FF-The Reluctant Bride-Updt Ch.22 & Epilogue-11/19 - Page 9

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow
wat a way of propoosin
u will marry me ,no arguments khatam
that's great
waiting for shaadi
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Posted: 16 years ago
#82
YESS...YESSSSSSS....OH YESSSSSSSSSSS...
i loved JWs word man....thats exactly the GRAET JAI WALIA....oh i missed him soo much...thanx for bringing my old JW back.....
are jaldi jaldi shadi karawo inki.....i cant wait now....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i can't belive you did that.
amezing update
waiting for next pat
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow. What a proposal! I see where the RELUCTANT bride comes in. Bani is definitely opposing to this marriage. But little does the poor girl know that she will fall head over heels in love with her husband if she marries Jai. Please continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Great part !!!!👏👏👏 What a way to propose? Anyway I liked it.....😉 Thats our JW! Waiting to read the next part.....

Ammu.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Again I would like to say thank you to you all of you who have posted the wonderful comments…

I am so glad that you are all enjoying this story….

Thank you to all those silent readers too….

Hope you enjoy the next part…this part is a small one but tomorrow's part will be longer…I promise….

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Bus Jigyasa… ye sab tumhara hi khada kiya hua bakheda hai…Now all I am doing is that I am only trying to find the solution to it...

I am tired of listening to this nonsense everyday… So that's it…no more talk from you.. I will not listen anymore...especially to you….

Par Bhaiya..

I said no more, Jigyasa…

Marry you…me marry you?? That is not possible…. I can't do that…I will not do that….cried Bani.

Oh yes Bani you will, Bani!!!...Yes you will…I will have no more arguments from you and we will not be discussing this any further… Bus ek dum ek baat bhi nahi karogi tum abhi…you will do as I say…

Jai gives a quick glance and walks away towards his study….putting an end to any further conversation from anybody…

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Chapter 9

Bani did not move or say a word…

Then as if coming out of trance, she stormed after Mr. Walia towards his study…

Angrily she knocked on the door…

Jai: Come in….

How could you do that? No how dare you do that, Mr. Walia?... How can make such a decision for me? Will I not have say in this matter?

I thought I said that we will not discuss this further…so we will not discuss this…that's it….my decision is made and it is final…

So saying he opened the door…

And Bani one more thing you will not be leaving the house until we are married….

But Mr. Walia, I have a job to do…I will not quit…I don't want to quit….

You don't have to quit….your manager will be informed that you have taken some time off…

Bani had no choice, but to walk out of the door….

Wiping her tears of anger she stomped out of the room…

On the way out, she stopped in the hall where everyone was still waiting…

Bani looks towards Masi for some support…Masi…she said…

But then hesitated seeing that Masi is very happy…she had a smile on her face…it seems as if she has not only already agreed but also is happy with Mr. Walia decision…

Masi silently sends a prayer…thanking God…that Jai is finally getting married and that too, to someone who is to her liking...

Dadi breaks the silence saying ... ab kitne dino ke bad ghar me shehenai bajegi…haina Billo…

Ha Biji…aaj mai to bohot khush hui…

She turns towards Adi Uncle thinking maybe she could speak to him but sees his back quickly going towards the study…she looked on hopefully that maybe…maybe he could talk to Mr. Walia….

Adi Uncle gives his quick blessings to Bani…

Now as the shock wears off… everyone stirs…

Pia and Anu jumping with excitement… Anu and Pia discussing about what they will wear to the various ceremonies….

Rano is really unsure of how to react…

Pushkar tries to make light of the situation teasing Bani…

Arre abhi to mujhe sambhal ke rehena padega…I wont't be able to tell you what to do any more… you will be the boss' wife…so abhi tum humpe hukum chalougi...hai na??

Bani turned a sad face to him not sure how to react….turned around and started walking towards her room…

No one….just no one seemed to be worried about her or her feelings…

She heard Ranveer saying that he would take over the planning of the wedding decorations, etc. with Anu and Pia arguing with him…..

Jigyasa finally shocked in to silence…also walked away in a daze…

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Bani did not go to work the following day, since her boss "Pushkar" already knew that she was going to be out… neither did she go down for breakfast.

Bani, kaha hai Masi….aaj breakfast ke liye niche nahi ayi…

Woh beta…

She is not feeling well….has a headache…chirped in Pia…once in a while she gets these migraine headaches that make her very sick, Mr. Walia…

Mai Bani ka nashta upar bhej deti hu Munna…

Aur who Munna….maine aaj Panditji ko bulaya hai…to fix the date for the wedding…

That is fine…. Just let me know as soon the Panditji gives you a definite date so that I can rearrange my schedule…

Before leaving, Jai went up to Bani's room wanting to make sure that she is ok…

He knocked on the door…

Ji…he heard a soft voice say…

It's me, Jai …Bani…

He heard feet shuffling to the door and the door opening….

I just wanted to know if you are ok…Pia was saying that you had migraine headaches…are you ok…do you have medicine for it?? Should I call the Doctor for you?

Nahi Mr. Walia…I am ok said Bani…avoiding his eyes…I have taken my medicine and will rest up….

Make sure you eat something…Ok then I will see you in the evening…

Hearing no response from her, he started walking away…

Closing the door the softly behind her…Bani muttered….first he gives me the headache then wants to know if I am OK…how does he think I should be…how will I be ok...oh God…how do I get myself out of this….this mess…No arguments he says….you will do as I say….ha….I am not going to marry him…no matter what….I have to think….think hard so that I can get out of this….

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow!!! great update!!!!!!!!!!!!

how come jai is being sooo mean???? wht abt bani's feelings???????? not tht i am complaining.............b/c i am already shopping for the wedding!!! lollll.............can't wait!!!!

pls cont sooooooooooooooon!!!! loved the update!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks for the quick update! As usual great part! 👏👏👏……..So he is not giving her any chance to explain… ….Poor Bani is in great trouble…..😉 ……their chemistry was very well written.…..👏 So all the family members are happy except Jigs….Anyway I'm happy our Jb are getting married.....can't wait for the next part.

Ammu.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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well lets wait and see what happens will this wedding take place or will pia sit in the mandap for her sister bani huh...?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I read all the parts of your FF last night and I loved them! I really like how Jay can be so "arrogant" at one point like how he went on ordering about the wedding (which wasn't very nice), yet the next morning he worries about her! Its so cute, though I still think Bani should have a say in the matter, after all its her marriage too, but I really don't mind Jay taking authority (if Bani is confused and stuff) else if she is aware of what she is doing, then I think she should go for what she wants.

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