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Posted: 8 years ago
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scene 2
bani encounters rano rano surprised
R: bani tu?!
B:HELLO RANO GI! kaisi hain aap
bani tries to hug her but rano push her aside
R: chal hat teri himat kaisay hui mujhe galay milnay ki tujhe sharam nahi ayi uss tanu ko marwa kar bhi itni khush hai koi sharam nahi hai! aray tujhe toh sharam kay maarne dood jana chahiye
B[in fit of fury] haan toh kya karo uss ke gham mein maatam karon cholo maar gayi buhat accha hua waisay bhi uss ki wajah sey humare saarey khawab armaan sab toot gay mein toh kehti hun kay uss kay saath theek hua
R: kitni girri hui hai tanu jaisi larki har jaga nahi hoti lakhon mein ik hoti hai iss ka ehsas mujhe tab huwa jab uss ney mere betay apnay pyaar kay liye jaan qurban kar di bhala aisa pyaar kahan hota hai mein toh kehti hun bhagwan aisi betian sab ko dey aur tum jaisay logon sey baachae
B: BAS RANO GI MEIN NAY BUHAT SUN LLIYA mein khamosh hun iss ka yeh matlab nahi kay mare munn mein zubaan nahi hai!
R; shukr kar raj gi munpreet aur yuvraj aur sab sey bada RISHI bahar hain warna wo tumhein zinda zameen par gardh de
bani thinks that she is right they should go or otherwise rishi would not leave them she goes to neha

B; chal neha
N; oh ho mummy kya hua
B: yeh puch kya nahi hua rano aur raj veer gi yahan hain aur un kay saath rishi bhi hai chal jaldi sey ghar chal warna wo log humain chorain gay nahi

neha sees rano and decides to go she says to her relatives that she is sick so they are going back home she calls sandy and tells she is not feeling well and that they should go back home they apologize to thier relatives and bani,neha,sandy,tanuja,nidi and vidi go back home

next: tanuja and her sisters come to mumbai after the panchayat decision [it is same of the kasam story] bani makes a fake letter of her cancer they all arrive to mumbai next rishi and tanuja encounter in temple
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
Wow tanshi soul connection
Rishi got hurt but tanuja felt the pain
Love how rano talk to that bloody bani
Oh god tanuja going to Mumbai & that bani gave them fake latter
Hope rishi & his families won't misunderstand tanuja
Continue plz
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hey guys i am writing the ff from there when rishi had an encounter with tanuja in temple. i am imagining it like this. i hope you'll like it
tanuja going to bani's house with her sis. she sees the temple and ask bani to go there. bani makes a disgusted face but then allows her.she goes to temple and get some flashes of tanshi marriage.wind is blowing hard on the other hand rishi is standing

R:[with his eyes closed] plz maa mujhe tanu waapis de do tanu lot kar a jao mere paas a jao. mujh sey ab raha nahi jaa raha tanu waapis a jao...

from behind tanuja comes.she prays to maa kali.she is standing behind rishi.she couldnot see his face only his back. tanuja finishes her praying and goes to take maa kali ashirwaad and prasad in a hurry ignoring rishi. as tanuja takes the prasad thaali some flowers in the thaal fall down due to wind.she bends to take the flowers.

R;[IN HIS HEART crying] maa tanu ko mere saamne laa de...

as he opens his eyes he sees a girl collecting flowers.he couldnot see her face.he turns back.meanwhile tanuja stands up and see rishi going without taking maa's aashirwaad and prasad.she founds him weird.she could omly see his back

T: array ...ap maa ka aashirwaad lena bhool gaye.
rishi ignores her.
T: chaley yeh prasad le lein. ap ki iccha jald pori ho gi
rishi trying to hide his tears from tanuja. he does not look at tanuja in order to hide his weeping face from tanuja

R: jo mein chata hun kya wo mujhe dein sakti hain??? jo mein maang raha hun wo mujhe waapis mil sakta hai? mujhe nahi lagta

T: zaaror agar maa lein saakti hain toh waapis de bhi sakti hain infact issi yakeen ki wajah sey toh ap iss mandir mein aye hain aur kya pata jo ap chatey hain wo apke saamne ho apko mil chuka ho apke buhat kareeb ho bus ap dekh nahi sak rahay ho.ye lein prasad le lein maa apki tamna jald pori karey

rishi extends his hand backwards without looking at her. tanuja gives rishi prasad.as they touch each other both feel a current. rishi's heart beat fastens. he closes his eyes and remembers tanu and his moments. tanuja left confused. nidi signs tanuja to come as rain starts. tanuja takes some prasad. as she goes her dupatta comes on rishi's face bgm[sunna sunna]. rishi feels happy and relaxed. he enjoys the fragrance. tanuja goes from there. as rishi comes out of his world of fantasies he founds no body there. he looks here and there but finds no one

R: maa... wo tanu..meri tanu.. meri tanu waapis a gai . wo larki wo kahan hai aisa kuon laga jaisay mein usse jaanta hun jaisay wo mujhe janti hai . jaisay wo hum ik dosre ko barson se jante hon. aisa mujhe tanu key saath laga tha kahin wohi to tanu nahi?...[ suddenly rishi remebers tanu's death and cries]..nahi wo tanu kaisay ho sakti hain tanu to chali gai. wo toh 20 saal sey door hai toh ab kaisay ae gi aur agar wahi tanu hoti toh wo jaati hi kuon. wo mujhe bata deti kay wahi tanu hai

rishi goes and remembers that girls words. he feels a strong breeze and remembers his and tanuja's current scene. on the other hand tanuja is left confused


NEXT PART; rano gets bani's fake letter rano allows all 3 sisters to live in storeroom[same of original story] RISHI finds tanuja's sisters in store room[and not tanuja] rishi takes them and asks rano and raji about those girls
Edited by zoha7865 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Really love ur ff .Please continue.wating for next part . Wating for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ayra1210

Really love ur ff .Please continue.wating for next part . Wating for next



thanks ayra for your appreciation 😳😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Pls update soon can't wait
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wao ye zayada acha imagination hai really amazing please update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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the ff starts when bani and neha tells their plan to nidi and vidi. tthe same plan of making nakul fall in love with them
V: nahi nani aur mom. yeh galat hai. apnay liye kisi aur ka iss tarah istamaal karna not a good idea
N: yah vidi is right

bani and neha start emotional blackmailing
B: dekho larkio humare paas kuch bhi nahi hai. abhi naha ayi hai aur waapis apnay gaon chali jae gi aur mein zyada der tak tum larkion ko paal nahi sukon gi. mein toh mushkilon sey apnay aur tumhare nana ka ghar karch pora karti hun aise tum teeno ko palna theek nahi.[with fake tears and story] larkion tumhe nahi pata tumhare baap ka buhat nuqsaan hua hai aur wo chatey hain kay tum logon ki jaldi sey acchi jaga shaadi ho jae takay usse bhi sukon mile. uss ne tumhain bataya nahi par mein tum logon ko bata rahi hun. aur mein thodi na keh rahi hun kay uss nakul key saath kuch galat kar rahi hun. wo buhat acchay log hain aur yaqeenqn wo larka bhi buhat accha ho ga iss liye mein aur tumahri mom chatey hain kay tum mein sey koi dono uss sey shaadi karlo. tumhain buhat acchi zindagi mile gi aur humain bhi sukon mile ga aur mein tum logo ka zyaada deir karcha nahi utha sakti to tum logo ko yeh baat mani paray gi.

nidi and vidi agrees. bani makes a fake letter and informs the girls not to tell to tanuja and tells them that bedi family is very angry at them but they will accept their apology. bani says to tanuja that they have a family so those girls can live there as bani cannot meet their needs. tanuja can live there until she gets a job. tanuja and her sis go there. rano agrees only for the sake of poor girls and ask them to find job as soon as possible and raj and rano warns those girls not to tell their identities. they all agree and live in storeroom.

at morning tanuja goes out to find a job. rishi is just passing through the store room as he needed something from there. he finds nidi and vidi there. he take them and ask raj and rano that how these girls came here.rano tells that they are their distant family members and are orphan girls. they needed a shelter so they gave them. rano ask N and V about tanuja's whereabouts so they tell that she is gone to search a job.rano tells rishi that they have a sis and that she is finding job. as soon as she gets a job they will find another place. rishi agrees

tanuja comes home after desperately finding a job but all in vain. nidi and vidi tells tanuja about rishi and that they are going outside to meet their friends and ask tanu to take rest. tanu takes a bath and come outside. rishi realize that he has left his wallet there. he goes to store room. there he sees a girl that is tanuja. light starts to flicker. tanuja turns around and sees rishi. rishi gets mesmerized by tanuja. tanuja gets flash backs of his and tanu moments[ bgm. aj din chreya]

R: kuon ho tum?? [staring at tanuja]
T: [tanuja realizes that he may be rishi whom nidi and vidi met] wo mein...
R: wo mein kya??
T: wo mein nidi aur vidi ki behan
R: nidi aur vidi??? [ rishi looks confused and then remembers the girl] accha to tum un ki behan ho. okay.

T: apko kuch chaye tha
R: wo mujhe apna wallet chaye that wo idhar ghum gaya hai
rishi and tanu starts searching it. tanuja and rishi finds it at same time. both reach to take it and both feel a acurrent after touching each other hands.[ bgm suun sunna]

rishi remembers tanuja in temple. tanuja is confused and feels a strange connection with him. she smiles unconsiciously. rishi looks at her. he is confused. he couldnot breathe properly. he starts to cough. tanuja give him glass of water. he drinks it while staring at her and remembers when he kept fast for tanu and was drinking water with her.

R: tumhara naam kya hai?
T: TANU
R: taaannnuu...
T: JA... i mean tanuja, meri behnain mujhe tanu bolti hain
rishi remembers tanu his head hurts, he panics and goes from storeroom

next; Rishi remembers tanuja and his current scene and goes to storeroom to see her again.
Edited by zoha7865 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Love the update and Tanshi soul connection update soon.Wating for next update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
Hi thx to write ff
Read all the parts they are lovely n superb
Please do pm me for next updt
If possible add pg num on your updt

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