Mission ff part 2

ashlesha2

@ashlesha2

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1

Must refer Pavitra Rista Tanshi shot... then participate.

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4971168&PID=146623706&#p146623706

Hello

This is again Ashlesha up with a concerned topic 'MISSION OS'.

This is a very special OS because it composition is not only by the writer's but also the readers.

It is not an ready made os. Infact this thread i to make a os by all our kasamians

Didnt get it yet??????????????????????

Not a problem.

See friends one intial line will be given and u have to develop it by just adding 1-2 lines only but make sure that it gives a effect to an os.

1. Each member can post only 2-3 lines not more.

2.copy the previous lines so as when one read the paragraph written as a whole will an idea of the os n will be able to add few more to it.

3.Active pariticipation.

4.no comments like nice thread. Only os making posts,.

Starting

They were married. In an accident he lost his memory 2 years back. The families became rivals and separated them.

Conutinue now.

Please refer Pavitra Rista before beginning.

You can name the characters.

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arya1210

@arya1210

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Posted: 7 years ago

#2

Suddenly she fell a hand on her shoulder.It was aahana

A-Sub thik ho gayega di.

Tanu hug her and start crying

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vinushi

@vinushi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#3

Originally posted by: arya1210
Suddenly she fell a hand on her shoulder.It was aahana
A-Sub thik ho gayega di.
Tanu hug her and start crying

Scene sifted to rishi

Rishi also has tears in his eyes

Mp - kya hua Bhai aap ro rahe ho

R - nhi chore pta nhi kyun but did me ek ajeeb sa pain jaise koi bula RHA ho koi dil ka bahut kareebi Jo kahin dur yaad kar RHA ho chahta ho k mai

Edited by vinushi - 7 years ago

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as55amol

@as55amol

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Posted: 7 years ago

#4

Originally posted by: vinushi

Scene sifted to rishi
Rishi also has tears in his eyes
Mp - kya hua Bhai aap ro rahe ho
R - nhi chore pta nhi kyun but did me ek ajeeb sa pain jaise koi bula RHA ho koi dil ka bahut kareebi Jo kahin dur yaad kar RHA ho chahta ho k mai

Mp - bhai lekin aisa kon hai jiska pain apko mhesus ho rha hai
R - ptha nai lekin bhut pain ho rha hai koi hai jo bhut dukhi hai but kon hai ptha nai

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ashlesha2

@ashlesha2

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Posted: 7 years ago

#5

They were married. In an accident he lost his memory 2 years back. The families became rivals and separated them.

Suddenly she fell a hand on her shoulder.It was aahana

A-Sub thik ho gayega di.

Tanu hug her and start crying

Scene sifted to rishi

Rishi also has tears in his eyes

Mp - kya hua Bhai aap ro rahe ho

R - nhi chore pta nhi kyun but did me ek ajeeb sa pain jaise koi bula RHA ho koi dil ka bahut kareebi Jo kahin dur yaad kar RHA ho chahta ho k mai

Mp - bhai lekin aisa kon hai jiska pain apko mhesus ho rha hai
R - ptha nai lekin bhut pain ho rha hai koi hai jo bhut dukhi hai but kon hai ptha nai

Beeji : Rishi manpreet soe nahi?

The duo go to hug her.

R:Bahut din hogaye apse lorry nahi sune.

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MUNAZZA - SHAHID MALIK HUSSAIN

@ManazzaShahid12

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#6

Originally posted by: as55amol

Mp - bhai lekin aisa kon hai jiska pain apko mhesus ho rha hai
R - ptha nai lekin bhut pain ho rha hai koi hai jo bhut dukhi hai but kon hai ptha nai

R :- aisa lagta hai koi mera naam pukar rha ho mujhe yaad kr rha ho
Scene shifted to tanuja
T:- crying by hugging ahana wo mujhe bhool chuka hai but aisa lagta hai wo abhi bhi mujhe mahsoos kr rha ho ga jaisy mein kr rhi ho usy

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ashlesha2

@ashlesha2

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Posted: 7 years ago

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They were married. In an accident he lost his memory 2 years back. The families became rivals and separated them.

Suddenly she fell a hand on her shoulder.It was aahana

A-Sub thik ho gayega di.

Tanu hug her and start crying

Scene sifted to rishi

Rishi also has tears in his eyes

Mp - kya hua Bhai aap ro rahe ho

R - nhi chore pta nhi kyun but did me ek ajeeb sa pain jaise koi bula RHA ho koi dil ka bahut kareebi Jo kahin dur yaad kar RHA ho chahta ho k mai

Mp - bhai lekin aisa kon hai jiska pain apko mhesus ho rha hai
R - ptha nai lekin bhut pain ho rha hai koi hai jo bhut dukhi hai but kon hai ptha nai

Beeji : Rishi manpreet soe nahi?

The duo go to hug her.

R:Bahut din hogaye apse lorry nahi sune.

Scene shifted to tanuja
T:- crying by hugging ahana wo mujhe bhool chuka hai but aisa lagta hai wo abhi bhi mujhe mahsoos kr rha ho ga jaisy mein kr rhi ho usy

A: Di tu Sach bata abhi kuch nahi begada

Main sab se baat karungi. Kya tum Rishi ko chahati Ho?

Edited by ashlesha2 - 7 years ago

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MUNAZZA - SHAHID MALIK HUSSAIN

@ManazzaShahid12

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Posted: 7 years ago

#8

Originally posted by: ashlesha2
They were married. In an accident he lost his memory 2 years back. The families became rivals and separated them.
Suddenly she fell a hand on her shoulder.It was aahana
A-Sub thik ho gayega di.
Tanu hug her and start crying

Scene sifted to rishi
Rishi also has tears in his eyes
Mp - kya hua Bhai aap ro rahe ho
R - nhi chore pta nhi kyun but did me ek ajeeb sa pain jaise koi bula RHA ho koi dil ka bahut kareebi Jo kahin dur yaad kar RHA ho chahta ho k mai

Mp - bhai lekin aisa kon hai jiska pain apko mhesus ho rha hai
R - ptha nai lekin bhut pain ho rha hai koi hai jo bhut dukhi hai but kon hai ptha nai

Beeji : Rishi manpreet soe nahi?
The duo go to hug her.
R:Bahut din hogaye apse lorry nahi sune.

Scene shifted to tanuja
T:- crying by hugging ahana wo mujhe bhool chuka hai but aisa lagta hai wo abhi bhi mujhe mahsoos kr rha ho ga jaisy mein kr rhi ho usy

A: Di tu Sach bata abhi kuch nahi begada
Main sab se baat karungi. Kya tum Rishi ko chahati Ho?

T: tu usy chahne ki baat kr rhi hai to chahh to meine usi din liya tha jab usy dakha tha
Ahana: with teary eyes di
T:meri to haar saans mein wo hai dil mein wo hai har baat har jagh bus rishi rishi hai lakin kya faida koi nai smjhe ga rishi bhi nai
suddenly she pointed her finger towards moon
Bgm play "pore chaand ki ye adhi raat hai "

Edited by ManazzaShahid12 - 7 years ago

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vinushi

@vinushi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#9

Originally posted by: ManazzaShahid12
T: tu usy chahne ki baat kr rhi hai to chahh to meine usi din liya tha jab usy dakha tha
Ahana: with teary eyes di
T:meri to haar saans mein wo hai dil mein wo hai har baat har jagh bus rishi rishi hai lakin kya faida koi nai smjhe ga rishi bhi nai
suddenly she pointed her finger towards moon
Bgm play "pore chaand ki ye adhi raat hai "

T - sirf chand hi samjhega Ki Maine usse kitna pyar kiya hai kab se pyar kiya hai bas or koi nhi n started crying hard

Ahana console her

Here rishi is so restless he doesn't understand his situation

N decide to go patiyala next morning (where tanu lives )

Edited by vinushi - 7 years ago

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Roseline

@Moonstique

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Posted: 7 years ago

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They were married. In an accident he lost his memory 2 years back. The families became rivals and separated them.

Suddenly she fell a hand on her shoulder.It was aahana

A-Sub thik ho gayega di.

Tanu hug her and start crying

Scene sifted to rishi

Rishi also has tears in his eyes

Mp - kya hua Bhai aap ro rahe ho

R - nhi chore pta nhi kyun but did me ek ajeeb sa pain jaise koi bula RHA ho koi dil ka bahut kareebi Jo kahin dur yaad kar RHA ho chahta ho k mai

Mp - bhai lekin aisa kon hai jiska pain apko mhesus ho rha hai
R - ptha nai lekin bhut pain ho rha hai koi hai jo bhut dukhi hai but kon hai ptha nai

Beeji : Rishi manpreet soe nahi?

The duo go to hug her.

R:Bahut din hogaye apse lorry nahi sune.

Scene shifted to tanuja
T:- crying by hugging ahana wo mujhe bhool chuka hai but aisa lagta hai wo abhi bhi mujhe mahsoos kr rha ho ga jaisy mein kr rhi ho usy

A: Di tu Sach bata abhi kuch nahi begada

Main sab se baat karungi. Kya tum Rishi ko chahati Ho?

T: tu usy chahne ki baat kr rhi hai to chahh to meine usi din liya tha jab usy dakha tha
Ahana: with teary eyes di
T:meri to haar saans mein wo hai dil mein wo hai har baat har jagh bus rishi rishi hai lakin kya faida koi nai smjhe ga rishi bhi nai
suddenly she pointed her finger towards moon
Bgm play "pore chaand ki ye adhi raat hai "

T - sirf chand hi samjhega Ki Maine usse kitna pyar kiya hai kab se pyar kiya hai bas or koi nhi n started crying hard

Ahana console her

Here rishi is so restless he doesn't understand his situation

N decide to go patiyala next morning (where tanu lives )

In morning,

A:(with sprinkles of tears) Sab loog utho jaldi se, aj meri di engagement jo hai.

B: Ahana, tumhe paresaan hone ki kya zarurat hai? Hum hain nah hum sab sambhal lenge, tum bas tanu ka khayal rakho

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