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Posted: 18 years ago
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sorry for late reply was not online today morning...

thats so beautiful sareeta and well-written .. 👏

i think its so apt for shiv nowadays the guy is smiling with gauri back in k.mansion..

nahin tho hospital mein sirf ansoon bahata tha but once gauri made her entry in k.mansion he is all smile...

gauri is really the soothing factor in shiv's life..she handles him with care and same for shiv..sg love for each other is more passionate and more intense now..

anisha wont like this senti stuff i'm writing but i will definitely make her a senti one soon.. 😆 😆

sareeta as usual you have penned down so beautiful words.. 😊

like it very much..keeep writing as now kaa is rocking... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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no thanxx romance aur senti aapki paas rakho! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: 3 angels

sorry for late reply was not online today morning...

thats so beautiful sareeta and well-written .. 👏

i think its so apt for shiv nowadays the guy is smiling with gauri back in k.mansion..

nahin tho hospital mein sirf ansoon bahata tha but once gauri made her entry in k.mansion he is all smile...

gauri is really the soothing factor in shiv's life..she handles him with care and same for shiv..sg love for each other is more passionate and more intense now..

anisha wont like this senti stuff i'm writing but i will definitely make her a senti one soon.. 😆 😆

sareeta as usual you have penned down so beautiful words.. 😊

like it very much..keeep writing as now kaa is rocking... 😃

Aww, thanks Khyaatee!!! That was very sweet of you!!! Am so glad you liked it so much!! 😊

Haaye rabba senti aap rehna, hamein baksho!! Ani agar senti ho gayi tho uske lambe posts aur zyaada lambe ho jayege.... waise bhi uske posts chote thode na hai ab!! 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anisha7

no thanxx romance aur senti aapki paas rakho! 😃

Ani tu tho aise bhaagti hai senti venti se, jaise koi saamp dekhi ho re!! Waise main bhi bbhaagti hoon usse, mere se dekha nahin jaata yaar... senti scenes ke time, main andhi, behri aur brain dead ho jaati hoon!! 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
its beautiful dii 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rock_Star

its beautiful dii 👏 👏

*bows humbly to applause* ,thank you so much Roopi Jaan.. Yaar, aap log itne encouraging ho ki, main kuch bhi likhoon, bas tareef kar dete ho.. kabhi kabaar , dar lagta hai ki how will I live to the expectations!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey sareeta....

that was exquisite....it was so simple yet it touched a chord a my heart. great work girl. 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: sareeta

Kadmon ke nishaan
Ne tere dikhaayi
Raahein nayi...
Khaamoshi mein teri
Sunayee di...
Zindagi ki pukaar nayi...
Muskuraahat mein teri
Paayi hai maine
Apni khoyi hasi....
- Sareeta
Jus penned something down impromptu(blame it on my drifting mind) and felt it related to Shiv and Gauri as well and thought would post it here as well.

Lafzon mein hai tere... ek kashish dil bhari,

Chalti hawa bhi kahin tham si gayi...

Boss... You are brilliant... exceptional... No words...

👏👏

Cheers,

dc

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sareeta

Aww, thanks Khyaatee!!! That was very sweet of you!!! Am so glad you liked it so much!! 😊

Haaye rabba senti aap rehna, hamein baksho!! Ani agar senti ho gayi tho uske lambe posts aur zyaada lambe ho jayege.... waise bhi uske posts chote thode na hai ab!! 😆

Hanjee hum dono ko baksho Khyatee!! 😳 Hanjee main senti hogay toh bomb phutega 😆 Aur aap log to sojayenge 😆 Nahh my posts will become like a FF 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: apapap

hey sareeta....

that was exquisite....it was so simple yet it touched a chord a my heart. great work girl. 👏 👏

Awww, Priya , you humble me with your words!! yeah I like things simple , at this simplest best... and am honestly not good at being very very wordy!!! Thank you sooooo much for liking it!! I jus wanted to express the emotion and glad it came out that way in the simplest way I coudl express!😊

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