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Hello my buddies first sorry for late updt but i promise to give you a superb updt .


Here we go thx for show me your interest in my work it motivate me more to write 😃.


Kismat Connection




Part 4



It start where it stop in the airport where tanshi miss to met each ever .



Raj ask rano n beeji to wait he will go to search for a cab ... beeji get thirst rano ask her to sit she will bring water for her n leave ... beeji was walking to sit but get dizzy ... she was about to fall tanu hold her n make her sit ... she show concern for her on asking ... if she is ok ... beeji felt a strange attachment to her ... she caress her face n said yes ... tanu offer her water to drink ... which she drink ... she thx her on asking if she is from panjab ... she reply yes with her sweet voice n cute smile ... beeji felt she is good for rishi as life partner ... she admire her look her way talking how she has respect caring for elders ... she like her as we said she win beeji heart .


" Aap akele hai ? aap ke saath koi nahin hai beeji ? " ... tanu ask with her sweet voice .


" Nahin meri bahu pani laine gayi hai aur beta cab ko ... tumne muhje beeji kahan ... bohat acha laga jiteraho " ... beeji check on her foerhead n neck if she is married or not .


" Woh aapko dek kar mujhe meri beeji ki yaad agayi isiliye ... im sorry agar apko bura laga " .



" Arey nahin mujhe bahot acha laga ... tum bohat achi ladki ho sanskari bhi ... tumhari chaadi houwi hai ? " .



" Jee nahin acha mein chalti hoon meri behen mera intizar kar rahi hogi " ... she take bless from her n leave .



Beeji was happy n pray to make her n rishi met n want her to be her DIL ... she is perfect for their rishi .


Other path we saw rano who was having problem with water filter ahana saw her ... she go to her n ask her if she need help ... n rano told her what happen ... ahana told her she has water n give it to her ... rano was please on her ... how she help stranger ... rano thx her n she ask where she is from ... ahana told her from panjab since her birth ... rano feel she is perfect for her son ... she will surely bring him in right path ... she has all quality which a DIL should have ... ahana leave her with smile on face .


Rano meet beeji both shared they found girl for rishi ... rano said her choice ... beeji said her choice ... both get argument on it then maanshi stop them ... " Beeji mum yeh jaga hai larne ka ? " ... rishi ask both ... " Han bhai ko jawab dijiye kya baat hai kahin aap do choro hojstey ho " ... maanpreet too ask them ..." Arey meine na rishi keliye ek chuchil ladki mili aur rano ko pasan nahin hai woh kehti hai usski wali hogi " ... beeji reply them ... " Mujhe na pura yakeen hai jisse meine pasan kiya woh hi bilkul tik hogi rishi ke liye " ... rano reply .


Both bros got their point n both decide to close the chapter there maanpreet said " Tik hai aapdo no nei ladki deka to simple jo beeji ne pasan kiya wih rishi bhai shadi karega aur jo mum ne saan kiya usse mein shadi karuga ab kuch apdo no right bhai ? " ... maanpreet wink at him to agree only to stop both argument ... which he did a yes sign n take maan in a corner n pull his ears ... " Ye kya kahan ... tum jan te ho na ye do no mere piche pare hai shadi ka aur tumne han kahan chotey " ... " Bhai kahan unlogo ko pata hai woh dono ladki kaun hai kahan ki hai bas tainchain na loo bas " ... he make him understand ... which he too believe him n both did a high five n hug .


Rano n beeji was happy to see rishi accept to marry n that too their choice ... rano said now they will search for both girl then they can married both sons ... both bro walk to check about their flight info ... rishi got a call he start walking n talk ... maanpreet search if he could get a hot sexy girl to flirt n was not watching his way n hit with ahana ... where both get angry ... " Ay moti dek kar nahin chalsakti kya ? " ... maanpreet show her his glare look ... " Oye sukre moti ko kis ko bola han ? " ... pointing her finger to him ... " Moti ko moti na boloon to kya kahoon bhais " ... he did fun to her ... " Tumne mujhe bhais kahan ... tum tipkali jaise ho ... agar mein iss dhai kilo haant tumpar kiya to tum yehin zamin mein rehjate " ... showing her punch to him ... " Tum ladki ho ya ladka tum ladki ho hi nahin sakte ... tum nahin jantey ke mein kaun hoon kahan se ayahoon " ... did glare look to her ... " Kyun tum prince ho ... ya koi badshah ho han jo mujhe maloom honi chahiye han ... to bi mujhe par asar nahin karne waly ... tum sorry bolo tumne takar mari " ... " Kya mein aur sorry oh hello tumne takkar mari meine nahin itni moti ho pirbi andhi ho sorry tumko keihni chahiye samji " ... showing his attitude to her ... " Koshich karna ke tumko kabi bi pir se na mil loon sukre " ... " Kiss ne kahan tumko milna pasand ho ga mujhe tuj jaise bhais ke liye waqt nahin hai please go away " ... both turn there face n walk opposite side .



Tanshi was walking in different way both collapse with each ever ... tanu was about to fall but he pull her to him n hold her by her waist ... her hand was on his shoulder ... both look at other one n all around them got freezes peoples who walks ... sitting standing drinking talking ... every things was freezes ... out side airport too birds stop where they were flying ... waves from sea ... clouds it was like whole panjab got freezes like earth sky bow from tanshi met ... likes its from god blessing due of tanshi met ... only tanshi was not freezes ... the atmosphere change into romantic with wind blowing balloons fly in air with song in back ground .



Song was played it was Tera Chehra Jab Nazar Aye ..


Ye Zameen Ruk jaye..
Aasman jhuk jaye..
Tera Chehra jab
Nazar Aaye ...
Hoo ... tera
Chehra jab
nazar aayeee...


Both was lost in other eyes ... their heart beat fastest ... their eyes sparkling ... tanu blink her eyes to know if it a dream or not ... both felt strange as they know other one ... rishi did not remove his eyes from hers ... he feel his eyes was searching her ... the restless which he felt was vanish ... her beauty make him lost every thing ... he wanted time stop there n she remain in his arms ... he wanted to hold her more close to him ... his heart was happy ... her eyes said lots of thing as he recognize them ... he never felt like this with other girl before ... he wonder what was the feeling which was increase inside him ... why feel he got what his heart wanted ... he try to control his emotion but could not its like he give her all power to control him ... who is she why he feel so closeness to her ... why this attraction toward her ... he feel he will fight to get her ... she made for him .


Tanu heart beat fast ... she think it god hint to her ... she felt a strange attraction toward him ... his eyes was saying lots of things ... she never felt like this with mahesh ... the restless was vanish ... her heart was happy ... why she want to stay with him more longer like this in his arms ... why she is unable to take a step out ... why she feel weak in his arms ... what relation do they have ... what connection do they shared ... what is that she can fight with any one for him ... feel peace in his arms ... is he the one who god has sent for her .


Song cont played

Tu khafa hojaye
Raat abhi hojaye
Bin tere Aanchal
Mein chup jaye..
Chup jaye...



Both broke their trance she walk away ... without seeing her duppatta was stuck in his watch ... he was following her while she was walking ... he was lost in her n was following her ... he was ready for any thing for her ...


Tu agar keh dey
Mujhe ... Chand bhi ley
Aaoon me ... jaane jaan ..
Jaane jaan
Ik taara mang le..
Aasman le aaon
Jaane jaan jaane jaan


She realize he was following her ... she turn n did a what sign to him ... he show her his watch n duppata ... she go close n try to remove it ... same time he too put his hand ... their hand touch with other one ... they get a electric shock n remove it ... he did a let it be he will do it to her ... she admire him in an intense look while he was trying to remove it ... she had a cute smile on face on seeing him struggle with it ... she too did a sign she will do it n remove it on showing how it was easy ... rishi was not ready to let her go ... he wanted to stay more with her on staring her ... she leave with a cute smile ... which he could die with her smile ... he too did smile to her .



Every things become normal as before rishi was still in her thought it was a magical moment which he would never forget that best moment which he feel with her ... but who was she from where she come whats her name he dont know ... he know only he lost his heart to her ... for first time in his life he imagine how its important to have some one it all due of her one clip of her ... he could give his life ... her smile means a lot for him he feel he got all happiness his life has a meaning to live ... he enjoy that new phase of feeling which he got from inside him ... she is special for him ... now he want to know more on her what her name where she is from .


Maanpreet who was still in his anger skin ... he talk to rishi but rishi dont show any interest n keep smile on his face ... which make maanpreet surprise on his attitude n shake him to broke his thought n ask " What happen bhai you in this style ... are you ok what are you thinking ... why im having a feeling some thing has happen ... im right some thing happen hmm tell me bhai ... you met a hot sexy item girl nah " ... in his naughty style .


" No chotey you are wrong ... she is not item girl but a special ... i lost in her i dont know what was that but it was so beautiful pure n a reason to live ... yes chotey if i got her nah i will change my self to be like she like ... that moment i saw her i was all lost i feel we both are made for each ever ... like i was waiting for her ... it was not filrt but a heart to heart connection ... i want to relive that moment ... first time in my life i wanted her to not go from me ... she change me in a second how that possible chotey me rishi singh bedi for first time want to spend whole life with her yes chotey " ... he was in a happy mood with shy smile a new spark from his eyes was shown .



Maanpreet get shocked on his bhai behavior n change he said " Bhai it that you my bhai who dont like or believe in all this thing han ... what happen what does that girl have which brought you in this state ... i never saw you like this after being with a girl but here wow ... bhai beeji horoscope was right you met the one who will change you n me i just met a fatty n fight with her too ... ok tell me her name where she is from " ... he hug rishi in happiness ... " I dont know i did not ask her i did not get time to ask all this i was so lost in her i forget every thing chotey .. i got mad on her " ... he reply back in a confused face .


Both go to others as they saw rishi they found him strange his smile his blushing face ... rano n beeji wonder if he met some one n he has loss himself ... maanpreet told beeji she was right bhai found some one n he has been change he fall in love in one met ... rano beeji was happy on the news they ... both ask about her name ... which he did a no sign to them ... they told him if she is written for him to meet her then he will meet her again then he can ask for her name n address ... they drop rano n beeji till outdoor then take their blessing ... raj ask rishi to not go alone near any bridge as he got dizzy n ask maanpreet to take care of his bhai well ... even to rishi to take care of chotey ... both promise n take their blessing n enter to go as their flight time is near .


Raj pray to protect rishi from all problem ... beeji told him have trust on god as now rishi has change he fall in love with some one pray he met her n she may be the right one for him ... for which she has been born for .


Rano said even she pray she could be right girl for him who can fight for rishi like the little ten years girl did for him when he was eleven years in 19 years ago ... in mumbai we were almost lost him but god send her for him .


FLASH BACK

It was seven at night when it was raining rano ask rishi to not go any where ... it was raining like a cyclone with strong wind was blowing ... rishi was getting bore waiting in mandir for rain to stop ... he went in rain n play with rain like all normal kids do ... suddenly a girl appear there n ask him to go inside it not good for him to be there ... he did not listen to her n walk without watching where he was going in rain ... the little girl try to stop him but he went far ... the girl talk to him then she can divert him back to mandir ... on asking him his name .


" What is your name ? where are you from " ... the cute girl ask him .


"Rishi singh bedi im from panjab ... i came here for wedding of my mum friend n you ? " rishi reply back to her n walk on the edge of the river .


" IM " she shout rishi ... rishi who slip n was hugging he shout for help ... the girl hold his hand to lift him up but due of heavy rain n wind she too was slipping along with him .




she manage to pull him up but her hand slip n she fall down in the river on calling rishi loudly ... rishi could not call her as he dont know her name he was in a shocked state ... he cry loudly due of him a girl lost her life ... when his parents reach there they was shocked on hearing rishi talk on the girl no body know on the girl who she was where she live ... they search her body n found her dead ... pandit said god send her for rishi to save him ... the girl will take another birth n will met rishi again ... both are made for each ever n rishi will be always be happy when he will found her ... but if rishi dont get her till 3o years he will have to marry with the one whom kundali met with his others wise his life will be in danger ... raj take his family n went in America to settle down to forget every thing n never came back again in mumbai .

Flash back end

Raj beeji n rano sit in cab n maanshi ahanu in same plane for mumbai without seeing each ever again .

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THAT IT GUYS END OF PART 4 I HOPE I HAVE BEEN ABLE MAKE IT MEMORABLE MEETING OF TANSHI GUYS 😃.


PLEASE DO LIKE N LEAVE YOUR COMMENTS TOO


NEXT : TANSHI MET IN BOUTIQUE RISHI MISUNDERSTAND HER AS PAWAN FIANCEE .


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HANSA 😃
Edited by --HANSA-- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
Update was super awesome. TanShi meet was the highlight of the chapter and obviously my favourite part too. Update next soon!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update Hansa👏
I was just lost in the world of tanshi while reading..
Do update soon.. N thnxx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kapillian_girl

Update was super awesome. TanShi meet was the highlight of the chapter and obviously my favourite part too. Update next soon!!


thank you so much for love it im glad i could reach your expectation 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Me too agree was lost in the world of Tanshi ...very Good loved it ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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super updates OS hansa👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Kamal_

Awesome update Hansa👏
I was just lost in the world of tanshi while reading..
Do update soon.. N thnxx for pm



thank you so much for this comment im so glad you like it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank you
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Originally posted by: saaniakh


Me too agree was lost in the world of Tanshi ...very Good loved it ...



thank you so much for tthis comment im glad you like it
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Originally posted by: Annie_Ali

super updates OS hansa👏👏



thank you so much for comment

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