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hunny.... U're fabulous wen it comes to such great romantic work!!!!! 😳

i agree it isn't that long but nonetheless it was nice as always.....

will be waitin for the next part!!!!!

i love there relationship... how a simple letter changed everything.... cute 👏 👏 😳

Awesome part...continue soon...looking forward to read the next part..update soon...

Originally posted by: prab_rockinn

hunny.... U're fabulous wen it comes to such great romantic work!!!!! 😳

i agree it isn't that long but nonetheless it was nice as always.....

will be waitin for the next part!!!!!

prt 10's up! tried my hand at some more romance...God! I feel so embarassed😳...

Originally posted by: Catwoman

i love there relationship... how a simple letter changed everything.... cute 👏 👏 😳

thnx Kat!😃...lemme noe how the next part was...😛

Originally posted by: sweetkamz

Awesome part...continue soon...looking forward to read the next part..update soon...

yup its updated...thnx kamz...😳

👏 the wedding was so beautiful and I luved the dialogue delivery between Zenny and her mom, it was really sentimental and wonderful words of wisdom that her mom gave to her.
Waiting for your magic updates a.i.c
Cheers darling.

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it was simply beautiful!!!!!
the end was sooooooooooo sweet!!!!! 😳 😳 😳

jus keep the fabulous work up!!!!

Lovely description of the wedding...Zeeny all blushing 😳 😳 😳 ..cute...n Zee is so understanding..how sweet is tat!! 😛 ...Keep up the great work...update soon!!

👏 ...angel in canada (a.i.c) so will written.... great part! 😊

Kat

My dearest fellow Canadian Cutie,

U know, I've thought many atime, that I should comment... but everytime I read a new part, meri bolti band hojati hai. Plz don't take it as an excuse for not replying, but really, u are that good. I don't know where to start or begin. I've read many fan fictions, and really, this one is amongst the best. Right from the beginning, the way you capture little details... blows me away. It's like I'm sitting in the room, observing Zeeshan's interaction btw his grand-daughter and daughter. I can imagine the facial expressions change as you guide us to another setting with so much ease. The flashback sequences are simply superb! Zee and Zenny's first interaction, and the way their character's persona comes forth. Zee is a hard shell, and Zenny is the complete opposite, and their attraction inevitable. I'm in awe with the way u describe their interactions. Everything is so simple and beautiful. I find myself blushing many times. U know the scene where they're in the cinema, the kissing in the movie and Zenny turning away... reminded me of someone I know... myself!😳 I find it awkward to watch kissing scenes and the other stuff, never! Anyways, I love how you've shown the growth of ZZ's relationship and his understanding of her discomfort on their first night (omg, I think I'd probably be the same!😕). What really gets me is the reality of it all... I loved how he prayed before coming to her and even though she was sleeping, he kissed her... with guilt. *sighs* Too good! You are so blessed with writing, I'm in love with your work... Please continue soon, 👏👏

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: Jenna Dutt

👏 the wedding was so beautiful and I luved the dialogue delivery between Zenny and her mom, it was really sentimental and wonderful words of wisdom that her mom gave to her.
Waiting for your magic updates a.i.c
Cheers darling.

thnx🤗 ... u finding it sentimental makes it worth writing...😊

Originally posted by: prab_rockinn

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it was simply beautiful!!!!!
the end was sooooooooooo sweet!!!!! 😳 😳 😳

jus keep the fabulous work up!!!!

aww...u liked the end...😳thnx

Originally posted by: sweetkamz

Lovely description of the wedding...Zeeny all blushing 😳 😳 😳 ..cute...n Zee is so understanding..how sweet is tat!! 😛 ...Keep up the great work...update soon!!

yup...i'll update in a bit...

Originally posted by: Catwoman

👏 ...angel in canada (a.i.c) so will written.... great part! 😊

Kat

thnx Kat!😃....🤗

Originally posted by: desi chic

My dearest fellow Canadian Cutie,

U know, I've thought many atime, that I should comment... but everytime I read a new part, meri bolti band hojati hai. Plz don't take it as an excuse for not replying, but really, u are that good. I don't know where to start or begin. I've read many fan fictions, and really, this one is amongst the best. Right from the beginning, the way you capture little details... blows me away. It's like I'm sitting in the room, observing Zeeshan's interaction btw his grand-daughter and daughter. I can imagine the facial expressions change as you guide us to another setting with so much ease. The flashback sequences are simply superb! Zee and Zenny's first interaction, and the way their character's persona comes forth. Zee is a hard shell, and Zenny is the complete opposite, and their attraction inevitable. I'm in awe with the way u describe their interactions. Everything is so simple and beautiful. I find myself blushing many times. U know the scene where they're in the cinema, the kissing in the movie and Zenny turning away... reminded me of someone I know... myself!😳 I find it awkward to watch kissing scenes and the other stuff, never! Anyways, I love how you've shown the growth of ZZ's relationship and his understanding of her discomfort on their first night (omg, I think I'd probably be the same!😕). What really gets me is the reality of it all... I loved how he prayed before coming to her and even though she was sleeping, he kissed her... with guilt. *sighs* Too good! You are so blessed with writing, I'm in love with your work... Please continue soon, 👏👏

Cheers,

dc

hey dc! ...first of all thnx soooo much for writin this comment...u've noticed the finer details...n umm im sure that i'll b readin this comment a lot of times😳...coz its big...lol ...the biggest comment i've gotten so far thnx🤗...& im sure wenever i read it i'll feel the same as i did the first time...humbled...happy...n a lot of other feelings...infact to tell u the truth wen i logged in i wasn't expecting nething...except teh comments i had already read...n wen i saw urs i was like yay! literally...

tc

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