. I don't even remember what she was like Raunaq."

Raunaq hugged Bani, "At least you have photos…you can see her when ever you want," she said wistfully, her eyes brimming with tears at not even knowing the faces of her parents.

Bani hugged Raunaq tightly, "Oh didi…I love you."

Raunaq felt tears rolling down her cheeks, she quickly wiped it. "I love you too…now come one…let's go…everyone is waiting."

Bani clutched Raunaq's hand. "My stomach hurts didi…I think I am going to be sick."

"No you won't…it's just nerves." Raunaq whispered back.

They walked into the packed hall, all eyes turned towards them. Bani almost tripped as she stepped on the edge of her lengha. "Lift you lengha up a teeny bit." Raunaq whispered to Bani.

A pair of amused eyes watched as Bani treaded her way carefully towards the centre of the hall. "She looks lovely bhaiya." Jai's sister gushed. "I knew the lengha would be perfect on her."

Jai smiled at his sister, "How can you doubt that Jigyasa?"

A young girl of about fourteen, pulled at Jai's arm, "Mamu…which one is it?" she asked looking at Bani and Raunaq.

"The one in pink…what do you think Anu?"

"Oh…oh…she is like a doll…like one of my Barbie doll." Anu giggled excitedly.

Adi who was nearby winked at Jai and quipped. "Looks like you have your own Barbie doll to play with now Jai."

Jai gave a smirk, "Jealous are we?"

"Nahi…I don't want to experience the marriage business second time…once in a life time is enough."

Jigyasa overheard him and blasted, "What do you have to complain about Adi? Have I made your life hell?"

"Nahi…darling." Adi said "I are my life…you know that."

Jigyasa rolled her eyes.

Masi enveloped Bani in a hug and kissed her forehead, "You look lovely dear. May you always be happy child."


Jigyasa nudged masi, "Shall we get the rings exchanged? It is getting late."

Prabhadevi smiled, "Yes…Jigyasa, please go ahead. I shall leave it in your capable hand."

Jigyasa acknowledged the request, "Thank you aunty. Jai come on…bring Bani with you."

Raunaq extricated her arm from Bani's grip and pushed her towards Jai, "Go…" she whispered.

Bani glared at Raunaq and then ignored Jai's extended hand and walked up to Jigyasa.

"Tch…tch Jai…looks like you have some work to do…" Adi sniggered as Jai walked by.

"Shut up Adi!" Jai hissed.

Jigyasa opened up the box and held the ring out to Jai.

The single solitaire sparkled brightly, Jai picked it up and looked at Bani, he lifted her left hand and slipped the ring on the third finger and then leaned over and kissed her lightly on the mouth. A round of applause and some whistles filled the air. Bani felt her cheeks burn.

Anu giggled, "Awww mamu, so cute."

Jigyasa opened another box and held the ring out at Bani, who stared ate wide band with a square cut diamond in the centre. Raunaq nudged Bani. Bani picked up the ring gingerly and looked at Jai's hand already held out in front of her. She looked up at him and then quickly looked down and slipped the ring on. Anu excitedly clapped and then called out, "Come on mamiji…it's you turn to kiss him."

Bani scuttled a little bit away and gave a mortified look at Raunaq. Bani heard a soft chuckle and then Jai's voice, "Not now Anu...mami will give me kiss later on."

Raunaq laughed softly, "Phaas gayi…" Bani glared at Raunaq and then made a face at Jai.



Tera Pyar Hai Bas Meri Zindagi PT3

Ik ladki bhigi bhagi si
Soti raaton mein jaagi si
Mili ik ajnabi se
Koyi aage na peechhe
Tum hi kaho ye koyi baat hai, hmm
(repeat)

(Dil hi dil mein chali jaati hain
Bighdi bighdi chali aati hain) -2
Doondh laut ti huwi balka ti huwi
Saawan ke suni raaton mein
Mili ik ajnabi se
Koyi aage na peechhe
Tum hi kaho ye koyi baat hai
Hmm
Ek ladki bhigi bhagi si..



"Bani…wait." Jai called out as he saw Bani almost run out of the hall into the garden.

Bani stopped and turned around. "What do you want?" she asked abrasively.

Jai stopped in front of her, "Nothing…just talk. We haven't had a chance to talk much. I want to get to know you a little better."

A playful streak flashed through Bani's eye, "I can send you my bio if you like. It will have everything, what I like, what I don't like."

Jai gave her a roughish smile, "Will that include how many times a week you will like to make love."

Bani's eyes grew wide and her heart beat wildly, she felt extremely hot. "Oh…Oh…you are horrible. I am not going…to…sleep with you." She spluttered with outrage.

Jai plucked her wrist and brought her close, his eyes had a dangerous glint. "There will be no separate bedrooms…I can assure you of that."

She tried to twist her arm out of his grasp. "I am not marrying you unless Raunaqdidi can come and stay with me. I told dadi so…I need didi…she takes care of me."

Jai threw his head back and laughed, "I didn't know you need a babysitter…you can bring your didi and grandma too…but they will not be sharing our bedroom."

"It's not funny…and I don't need babysitting. I can look after myself. I just need didi to help me with things." Bani pushed hard at his chest and in process making Jai lose his balance and they both fell on the grass. Jai rolled over on top of her and pinned her beneath him. He could smell the floral scent of soap on her skin, he inhaled deeply. His traveled slowly over her face and down the column of neck and her chest which was moving rapidly due to shallow breathing. With deliberate pause he fixed his gaze on the creamy skin exposed by the low neckline of her choli and then he lowered his face until his lips rested at the base of her column. Bani shuddered beneath him at the feel of his warm breath and lips on her skin.

"Please…" Bani whispered with difficulty.

"Hmmm…please what Bani?" Jai asked, thoroughly enjoying her discomfort.

"Please let me go." Bani whispered, with her eyes closed.

"Only on one condition…you still owe me a kiss." Jai spoke softly with an edge that he was not going to relent until his wish for fulfilled.

"Raunaq didi can come with me?" Bani persisted with her wish.

Jai moved and stared at her, the innocent expectation on her face, her eyes now wide open and hungry for his answer.

"Yes. I already told you." Jai watched her and waited and when Bani did not say anything, "I am waiting Bani!"

Bani gulped, her throat constricted tightly as she realized there was no way of getting out of this tight spot.


"Close your eyes…" she whispered and licked her lips in nervousness.

Jai stared hard at her lips now coated with wet saliva and then with a muffled groan closed his eyes. Bani lifted her torso slightly and then quickly pressed her lips to his, squinting her eyes shut and then dropped down with a soft thud.

Jai opened his eyes slowly and then smiled smugly at her. "I guess…it's good enough for a first kiss. But I think we should practice a bit more…what do you say?" his brows lifting up slightly.

Bani gave a push and slipped out of his grip. Standing up, she scowled at him and then ran off.

Raunaq watched Bani rush in and then run up the stair. She smiled and then took a peek through the window and saw Jai sat on the grass, staring up at the sky. Suddenly remembering Prabhadevi's order, she went to find Bani.

In her room, Bani sat at the dresser and watched herself in the mirror. Her cheeks burnt red and her eyes…they did not look the same to her. She followed the image in the mirror and rested her gaze on the dcollet of her choli, realizing all of a sudden that it was bit revealing, the swell of her B**** could be seen almost.

Raunaq entered the room and watched Bani for few moments. "Ahem…Bani." She called out softly.

Bani turned her head, "huh…"

"Ammi wants you downstairs. Here let me fix up your hair and the chunri." And then with a teasing laughter, "What did you do in the garden?"

Bani covered her face with both her hand and shrieked, "Didi! Yuck!"

Raunaq picked up the hairbrush and smoothed her hair a bit and then standing her up, adjusted Bani's chunri. Then pinching her cheek, "You look cute, Jai is lucky man."

Bani pulled at Raunaq's arm and said excitedly, "Didi…I asked him…he said yes."

"Yes to what?" Raunaq asked and then suddenly her face crumbled, "You didn't?"

"Yes…you are coming with me didi. He said I can have dadi stay with me too." Bani's face radiated with smile.

Raunaq hit her head with her palm, "Pagli…what is going to happen to you?"

Bani linked her arm through Raunaq, "Nothing…you will be with me."

TBC…
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Bani saachi mein pagli hai, 😉

But hey she loves her didi so everything is fair....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Amusing, yet can't help but feel sorry for

Bani and the insecurities she feels.

Terrific update by the way.

Thank you.

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