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diana

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Posted: 16 years ago

#81

hey ranju,

great ending..I just love happy endings..

Jai and Bani are super cute la, always fighting and making up..

haha

nadia

p.s. update empty vows...

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johnangad

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Posted: 16 years ago

#82

wat a fab ending! jai planned such a wonderful proposal! we need an epilogue!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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jeenal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#83

hey renu

taht was a gr88 ending dear

jai wakai mein buddhu hai

2 saal laga diye bani ko apni feelings batane mein

and jb will never stop fighting han

plzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon

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Yoga4life

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Posted: 16 years ago

#84

Hey Ranjana,

Read the story in one go, liked it to bits. I have always appreciated your stories and your writing style. The main essence of your story is sorrow in such a subtle form that leaves an ache in the heart.

Waiting for another story from you.

cheers

Shweta

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Shreshta

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Posted: 16 years ago

#85

nice "the end"

jb will never stop fighting!

will there be an epilogue? pretty please? :)

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Swathi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#86

Makes me think it both ways. Happy that I got to read another part soon and sad that it ended. what can I say, reading your intro and all I seriously thought that u r going to have them lead their own lives and there they meet again a la 'Ijajat'. thankfully u did nothing of that sort. The whole proposal was done in a very cute way. I kind of liked Bani's email and her misgivings about Jai in the initial part. The email was very well written. Thanks for a fanstastic FF.

I liked your detailing. Jai is printing something after reading the email yet again. am guessing it was her itinerary. a small detail abt Bani's professor and how he might have been hen pecked. These small things go a long way in fine tuning the whole experience and make it more realistic. so thanks again.

Swathi

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