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Posted: 8 years ago
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Here is my new FF not new its continuation of previous FF i dont have many ppl in buddy list to send pm ..those who wants me to send pm please add me to ur buddy list..i ll update it whenever i get some time..please do comment thanks 😆



Scene starts from a kid who is running here and there and his mom is calling him as rishabh

Lady rishu main keh rahi hun khana khalo 😕

Risu nahin mumma main khana nahi kaaunga aapne mujhe video games nahi di

Lady main keh rahi hun chup chap khalo

Rish main nahi kaaoonga mathlab nahi kaaoonga😡

Lady theek hai main bhi nahi khaaongi

Rish sees are angry face and thinks he should not do to this to his mumma😃

He comes to her and asks her sorry mumma maaf kardo mujhe main kha loonga 😆she remembers something and she smiles 😆its none other than our tanu 😆


Rishi is office he is shouting on everyperson he sees

Staff: ye boss ithna khadoos kaise ban gaya phirse

Guy: patha nahi maine suna ki unki biwi unhe chod ke chali gayi

Staff : kya par kyun??

Guy : patha nahi suddenly rishi taps him from back and says hogaya gossip ab chalo jao apne kaam karo 😲

Rishi finishes his work and sees tanu pic on his desk and remembers that night when they spent together he remembers how happy he was with her

R: kaha ho tanu plz mere pass aajo main tumhare bina aise hi mar jaaonga theen saal beeth gaya abhi thak nahi ayi tum..

Rishi reaches bedi house after his work

Rano : calls him for food and he leaves angrily

Ahana observes this and takes a food for rishi

R freshens up and comes outside and sees ahana

A : bahuth pyar karthe ho na usse

R : jaan se bhi zyada

A : phir lekar kyun nahi aathe usse

R: maine usse har jagah doondha lekin woh mili nayi..main roya gidgidaya lekin woh mili nahi

A : agar uss din aisa nahi hotha toh shayad T hamare saath hothi

And they remembers that day when purab exposed ,rano could not able to digest the fact that she failed in her mission

She goes to her room and takes poison and announces that if tanu stays here she will die and falls unconsious they take her to hospital

Tanu goes to hospital sees rishi crying she is not able to console him

She decides to take a major step that is to let mother and son to stay together and to leave them as they were before..

She goes to BH packs her bag leaves from there

R realizes that tanu is missing from hospital.. he goes to BH and sees she is not there ..he reads her letter which says she dont want to come between rano n rishi.. she is leaving with her own wish and bids a gud bye to him

R is broken and starts searching every where and become living dead

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yar really awesome start 👏 loved this please update next part soon it's really interesting 😃
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Wonderfull starting. 👍🏼 Rishi became kudos live before because of rano 😡 .Wow tanshi baby I am sure he will be like his father. Please update soon 👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Diyuu kitna emotional bnaya hai ye ff tumne 😭 . U r truly a fabulous writer my queenie
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome diyu. ...hayee let's nacho...wo aa gya 😉 itna emotional.. 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: diya_pv

Here is my new FF not new its continuation of previous FF i dont have many ppl in buddy list to send pm ..those who wants me to send pm please add me to ur buddy list..i ll update it whenever i get some time..please do comment thanks 😆



Scene starts from a kid who is running here and there and his mom is calling him as rishabh

Lady rishu main keh rahi hun khana khalo 😕

Risu nahin mumma main khana nahi kaaunga aapne mujhe video games nahi di

Lady main keh rahi hun chup chap khalo

Rish main nahi kaaoonga mathlab nahi kaaoonga😡

Lady theek hai main bhi nahi khaaongi

Rish sees are angry face and thinks he should not do to this to his mumma😃

He comes to her and asks her sorry mumma maaf kardo mujhe main kha loonga 😆she remembers something and she smiles 😆its none other than our tanu 😆


Rishi is office he is shouting on everyperson he sees

Staff: ye boss ithna khadoos kaise ban gaya phirse

Guy: patha nahi maine suna ki unki biwi unhe chod ke chali gayi

Staff : kya par kyun??

Guy : patha nahi suddenly rishi taps him from back and says hogaya gossip ab chalo jao apne kaam karo 😲

Rishi finishes his work and sees tanu pic on his desk and remembers that night when they spent together he remembers how happy he was with her

R: kaha ho tanu plz mere pass aajo main tumhare bina aise hi mar jaaonga theen saal beeth gaya abhi thak nahi ayi tum..

Rishi reaches bedi house after his work

Rano : calls him for food and he leaves angrily

Ahana observes this and takes a food for rishi

R freshens up and comes outside and sees ahana

A : bahuth pyar karthe ho na usse

R : jaan se bhi zyada

A : phir lekar kyun nahi aathe usse

R: maine usse har jagah doondha lekin woh mili nayi..main roya gidgidaya lekin woh mili nahi

A : agar uss din aisa nahi hotha toh shayad T hamare saath hothi

And they remembers that day when purab exposed ,rano could not able to digest the fact that she failed in her mission

She goes to her room and takes poison and announces that if tanu stays here she will die and falls unconsious they take her to hospital

Tanu goes to hospital sees rishi crying she is not able to console him

She decides to take a major step that is to let mother and son to stay together and to leave them as they were before..

She goes to BH packs her bag leaves from there

R realizes that tanu is missing from hospital.. he goes to BH and sees she is not there ..he reads her letter which says she dont want to come between rano n rishi.. she is leaving with her own wish and bids a gud bye to him

R is broken and starts searching every where and become living dead

Pls continue it's amazing.Pls update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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A nice and emotional one. Plss continue soon.
Edited by Lornab - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very good work
U really rock dear
All the best
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Posted: 8 years ago
#9
Thanks a lot everyone i ll update next part today itself stay tuned😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: diya_pv

Thanks a lot everyone i ll update next part today itself stay tuned😆


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