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Posted: 15 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: spiriT20

Glad you're ok now.

Would love for you to continue, its a mindblowing and touching FF.
Do you want to continue that's the million dallor question, you have
to be the judge.
P.S. Write for the pleasure of writing, The accolades will come naturally without you
having to ask for it.
An appreciated reader of your writing.
Always remember, school first.

i liked the part of ur comment which says write for the pleasure of writin.. i think tats actuallly true.. because if one enjoys doin wat he/she is doin then only they can do it...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42
hey krutika
do cont soon ohkk
as we still want to read this FF
sorry was not able to comment earlier as i was out of station
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43

Part 5:

Present in Jai's room…

After finishing arrangement's for the Goa trip and having dinner he was went to his room… He wanted this trip to be perfect for Bani… It would be her first trip… And he didn't wanted it to go wrong… From the time Bani joined WBGI he had valued her intelligence… She was a great worker… He liked her a lot.. As a friend and as a human being… Initially he thought that was the reason why he helped her in her time of difficulty… And more over she was related to Daksh… He never realized when his friendship had taken a new turn… He loved her… To see her smile was as if the only motto in his life… He remembered the hallow look on her face, the pain, the suspicion for male species, the uncertainty… But he also saw the innocence in her eyes, the faith in Daksh she had, the love for her family and her intelligence…. Oh he knew he loved her… But the only problem that he had was that he couldn't express his love to her… He was scared of hurting her again… Scared that he might loss her friendship in the process… He was admiring her pic that he had taken last diwali… to him she was looking like an angel in this pic…. He loved holding that pic and sharing his thoughts with her…

Jai (to the pic): Bani everything is perfect on this trip… I know its your first outing its gonna be perfect…

The door to his room opened and Adi walked in…

Adi: Jaii….

Jai hurriedly kept the photo away hoping that Adi hadn't heard him and turned to meet him….

Adi: I know you love her… Why don't you talk to Daksh then…

Jai was taken aback with Adi's statement…

Jai: Is it so obvious… ???

Adi smiled at his friend and said: No and Yes… No as in a stranger might not know… But yes because you are forgetting I am your friend… Remember how you had guessed how I felt about Jigyasa..

Jai smiled remembering how a year ago he barged into Adi's room and made him confess his feelings for Jigyasa… It had been Bani's observation… She had guessed it first…

Jai looked at Adi and said: Am I wrong? I don't want to loss her friendship or hurt her..

Adi came and stod beside him and said: How can loving someone hurt tat person… Love her so much that she thinks only about you… Care so much that she forgets all her pain and sorrows…

Jai looked at Adi for awhile and said: What are you trying to say Adi…

Adi: In the past two years if she has became your friend she has became mine too.. I know how hurt she has been… But Jai she needs to move forward in life… If you say you love her then now is the time to prove it… Make her realize that there is a beautiful world which is waiting for her… Make her love you as much as you love her… And trust me the hell she has gone through by loving her you wont lose her but yes its not going to be an easy task

Jai: I know Adi but I don't want her to think that I am taking advantage of her weakness…

Adi had never seen Jai with so lack of confidence… He was the one whole boosted up everyone's morale when something went wrong…

Adi: You wont… This trip to Goa gives you the chance…. Convince her that you love her and that your family would accept her open heartly….

Jai looked at his friend with a raised brow: Will they?

Adi laughed heartly….

Adi: Trust me when I say Yes….

Jai was content but then he frowned thinking about Daksh and Anamika….

Adi: I know what you thinking…. But one thing at a time… Convince her first….

Jai smiled at his brother-in-law… and said: I guess you are right…. By the way why are you awake till now… Everything okie…

Adi: Yeah I have a news for you regarding the Goa project…

They sat and talked for awhile… It was about 2 when Adi called it a day…

Adi: You better catch some sleep if you plan to board tomorrow's flight…

After Adi left Jai packed his stuff and all the required docs and his personal diary and Bani's pic… After packing he went off to sleep…

Next Day….

Everyone was there at the airport to see off Jai and Bani…. Jai was standing with Adi and Daksh when Daksh looked at him and said in a slow was so that only he can hear…

Daksh: Please take care of her Jai… I trust you that's why I am letting her go with you… But there is only thing you have to know…

Jai: What is it?

Daksh:Bani sometimes has nightmares… Here are her medicines and I have written the dosage too… and gave him a packet…

Jai was taken aback he didn't know this… He said in a very somber voice… Fine… Don't worry I will take good care of her…

Bani came at that moment to give a hug to Daksh…

There flight was announced and Jai and Bani left for Goa…

At the airport… Daksh and Anamika were still lost in there thoughts when Uday came to them and kept a hand on Daksh shoulders

Uday: Don't worry beta Jai will take good care of her… Trust your friend…

Anamika: We do Bade Papa… But its just that…

Uday: Bolo beta whats bothering you…

Anamika: Jai has already done so much for Bani… That we feel indebt to him…

Uday looked at both of them and said: How can you be indebt to him when he is your friend…

Daksh: I know Bade Papa but…

Uday: No buts… By say such things you are putting question mark on your friendship… Trust your friend and yourself… And have faith in God… He will solve all our problems…. Lets go home now…

They all left for home…

Hope u guys liked tis part… do leave your comments… next part wil b Goa trip and completely JB.. J

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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
hey krutika
nice part
hope jai is able to tell his feelings to bani
and hope bani is able to come out the shell which she has prepared around herself
waiting for the next part to read some JB stuff
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45

A beautiful update.

Hope JW can help Bani get over her nightmares and together

they can peace and love in Goa.


Continue soon, all the best C.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
yay an update
nice part
hope jai succeeds
cont soon, dont disappear
SA
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
I just love the update babez.
Cant wait for this Goa trip to start lol
byebye
Love Perveen.x
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
NIce part. Jai should take Adi's advice & show Bani how much he loves her.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
Hi
So Jai is trying to show his friend how beautiful life can be. Just wonering how Daksh would react knowing Jai's true feelings will they accept him and also Bani will she be willing to open herself to Jai is something I would like to see in the story.
Bye
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
Kit, a short but wonderful update. Hope Goa fulfills JW dream. Continue soon -rosi -

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