SS - Promise Of The Eclipse(Wrapped Up!) - Page 4

Originally posted by: ash9

omg... tht was beautiful...k im nt good with wrds like u Awwww!
so no wrds is the best option 😊 - Awww, thank you so much!
but at the same time it was sad...i was abt to cry... it was very sad.. Bless my soul... thatz very heartening to know that the story I penned had such deep effect... thank you its need a compliment!
hw do u write like tht..like its abt your life u r talking abt.... Hoenstly I dont know... I jus write how I feel and relate
soo much of emotions......emotions jinhe main samajh paati hoon....
wht r u doing here??? u need to go n publish some book or something.... im serious I have been advised about this and I am indeed publishing...
thanx for telling me abt this FF Awwww...... I would ., why not... coz I know you always read all my FFs... by the way a nother one is there called wajah I started yesterday! 😊

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Zindagi aur maut... ek sikke ke doh atoot pehloo... phir bhi kuch log zindagi ke doosre hisse se khabra te hain... darte hain... Lekin kuch musafir maut mein bhi... zindagi ki umeed chod jaate hain...

Sareeta Di, how in the world do you do this? You simply blow me away... The title was very apt; and it fit very well with the general idea. I admit, I was confused sometimes by the time relapses, but it all made sense in the end. I have to ask, what age are they in your mind as you pen this masterpiece? Personally, I felt them undergo childhood, teens, mid-age and old age. The calm with which you conveyed the chaos in Shiv's heart, was spellbounding. The ending was so... serene? It was tranquilizing... And to be honest, I was not sad at all. It was as though that is where it began... forever... Your emphasis on particular words left me lingering on them as well. In all, you are so talented. May bhagghu always keep his hand over you...

Btw, why does the character of Gauri seem so familiar? From how I know u... I read shades of u in her characterization~

Thanks for the beautiful read.

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: panache

Sareeta, Just finished reading this SS.

1. I loved the way the story went btw the past and the present; 😃 Thanks. That was something that I didnt realize.... I jus wrote as I imagined...
2. Even though i am not a fan of sad endings, this story kind of made sense. I guess, i had feeling from the begining that this would have a sad ending. 😳 Awww, you did,.... I wanted it to be a hopeful one... the underlying essence...

3.I liked the description of Gauri 'cos it closely resembles how i write. I write whenever and wherever my thoughts strike me 😳 (the last time i wrote, it was at the Frankfurt airport waiting for my connecting flight! 😃 ) Ditto , same here!!!

4. I am going to read the rest of your stuff and leave my comments.I am really impressed. I love the way you pen down places and emotions. 😳 Awww thank you so much! Really humbled!

Originally posted by: queenkumar

I just read this, must say u amaze me with ur talent gal, first published book is still mine na! 😉

Originally posted by: smartc

Hey dammit,

I don't believe this!! I thought the first book was going to be mine 😡 ~ I had the first dibs on it babez.. Me still getting it first *hehehe*. Challenging queenie di there.. Let's see who gets the first one 😉 ~ Hey, there, I jus said, I'll let all of you know when the book is out... ! 😆 Pehle copy ke liye lage raho!

Alritey. About the story... Perceptions differ from person to person. As for me, I enjoyed it immensely and I kept relating it at places to one of my favorite movies, A Walk to Remember. Aww, thanks! Your story is quite different but the ending.. The ending reminded me of Landon and Jamie's story there.. How Jamie passed away quietly and in peace, yet left a part of herself in Landon. Both stories have one thing in common in my opinion, and that is, true love never dies.. I loved how u ended the story on a quote.. A Walk to Remember ended with the song "Cry" as Landon watched the sun disappear below the horizon whilst he remembered Jamie..

"I'll always remember,
It was late afternoon..
It lasted forever..
But ended so soon.."

I havent seen the movie ... and the story was more out of real incidents... what I penned...

Gauri's character, her nickname of birdie, her habit of scribbling things and converting her thoughts into writings at any given instant and point of time was all you, Sareeta! I have not met you but from our interactions, I know that you've got that restless soul of a creative person inside you that makes you travel around the globe from time to time. So u're like a bird in that way and very much like Gauri of this story. Gauri of this story .. as I mentioned is a shadow of me...or rather a part of me... if that suffices... I am glad that u act so as this is how we get to read such terrific thoughts of yours. Aww, thanks... will sure do So do continue to feel restless and creative and I hope the publication process goes by smoothly and that u achieve even greater success and happiness out of it than you could ever imagine 😉 ~ Thank you sooooooo much! I never intended to publish or write for others... but for my own satisfaction of being able to express... and if ppl now enjoy that , what more could one ask for... BHaggu has been kind... very kind!

Anyhow, a terrific read! And only u my dear could've written it so beautifully. God bless! Thanks again!

All my best wishes,
Sana~ 😳

Originally posted by: sareeta