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jeenal

@jeenal20

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#31

gr88 part dhnai

plz cont soon

wow so both jb are falling for each other

and their 1st kiss

plz cont soon

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johnangad

@johnangad

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#32

ahan very good part- jb confrontation. dis dada saheb really confuses me! his sis threatens him abt his relationship wid ratnali, why is he scared? he didn't cheat on his wife ever did he?

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preet

@preet_2010

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#33

Hey Dhani,

another fabalous update, too good. really liked how you brought in Urmila and Mahesh story and linked it, penned down so well.So Jai and Bani fallin for one another big time, what is gonig to be result of this, seems like CM guy wants Jai to marry his daughter. last bit was just😳😳😳 you put across their emotions really well.lookin forward to the next part.👏👏👏

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divan

@divan

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#34

Hey Dhani gret part...this is getting better...all the dirty secrets in data's life and his sisiter harbouring hatered for him. Jai and Bani...well what more...it's fire playing with fire...👏

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pptm469

@pptm469

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#35

Dhani,

Sorry have not commented yet, since I would read the stories at work and do not login to make comments. Now I am home hence decided to tell you that this is a great story line..different..

Loved how Jai and Bani are both trying to deny the attraction until Jai could not resist anymore..

Can't wait for the next update..

Please do continue soon..

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diana

@hooman

Navigator

Posted: 17 years ago

#36

Jay and Bani's first kiss! great update. so many secrets are being unfolded now. cant wait for more

nadia

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sukhjinder kaur

@siumi

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#37

I liked very much the attraction btw them, without even talking hehe

cont. soon I don't think Mods will close this ff, because of a kiss...

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Perveen

@Heartbreak

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#38

Hey dhani I loved it it was like fire work going up so finaly jai and bani kiss...

byebye

Love Perveen

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RANJANA_RRJ

@RANJANA_RRJ

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#39

Oopsie!

Mahesh and Urmila sound dangerous. But I guess who MacBeth will be now. Jealousy, sibling rivalry and a danerous level of ambition. Deadly combination. JB are so cute. Jai is more a man of actions then of words I see. 😳

Dhani!! Wonderful update!! I loved the part about Urmila's history! It was very well explained and it is resonable ground for her hating her brother

will be waitng for the next update!!
Byebye
Ranjana