SS - Promise Of The Eclipse(Wrapped Up!) - Page 3

dii i just finished reading it i don't find words to tell you how good this short story is....its just amazing 👏 👏...dii you should really think of publishing your writing

Originally posted by: sareeta

Aah... the line that caught your attention... that struck me as I was sipping my lemonade... and I owe to my energy drink for that bit..!! 😉 I was surprised myself... I came up with that... but liked it neverhteless coz it conveyed what I intended to...

Thank you sooooooo much Chandni... am really glad you enjoyed reading it!

I could think about that line for a long time... it is so true.. I mean... Never really does not exist.. b/c if you something like... "I will never forget this..." All it really means is... "you remeber it forever..." that is the line that leaves so much hope in the story... b/c Shiv will never be alone b/c Gauri is forever with him...whether in his memories or his thoughts...or her writings that is she is leaving behind... I mean Shiv could just open a drawer and find Gauri there, on a piece of paper where she penned down some lines...and he would discover a new part of her...even without her actually being there in human form...

Wonderful work didi... 👏👏👏

Originally posted by: Saregama_fan

I could think about that line for a long time... it is so true.. I mean... Never really does not exist.. b/c if you something like... "I will never forget this..." All it really means is... "you remeber it forever..." that is the line that leaves so much hope in the story... b/c Shiv will never be alone b/c Gauri is forever with him...whether in his memories or his thoughts...or her writings that is she is leaving behind... I mean Shiv could just open a drawer and find Gauri there, on a piece of paper where she penned down some lines...and he would discover a new part of her...even without her actually being there in human form...

Wonderful work didi... 👏👏👏

Bang on target and a beautifully conveyed interpretation of the line... that I intended to sum the essence with!! Thank you for detailing it out... but owing to my habit and more commmonly referred as style... I jus like to leave simple things... simple... which sometimes... results in lines like above.. being churned out of my concious! 😊

The highlighted bit was what I liked about how you conveyed... your interpretation with respect to Gauri and Shiv...

However ... the line .. was more retrospective and also...meant to be generic...observation drawn from different perceptions and experiences... !!!

Thank you for sharng your thoughts Chandni... Much impressed and appreciate it !😊

*bows humbly to applause...*

Originally posted by: Rock_Star

dii i just finished reading it i don't find words to tell you how good this short story is....its just amazing 👏 👏...dii you should really think of publishing your writing

Awww, thank you sooooooo much Roop!! Am really humbled ... that you all appreciate it so much!!

Publish karte hi... forum pe apne doston ko zaroor baataaongi...and thatz a promise!! 😊

^ bump

Jus wanted to know, if a sequel to the same , more of an epilougue would interest anyone... who read this FF? 😊

me me....i'd like to read it

Originally posted by: apapap

me me....i'd like to read it

Aww, thanks Pri.. will update that for ya...

It was jus a random idea... of wanting to put up a short epilogue... for the story... and thought will check if ppl were interested ....😊

👏 beautiful, jeez u continue blowing me, ok i am will get back to u, u are such a talented writing, i feel like throwing a challenge to you, but i need to think of a concept first, kya manzaoor hai dost?

Originally posted by: LadyZaib

👏 beautiful, jeez u continue blowing me, ok i am will get back to u, u are such a talented writing, i feel like throwing a challenge to you, but i need to think of a concept first, kya manzaoor hai dost?

*bows to the applause*

Aaap challenge kar rahe ho? Haaye rabba... I never thought someone would do that! I will see it as something you want me to attempt an d I shall do that! I'd like to surely attempt it and hopefully I will be able to do justice...

Come to think of it... it really humbles me that you think I can actually take it up and that my wrting is worth it all...

I will look forward to teh concept and to be honest, if it is somehting I cant relate...to I shall be honest about it and let you know too! I hope that is ok...

Kyonki jo cheez hum feel nahin kar sakte .... us hum bayaan bhi toh nahin kar sakte... and aur maine to likhna abhi abhi recently his shuru kiya tho I am still exploring...my own reach in the area!

Bhejiye mohtarma ...bhjiye concept...! 😊

Sareeta Di,

Thanks so much to Pri for having pushed you to pin another one! And thank you for obliging.

I've read the first line and I'm already needing some water... *ahem* This is gonna take a while... you know, to relish each word as you weigh it so finely...

Will post comments when I finish.

Cheers,

dc