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Posted: 7 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: gopsss

Haya...u really surprised me. It is very interesting👏!!! TanShi feel for each other😳. AhaMan try to unite them😳. Oh my Tanuja...will Rishi come n rescue her? Jaldi upload next part. Aww... I cant control my self that much I am excited for next update. And wo for informing me😉.

wo word for u dear...will try my best to update soon...😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wao foxi kya updates di hai loving it 😃 I am just always waiting to see rishi protective side for tanuja wahi meri tanu ko hath lagaya then dishoom dishoom wahh 😳 wohoo tanu kidnap rishi cry but he surely save her update soon
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Full on tanshi chapter...😳
PART 8
Rishi is sitting on the road...
His phone rings...he wipes his tears and pick up the call...

R: Hello Rishi Singh Bedi speaking...
Goon: hello hi or bye sab bd mn krnge pehle tu apni laila ko to bacha le...
R: kon ho tum or Tanuja kahan hai...agar us ko kuch hua na to...

Goon cuts him...

Goon: abey abey abey break maar...sun apne aas pas dekh ek mandir hoga...us k sath wale go down mn aja...or han jldi ana mere pas time nhi hai...wrnaaa...

He shoots with gun...Rishi hears the sound...

R: aye dekh Tanuja ko kuch mt krna mn bs thori der mn pohonch rha hon...

He cuts the call and starts searching for mandir..
After sometime he found the mandir and the go down too...

Rishi enters the go down...he sees Tanuja unconcious and tied in ropes...he runs towards her...and pats her cheeks...

R: tanuja...tanuja...wake up tanuja wake up...
Tanuja meri jaan utho...😭
He sees water and splits some on tanuja's face...
Tanuja wakes up and starts crying...

T: rishi thank God tum agaye...plzzz mjhe bacha lo..
R: han tanuja bs hum chlte hn..utho...

He unties her...
Both stands up...suddenly some goons comes and points gun at tanuja's head...

T: rishiii...😭
R: tanujaaa...aye chor usko...😡
G: zyada chalaki mt dikhana wrna isko goli mar donga...
R: nhi usko kuch mt krna..

They tie them both with ropes...

G to others: chalo bahar or in pr nazar rkhna jab tk boss nhi atey...

Goons leave...

R: tanuja tm fikr mt krna mn kuch sochta hon yhn se bahar niklne k barey mn...

Something clicks in his mind...

R: ek min inhon ne hamare paon nhi bandhe...
T: arey han...
R: idhar ao...
T: han???
R: arey ao to sahi...

Tanuja comes to Rishi...
He opens her ropes with his hands...
Then tanuja unties him...

Rishi cups her face..

R: are you ok???
T: hmmm...

He doesnt notices what he is saying and speaks in a flow...

R: meri to jaan hi nikl gai thi...aisa lg rha tha tum mjhse hamesha hamesha k liye door chli jaogi...thank God u r safe...aisa lg rha tha k jaise is dil ne dharakna band kr diya ho..
T suddenly ask: q??
R without noticing: tum meri jaan ho yr tanuja I LOVE YOU...boht pyar krta hon mn tmse...

And thats it now he realises what he said a moment before...
Tanuja first got shocked them comes to her senses...
Tears are rolling down her cheeks...

T: kya??? Kya kaha tmne???

Rishi on seeing tanuja's teary eyes...

R: i m so sorry tanuja i didnt meant to hurt u..i m sorry...once again sorry...tanuja forget it...i m so...

Tanuja comes forward and cups his face...

T: I LOVE YOU TOO Rishi...

Tears of happiness are rolling down his cheeks...this time Rishi got a shock therapy...😉

R: are u serious???
T: han rishi i love you...i love you...i love you...i love you boht sara walaaa...
R: i love you tmse bhi zyada...

Rishi gives her a bone crushing hug...

T in a naughty way: rishi bs kro meri hadiyan toot jaengi...😉

Rishi breaks the hug...

R says pouting: yr tanuja poore romance ka maza kharab kr diya...jao baat nhi krni mjhe..

This time tanuja comes and hugs him...
And yup a bone crushing hug..😉

T: rishi tmhe pata hai mn soch rhi thi k tum mere love ko accept nhi karoge...
R: same mn bhi yehi soch rha tha...tbhi to ab tk chupa kr rkha tha...

*still hugging*

Goons enters...

G: oho lgta hai hum ghalat time pr agaye...yhn to laila or majnoo ka romance chl rha hai...

All laughs in chorus...

One goon points gun on them...

G: boss tum dono se milna chahte hn...

And here someone enters..

Writers note: Guys ur guesses are wrong...its not virat...
They are...

AHAMAN...😆

All goons leaves...

R: tum dono...tum dono ko bhi kidnap krliya...
Mp laughing: arey bhai ap dono ko hmne hi kidnap kiya hai ..
Tanshi: what???
A: baat itni si hai...ye tum dono jo chupan chupai khel rhe the na..hme sab pata tha...tum dono ek doosre se itna pyar krte ho lekin bata nhi paa rhe the...to hmne soch k ek soche smjhe plan k mutabiq tum dono se love confess krwaen...

Mp: or dekho hmre plan ne kese work kiya...
Hmne ap dono ki saari btn sun li hn...congratz tanuja bhabhi...

Tanshi starts shying...

Mp: awww dono shrmate hue kitne cute lgte ho...wese bhai apki car bhi hmne hi kharab krwai thi...
Arey han bhai apko zyada zor se to nhi lgi na...wo asl mn apko behosh krna para wrna ap ghundon ki maa behn ek kr dete...or hamara plan chopat hojata...
R: tu chloroform use nhi kr skta tha...
Mp: arey han bhai...iska to mjhe idea hi nhi aya...sorry han..😆
R pouting: wese lgi boht zor se thi...

Mp comes and hugs him...

Mp: sorry bhai...i love you...

Rishi hugs him back..

R: i love you too chotey...

Mp breaks the hug...

Mp: wese bhai ap to barey advance nikle...bhabhi ko hug bhi kr liya...shukr hai hm time pe agaye wrna pata nhi kya kya hojata...😉
R: abey tu ruk batata hon tjhe mn...

Both goes out running...

A laughing: chalo tanuja hm bhi chln wrna ye dono bhai hme chor k chle jaenge...
T smiling: hmm chalo...

*virat's home*

Virat's phone rings...he picks up the call...

V: han bolo kya khabar hai???
Detective: sir aisi khabar hai k ap k hosh ur jaenge..
V: acha to urao mere hosh...

Detective tells him about tanshi's love...

V: wah zbrdst ye to such mn hosh urane wali khabar hai...un pe har waqt nazar rkhna...pal pal ki khbr dena mjhe...
Detective: ok sir...

He cuts the call..

V smirking: oh the fAmous business tycoon rishi singh bedi is in love...rishi singh bedi jo ghar tu basane ki soch rha hai na mn us k basne se pehle hi usko ujaar donga...tujhe aisa toronga k tu poori zindagi yaad rkhega...

Precap: virat tries to kill tanuja...

Thats it for now guys...hope u like this...hit the like and leave the comment below...😉
Edited by HayaZehra313 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: ManazzaShahid12

Wao foxi kya updates di hai loving it 😃 I am just always waiting to see rishi protective side for tanuja wahi meri tanu ko hath lagaya then dishoom dishoom wahh 😳 wohoo tanu kidnap rishi cry but he surely save her update soon

wo word chasni for liking...i also love hi s protective side..😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#95
Haya... U rocked it dear...
Arre waah kya update!!!!!👏...
AhaMan were the kidnappers... Humne socha bhi nahi...😆
Tune hamara popat kar diya😆...
TanShi romance😳... Manpreet's dialogues...😆
TanShi ❤️ confession!!! Really loved it very much...
Precap:Excitement at its peak... Eagerly waiting...
Once again👏👏👏 !!!!!
Edited by gopsss - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#96
Superb update
OMG it was ahaman plan to make tanshi confess their love for each other
First they kidnapped tanuja & when rishi came to save her he was also kidnapped
Finally Tanshi confess their love
Awe ahaman we're so happy for tanshi
Oh hell on the other hand that jerk ass virat planing to destroy tanshi happiness
In precap he even trying to kill tanuja
Just rishi will get to know that jerk virat plan & do something
Continue plz
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Posted: 7 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: gopsss

Haya... U rocked it dear...
Arre waah kya update!!!!!👏...
AhaMan were the kidnappers... Humne socha bhi nahi...😆
Tune hamara popat kar diya😆...
TanShi romance😳... Manpreet's dialogues...😆
TanShi ❤️ confession!!! Really loved it very much...
Precap:Excitement at its peak... Eagerly waiting...
Once again👏👏👏 !!!!!

wo word jaana...
Love u inna saraaa...❤️
Hehehehe...i knew it that u guys will think its virat...😆
Popat krne ka bhi apna hi maza hai...😆
I will try my bestest to update soon...🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: cuteariya

Superb update

OMG it was ahaman plan to make tanshi confess their love for each other
First they kidnapped tanuja & when rishi came to save her he was also kidnapped
Finally Tanshi confess their love
Awe ahaman we're so happy for tanshi
Oh hell on the other hand that jerk ass virat planing to destroy tanshi happiness
In precap he even trying to kill tanuja
Just rishi will get to know that jerk virat plan & do something
Continue plz

wo word dear...😳
Hehehe...yup they were AhaMan...😆
Lets see...when Rishi will know about his dirty plans...
And what is virat up to...
Wo word once again...😳
Will update soon...❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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PART 9
It is also a TanShilicious update...😉


*Bedi house*...

Tanuja is working in the kitchen...
Rishi comes from behind and hugs her from back...
Tanuja got shocked...😲

T: Rishi kya kr rhe ho koi a jaega jao yhn se...
R: arey Tanuja tumne wo song nahi suna...

He starts singing the song..

*JAB PYAR KIYA TO DRNA KYA...*

T: rishiii...

Suddenly Rishi left her...

T: kya hua????
R shocked: samne dekho...

And there beeji is standing...😛😆
Beeji comes and holds rishi's ear...

T: ooopppsss...
R: what ooppss...help me...beeji leave me its hurting...
Ahhh...
B: acha beta yhn tum dono mil kr khichri...blke khichri nhi masale dar karahi bana rhe ho or beeji ko kaan o kaan khabar nhi hone di...mn aise hi chor don..
R: arey nhi beeji...wo...hum...hum to...
B: han mjhe pata hai chupan chupai khel rhe ho wo bhi hamare sath...hai na???
R: lekin beeji...
B: koi beeji weeji nhi...ek baat bolon mjhe bhi tanu boht achi lgti hai...jiyunde raho dono...
R: acha ab to kaan choro...

Beeji leaves his ear...

B: chal khotey da puttar...
R: beeji ap bhi papa ji ban gai...
B: hmmm...chalo ab tum dono apna dobara start kro...mn chlti hon...😉

TanShi starts shying...☺️
Beeji leaves...

Tanuja taps on Rishi's shoulder...

T: Rishi...
R: hmm...
T: tm shayad wo song bhool gae...

She winks and starts singing the song...

T: *JAB PYAR KIYA TO DRNA KYA*...
R: Tanuja ki bachi...dr kon rha tha...mn to nhi dra han tum zaroor dar gai thi...
T: hmm..wo to sb ko pata hai kon dra tha...

She repeats his dialogues...

T: beeji...wo...mn...hum...

She laughs out loud...

T: ab jao yhn se is se pehle papa ji bhi ajaen tumhara ye pyar kiya to drna kya sun kr...😆
R: lekin Tanuja...
T: no lekin Rishi...bahar jao...

She pushes him out of the kitchen...

R: Tanuja ki bachi dekh longa mn tmhe...
T: han han dekh lena...

Rishi leaves...
Tanuja cuting vegetables and smiles remembering Rishi...

T: pagal lrka...

She is continuously smiling...

*Aye jaye dil teri janib..
Ana jana lagta hai wajib...
Dil musafir hai tere ishq mn...
Bhoola dharkanain teri khatir...
Hai ye waste tere haazir...
Dil musafir hai tere ishq mn...*

*Rishi's room*...

Rishi is lying on bed...thinking of tanuja...and smiling...

*Dil dharakne lge hn tjhme...
Saans lene lagi hn raatain...
Kl talak lafz bhi nahi the...
Aj hone lgi hn batain...
Tu meri hogai tbhi to kho gai...
Tanhaiyan...tanhaiyan...
Aye jaye dil teri janib...
Ana jana lgta hai wajib...
Dil musafir hai tere ishq mn...*

*night*

Tanuja and Ahana are sitting in Ahana's room...
Both are gossiping...

A: wese kl Rishi ka birthday hai...
T excited: such mn???
A: khushi check kro zara iski...
T: nahi mn to bs wese hi...
A: han tm to bs wese hi...😉
Khr kl such mn Rishi ka birthday hai...but as usual usko yd nhi hoga...and we planned to surprise him...
T: wow thats great...kya surprise hai???
A: kl tm office mt jana...jb Rishi office se ayega...then we will give him a surprise birthday party...

Tanuja thinks for a second...

T: wo ek baat bolni thi...
A: han bolo...
T: wo...mn wo...actually...mn...
A: Tanuja relax hokr bolo...
T: yr wo...wo mn...mn ye soch rhi thi k Rishi ko sbse pehle mn wish kron...i mean aj theek 12 bje...but tm logo ne pehle hi surprise party plan kr li hai to choro...
A: arey arey nhi nhi...its a great idea...after all hmse zyada tmhara haq hai us pr...😉
T: pr tm log ki party ka kya???
A: arey hm aise behave krnge k jaise hme yd hi nhi...thats it...
But Tanuja tum usko sbse pehle zaroor wish krna...usko boht acha lge ga...
T: bt abhi to kuch arrangement hi nhi ki mne...
A: arey mn or manpreet hn na...dont worry we will help u...

Tanuja hugs Ahana...

T: thank u sooo much...u r not my sister...but u behave like my sister...but i dont consider u my sister...u r more than sister to me...
A: bs bs Tanuja itni tareef...hazam nhi hoti...

Ahana hugs her back...

A: chalo ab tayari bhi to krni hai...

Tanuja breaks the hug...

T: hmm chalo...

*its 11:55*

Tanuja enters Rishi room...
Rishi is sitting on his bed...he is shocked to see Tanuja...

R: arey wah kya baat hai aj to log khud mere room mn aye hn...
T: Rishi stop joking...otherwise i will not talk to u...

Rishi comes to Tanuja...

R: arey i was joking babes...acha bolo koi kaam tha???
T: q koi kaam ho to hi mn tumhare room mn a skti hon???
R: arey nhi yr...ye tmhara hi room hai...han future mn...

He bends down a little to her ear...making her to shiver...she close her eyes...

R smirking whispers in her ear: agar tm kaho to mn abhi se share krne ko tayar hon...

Tanuja opens her eyes and punches him in chest...not so hard...but a lil bit...
Rishi acts like it hurts him too much...

R: ouch...

He went on his knees holding his chest...
Tanuja got worried...
She also went on her knees...
She cups his face...

T tensed: zyada zor se lg gai??? I m sorry...

Rishi also cups her face...

R: i love u...
T: Rishi tm acting kr rhe the??? I hate u...
R: agr acting nhi krta to tmhari ye care kese dekhne ko milti???
T: i hate u Rishi...

He holds Tanuja's hand and stands up making her also to stand..he hugs her tight...

R: but i love u Tanuja...unlimited...
T: Rishi i hate u but love wala...

*its 11:59*

Lights went off...
Tanuja breaks the hug and disappears...

R: Tanuja tum kahan ho???

No replies...

R: wah ye sahi hai light gai nhi k Tanuja bhi chli gai...kesi lrki se pyar kiya hai mne...sirf light gai to hi chor kr chli gai...God u have to help me in future...Tanuja se to koi umeed nhi hai...

*its finally 12:00*

Lights open...and here comes a party popper...
Booommm!!!!!
Tanuja comes from behind holding the cake...and whispers in his ears...

T: HAPPY BIRTHDAY MY LOVE...

Rishi turns...
A big smile plastered on his face...
Which gives Tanuja a peaceful feeling...

R: Tanujaaa...I love u...🤗
T: emmhmmm...Rishi cake...kharab hojaega...

Rishi takes cake from Tanuja and puts it on the table...
And then he was like...🤗
Tanuja comes and hugs him...

T: i love u too Rishi...

Tanuja breaks the hug...

T: chalo cake katte hn...

A big smile is plastered on Rishi's face...
Rishi cuts the cake...
He feeds Tanuja and then Tanuja feeds him...
And Tanuja spread some cake on Rishi's face too...
Rishi takes revenge...and there is a cake on Tanuja's face too...
Both starts the cake fi8...
Suddenly Tanuja pinch Rishi's cheeks...

R: ouchhh...Tanuja its painful...

Tanuja the kisses on his cheeks...

R: its so sweet...and i love sweets one more plzzz...
T: hehehe very funny...dont try to be smart...
R: u know i m a born smart...
T: acha...wait a minute...
R: what???
T: Rishi k bache u said that God will help u in future...bcz Tanuja who left u only when lights went off how will she help u???

Rishi laughing fake...

R: hehe...wo to mn bs...bs mzk kr rha tha..
T: U think i m that coward that i will leave u alone...i will never leave u...

She takes a break...

T: and i will not leave u now...

She took the pillow and starts hitting Rishi with it...

R: acha na sorry tanuja...

Suddenly Tanuja slips and before she touch the ground she felt some familiar arms holding her...

*eye lock*

*Asman ne sunli ye dua ki zubaan hai...
Teri ishq hi ab mera rehnuma hai...
faslon ko dooriyon ko jagah na milegi...
Hathon ki lakeeron mn tera nishan hai...
Lab pe bs yehi baat...
Rab se mangu din raat...
Ek tera saath...ek tera saath...
Ek tera saath...ek tera saath...*

Knife fall down from the table after Tanuja's hand hits the knife...which disturb their moment...
Both stand staright...

R: come lets sit and talk...

Both goes and sit on the couch...
Tanuja places her head on his shoulder...

R: Tanuja tmhe pata hai...tmne mjhe boht badal diya hai...
T: Rishi tmne meri life badal di hai...u made my life heaven...
R: Tanuja i m incomplete without u...
T: and i m nothing without u...
R: its my bestest birthday ever...
God also had given me a beautiful gift...u know what???
T: what??
R: U...u r my bestest gift which God gave me...i will always be thankful to Him...
T: and God gave me also a best gift...its U Rishi...
R: hmmm...copy???
T: no its from my heart...I LOVE U RISHI SINGH BEDI...
R: I LOVE U TOO TANUJA SIKAN BEDI...
T: abhi se???
R: hmm abhi se...

Rishi places his head on Tanuja's lap...
And Tanuja places her head on Rishi's arm...
(Remember honeymoon trip scene)
Both slept on couch holding each other hands...

*morning*

Tanuja wakes up...but she is unable to move bcz Rishi is holding her hand and she dont want to disturb his sleep...
She is staring at him...
After sometime Rishi wakes up and see Tanuja staring at him...

R: nazar lg jaegi Tanuja mjhe...
T: khush fehmi...u r not that much hamdsome...
R knowing that Tanuja is teasing him: acha...then why u were staring at me???
T: Rishiii...

Both sits staright...
Rishi still holding Tanuja's hand...

R: u dont know how much i want to wake up like this always...
T: ditto..

Rishi smiles on her childish behaviour...

T: acha chalo nashta krne chlte hn...sb hamara w8 kr rhe honge...tum bhi fresh hojao...or mn bhi ja kr fresh hojati hon...
R: hmm ok...

Tanuja leaves...

*At dining table*

T: wo Rishi mn aj office nhi chal rhi...
R: q??? Tbyt to theek hai na tmhari???
T: hn bs aj dil nhi kr rha...ghar pe thora time spend krna hai...
R: sure...take ur time...
T: thank u...
R: mention not...

Ahana texts Tanuja...

A:*well done...*
T:*thanks...*

Rishi leaves for office...

Precap: birthday party and Tanuja and Ahana's kidnaping...

Thats it for now...i will try my best to update soon...
Do comment and hit like...😳
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superb update dear. next update ke liye intezer maat karana,jaldi de dena😊

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