FF:Pyarasa LoveStory... Part42 15th July 09 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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First of all Happy Diwali.. to all India Forums Members... 🤗

Its Diwali..and the Second part is very small so i am posting the 3rd part also...Enjoy!!! 👏

Part2:
A Honda Assent car came to the opposite side of the road of shiv's home, and the driver of the car came out and opened the behind door, and we see some one stepping out wearing yellow heels, its a girl...and as she steps out, we see she is wearing a yellow chunidar... that is hugging her figure and has a umbrella stich and her physique is so admiring... and she gives a sweet and friendly smile to the driver saying 'thankyou' and turns around... and we see a cute face with a beautiful smile... 😊 and that dimple in her cheeks and those serine kohl layered eyes and her hair let loose falling on her shoulders. And you all know whom I am speaking of... 😉 the one and only Gauri. 👏 👏

And then we see a man with spectacles getting down from the other side of the car, he smiles at her and says 'beta… andar chalen..' and she nods her head and they they open the guards open the gates for them to go in. That was Alok Chaterjee gauri's father.

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Part3:

Gauri and Alok come to Mahen's house and knock the door bell… and servant comes and opens the door… and asks whom do they want…
We want to meet the owner of the house…. The servant goes and says nikhila some one wants to meet you and nikhila comes down…

She sees Gauri and Alok and thinks…who are these people and why do they want to meet me…
Nikhila with this thought comes down and says namaste…and asks them to come in… Nikhila asks them… 'Mafi chahatihu… paar meine aapko pahchana nahi.. kya mein aapko janthi hu…" with a questioning look..

Alok smiles and says… ' ji …. Aap hame nahi janti hain… hum kal hi… aapke samne vale ghar me aye hain… mera naam Alok chatarjee hain …aur yeh meri beti Gauri hain…' and then Gauri smiles at Nikhila and says.. 'Namaste aunty… Humare Ghar me Kal Durga maa ki puja hain.. hum yaha naye hain…isliye... aspas ke subko bulaya hain.... Hum apko bhi..Durga maa ki puja me bulane aye hain… App aur Appka parivar hamare Ghar kal puja keliya zaroor ayiyega…'

After listening to this… Nikhila says… 'Ohh… acha acha… achi bat hain…hum zaroor ayenge… agar koi kam ho… to bejijak bata dena beta…' and then Gauir says… ' Acha ..Aunty ab ham chalthe hain….'

And Nikhila says… 'Ayise kaise ja sakthe hain..aap hamare Ghar phli bar ayehein… kuch lentho padegahi… aap kadekun yehin beytiyen… mein abhi aap keliyen kuch latihu..'

Gauri says.. ' Aunty… koi formalities mat kijiye aunty… hum ab chalthe hain… bahut kuch kar na baki hain… phir kabhi aaram se ayenge..'

But Nikhila says… ' koi bahana nahi chelege beti… tum bas bayto mein abhi ayi..' saying this she smiles and leaves… hurriedly…

And Gauri and Alok look at the house and admire how neatly everything is placed and how nice the lady is…

Nikhila comes back with coffee and snacks and gives it to them and sits there when …. Alok says… 'Mafi chahatahu lekin …mein aapka naam nahi janta…' and Nikhila smiles and says… ' Ji mera naam Nikhila hain…aur mere pati ka naam Mahen kapoor hain…'
Then Alok smiles and says… ' Aaap se milke acha laga Nikhila ji…. Ab hum chalthe hain… bas pass me kuch Ghar aur chalna hain..une puja mein bulane kaliye… phir mujhe office janahain… meri beti ko Ghar me chod ke..'

Nikhila smiles and says… 'Ji… Thank you for inviting us… Hum kal zaroor ayenge…' and Gauri and Alok say namasthe and go from there…

Nikhila smiles and goes inside…



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Please Comment...how was it... 😊
and i know you all are sad...that there is NO SHIV!!! 😡 in this part...there may be some bloppers ...please ignore...

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great update... now I getting a bit greedy... and I want some more... so please update soon...

Happy Diwali!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG love your hindi...i wish i could write...it... brit so i mess up!!😆

Wow looks like the next part will get interesting...loving the flow😃

Love Kat🤗

Edited by Catwoman - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: bunny_fun



Hi Catwoman...i am a silent reader of all your FF's and its nice to see you were the first one to post a coment for my FF... I love all your FF's ...i keep reading them again and again...Please write another one.. 😃 😛

Awwweee thank you so much😳...i really dont kwon what to say *blush*.... Thank you so much... and i hope i have not bored ya.....😆😆.....I'm really happy the silent community are penning down there stories👏👏

HAPPY DIWALI 😃😳

as for writing another one....hehe let me wrap them up them up and i will work on that ASAP😉

Love Kat🤗

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Posted: 17 years ago
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sorry double post.. on train connection failing😡

Edited by Catwoman - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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gr8 ff
i hope u make them meet soon
its gr8 the way u r leadin up 2 it
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesum part 👏 👏
eagerly waiting for shiv-gauri's first meeting 😳
plz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part4:

In the evening, Shiv comes home from office and says… 'Mom – Are you ready for the date… I will just freshen up and come…' saying this he opens his suite buttons and takes his briefcase and runs up the stairs…to get freshen up…

Nikhila listens to his voice and smiles and says… ' Aagaye tum beta… mein tumare liye Coffee latihu… tum jakar tayar hojavo…phir challenge…'

Shiv climbing the stairs looks back and smiles at Nikhila and says… 'I love you Mom..' and runs to his room

In his room he throws the brief case on the bed and removes his shoe pushes them with his leg to a side and goes to the bathroom… and closes the door…then after few minutes he comes out of wash room in towel and goes to his…cupboard… and opens it and starts searching for the dress to wear... he keeps looking at them puts a hand in his hair 😕 and then removes some dresses and looks at it and throws it on the bed and then removes another and throws it on the bed… and then…another…and after few minutes…he feels irritated and calls out…. 'Mom aap yaha ayengi please…' and nikhila says 'aarahi hu…'

Nikhila comes to shivs room… and she knows that he would have made a mess by now… and thinks to herself 'how could she not remember that he is very bad at choosing a dress..' and now she would have to keep all the dresses in order again…

She comes to the room and sees the mess and gives a huff... and then comes to the cupboard and picks up a dress and gives it to shiv and he takes the dress and goes to change it…and she looks at the mess and starts picking up the dresses and putting them in their place…and thinks to herself… 'who ever is going to marry him… all her time will be take away in cleaning and keeping this room neat…like her…' and smiles to herself….and keeps all the dresses properly in place…

Shiv comes out wearing a white casual shirt tucked inside the blue jeans and smiles at nikhila and asks her to get ready too… then nikhila says…that she is already ready…and shiv says 'Mom.. you are going on a date with Shiv kapoor … you should be wearing a gorgeous outfit not a saree….and think about my reputation…' smiles and winks at her…and Nikhila says 'Sharam nahi ati maa se iyse kehthe huye…agar tume itnahi gorgeous outfit pehnanahi hai…toh…jaldise… shadi karle…fir hokum karna apne biwi par…' she pulls his nose and Shiv says .. 'Comeon Mom… App ithini jaldi budi kyun bana chahati hain…' to which nikhila says.. 'kya matlab' and shiv says ' Maa..meri shadi hojayegi tho aap mother say mother-in-law banjayengi… tab tho apkeliye competition aajayegi..apki daughter-in-law and you will be called oldies Mom….phir toh aap yeh sub nahi pehan payengi…'
And Nikhila on listening smiles and ruffles his hair and goes from there... thinking 'I can never … beat him in words…'

Shiv follows her down the stairs into the living room sits there and keeps changing channels… and then nikhila brings coffee for him and he takes it and says 'thanks Mom' and they sit there…and then shiv asks her … 'Aur batayiye mom… aaj kya kiya ..apne..' to which nikhila says… ' kuch ..bhi nahi… and then says…hamare smane vale bunglow mein naye log aye hain..who subha ayethe… kal unke ghar me puja hain..aur hum sub ko bulaya hain..aur mein ne kehdiaya ki hum sub aa rahein… hain…' and she looks at shiv and shiv says… 'Comeon mom main puja mein kya karoonga… I am not coming…and makes a bored face..' and nikhila says 'beta..puja keliye naa nahi kehte…tu todi der aake..phir cheleja..' and then shiv gives a nod..and shiv completes his coffee and

then asks nikhila lets start..to go .. for dinner… and nikhila says… lets wait for Mahen and shiv is like… 'I told you it's a date for us both … 😊 ' and then nikhila says… 'you know I donot come without your father… 😳 ' and shiv thinks 'I know that too…' 😊 and thinks to himself that … 'he is happy about it, that their parents are so attached to each other…' 😊

And after mahen comes .. all go out for dinner… with shiv driving the car and mahen in the side seat and nikhila in the behind seat…and they enjoy jokes and have funny talk ... 😊 and they reach a famous restaurant and take a private seating and have their dinner and shiv is having fun with his parents…(how sweet 😊 )they come home and shiv gives a goodnight kiss to nikhila and says good night to mahen and goes of to sleep…

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So, Here goes the next part.... Please give your comments... I love to read your comments... Suggest me ideas... on how to go further... lets make it our FF...

and tell me How did you celebrate your Diwali... I work in US so... no hungama here... 😭

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Posted: 17 years ago
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great update flowing nicely....

bunny in the uk it was Freezing cold and many were at work tooooo 😳

Kat

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey.... jus read your work.....

like the flow keep it commin...


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