FF: Flowers of Despair Last part 13-pg17 - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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jai and lolita? hamari bani kahan?????
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Posted: 16 years ago
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dhnai,
i think now i am njoying the story and i can expect a great story of love and mush from here
the part where i fell in love in the film and here will be lolita and bani character description
waiting for it pls cont soon


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Posted: 16 years ago
#23
what will she say? ad where will bani come in the picture? :P
cont soon
SA
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24
Awwwwwwww, Jai!!!!
And Lolita wants to know why he is angry?!
Dude, are you blind?

Fab story Dhani! I wish I could see the movie but without subtitles it would be a waist.

Byebye
Ranjana
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Posted: 16 years ago
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2C

Lolita stood behind the half-closed, half-opened, wooden door, her oval head peeping out, they were retuning back, she looked at Girish's retreating back, he was sophisticated, certainly good-looking, tall, many be a year or two older than jai, his face was set, with an air of aristocracy and a pinch of arrogance, suddenly her peeping eyes locked with Girish, who happened to turn back, he smiled, feeling embarrassed and shy Lolita hid behind the half-closed door, and fled upstairs to her room, her heart racing… …

Jai stood still as he witnessed the car speed away, they were gone it seemed, of course it was almost dusk, he pushed open the iron gate only to find all the family members on the pathway, including his mother and father…

"Jai…ekhune aashcho tumi… (You are coming now)" mrinalini accused him…

"Err…" jai gulped down playing with his black, bound book…

"Mrinalini…leave him…" shakuntala said, spreading her arms indicating him to hug her…jai smiled and went towards her, he had been fond of her since childhood, in fact she was the one in whom he confronted all his secrets… jai went and hugged her…

"Thakuma…sorry…" he said…

"Porikhsha kaimon chilo… (How was the exam)" she asked…

"Bhalo…" jai said extricating himself from her…

"You have only spoiled him maaji…" mrinalini said…

"Jai amaar shona chele… (He is my dearest boy)" shakuntala said as jai helped her to climb the stairs…

"We are going, okay…" mrinalini said as she and Shubroto walked past the iron gate…

"I will come later…" he replied back…

"Now go fast, Lolita was really angry with you…" thakuma whispered din his ears…jai looked grim…reluctantly he climbed the stairs…
XXXX

"Consume my heart away; sick with desire / And fastened to a dying animal"

He sat by the open window, as he always did, gazing into the sky which turned into various shades as the sun was got ready to depart…the serrated leaves of the coconut tree caressing his face with the pointed tips…the tree stood in his backyard, but its branched bent over the window as if intercepting the privacy of Lolita's room. He fingers constantly moved twisting and turning the thick coconut leaf, he remembered when they were young he used to make dolls, a boy and a girl out of these leaves and they used to play with it...he wished those times would be back again…Childhood was one's best part of life, happy, and no ounce of worry… …

He heard the click of the door; Lolita came out of the bathroom, wearing a fresh new sari, her mother had specifically told her to wear saris form now, she was going to get married soon. Tying her long hair loosely she stood watching him…

"I waited for you…" she said crossing her arms against her chest…he didn't bother to reply, concentrating on the task of making the doll…

"Jai…" she called out again…again there was no response…

"Was he good-looking…" he asked finally, throwing away the doll he made, it flew outside the window with the wind, finally landing in his backyard…a thin green doll…

Lolita sighed, she didn't want to go through the grind again, they had already had enough…she sat on the bed, hugging the pillow…

His straight-forward question hanged in the humid air. The question remained unanswered.

"Better than me…" he said again, this time facing her…Lolita looked away…

"Why are you comparing, you are different, Girish is different…" Lolita answered diplomatically…

"He is rich, I am not…" he said…

"Jai…" she yelped…

"What, I know, he has money, and I don't that's why you are marrying him…" he snapped

"Shut up jai, baba wants me to marry him; I can't go against him…" she said as a matter of fact…

"And your baba wants a rich son-in-law…"

"That's not it jai…"

"Of course it's that…look into my eyes and say…"

Lolita stayed mum. He got the answer. His dire hopes of hearing a no expired.

Jai reached her…sitting near her, holding her hand…

"I will do whatever you want, I will earn money, I promise…" he said…

"Jai…you just say it, you don't do it…" Lolita said

"It's not like that…"

"It is, I told you to assist baba, but you didn't agree…your principles will not get us food jai…" she said…he cringed at her practical approach to life, but somewhere he couldn't help but agree with her…anger shot up in him…she was practically insulting him and demeaning his capabilities…

"If you think that I will assist your dad and help him twist the truth, then I am sorry, I can't lick the feet of those whites…" jai got up throwing away her palms…

"JAI…he is my baba…how dare you talk about him like that…" Lolita shot back…

"You are just like your father…in fact all you people are just like that…" jai gritted his teeth…Lolita glared at him, tears forming in her eyes…

He turned away to walk out, he held the handle tightly, his shoulders slumped, he had not right to shout at her like that, it was her father's decision, what she could do. He turned around.

"I am sorry…" he said…Lolita turned her face…

"I am sorry, I shouldn't have said all those things…please…" he held his ears…

"Lolita…" he called out with endearment…she face him…

"How many sit ups…" he started doing sit-ups…

"1…2…3…4…5…"

"It's okay…" came Lolita's voice… he smiled, she returned his smile…

"I am sorry jai, I can't do anything…but I love you, and you will always be my best friend…" she said genuinely…

"Hmmm…" he sighed and left…
XXXX
God bless
Dhani

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Fabulous update.

I like this Jai
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Posted: 16 years ago
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that was hmmm 🤗
i could just reimagine the scene of sumanth and that girl
i love u love u dhani

abhi agaye bhi ....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey dhani gr88 part dear
plzzzzzzzz cont soon
johnangad thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#29
where is bani??y is jai crazy abt another girl?????
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hello
i'm wondering when jai and bani will meet??
poor jai, he cant marry the girl he loves because he is poor..
continue soon

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