Tanshi union SS Final part updated

Achelvi thumbnail
Visit Streak 500 Thumbnail Visit Streak 365 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 8 years ago
#1
In serial, we will have to wait long for their union, here is SS on tanshi union which will be in 2-3 parts, hope u all like it...

Natasha tells Tanuja she wants to talk to Mr. Handsome. Tanuja denies and tells her to go and play. Natz insists, tanuja scolds her for being stubborn and tells her she cant talk to him. Natz leaves in anger and tells she doesnt want to talk her.

AK returns home and asks for natz, tanuja says she maybe in her room. AK goes to her and sees her sleeping, he goes near her and sees her shivering and has high temperature and murmuring Mr. Handsome. AK calls tanuja and scolds her for being careless and not keeping an eye on Natz. AK calls doctor. Doctor comes and checks and asks to call whoever is her Mr. Handsome and tells them she got temp coz she was crying and gives medicines for fever and asks them to give after giving her something to eat.

AK asks tanuja wat had happ, tanuja tells him how natz wanted to talk to rishi and she denied and she got angry and came to her room. AK tells u scolded for a such small thing, if she wanted to talk wat is big deal in that and tells rishi genuinely likes natz and tells he will call him. Tanuja tells him she will call him and calls rishi and asks him to come if possible as natz is having fever and is taking his name in sleep. Rishi tells her he will come right away.

After sometime, doorbell rings and AK opens the door and sees rishi. Rishi literally moves him aside and runs to Natz' room. He goes and hugs her and tells her he is there and not to worry and he will take care of her. AK and tanuja come there. Rishi tells tanuja to get cold water, she obliges. He takes his kerchief and dips in water and keeps on natz's forehead. Natz opens her eyes and says Mr. Handsome and smiles. She hugs him and rishi kisses her and tells her he will always be there for her. Rishi inquires if they had called doctor, AK tells doctor had given medicine and it has to be taken after she eats something. AK sees rishi and natz together and thinks wat is the connection between them and why they love each other so much.

After sometime Tanuja gets soup, rishi wakes natz and tells her to have soup. Natz says she doesnt like soup. Rishi tells her if she doesnt have soup, how she will become alright and do boxing with him and feeds her, she has it, tanuja is surprised to see how easily she is having it. AK is also surprised to see how natz listened to rishi. After feeding her soup, rishi asks for meds, tanuja gives him the meds. Natz says she doesnt want as they will be bitter. Rishi tells tanuja to get honey. Rishi tells natz to have and if they are bitter, to have honey, she wont feel bitter.

Rishi makes natz sit in his lap and makes her have the medicine. He checks her temp and they have gone down little bit. Natz asks rishi to tell her story. Rishi starts to tell her story. AK and tanuja leave from there. AK tells tanuja how rishi is taking care of her as if she is his own daughter, tanuja doesnt say anything and thinks how much she tries to keep them apart, they end up meeting. AK tells tanuja to give him something to eat and to give rishi dinner. Tanuja serves AK dinner and takes dinner for rishi.

Tanuja comes and sees rishi talking to MP telling him he will stay with natz tonight and to take care of tanya and to call him if any problem. MP tells him not to worry about tanya as they all are there. Rishi keeps the phone and sees tanuja with plate. Tanuja tells him to eat, rishi tells her to sit beside natz and goes to washroom. He comes back and sees tanuja telling sorry to natz for not being good to her. She stops seeing rishi and rishi asks her why she is being sorry, tanuja tells him coz of her, natz got fever and how she didnt allow her to talk to him. Rishi asks her not to take his anger on her henceforth. Tanuja gives the plate to him and tells him to have.

She gets up to leave, rishi holds her hand and gestures to sit down. AK thinks wat is taking so long for tanuja and hopes that tanuja is not fighting with rishi. He comes to check. Rishi takes a bite and gives to her and tells he knows she wouldnt had anything. AK comes and is surprised to see tanuja taking the bite. Tanuja has tears in her eyes, rishi wipes it and feeds her. AK thinks tanuja who runs away from men is allowing rishi to feed her and wipe her tears and thinks wat is their connection and leaves from there. Tanuja comes down, AK asks her to have food and he will go and check on natz.

AK comes and thanks rishi for coming and taking care of natz. Rishi tells him not to say thanks and how much he loves natz and thinks her as her own daughter and says how much he gets worried if anything happens to tanya and so he can understand their concern. He tells AK not to worry about natz and he will stay with her tonight. AK tells him to call him if he needs anything and leaves from there.

After finishing her work, tanuja comes to check on natz and sees rishi sleeping sitting besides her. She comes and tells him to sleep properly. Rishi sleeps, tanuja leaves from there. Middle of night, tanuja comes to check on natz. she comes and sees how natz is sleeping on rishi, she smiles and touches her to check her temperature and is relieved as her body temp is normal. she is about to leave when natz holds her hand in sleep, tanuja stops and sits besides them and thinks how things would have been if they had not separated. Tanuja falls asleep there besides them.

Morning rishi wakes up and sees tanuja sleeping besides them. He feels happy and thinks how his family would have been complete if tanya was also there with them. He sees natz between them and how both of them have kept their hand on her. He sees tanuja moving, rishi closes his eyes and acts as if sleeping. Tanuja gets up and kisses natz and leaves from there. She gets freshened up and starts preparing breakfast. AK comes and asks her about natz. Tanuja tells him her fever is gone now. She serves him his coffee, AK tells her to give coffee to rishi also. Tanuja tells him she is making tea for him as he doesnt drink coffee, AK asks how she knows, tanuja says coz in india people prefer tea to coffee. AK leaves from there suspiciously.

Tanuja takes tea for rishi and gives him. Rishi asks her to sit for sometime and tells her how much he missed the tea. Natz gets up and sees tanuja and rishi sitting besides her. She hugs both of them together. Rishi asks her how she is feeling now, she says she is fine. Tanuja says sorry to her and kisses her. Natz asks for kiss from both of them. Rishi and tanuja both kiss her on either cheek. She says one more. Both go to kiss her, she moves forward and rishi and tanuja end up kissing each other. Tanuja stares at her for being naughty and leaves from there. Rishi takes her in his lap and kisses her and says wat he couldnt do, she has done. Natz asks him wat, rishi says nothing.

Edited by Achelvi - 8 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

20

Views

3.4k

Users

8

Likes

40

Frequent Posters

Divya333 thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#2
Nice SS...seems like AK unites Tanshi...Natz became medium for their union...waiting for next part...
Butifuleyes thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#3
Beautiful Achelvi👏👏
What a emotional scene love it.
Anjaan_09 thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#4
Another excellent OS dear. Thank you very much for it. Keep on updating it.
arya1210 thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#5
Wow chievli.What an ss.Jo kam mai nhi kar saka wo tumne ka diya.Love natz bonding with rishi.Waiting for next part.Updste soon
ManazzaShahid12 thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#6
👏 👏 Wao Achelvi just fab no word's for it so cute touching and an emotional just loves it please continue waiting for next
cuteariya thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 8 years ago
#7
very interesting concept
poor Natasha got fever when tanuja didn't let her to talk rishi 😭
when rishi heard Natasha being sick he just came to take care of her 😃
awe seeing her Mr handsome Natasha got so happy 😃
abhi & tanuja got surprised seeing how rishi made her drink soup & take her medicine 😲
it was emotional moment for tanshi & for abhi is was surprise
somehow abhi suspect seeing tanuja behavior
after yrs rishi got to eat & drink from tanuja's hand 🤗
hope Natasha will recover soon
continue plz
Achelvi thumbnail
Visit Streak 500 Thumbnail Visit Streak 365 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 8 years ago
#8
Part 2

Rishi then tells natz that he thinks he should leave as she is fine now. Natz - please Mr. Handsome, mujhe chod kar mat jao na. mujhe aapke saath khelna hai and bahut saari baat karni hai. Rishi - accha teek hai, abhi ruk jata hoon, par sirf shaam tak, ok cutie pie. Natz nods and both hi-fi. Rishi calls MP and asks him to drop tanya to school and to get a set of his clothes and to attend the meeting in his place with AK as he will be with natz. MP tells him not to worry and ahana is making tanya ready for school. Natz goes and removes her clothes from cupboard and asks Mr. Handsome wat she should wear. Rishi selects a frock for her and natz says they are her favorite and tells him to wait and not go anywhere till she comes back from bath. Rishi asks her if he can bathe her today. Natz giggles and says she has grown up and has bath by herself. Rishi tells her u are like my daughter and how he bathes tanya also. Natz agrees.

Tanuja comes and sees both of them not there, she hears voices from bathroom and checks and sees both of them are playing with water and is surprised to see rishi bathing natz as she doesnt allow her also nowadays. Rishi brings her outside and dresses her up and pins her hair and both come down. Natz goes to AK and tells him how Mr. Handsome got her ready. AK picks her up and asks how she is feeling. Natz says she is fine and how Mr. Handsome took care of her. Door bell rings and AK goes to check. MP has come with ahana. MP introduces ahana to AK and goes to natz and asks her how she is. Natz says she is fine, ahana also comes and asks her how she is feeling. Natz asks who she is, MP tells her she is his wife, ahana. Natz - ahana, oh toh main aapki carbon copy aur aap meri maasi ho. Tanuja comes and hugs ahana and asks how she is. Ak wonders why he is feeling like these ppl know each other and there is something he doesnt know. Rishi sees AK's surprised look.

Rishi goes to AK and tells him MP will attend the meeting with him and he will take care of natz and he need not worry as ahana has also come to give company to tanuja. AK tells him thanks. Tanuja asks them to have breakfast. Tanuja serves aloo ke paratha to MP, MP tells her after so many days he had such delicious parathas and how they are rishi's fav. AK thinks how tanuja knows wat rishi likes and wat he doesnt. MP gives rishi his clothes and AK and MP leave for the meeting.

Rishi tells natz to be with tanuja and ahana and he will have bath in the meantime. Rishi goes to tanuja's room to have bath. Rishi comes out having bath and is wearing his t-shirt which gets stuck in his head as he didnt remove the button. Tanuja comes to her room and sees rishi struggling. She comes and unbuttons and helps him. Rishi thanks her. Tanuja tells him to come for breakfast. Ahana is feeding natz soup when rishi comes. Tanuja serves him paratha. Seeing rishi enjoying the paratha, natz insists on having one. Rishi feeds her and she says they are so yum and asks tanuja why she never made them before for her. Rishi looks at tanuja and then tells natz from now on, mom will make. After done with breakfast, rishi asks tanuja for meds and makes natz have it.

Rishi takes natz back to her room and natz tells rishi how much she enjoys boxing and tells him the stories about london and how she twisted a boy's hand. Ahana comes and tells rishi she is helping tanuja with lunch and to call her if he needs anything and leaves from there. Natz - Mr. Handsome aapka naam rishi hai. Rishi - yes cutie pie and asks wat happ. Natz - maine yeh naam kahin toh suna hai. Rishi - bahut common naam hai, toh suna hoga. Nats starts thinking and tells him she heard her mom take it once. Rishi asks her wen. Natz tells him during boxing match in London and how her mom shouted rishi. Rishi thinks about his boxing match and remembers how he felt tanuja was calling him and feels happy that tanuja still feels his pain.

In kitchen, tanuja and ahana are talking. Tanuja tells ahana tanya is very sweet girl. Ahana - sweet toh hogi, apni mom pe jo gayi hai. Tanuja looks surprised and says - nahi toh, woh toh bilkul uss chipkali jaise nahi hai. Ahana - woh chipkali meri tanya ke mom nahi hai. Tanuja - toh phir. Ahana - tanya smiley ki beti hai. Tanuja - smiley ki beti and then inquires about smiley. Ahana starts crying and tells her smiley is no more. Tanuja feels shocked and hugs ahana and both cry. Tanuja then finally says she never thought she would never meet her again. Ahana then tells her how because of her young age, she had complications and doctor couldnt save her during delivery.

Ahana then tells her how rishi was broken after she had gone and had once again become lifeless like when tanu left him. She tells her how rishi took care of smiley as his own daughter and how after smiley's death, he started to care for tanya and she became the reason for his living. Tanuja then inquires about tanya calling netra mom. Ahana - woh toh mummyji ke wajah se, mom ne kaha usse tanya ka khayal rakne uski mom banke taaki rishi usse apna le, isliye woh uski mom bani hui hai. Ahana tells rishi is not married to netra and is still waiting for her to return and how much he loves her. Tanuja is shocked to hear all this, but feels happy hearing that rishi is not married.

Ahana then tells her she doesnt know exactly wat had happ between them but rishi only loves her and how much he regretted letting her go. Ahana tells how rishi sufferred coz netra made her sign property papers, tanuja then tells she herself signed the papers and she didnt leave him coz of papers. Ahana then tells her how rishi thinks she left him coz she thinks he and netra made her sign papers by cheating her and how she felt cheated and left him. Ahana tells rishi didnt ask netra to make her sign papers and that netra did all this by herself and rishi had nothing to do with it. Tanuja is shocked to hear that rishi thinks she left him coz of papers. Tanuja tells ahana netra lied to them, she herself signed papers and how papers went missing and rishi thought she didnt sign and went ahead and did engagement.

Ahana tells how rishi was drunk during engagement and rano convinced him you only loved money and not him and in anger he went and did engagement and how much he regrets doing it and coz of which he lost her. Tanuja tells she didnt leave him coz of papers. Ahana tells her something is wrong somewhere and asks her to talk to rishi if possible. Tanuja tells her no point in talking about past. Ahana asks tanuja natz is rishi's daughter na. Tanuja doesnt want to lie to ahana and so she tries to change the subject and asks about beeji. Ahana tells how beeji said natz looks like rishi by seeing her photo only and tells tanuja natz behavior resembles rishi and how rishi feels attached to her and talks so much about her and she knows natz is rishi's daughter and not to try to hide it from her. Tanuja doesnt say anything.

Rishi and natz are talking and playing and rishi notices how their likes and dislikes are similar and thinks maybe natz is his daughter. The thought natz being his daughter makes him very happy and he kisses her. He starts thinking maybe tanuja is lying and AK and she are not married and how they are having separate rooms. He feels tanuja can never love anybody else besides him and he can see in her eyes how much she loves him but is hiding it. He thinks he will have to find out the truth. Natz tells rishi lets go outside and play and tells rishi she will run and rishi has to catch her. Rishi agrees.

Natz comes down and rishi is behind her, natz starts running and teases him to catch her. Tanuja sees and smiles. Ahana tells how rishi becomes a child with children around. Natz goes and hides behind tanuja, rishi follows her and bumps on tanuja in attempt to catch natz. He tells sorry and goes behind natz who goes in living area. Ahana's phone rings, tanuja says she will get it which is in living area. Rishi is running behind natz but bumps into tanuja and both fall on sofa. Natz starts laughing. Both share eye lock. Ahana notices and thinks even today they love each other so much and prays for their happiness. Rishi gets up and helps tanuja get up and tanuja takes ahana's phone and leaves from there.

Rishi tells natz no more running, else they make others fall. They both sit and natz asks him to teach her boxing moves. Rishi teaches her and both are seen boxing with natz hitting him and rishi enjoying it. After sometime, rishi asks ahana to play with natz and he will go and pick tanya from school and come. Rishi picks tanya from school and tells sorry to her for not being able to drop her morning. He tells how natz was unwell and so he was with her. He makes tanya understand that since she is elder to natz to take care of her like he takes care of MP and be good to her and not to fight and be good friends. Tanya tells him she will be good as long as natz is good to her. Rishi smiles and thinks these two will be like tom and jerry.

They reach home and tanya asks natz about she is feeling. Natz says she is fine. Tanuja tells them to have lunch. Rishi feeds both tanya and natz and gives meds to natz and asks them to play. Tanuja serves lunch to rishi and ahana, ahana tells her to sit and all three are having lunch. Rishi notices tanuja has made all his fav dishes and he relishes having them after so many years. Ahana also tells after so many years, they are sitting and having food together.

Rishi goes to natz room and sees tanya and her playing, he also joins them. It becomes evening. Rishi then tells natz its time for them to leave and to take care of herself and to call him whenever she feels like and he will be meeting her in school. Natz becomes sad and asks him why cant they all live together like this. Rishi promises her one day they all will be living together and asks her to smile and not to trouble her mom and have her food and meds properly. Natz nods. He hugs and kisses her and they leave from there.

arya1210 thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#9
Love the bounding between rishi and natz .They r just perfect.Wonderfull update dear.Waiting for next part
ManazzaShahid12 thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#10
what amazing piece of imagination i am enjoying it very much waiting for next

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".