SS: A Love Story, Last Part Pg-4

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Desriee1

@Desriee1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

Dhani nothing more needs to be said, the story has ended beautifully.

- rosi -

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Perveen

@Heartbreak

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

That was a nice ending I'm happy you didnt split the love bird up, or killed either one of them off babez.x

byebye

Love Perveen.x

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johnangad

@johnangad

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

wat an update! luv, separation, afsaana, marriage! totally wow

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visma

@kuttu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

This was areal short and sweet. Not to mention it had romance in the form of JB,it had a bit of all kind of emotions too. The loss Nazeema's and Bani's mothers , the struggle of tow woman to bring up their kids, the anger when Bani's mother felt that her daughter had betrayed her trust, wait mothers wait for her son, two lovers waitng to be united. it had all been weaved inot the story quite well.

Not to forget teh innocent little girl who brought them together in every meaning of the word.

Wondering when you would start the new one now. As both the stories have been done up.

Bye

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Indian_Goddess

@Indian_Goddess

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Posted: 16 years ago

#35

Perfect ending. Loved how Jai's mother felt a closeness with her granddaughter and found out herself of what relationship they share. I was a little worried thinking that Jai and Bani would not end up together considering the difference in religion, but you proved me wrong. It's nice that no one objected their marriage. This was a cute story, Dhani, and I really loved how JB's love progressed. Waiting for another story from you soon. 😃