[FF:An Office Affair] PART 27 , pg 40,updt 29 OCT - Page 10

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: luv_pavi

oyee hoyeee veryy veryyyyy cuteeee updateeeeeee i justt luvvvv thizz parttt especiallyy gaurii oooo wowwww 👏 thizz iz forr u huneyyy n plzz upsatee asap 😳 😃

thanxx dear i m happy dat u loved it

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: kitypity

Tht ws an auwsum part 👏 !!!!but it ws 2222222222222222 short di(im whinnin!!!!)!!!! no romances???? 😭 nxt prt shuld b even bttr ok di.con soon. 😃

thanxx dear for ur comments i will try to convince u in the next part 😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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woooooooooooooooooooooow sneha fantastic part.i loved this sooooooooooooooooooo much.shivgauri's part was superb 😳 .really u deserve an applaud 👏 .woooooooow yaar.simply superb part.really i loved the part.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanxx sonia di for ur comments 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lovely part 👏
both of them r sooo cute,loved it.they r falling for each othercan't wait for them to realize soon.looking forward for a long update.plz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanxx mintfresh for ur compliments i will surley , recomend ur comments
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thanxx for ur comments

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Posted: 17 years ago
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sorry for the delay guys i was really busy with my family but here's the next update
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PART - 11

NIKHILA INVITES GAURI


At the kapoor mansion,
Mahen is sitting in lounge doing some work in his laptop n nikhila serving tea to mahen , dadaji n dadiji have gone to the temple and samar n nisha (samar 's wife) have gone for some shopping as nikhila's b'day is coming

Shiv parks his car n enters his house , he was seen to be very pleased and he had a smile on his lips , his eyes were on ground, he didn't bothered to see anyone around him just walking straight towards his room upstairs .nikhila saw shiv coming n she asked '' arey shiv beta tum aagaye, how was ur time?''
But shiv was in his own world , his ears didn't heard what his mom said , seeing this nikhila wondered,what have happened to shiv
Then mahen (in a bit loud voice) ''shiv''
Shiv turned back n said '' dad mom I didn't noticed u ''
Nikki- ''didn't noticed us '' ''kya hogaya hai tujhe ,aakar baith idhar''
Shiv went n sat wid her mom n said ''nothing mom just thinking about some work''
Nikki- ''dono baap bet eek jaise hain bas kaam –kaam , mere liye to kisi ke paas waqt hota hi nahi''
Shiv n mahen in chorus ''SORRY''
Nikki- ''ok ok'' acha what about ur movie ? how was ur time?
Shiv – it was gr8 mom, I enjoyed a lot n specially gauri she was just blattering about that movie
Mahen – acha gauri was with u , jahaan tak mujhe pata hai , shez a kind of shy girl !
Shiv- hmm shy to hai but agar who jaanle n pehchanle then to bas she will keep on blah , blah n blah n she will never keep quite till her words are complete .
Mahen – laughs hmm I know about her very well alok keeps on telling about her,waise usse milne ki baut ichha ho rah hai''
Nikki-haan mahen , maine to shiv ko bol diya , to invite her in my b'day party , usse last tab dekha tha , when she was six but I m eagerly dying to see her
Mahen –yeh achha kiya ki usse apne b'day par bula liya
Waise shiv howz she , matlab abhi bhi waise hi dikhti hai yaa………
Nikki- haan shiv tune to bata nahi how she looks
Shiv- smiles , ''mom shez very simple girl , not very fair , wears spectacles, but…shez is really attractive n her eyes are just sooo beautiful , her eyes r like twinkling stars in the night n her dimpled cheek n when she smiles , goshhhh her smile is really beautiful , her long straight hair her simplicity n her innocence is just…………
Nikki- achaa ab to mein bekaraar hoon usse milne ke liye , bachpan se dekha hai bahut pyaari bachi thi , simple n caring , achha tune usse bulaya for my b'day party?
Shiv- made a face n said ''sorry'' mom
Nikki- shiv tu bhi naa , kabhi koi cheez yaad nahi rehti , pata nahi kaun who badnaseeb hogi jiski tere sath shaadi hogi
Shiv- mom , n waise bhi I don't think she'll come
Nikki- arey kyun nahi aayegi ?
Shiv (thinks)- ab mom ko kaise bataaun ki taxi mein cockroach ne kya kia thaa
Nikki- kya hua to chup kyun hai
Shiv- nothing mom , I was just thinking dat itni badi party , she'll b new n ipshita will b wid anupam so she'll get bored without a company
Nikki- arey kyun bore hogi , tu usse company de diyo n waise bhi we know gauri since she was born, paida hote hi who sabse pehle mere hi paas thi , then shez not new too
Shiv- par mom
Nikki- par war kuch nahi , tu nahi to I will talk to gauri n invite her, giv me ipshita's no.
Shiv- but mom ipshita will b busy rite now
Nikki- achha koi baat nahi I will talk to sugna
Nikki went n called sugna
SUGNA- hi nikhila , after a long time
NIKKI- yeah I wanted u to come with ipshta n gauri to my b'day party the day after tomorrow
SUGNA- I will surely come , koi kaam ho to mujhe bataana
NIKKI- nahi hum sab hain naa, waise gauri hai?
SUGNA- haan hai , phone doon ?
NIKKI- yes
Sugna called gauri n told her to talk to nikhila
GAURI – hello ( in a pleasant voice)
NIKKI- heard her voice n wondered ''jab aawaz hi itni pyaari hai to she will also bhi really sweet''
GAURI- again said ''hello''
NIKKI- hello , gauri mein nikhila bol rahi hoon
GAURI – namste aunty , how r u? n how is mahen uncle?
NIKKI- everyone is okay , I just wanted to tell u dat day after tomorrow is my b'day , so kids are organising a small party only for close frnds n relatives so u hav to be there
GAURI- sure aunty
NIKKI- waise maine shiv se kaha tha to invite u but he told, he forgot n then he told dat u will not b coming , isliye maine hi invite kiya to ab to pakka aana padega
GAURI –haan aunty , I will b there
NIKKI-ok beta byee
GAURI- byee aunty

Nikhila told shiv that gauri is also coming n after hearing that , shiv didn't show any reaction but his heart was filled with chocolate n lots of butterflies were dancing in his stomach , he was really happy , then he thought , 'how did gauri said yes , may be for mom…….well job hi ho shez coming '




hi guys , i hope u liked the part , n if not plzzz plzzz let me know , bcoz ur comments r my way of improvement so plzz guys reply n specially my SILENT READERS PLZZZ
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Posted: 17 years ago
hi sneha.iam the first one to reply.very nice n cute update yaar.woooooooooow so our shiv kapoor is completly in love with gauri.wating to see them confess their love to one another.n y u made samar end up with that nishaa 😆 .but still i liked it.simply superb part yaar 👏 .keep it up. 😊

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