[FF:An Office Affair] PART 27 , pg 40,updt 29 OCT - Page 11

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Posted: 17 years ago
WOW !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was just too good sneha keep it up the great work i really liked it that was really wonderful hats of to u 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: soniayk6

hi sneha.iam the first one to reply.very nice n cute update yaar.woooooooooow so our shiv kapoor is completly in love with gauri.wating to see them confess their love to one another.n y u made samar end up with that nishaa 😆 .but still i liked it.simply superb part yaar 👏 .keep it up. 😊

thanxx di for ur comments , well as u see here nisha is nice n really thanxx ,i promise to keep the pace like thiz thanxx again😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: GK001

WOW !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was just too good sneha keep it up the great work i really liked it that was really wonderful hats of to u 👏

thanxx GK , i will maintain the pace n surley try to improve it more , thanxx for replying n for ur comments😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
👏 it ws brill!!! but it ws also short!!! 😭 😭 nxt part should b long n excitin!!!do con sooon!!!!!!!! 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
heyy di i m bakkkkkkkk ur updatee wazzz 👏 now continue asap 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: kitypity

👏 it ws brill!!! but it ws also short!!! 😭 😭 nxt part should b long n excitin!!!do con sooon!!!!!!!! 😃 😃

thanxx dear for ur comments , next time i will try to make it long , thanxx again 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

thanxx a lot for ur comments

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_pavi

heyy di i m bakkkkkkkk ur updatee wazzz 👏 now continue asap 😃

thanxx a lot for ur comments luv

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey guys sorry for the delay but here's the nxt part 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

PART - 12

GETTING READY FOR THE PARTY

Nxt day in office, gauri was really busy in her work n had not seen shiv from the morning , atlast she finishes her work n looks for shiv. she went to his cabin but he was not there, she turned towards the door but she heard some noise from shiv's lounge, she went in still she didn't found shiv , she thought "may be shiv is in washroom, I have to give this file to him, so hav to wait for him"
After two minutes , she was feeling bored , so she began to sing

Shiv heard gauri singing …………..so he came out n quietly stood behind her n then he began to sing

haan hai koi to wajah
to jeena ka mazaa yun aane laga
yeh hawaon mein hai kya
thoda sa jo nasha yun chane laga
pucho na pucho mujhe kya hua hai teri raahon mein aakar
pucho na pucho mujhe kya milega teri baahon mein aakar
yeh ishq hai baithe bithaye jannat dikhaye haan , o rama

(from the film "jab we met")

Shiv saw heard gauri singing …………..so he came out n quietly stood behind her n then he began to sing

zara si dil mein de jagah tu
zara sa apna le bana
zara sa khwabon me saja tu
zara sa yaadon mein basa
main chahun tujko meri jaan bepanaah
fida hoon tujpe meri jaan bepanaah

(from the fim "jannat")

Gauri instantly turned back n saw shiv in front of her
GAURI- "oh shi………I mean sir , I was actually waiting for you, this file is completed"
Shiv was not bothered about the file……….he began to walk towards gauri n seeing this , gauri started to walk backwards (without turning)
GAURI-"a.a..aa.. actually sir , I m getting late. Ipshita must be searching for me ..we r going for some shopping"
SHIV (walking towards her) – for what?
GAURI- "w..w…ww.. woh , kal apke ghar party hai naa , to isliye………"
Gauri stopped as there was a dead end………I mean wall and shiv was very close to gauri
SHIV- "maine tumhe kaha tha naa, ki aanken sab kuch keh deti hain"
Gauri kept lookin at shiv
SHIV-"to phir let your eyes speak, why do u wear these spectacles"
GAURI- "but sir ……"
SHIV- sheeeeew, in a pleasant voice ………quiet ….close ur eyes"
GAURI (popped her eyes out) –what!
SHIV – I said close ur eyes…., gauri closed her eyes and shiv removed her spectacles n said "now open ur eyes"
Gauri opened her eyes , shiv smiled n said "wow , how beautiful" n gauri kept looking at shiv , then suddenly door opened .................. ippy was standing ,she saw shiv n gauri talking so close ............shiv n gauri saw ippy at the door n immediately they turned opposite
GAURI – "haan ipshita chalen "
IPPY – "haan , par agar tumhe koi zaroori kaam hai to badme challenge"
GAURI- "nooo nooo"
IPPY- "ok bye shiv we'll meet u at the party tomorrow"
SHIV- yeah

Nxt day arrived n shiv was sooooo happy , that he had not felt ever ......for him it was like a precious day for him , he was conscious on the decorations n all…………..he began to imagine gauri every where around him n there was a continues smile on his face , nikhila saw shiv in a happy mood n went to him
NIKKI- "shiv, kya hua tu itna khush kyun hai"
SHIV- "nothing mom , bas aise hi"
NIKKI- "aise hi matlab?"
SHIV- "woh mom, aapka b'day hain naa isliye"
NIKKI- "par mera b'day to har saal aata hai n tut oh aaj tak itna khush nahi dikha, isliye sach bol kya baat hai?"
SHIV-"nahi mom, aap to …
SAMAR-"shiv sab kuch ho gaya hai, bas ab sab jaakar ready ho jaao, guests must be arriving soon"
SHIV- "ji bhaiyaa"
Shiv went into his room n opened his wardrobe n started lookin at them………….he looked for a moment n threw all his dress on his bed , nisha (samar's wife) was passing by his room n saw shiv in a big confusion, she entered his room n said "kya hua devar ji"
SHIV- "comeon bhabhi, plzz bataayie naa ki mein kya pehnoon"
NISHA- "achaa, pehle tum yeh bataao shiv, ki tumhe kisse impress karna hai , mom ko ya phir ladkiyon ko"
SHIV- "bhabhiiiiii , mein kyun kisi ladki ko impress karunga , acha aap jaldi batayie plzzz"
Nisha sorted out some clothes n said "waise dress code black hai , to yeh black suit , tum par acha lagega"
SHIV- got excited n said "thank u bhabhi"
At the hall, nikki was dressed in white n mahen came to her n said "aaj , u r looking really pretty"
NIKKI- "mazaak mat kijiye" , mahen said "arey main kyun mazaak karoonga, woh bhi tumhare saath", nikhila smiled
NIKKI- "aapko pata hai aaj shiv bada khush lag raha tha"
MAHEN- "haan woh to lagega na, aaj uski mom ka jo b'day hai"
NIKKI- aap bhi naa, bilkul apne bete ki tarah jawab de rahen hain, arre itne saalon se b'day mana rahen par aaj tak to itna khush nahi tha , toh aaj kaise…"
MAHEN- common nikhila , tum kuch zyaada hi soch rahi ho n waise bhi khush hi to tha naa to phir why r u worried, itzz ur b'day so be happy"
Nikki thought "kuch to hai"

Soon guests started arriving , samar and nisha welcomed the guests, nikhila n mahen were busy talking with the guests
Anupam came , samar said "hey anupam how r u?", anupam said "I m fine samar, n aap kaisi hain bhabhi?"
Nisha- "main bhi theek hoon,aapki aur ipshita ki engagement kab hai?"
Anupam- "most probably, next month tak hoga"
SAMAR –"well that's good"
ANUPAM- "yeh shiv kahan hai?"
NISHA –"apne room mein, aapko to pata hai who kitna time leta hai ready hone mein"
ANUPAM (muttered) "haan aur aaj to zyaada hi time lega, kyunki gauri jo."
NISHA –"kuch kaha aapne?"
ANUPAM- "nahi nahi, mein jaake shiv se milta hoon, par usse pehle nikhila aunty se "
Anupam went to nikhila "happy birthday aunty"
NIKKI- "thank u beta, ipshita nahi aayi tumhare saath"
ANUPAM- "nahi aunty , who to gauri ko company degi naa , isliye sugna aunty aur gauri ke saath aayegi"
NIKKI- "ok"
ANUPAM- 'acha aunty mein shiv se milkar aata hoon"
NIKKI- 'anupam bte , ek baat suno"
ANUPAM –"ji aunty"
NIKKI- "aaj shiv bada khush lag raha tha, kuch to baat hai kya tumhe pata hai?"
Anupam muttered "yeh shiv bhi naa, apni feelings ko chipa kar nahi rakh sakta"
NIKKI-"kuch kaha kyaa?"
ANUPAM- "nahi aunty, mujhe kuch nahi pata..mein to…..
Shiv came walking down the stairs, he was in black suit n he was looking like a prince ............so handsome, shiv saw nisha n nisha showed her sign "AWESOME" , shiv smiled n came down

plzz post ur comments , especially my silent readers, plzz they r very important for me n thank u all for reading

Edited by pals_sneh - 17 years ago

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