FF:Pyarasa LoveStory... Part42 15th July 09

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swetha10

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Posted: 16 years ago

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WOW beautiful pics.. luved the pic update.. they r really cute...

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Part 40

Shiv was in the washroom thinking'..
"Hmm Gauri '.. Tum mere itne karib aakarbi' mujse door ho'." He smiled '. And thinking ' "Have I gone intimate with Gauri without giving her sufficient time to remove the awkwardness between us'.."

"But I don't see Gauri regretting or feeling sad about anything' she looks happy to me'.. But then after beeing so intimate with each other she still is not able to talk to me freely'. May be I should slow down a little and take things slowly again'give her sufficient time to get over the awkwardness and talk to me '.. So that we both can cherish these moments more'"

Shiv walks into the room wearing a towel on the lower half of the body'..
And wriggling the water out of his hair'..
As he is coming out his eyes fall on Gauri who was making the bed'.
Shiv smiles '. slowly walks to her'.. grabbes her by her waist from behind..'. Gauri was jolted and She hold's Shiv's hands on her waist' for support'.

Shiv did not just give her anytime to rethink about it'. '.. He just bent froward burried his head on the knox of her neck and gave a really passionate kiss'.. Which brought shivers to Gauri'

She closed her eyes.... cluched shiv's hands tighter'.. His submissive
wetness in his skin ... his touch was bringing shivers to Gauri and Gauri's reaction were giving Shiv more encouragement.

He took hold of her in his arms bringing her even closer and increasing the pace of the kisses'

Gauri was having heavy breaths'.. Shiv was just stopping to catch up his breath'.

He just slowly moved her to the bed'..

Gauri heard a sound of the opening and closing of a door'. Which brought her out of her pleasant thoughts'. She jerked and turned'.. Looking at Shiv standing there shaking of the water droplets of his hair'.

Gauri looks back at herself' and the bed'.. And a sprang of anxiety crosses her heart for imagining such things'.. She touches her forehead to wipe her sweat beads off'. And looked at Shiv once more to confirm it was just a dream and looking at Shiv in a towel she just turns around with her cheeks becoming red with Shyness and Anxiety'. And a smile forming on her lips'

Then suddenly realizing that Shiv was not given his clothes she walks towards the closet'. And starts removing Shiv's clothes'.

Here, Coming to a conclusion that he will take it slow from now on'. He headed to the shower and taking a good shower'.. And smiling and thinking about his wife'. He walked back into the room with a towel wrapped around his waist'.. And wriggling water of his hair' he lifts his head to find' Gauri near the closet'.

Gauri hastly brings the clothes moving forward her hand in front of Shiv' gives him the clothes'.Which Shiv takes them and Starts to wear them'..

Gauri turns around as Shiv changes into his clothes and starts to walk towards the living room'

Shiv realizing Gauri was walking away'. Calls for her' while finishing wearing his clothes and talking a step behind her'.. "Gauri.."

Listening to the call Gauri'. Stops in her tracks'. Shiv walks'. To her in a very casual manner

"Gauri'. Tume bhuk lagi hogi' mein Hotel call kar rahahu' tumein kya chahiye'."
Gauri looked at Shiv who was looking at her standing beside her'.
"Ji koi bhi' vegitarian yah chicken item chalega'"
Shiv smiled and walked towards the bed sat down and called the Hotel '.realizing the bedside table has a drawer and opened it to find a food menu for order and kept the phone back'. Looked at Gauri'. And smiled'.

"Gauri' yeh dekho menu hai' ismese joh tume acha lagega order kardo' mere liye bhi'"

Gauri walked towards the bed'. And standing there' took the menu from Shiv and said' "Aap Kya Khayenge'"
Shiv : "Mujhe bhi koi vegitarian item yah chicken item chalega" smiling at Gauri'.
Gauri lowered her eyes and blushed'.. Making shiv smile grow wider'
Shiv seeing her blush'. Got up from the bed and keeping a hand on her shoulder said' "Acha to tum menu dekh key order karo'. Mein abhi ata hu'"

Gauri was feeling a little bit surprised that he was not taking initiative to hug her or kiss her'. She felt a little sad '.. Then clearing her head with the thing at hand'.

Gauri sat down on the bed ' looking at the menu'. She loved pasta' and found a pasta coloum and straight way ordered' "chicken fitini pasta with sauce for two"

In the mean time' Shiv went to the living room to check some things on his laptop'. He sat down looking at some of the e-mails of his work' just to make sure' things were smooth sailing in his absence'.

Gauri came back into living room'.
She saw Shiv sitting in the sofa with a laptop deeply engrossed into it'
She stood beside the sofa ' and started '
"Ji who'" she did not get any response'
She started again' "Ji who' mein ne chicken fitini pasta ka order diya hai'. Who keh rahethe' 20 mins mein ayega'"
She still got no response' she was a little surprised' but thought that' may be he is busy with something'.
She was about to walk away'. When shiv said' "Gauri .." which made her stop in her tracks and turn back'.
He looked at her smiled and signaled her with a hand gesture to come and sit beside him'.
He put his laptop on the coffee table and turned towards her when she came and sat a little further away from him on the sofa facing him'. Looking at him when Shiv smiled and casually said' he took her hand which was figetting with the other hand and placed it between his hands and comforting her said' "Mein chahta hu' ki tum mujhe Shiv keh ke bulao'" and feeling Gauris hands grow cold he continued' "Aur waise bhi'. Jabhi tum Ji kehti ho to aisa lagta hai mein 50 sal ka buda go gaya hu'" bringing a broad smile on Gauri's face'.. To which Shiv also smiled'..

"Acha yeh chodo' Mujhe Tum se kuch poochna tha..'."
"Ji'" garui looked at Shiv curiously
Seeing Shiv looking at her' with a half sad look' realized and lowered her eyes and said' "Shiv.." slowly'.
And Shiv cleared his throat to make her look at him and when she did He smiled at her'. Bringing a smile on her face too'.

Gauri felt a little more comfortable and asked slowly..

"Toh aap mujhe kuch pooch na tha..??"

"Haan Who"

"Acha Gauri tum Jeans skirts pehen thi ho' kya?"
Gauri looked at Shiv and said ' "Ji'." then bit her tongue a little and continued.. "Long skirts pehnti hu' aur kabhi kabhi jeans bhi pehen thi hu.." she answered his question still thinking' why he is asking' with a question still evident in her eyes'.

Understanding her eyes'.Shiv started
"Who bas mein is liye puch rahatha kyun ki mujhe tume ek jaga lejana hai' jaha shayad saree yaha chunidar pehen ke jana mushily hoga'isliye.."

Seeing her relieved eyes he smiled'

"Toh' tumare pass abhi jeans hai'."
Gauri nodded negative'

"Koi bat nahi hum kal mall jake kuch karid lenge' then we will be fine.."
Shiv was looking at Gauri nodding her head in positive'. Only he knew how difficult it was getting to keep his hands of her'. And keep talking to her' he just wanted to make her sit in his lap'.and'.."

As shiv kept thinking'. The door bell rang with a man holding an umbrella'. Standing there with their food'. He took the food and greeted him and said thank you

Both sat down to eat their food'.
Gauri put the plates and the fork and spoon and turned from the refrigirator'. And said'. Slowly'

"Shiv'" and Shiv was busy trying to find something to see on Tv with the remote in hand'

So' Gauri lifted her voice and said a little louder'. "Shiv'.." It was still not audible'. Realizing herself' she felt shy' calling for shiv'

Gauri told herself' Gauri he doesnot like being called Ji so call him Shiv'. She repeated herself under her breath a few times'

"Shiv'Shiv ' Shiv'" then taking a deep breath' she called out '.

"Shiv'" and hearing her voice'. Shiv turned all stunned'.. In excitement'.. Gauri blushed holding the refrigator door'.. Seeing his astonishment'..

Shiv '. Smiled at her and walked to wards her '. And leaned onto the door' and just moved his hand saying her to hug him'.. And Gauri came straight into his arms without hesitation'.

And shiv thought'. This is a very good start'..

The comforting of Shiv holding her'. Felt so nice'. She felt comfortable and she did not want to think about why she was comfortable'. She just wanted to be comfortable with him'.. "Her Shiv'"
She smiled and hugged him tighter'.

It was getting hard for Shiv to resist kissing her'.. And this night is going to be long '' he sighed'.. Gauri pulled herself when she did not get any advances from Shiv' she felt a little upset'. But slowly brought space between them and put her loose strands of hair behind her ear'. And slowly lifted her eyes'. And saw Shiv smiling at her'.

"toh' mere wife ne mujhe kyun bulaya'??"
And Gauri immediately said' "Juice or water ??" and Shiv looked at her confused' and Gauri pointing to the plates said' "Dinner.."

And Shiv said' "Orange Juice'" and smiled

And Gauri looked at him and signaled him to move a little from leaning on the refrigirator'. And Gauri brought the orange juice to put it in the glasses for them'.

Then gauri turned and asked him to come and have his food'.

After eating few bites in silence' Shiv said' "Gauri toh tume Pasta pasand hai..???" and gauri looked at him "Haan.. Mujhe bahut pasand hai'" ' "Kya aap ko pasand hai..???"

"Mujhe bhi Pasta pasand hai.." and smiled' bringing smile on Gauri's face' and Shiv was enjoying his food'. While Gauri kept glancing at Shiv from time to time'.. Thinking what happened'. Did I upset him'. He is not trying to be intimate with me'. Or kiss me'.. I am not able to read anything from his expression is he upset with me' but he did not sound upset when I talked to him'..

Shiv looked at Gauri just poking her fork into the pasta and thinking about something'. He touched her shoulder and when gauri jolted from her thoughts he asked her what was she thinking about so seriously and garui smiled and turned her head negatively'.

Then Shiv said'. "Gauri' meine Ek movie dekhi hai abhi' kuch dermein hai'.. Kya tum mere sath dekho gi'." "Tum English movies dekh ti ho na'" and Gauri smiled and nodded saying "haan"

Shiv kept thinking what is it' Gauri is so engrossed in her thoughts she is just nodding her head'

They finished eating and then Gauri finishes with washing the plates and then'. Shiv still is sitting on the table looking at Gauri' who is putting back everything'.

Hi Friends,

I am sorry for yet another late update.... But I was really confused... there were some ideas going on in my head ...about how to continue and i didnot know which one to follow and I desperately wanted some conversation between Shiv and Gauri.... and till now it was just romance .... So I donot know how far I am doing good in conversation dialogues.... I hope you all like it...

Please, do leave your comments.... and any suggestions would be welcome like one of them said bring conversation... So, any comments will just give me a new idea which I may not be thinking at....

Thankyou, one and all who have given their comments I have read all your comments and will reply soo....
Please, keep your comments coming... they give me a moral boost....

Edited by bunny_fun - 16 years ago

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swetha10

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Posted: 16 years ago

#293

Hey dear Nice update.. luved Gauri's imagination must say pretty naughty.. but Shiv was awesome.. trying to ease out the awkwardness n space between them..... Plzz continue soon.. plzz dont keep us waiting for long...

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komal hashim

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Posted: 16 years ago

#294

grt start of convo bw them interesting ........... and do cont soon waiting waiting,,,,,,,,,,,..

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saba

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Posted: 16 years ago

#295

finallyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy they chatted wowwwwwwww i just can't belive well i must say a veryyyyyy sweettttttttttttttttttt update but waz'nt long yaar just give us veryyyyy long parts plzzz hehehe eagerly waitin for more lovie dovie updates 😳

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starfan.shrk

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Posted: 16 years ago

#296

WELL FINALLY U UPD8D!!!n it ws soooooooooooo FAB!!!!yh u took along time 2 con so plzzzzzz don make us wait y longr n jus con ASAP!!!!!!👏👏👏

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serendipity.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#297

bunny, ur a roqer!! i luv u... hehe....i really didnt know u were soo gud at conversationzz 2......ur steamy romance was sooperb....coy was sooperb...nd now da shy conversingg part is AMAZINGG!!! plz gt it goingg nd DO NT END URR FF anytym soon!! plzz....cz...i simply LUV it!!!!!!! chooo chweet!! xx muah xx reenoo

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jagrutid

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Posted: 16 years ago

#298

aw thank you sooo much for such a lovely update it was fab!!!!!
really liked the conversation and the simplicity of it made it soo sweet and not to mention the fact that the dilouges on there own gave me the ability to picture the sene..really enjoyed reading it alot and got to say i love gauris character she is so innocent..really love that about her and shivs character to..hes such a nice husband, got to say gauris lucky. aw yes moment of the ff update for me had to be shiv asking gauri to call him by his name...that was just perfect.!!!!! ok i could go on for ages i suppose but thanks for such a brilliant update...looking forward to your future updates and o yes..dont worry we all know your fab at the whole romance but your no less at other attributes..carry on loving the storyline so far..
jagruti

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atop

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Posted: 16 years ago

#299

aww wow wow wwo what a lovely update...had been waiting so anxiously and impatiently for this update bunny...itna mat dair kiya karo yaar..but i understand even u are busy in wokr...but just a request can u please uopdate kabhi kabhi thoda sa jaldi..but nevertheless just loved it loved it loved it.,....wow sosme talk between them is great and u ahve dona fab job with it and now it would be great seeing aguri confront shiv and ask him that why isn't he coming close tro her haha i no gauri is too shy to say something but maybe in your own style ,...loved it yaar..par am greedy adn hungry for more..yeh dil maange more aha....jaldiu update kjarna adn take care...

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bunny_fun

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Hi Friends,

I am so glad I came this far in writing the FF... I never thought I could write one FF and some one would like it as much as you all liked it and have given me wonderfull comments to help inspire me write more....

I am unable to update regularly as I have other priorities which I cannot skip....

As, we all know that the KAA is coming to an end and soon this Forum is going to be gone... as a plan of action I am shifting my FF to the "Fan Fiction" Forum so that you can read it and I will have sufficient time to update it....

I would like to hear your views on it .... Please let me know ....

Thankyou,
Bunny.

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