kasam ff aye hai wo waapis next part on pg 4

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hi i am going to write ff on tanshi hope you'll like it it starts after tanu's death
RISHI SINGH BEDI: moody, egoistic khadoos always busy in work but somewhere in heart looking for other tanu other love
TANUJA : BUBBLY,CHIRPY,FUNNY PARENTS DIED LIVES WITH SANDY AND HER DAUGHTERS
reincarneted form of tanu

NIDI AND VIDI: sisters of tanuja really good love tanuja nidi a little egoistic and show as if she doesnot like tanuja but in her heart always with tanuja and support the right vidi cares and love tanuja both sisters love tanuja like sandy

RANO AND RAJ : mother and father of rishi both love their son both have a huge respect for tanu rano really respectful towards tanu after her sacrifice for rishi

BANI AND NEHA: hate tanuja and revengeful towards bedi family greedy

MUNPREET AND YUVRAJ : BROS Of rishi both love rishi

AHANA: sister of tanu

scene 1:
sandy,bani,neha,tanuja,nidiand vidi on a wedding of their nearest family members
coincidently raj and family also come their rishi also go to attend wedding all embrace and meet other people during this suddenly lights go off . A spotlight is seen, there a girl stands ready for dance her hair flowing no body can see her face.to be continued...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wao one more ff on tanshi update soon me waiting for it ZOHA and tumne to first scene mein excited kr diya carry on dear 👍🏼
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Wood love the starting part.Please update soon can't wait more.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Really good can't wait. Update soon
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Interesting concept
Waiting for next chapter
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a girl in a spot light ready for dance it is none other than nidi she dances and everybody likes her moves. out of many people a young girl comes out and go outside she is tanuja a 20 yr old beautiful girl she looks bored she takes out earphones and starts listening to music she enjoys it from behind vidi comes
VIDI: tanuja to idhar kya kar rahi hai to nay nidi ka dance nahi dekhna??
T: wo dance jo main pichle 3 dino sey 101 dafa dekh chuki hun yaar saara din to nidi practise karti rahi hai aur yeh gana sun sun kar bhi thak gayi hun tum bore nahi hui
V: wo toh hai waisay to kuon sa gaana sun rahi hai ??
vidi takea the earphones and listens song aj din chadeya playing
V:TANUJA! yeh gano to1001 dafa sun chuki ho gi iss sey bore nahi hui kya???
T: mujhe khud nahi pata? yeh gana mere dil kay buhat kareeb hai really heart touching song iss sey toh main kabhi bore nahi hun gi pata nahi kuon jaisay yeh mujhe apnay kisi ki yaad dilata ho!!
V;haan uss RAKSHAS ki yaad dilata hai
T: shut up yaar ja tujhe nani aur chachi dhoond rahi hain jao un kay pass jao

vidi nods and go away tanuja looks at the moon and get mesmerised by her beauty
on the other hand the wedding couple dances at a romantic song rishi remembers his and tanu's dance he gets disturbed and go outside
rishi goes to outside he notices a girl looking at the moon he sees the moon and remembers tanu
T: chand to toh saari baaton ka saakshi hai chacha gi kehte hain kay main kisi maqsad sey ayi hun kisi ki kasam poori karnay aye hun kya yeh saach hai
R:chand uss ney kaha tha kay wo apna maqsad poora karnay aye gi apni kasam poori karnay aye gi kya wo waaqai aye gi??
T:par main kis kay liye ayi hun kiss ki kasam poori karnay aye hun kis sey waada kar kay ayi hun??
R: wo mere liye aya gi meri kasam poori karnay kay liye aye gi uss ney mujh sey waada kya tha
T: agar yeh sach hai toh wo kahan hai kya mein uss kay kareeb hun??
R: TANU MEIN YAHAN HUN! mein tumhare buhat kareeb hun tumhare dil kay kareeb hun tum nay khud kaha tha kay tum raho ya na raho tum mere hamesha saath raho gi , kareeb raho gi! WAAPIS A JAO!!
T: agar yeh sach hai to mainWAAPIS A GAI HUN HAN MEIN USS KAY LIYE WAAPIS A GAI HUN!!

tanuja comes out of her dreams and starts listening to the music and enjoys it suddenly rishi puts his hand on broken glass pieces of window he cries tanuja could not listen due to earphones rishi looks at tanuja but could only see her back as rishi touch his hand and feels pain tanuja feels a strange breeze

R: kaisi larki hai main chilaya aur iss ney ik dafa peeche mur kay naa dekha courtesy naam ki koi cheez bhi hoti hai lagta hai maa baap ney koi tameez nahi sikhai main iss sey double umar ka hun ga elders ki khidmat aur respect kartay hain jaisay tanu karti thi jab bhi kisi baday ko khaansi bhi a jati thi toh tanu forun uss kay liye paani lay ati thi unn ki help karti thi par aj kal ki larkiyan in larkiyon ko acchi tarah dey jaanta hun ameer larka dekha nahi toh uss kay liye sympathy aur pyaar a jata hai waisay yeh hai kuon???

suddenly munpreet comes and sees rishi's bleeding hand
M: bhai yeh kya khoon?? ao main iss par dawa laga deta hun
R: IK minute
rishi wanted to see her face but munpreet insists and rishi goes from there as rishi goes, tanuja feels a strange heart beat and feels pain in her hand as if her hand is cut she turns around and only sees a man going from there he is rishi but tanuja can see only his back
bgm sunna sunna
T: yeh kya hua mujhe ik dam sey mera haath toh theek hai par yeh dard
she looked confused
to be continued...
next: rano and bani encounter rano looks astonished and at the same time angry
Edited by zoha7865 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow love the update.Tanshi sole connection was perfectly shown.Plz continue.Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome yar kamal kr diya kya soul connection update thi update soon waiting for it eagerly
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Originally posted by: ayra1210

Wow love the update.Tanshi sole connection was perfectly shown.Plz continue.Update soon

thanxs😛😳
Edited by zoha7865 - 8 years ago
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Awesome yar kamal kr diya kya soul connection update thi update soon waiting for it eagerly[/QUOTE
thank you manazza☺️😳

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