Moonsoon Series -Before the Rains/Dhani/p61 Nov 21 - Page 40

Wonderful story Abhi. I really liked the dialogues between Bani and Jai. Especially the big picture part. The way it was done was very cute...From my perspective, the only thing that I possibly would have liked to see is this being just a short episodic story...meaning no marriage...maybe with just a hint of their future togetherness....But I loved the setting...Very true to the theme...the rain was there throughout the story....rain brings them together...so the theme was very well woven into the concept....descriptions were apt and I started feeling the rain myself....I know its raining heavily in Chennai (supposedly better now) and here in my place its very cloudy but no heavy rain so am already in the mood...

Hey Abhilasha,

Awesome story!!! I loved it completely!!! It was so sweet!!!!

God bless

Dhani

dis was a wondful story! loved the first meeting into luv!

awesome story dear...👏................pls keep writing ...........👏

hey abhi....i just loved what i read now...seriously this story was something else....grate...so romantic and sweet...

hey abhilasha

abhilasha.. that was a great part hun.. wow.. great SS.. bani is soo funny.. talking to him about him.. lol.. ek aurmilega SS.. hehehe

Abhilasha,

What a cuteeee story!! 👏👏Simply beautiful! Very funny…I thoroughly enjoyed it….loved their conv…..beautiful description of rainy atmosphere.....waiting for more....

Ammu.