TanShi Ss ' Kismat Connection ' Updt Part 9 Pg 43 Add 23 /6 - Page 10

Created

Last reply

Replies

259

Views

41k

Users

55

Likes

555

Frequent Posters

Sakkiyah thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#91
Beautiful concept...
Read all the updates in one go...
Rishi and tanu they are connected through their destiny...
In the first part when rishi's hand was bleeding the pain was experienced by tanu...and when tanu was in pain rishi feel it..
And the wrong number call was also nice.
The first meeting of tanshi was well written.
The flash back story was beautifully portrayed.
Eagerly waiting for your next update.
Thanks for the pm
--HANISA-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Beautiful concept...

Read all the updates in one go...
Rishi and tanu they are connected through their destiny...
In the first part when rishi's hand was bleeding the pain was experienced by tanu...and when tanu was in pain rishi feel it..
And the wrong number call was also nice.
The first meeting of tanshi was well written.
The flash back story was beautifully portrayed.
Eagerly waiting for your next update.
Thanks for the pm




thank you so much to comment on each updt im glad you like it thx again
sukanksha thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#93
Awesome update
Manpreet is superb hehe
Fairy_111 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#94
Very nice OS loved it..😊
--HANISA-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Awesome update
Manpreet is superb hehe



thank you for comment
--HANISA-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: Fairy_111

Very nice OS loved it..😊



thank you for comment
ItsNoorfatima thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Superb update
Precap is interesting
--HANISA-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: Fairy_111

Very nice OS loved it..😊


THANK YOU 😃
--HANISA-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 years ago
#99
Hi guys im going to give updt for this ff after a long time .

Hope you guys will enjoy reading it


Previous part : tanshi met both felt a connection , ahaman too met but it turn into a fight between them , raaj beeji n rano go panjab same time the four take plane for mumbai .


Here we go


Kismat Connection


Part 5


Plane land in mumbai airport forth could not met other one neha pick girls same as pawan pick boys .


Raj reach at veeru place , kurana's were surprise to see bedi's at their place , they welcome them n hug after they enter inside house .


That day pass well for both side bani was happy with the girls came to her . Raj n veeru went to the field leaving the women at home , rano ask about her daughters , she told them they went mumbai to attend wedding , sharda ask for rishi if he got married , rano told her how he is still not married n are searching for a nice good girl for him , she hope as he went to attend pawan wed he too met some one who is destiny for him .


That night rishi talk with moon , same as tanu talk with moon .


From both side


T " Kyun aisa lagta hai , ke chaand mujhe se kuch kehna chahta hai , kuch connection hai iss chaand se " .



R " Kiya connection hai , tumse chaand ? jab bhi tumko dekta hoon , toh mano jaise , koi aur bhi tumko dek raha hai aur tumse baat kara ha hai , agar koi hai to kahan hai kaun hai ? " .



T " Kaach tumse kareeb hoti , kiya pata usse bhi dekti jo tumse juda huwa hai , aaj pehli bar ajib laga , jab uss ladke ko mili " .




R " Usski ek jalag ne mere dil ko chu liya , jaise ussi ki intizar tha mujhe , usski ankhein , aisa laga jaise mein janta hoon , woh ehsas kahi nahi huwa pehle " .



T " Usski chune se aisa kyun laga ke , mehsus karsakti hoon , apna sa laga , maan karta ke waqt tam jaye wahi pe " .



R " Agar mere haat mein tah waqt ko control karna , to ussi waqt rukjata , uss pal ko phir se mehsuss karna hai , dil kehta hai ke wohin hai jo dil mein hai ".



T " Kya ussi ka hi intizar hai mujhe , wohi ek hai jo iss dil ko chu liya , kach mein ek bar phir se miloon , usse dek thi rahoon , kiya pata phir mile na mile " .


R " Agar woh bhi kahin hai to bas ek bar phir se milado mujhe usse , kabhi nahi shocha ke mein rishi sighn bedi itna betaab hai uss ajani ladki ko milne ka , kya ehsas naya hai par bohut pyara hai " .


T " Kya ye pyaar ki shuruwat hai , yeh ehsas , yeh bechaini , yeh sab to sirf pyaar ke sign hai , kya pyaar huwa hai mujhe uss anjan ladke se " .


R " Pyaar to nahin janta , par haan usse agar mujhe miljay to , kabhi bi alag nahi hone duga , use apne dil ke lareeb rakuga mere pass sirf mereliya sab se door " .


Both stop talking n have a hope to soon met other one , they sleep .


Next day after breakfast the girls go in the mall for shopping , they were excited , same time boys too reach in same mall for shopping , tanshi could felt other one presence , they try to search but when one reach where other one was , he was not around , girls enter in wed boutique , pawan notice neha n told rishi his would be wife in there n show him in which shop she enter , he ask him to n see how she look , rishi ask how he will recognize , he told him she wore a red stroll her hair are long n lose , the one who will look more pretest in the shop will be her only .


Rishi go to see as pawan wanted to have his opinion on his choice , while he was reaching close his heart was beating fastest , which he was unable to understand why .


In the shop neha told her she saw pawan he may come other there ,she told her he wear blue pool over , she leave for trial clothe n leave her stroll with her , which she put it on her shoulder n cont to choose other dress .


Ahana was searching some thing when she spot maanpreet flirting with a married woman n think how cheap guy he is not spare married woman .


Rishi enter inside n went near tanu n as he was about to touch her , he saw her face in mirror , which give him a big shocked , he mistaken him as neha , his heart was in pain , his eyes was filled with tears , the one whom he was so desperate to meet is known other his cousin fiance , he could not bear it n was about to leave .


Tanu turn n saw his backside wearing blue pool over , she stop him on saying listen , he turn n both was stunned on seeing other one on thinking them as pawan n neha , she could not talk any thing ahead due of shocked , tears in eyes , heart was beating like it will stop any time due of pain , both was having pain in heart for losing other one .

************************

THAT ALL GUYS HOPE YOU WILL LIKE IT PLEASE DO HIT LIKE N LEAVE YOUR HUMBLE COMMENT TOO .

NEXT TANSHI MET N ALL CONFUSION CLEAR .

THX LOVE HANSA
Edited by --HANSA-- - 8 years ago
--HANISA-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 years ago


yes you first

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".