TanShi SS: Withstanding Love - Part 4 (last part), pg 9

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Sorry for commenting very late. Beautifully written ss. U just nailed it dear. Emotions were brilliantly expressed. Loved it. Keep writing more will love to read another from urs

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B-onesie

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Posted: 7 years ago

#72

Oh, it was awesome Tessie Pooh.

I could not contain my tears.

I love how you cemented the various relationships, and how realistic it was.

I love how you dealt with Tania's confusion and inner turmoil and her eventual acceptance of her new situation. I am glad that no one just expected her to get over such a big change in her life and gave her room to grieve yet another loss in her life, even though she didn't know her real parents, a child feels the loss of parents irrespective. Healing is a process and here the adults in her life facilitated the process admirably.

I am glad that you showed that Netra had some remorse for her actions and she did not try and poison Tanya against her family. That was the true test of a mother. She finally realised what her own actions cost her and the price was huge.

I love that AK is still in their lives and he has found place in his heart for another princess and even Tanya accepted him as her pappa too. And its nice that a healthy rivalry still existed between the two most important men in Tanu's life (besides her father and father in law of course).

The confrontation between Rano and Tanu was so believable and because they could finally have the conversation, they could then start the healing process. Rano became a real parent and grandparent to all her children and grandchildren and not the matriarch that wanted to rule with an iron fist and connive to get her way.

And most of all I am glad that Tanu is not running away from Rishi as she always did. Yes, indeed the family is growing.😆

Loved the ending and the story Tessie Pooh.

Oopsie, I didn't comment on the last update yet #facepalm#

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B-onesie

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Posted: 7 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

oh hello! commenting before demanding! 😡 😡

Soon ... maybe???

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 7 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: B-onesie
Oh, it was awesome Tessie Pooh.
I could not contain my tears.
I love how you cemented the various relationships, and how realistic it was.

I love how you dealt with Tania's confusion and inner turmoil and her eventual acceptance of her new situation. I am glad that no one just expected her to get over such a big change in her life and gave her room to grieve yet another loss in her life, even though she didn't know her real parents, a child feels the loss of parents irrespective. Healing is a process and here the adults in her life facilitated the process admirably.

I am glad that you showed that Netra had some remorse for her actions and she did not try and poison Tanya against her family. That was the true test of a mother. She finally realised what her own actions cost her and the price was huge.

I love that AK is still in their lives and he has found place in his heart for another princess and even Tanya accepted him as her pappa too. And its nice that a healthy rivalry still existed between the two most important men in Tanu's life (besides her father and father in law of course).

The confrontation between Rano and Tanu was so believable and because they could finally have the conversation, they could then start the healing process. Rano became a real parent and grandparent to all her children and grandchildren and not the matriarch that wanted to rule with an iron fist and connive to get her way.

And most of all I am glad that Tanu is not running away from Rishi as she always did. Yes, indeed the family is growing.😆

Loved the ending and the story Tessie Pooh.

Oopsie, I didn't comment on the last update yet #facepalm#

facepalm indeed! 😆

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 7 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: B-onesie

Soon ... maybe???

Maybe?? Maybe?? 😡 😡 No! Rather, soonest of soon!

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Posted: 7 years ago

#76

Wao I don't know exactly what to say but you did phenomenal job dear 👏 what a amazing piece of writing really love this your update is fill with so many emotions at one time like sad, care, love, naughtiness,and so many really like this espescially love the ending a healthy and full of happiness keep writing 😃 till we are waiting for your another os on tanshi whenever you write 😉

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 7 years ago

#77

Tessa sorry for the late reply part 2 Awesome ⭐️ will read the other parts and comment 😆

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 7 years ago

#78

Nice update Tessie poo ⭐️😆 part 3

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 7 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410
Nice update Tessie poo ⭐️😆 part 3

I see you are on a reading spree Didi, no complaints from me 😆

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 7 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: Divya333
Great ending...loved the way you presented Tanya n Tanuja relation to happy relation...liked Netra character...Coming to our Tanshi they are super cute n their romance as usual awesome n their four cute children...coversation between Rano n Tanuja is nice...once again great ending

I'm happy that you were satisfied with the ending Divya, thank you for reading my stories, appreciate it! 😃